The Ignorant Badass: How Can They Not Know?

The above characters are from anime that I recently watched.  Space Dandy is from the anime named after him and Lloyd is from ‘Suppose a Kid from the Boonies Moved to a Starter Town’ or whatever it’s called.  One is science fiction while the other is fantasy.  One is a zany comedy with a flimsy relation to the fourth wall.  The other is an action adventure/slice of life type of thing.  Both deal with epic scale events at some point, but the real connection I’m touching on is this:

Space Dandy–  Rare alien hunter who has an obsession with women, terrible with a gun, and has a special power that this evil empire wants.  He doesn’t know he has this power or that he’s hunted.

Lloyd Belladonna–  Weakest citizen from a legendary town who ventures out to become a soldier in another kingdom.  Has the power to single-handedly hurl local monsters into orbit, faster than the eyes can follow, and knows ancient rune magic that works even if he messes up.  He doesn’t believe he is strong at all.

Both characters are special and don’t realize it.  The difference is that I think one was done well and the other was a joke that stretched on for too long.  Oddly enough, it wasn’t the comedy that made this a joke.  This actually made and broke the series for me because it became a defining trait of the characters.

Space Dandy is ignorant of his power because it’s subconscious and nobody has told him about his abilities.  They happen without him knowing and the audience doesn’t even know about them until the end.  His friends don’t know either, so nobody can reveal the truth.  He’s not the smartest person either, so all of this combines to explain why he doesn’t know.  It’s such a distant subplot until the end that it’s kind of a whimsical mystery that you forget while the current fun is happening.

Lloyd is surrounded by people who know he’s incredibly powerful, but stand there in awe or fear.  If they do try to tell him then he doesn’t really believe them.  This goes on for a long time.  In fact, I can’t remember if he ever acknowledged his own strength by the end of the season.  At one point, he seemed to just fight and act like a hero, but nobody spoke of him having monstrous power any more.  He still mistook local monsters for basic animals and had this level of ignorance that made him hard to like.  He wasn’t stupid like Space Dandy, but unaware and this became an issue as he progressed because it felt like he should have noticed something was going on.

That’s a lot of set up, but it’s the best way to present the ‘Ignorant Badass’.  These are powerful characters who don’t realize their own strength or importance.  You can keep that going for a while depending on personality and situation, but it gets harder to maintain as the victories pile up.  Imagine if Superman believed he was weak even after he reversed time, caught a plane, died and returned to life, and flew through space.  His own experiences and actions should reveal that he’s powerful, especially with weaker people all around him.  This is where Lloyd messed up since it reached a point where he couldn’t feasibly believe that his weaker allies had saved the day.  Eventually, you have to drop the ignorance unless you work hard to keep them in the dark.

One of the easiest ways to do this is with a power that is amazing, but both subtle and not in control of the character.  This way, they don’t realize they’re doing anything.  It makes it more difficult for them to believe anyone who says otherwise.  It can make it a challenge for anyone to notice what is going on.  Only the audience may see the truth and characters never hear us yelling from the other side of the pages.  At least with this scenario, we can understand why the hero thinks they’re weak even though they’re winning.  How could they know if they aren’t doing it on purpose or with clear movements?

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How to Write Point of View, Part 3, Second Person

Hi SErs! Harmony here 🙂 Today, I’d like to talk about how to write Point of View (POV) in the Second Person perspective. Remember in the last POV …

How to Write Point of View, Part 3, Second Person
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Immortal Wars: Light, Blood, & Tears Part 27

(Disclaimer: A warning to those who continue.  This is a sequel to a previous story.  Both of these were written in the mid-1990’s.  While the first one was slightly edited and vanity press published, this one has not been touched in over 20 years.  I figure I should do something with it and people may get a laugh or fright from how I used to be.  Every author comes from somewhere, so this is part of my origin.  To that end, I am deeply sorry for whatever nightmares I will inflict on the literary world and the American English language.  Enjoy?)

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“Finally.  It’s about time my body came back together.  My insanity must be slowing my healing abilities.  Well, it’s worth it.  At least, I brought this extra uniform with me,” mutters Hydrana while she walks back to her ship.  Central Park is surprisingly quiet when she finds the space skimmer.  Soon after she walks into the vehicle a low buzz goes off until her attention falls on the blinking telepathic scanner.

“What the hell?  Looks like someone is trying to spy on me.  Well, whoever it was took the sword of light from the ship.  I don’t have to be Mindtrigger to know that Slane has come here by himself.  So, come out and play, Eddie!  Do you like the sweet gift I left you?  Where the hell are you hiding, Slane?”

“Outside!” hollers the hiding guardian.  As soon as Hydrana steps onto the dead grass, a light beam hits her in the stomach.  The force of the hit sends the redhead into a thornbush while Fate climbs down from a tree.

“Nice trick, Delila.  But from the news reports, I’d say your work on this planet is done.  Now, it’s time to put you down.”  The Mars guardian yanks the thrashing girl out of the thornbush by her right leg and throws her across the grass.  Hydrana skillfully flips onto her feet before she collides with a large boulder.

“You’re right.  My work is done.  Daddy’s paid for the things he did to me all those painful years ago.  Adriana is suffering from the same illness that the two of us have.  And I have Draveon running scared.  Well, he’s not really running or scared, but I almost got the bastard.  So, it’s time for this wild animal to have some fun.”

She leaps at the Mars guardian and pins him against a tree.  A thick straitjacket of ice covers his body while Hydrana gives him a freezing kiss.  To her surprise, Fate spits in her eye and continues to struggle.

“You are so confusing.  I mean, I don’t see what your problem with me is.  I’ve made you a much better planet guardian than before.  Without our sanity, we can do anything we want and not have any guilt because of our actions.  Together, the two of us can easily destroy all the evil in this universe and then take our form of justice to all the other galaxies.  To prove my good intentions, I’ll let you go,” mentions the Neptune guardian before she absorbs the ice that covers Fate.

“You do have a good point.  The two of us can be near unstoppable when we work together.  I control the power of chance while you can command one of the four elements.  But there is one major problem that we have to settle before anything else is decided,” replies Fate, who casually walks into the space skimmer and leans against the telepathic scanner.

“Miracle and Infinity?  We’ll just have to keep those two freaks in line.  They’re very good scientists and inventors, but they aren’t too good at fighting.  Neither of them can dole out as much damage as we can.”

“I know that.  But they’re not the problem, Hydrana.  You are.”

“Me?  What do you mean by that?”

“Simple.  You’ve handed out too many of your bad memories.  You aren’t totally insane anymore.  Evil and deadly, yes.  But you’re no longer a true maniac like I’m going to become.  You’ve lost your savage edge, water demon.”

“Are you kidding?  My father is now a paralyzed man, who will be scared of his own reflection for the rest of his life.  He will think that I am out there getting ready to finish the job while I simply go on with my life.  No sane person would do that to a member of their own family.”

“I never said that you were sane.  But you didn’t kill him like you had originally wanted to.  You may act crazy and psychotic, Hydrana, but the older version is still inside you.  She still has some influence on your actions.  This entire plan of yours will fail miserably because you don’t even know if you’re insane or not.”

“Stop trying to play mind games with me, Fate.  I don’t have the patience for them,” she states.  Hydrana picks up the sword of light and gives Fate a pat on the crotch as she walks past him.  The sword is placed on a cabinet before she turns back to the Mars guardian.

“You think being impatient is a sign of insanity?  I think it’s more an act of immaturity and weakness.  I still think you’re not what you think you are.  Just give up and let me do the real work,” Fate says with a smirk.  A slight glimmer of golden light begins to grow in his eyes.

“I don’t need your help.  Why are you saying these things?  What have I done to make you think like this?  It’s Miracle.  She’s managed to turn you against me.  I’ll kill her very slowly for turning my first, and favorite, slave against me.”

“You are way off.  The only reason is that you haven’t killed anyone, yet.  You still have some form of mental control.  There are morals and a conscience that are guiding you on this rampage.  They make you weak.”

“That’s all?  If I kill someone, you will be convinced that I am insane.  That is so stupid!  I can’t believe you would even state that as a reason.  Let me tell you, Eddie, that the only reason I have not killed anyone is that it would be too nice an action.  Let someone live as a broken toy and their pain lasts for as long as they live.  Unfortunately, I’ve been one of those broken toys for most of my life, so I know exactly how my victims feel.  Now, do you still think I’m sane?”

“In a word.  Yes.”

“Yes?  You are such an annoying pestilence in my life.  But I think you do have a point about me killing.  In order to become what I want to become, I must take an innocent life in cold blood.  It does make some sense.  Take a guess who my first murder victim is going to be.  If you want to see him, Fate, then look in a mirror.”

A long blade of ice covers Hydrana’s fist as she lifts it high over her head.  With all of her immortal strength, the bloodthirsty redhead tries to chop Fate in half.  Suddenly, her arm jerks to the side because of a muscle spasm and she misses her target by a few inches.  But it does slice through the telepathic scanner without any trouble.  The machine starts to spark and let off a deafening hum.

“Son of a bitch,” mutters the Neptune guardian as a blast of unseen, psychic energy hits the two immortals.  After that, there is nothing, but eerie silence from inside the space skimmer.

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Dwindling Time

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Every second counts
Ticking by
Building into minutes
Hours
And grander spans
We try to ignore
Many succeed
Others succumb
To the curse of being human
Aware of mortality
Fearing death
We cannot regain
The seconds lost
Or add more
Than we are allowed
All we can do
Is live
Within our dwindling time

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Teaser Tuesday: Enter the Lich

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

This one is kind of a repeat, but I realized it has been years since I showed the Lich’s debut scene.  Surprised to see him get any votes too.  Enjoy has first appearance in Legends of Windemere: Beginning of a Hero.

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Check This Out: Edie in Between

It’s been a while since we met, but here we are to welcome the awesome Laura Sibson, who is here to talk about her YA fantasy novel, Edie in Between,…

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7 Tips to Taking a Short Break

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The human mind and body can’t keep going without breaks.  Whether it be a quiet weekend at home or a few days away from our stresses, we require these periods of time to regain strength.  At least, we do if we don’t spend most of our days lounging around and never worrying about things.  For those of us who aren’t rich, living in a virtual reality, or squatting in an abandoned mansion, breaks are our escape.  What are some things to consider for these?

  1. For the love of Princess Zelda, don’t bring all of your stressors with you.  This negates the positive effects of your break.  Ignore the office since they already know you’re on break.  Friends and family can wait for text responses as long as it isn’t a genuine emergency.  Just enjoy the peace or as close to it as you can get.
  2. Try your best not to let the stressors of breaks get to you.  These are short because you have limited time, which means you aren’t going to recover entirely.  If you spend most of this period being annoyed and stressed then you return home more exhausted than ever.  Sleeping in and missing an event you wanted to see is rough, but it means you needed the rest.  Have a few backups or settle for exploring the area in search of a surprise.  GPS have you frustrated?  Have a back up map.  There are many precautions that can be taken for the usual problems.
  3. You don’t have to go away in order to have a break.  Turn off the phone.  Avoid social media.  Save a show or movie you want to see for the day.  The key is to let your body and mind have a break from the pressure.  Keep in mind that we’re not talking about a few hours of a break too.  Don’t watch a movie and then think you’re fine to dive back into the blender we call reality.
  4. If something you’re doing on your break can be cut short and give you more time to rest then do it . . . Well, enjoy the week.
  5. Get
  6. Some
  7. Rest
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On the Road

Seeing as I’m on the road today, I figure I’ll put up some funnies about traveling.  Let’s hope I have Internet access upon arrival.  As usual, I got everything with a Yahoo Image Search.  Enjoy.

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Goal Post: Lazy, But Productive Week

We’ve got pictures this time because a few cool things happened.  Going to end on a big one too after the usual list.  Even putting it behind a ‘Read More’ tag, which I’m sure will fail on some platforms.

First, I got some new masks for the school year since that hasn’t changed:

They’ve got Fullmetal Alchemist pictures, which I was trying to find last year, but nothing caught my eye.  These are a little smaller than my others as far as the ear straps go, so we’ll see how they work on the days I have to wear them the whole time.  I might bring another to do a swap if these hurt too much.  Maybe I don’t need the adjustors too.  Next thing is to get a few ‘One Piece’ masks, but I’m not sure if a cartoon Skull & Crossbones is school friendly even if it’s wearing a straw hat.

The was rather lazy with television, outlining, and other things.  Went to visit a friend on Monday and watch ‘The Suicide Squad’.  It was nice to get out of the house and hang out with a movie.  Not a common activity these days.  I really liked the movie too since it didn’t take itself seriously.  When I settle in, I want to be entertained and zany gets my attention more than overblown CGI and flashy fights.  This is what can help me overlook a rather shaky plot, but ‘The Suicide Squad’ was rather simple there.  Honestly, it felt more like a character-driven story that happened to involve a superhero adventure.  Anyway, that was the big outing of the week.

The rest of the time was spent outlining the 6 book . . . short story . . . whatever this spy thing is turning into.  It’s fantasy and I had 6 books slated for the Windemere spy character who debuts in ‘The Ether Thief’.  I’ve had this character since high school and expected to do so much more, but he kept slipping.  Inspired by me getting into James Bond movies, I thought I had it right.  Yet, all of the outlines are feeling like 14-section short stories.  It might turn into a single book with these tales just like I did with the samurai who debuts in the same series.

This project also means I filled a notebook, which is unexpected.  I’ll be taking a new one on the trip, but I’m not sure which series division I’m going to use.  I have Windemere History (7 books/series), Windemere Organizations (9 books/series), Mylrixians (8 books/series), and then a 10 book gathering of Miscellanous.  That’s not counting ‘Keys of Eden’, which I keep forgetting about.  Leaning towards the Organizations because I’ve got more solid thoughts on that one than the others.  God knows, the Mylrixians (Super Earth) drives me so crazy that I’m scared to touch them again.

I built a lift top table for my son’s room:

Barely managed to get all of the Mario Legos in and on this thing.  My shoulder wasn’t thrilled with the building either.  It’s not in pain, but it fatigues rather quickly.  Going to make the trip that starts tomorrow rather slow.  That’s why I bought a box of instant cold packs to use at rest stops.

Television wasn’t that interesting.  Watching all of ‘Fire Force’ and then another anime called ‘Konosuba’.  Really liked the first series, but I let the second one keep going even when I had to go to the bathroom or get food.  Just watching another season of ‘Burn Notice’ to avoid getting into anything before we leave.

I have my son starting today, so we’re going on our trip this week.  I won’t be bringing my laptop too.  Partially because I have no reason to bring it along since I’m spending time with the little guy.  Also, the case around the casing around the top part of the laptop has split.  It’s being kept together by Gorilla Tape since I can’t afford a new machine and this one still works.  The problem is that opening and closing it isn’t really an option.  It’s like this thing wants to break, so I have to leave it open.  Nothing I can’t do by phone though, so it isn’t a problem.  This also means you probably won’t get responses from me outside of the morning and evening.  Be patient please.

Goal list:

  1. Fun on the trip!
  2. Fun when home after trip!
  3. Drive safely!
  4. Reveal the cover for War of Nytefall: Anarchy! (Look Below)

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

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Questions 3: Using Amnesia in Fiction

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Here we are at the end of a really odd weekly topic.  Maybe I stretched this out for too, but I don’t remember what started it.  Funny how such a complicated medical issue can be used so casually and ‘simply’ in fiction.  Shows how we can get away with no research at some points.  Might not be the best way to go, so maybe these questions can help us use the trope better.

  1. How do you think amnesia should be used in fiction?
  2. How would you handle having amnesia?
  3. How would you handle a loved one having amnesia?
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