Goal Post: First Week of Summer School and Go-Fest

The title really does cover it all.  This was the first week of summer school, so I went back to getting up early and heading off to work.  The days are shorter, but that also means they’re more compact.  Some hours go faster than others.  I’m glad the heatwave wasn’t around to give us trouble, but Monday had a big rainstorm.  Still, I made it through everything in one piece and have an idea about my general schedule.  It’s definitely where some days will be better than others.

As far as writing goes, I did my best with Darwin & the Deadland Queen.  I only finished the first section of chapter 2 and got about halfway through the second section.  I ended up having a bunch to do to prepare myself for summer school and the horrible heat on Saturday was a pain.  Others things kept turning up to draw me away from writing both physically and mentally.  I made an attempt during the week to get a little bit further, but I only made a paragraph before exhaustion took over.  Next week should be better because I’ll have more time in the evenings.

Perhaps the biggest obstacle was Pokemon Go-Fest.  To explain, this is the biggest event in the game for the entire year.  Special Pokemon are around and every evening has something going on.  I promised my son that I would take him out for everything, especially since one of his friends got back into the game.  I wasn’t going to disappoint him, so that was how my week went.  Busting my butt at school, rushing back for dinner, and going out for Pokemon.  Hard to fit writing into such a schedule, but I really don’t feel bad about it.  This was a great father/son week and I’m not going to have too many of those left as he’s almost seventeen.  That means 18 is around the corner and he might not have much time for me.  Enjoy these events while they last.

I did try to tinker with Coven of the Gray a bit.  I’m having some doubts.  I like how the characters are coming out, but I’m now worried about the method of storytelling that I set up.  I have a chapter book outline, but I found that some coven members are getting more chapters than others.  I can’t have them all converge on the hero because he isn’t that kind of warrior.  They’d crush him, so he needs to encounter them either individually or in pairs along the road to the fortress.  So, I’m not at about chapter 11 of 15 in the outline and still have 6 coven members left.  This feels off since I still planned on there being 3-4 sections per chapter like in Bedlam.  Maybe I should switch to each ‘chapter’ being a short story where a single coven member (or 2) are encountered and defeated.  There are pros and cons to both methods, but the way I’m going now is starting to be a problem.

Another change coming up next week is that I’m going to be cooking dinners on Monday since I get home earlier from work.  With Go-Fest over, I’ll be able to get home, take my son out for a bit, and get home to cook.  This can also give me some leftovers for school and I’m trying to avoid buying as often as I can.  Trying to eat less too, so it’s been yogurt, protein drink, and Nutella sandwich most days.  Tuesday and Thursday are turning out to be the cheat days only due to the situations.  Either way, I’m going to try to eat better and get back into cooking.  So far, penne with vodka sauce, chicken cheese enchiladas, and restaurant style chicken lo mien are on the list.

Not much else I can talk about in public.  The other situation is still on-going and I don’t know how long it will take to settle.  It’s definitely taking up a good portion of my attention and adding to my stress.  That’s probably another reason it now takes me a day to write a single book section.  My stress is already high, so writing in my current mental style makes me exhausted fairly quickly.  I find that my brain is now trying to edit as I go, so it’ll stop if I overuse a word or subconsciously sense I did something wrong.  Not sure if this is a more mature way of writing than when I just went with it and cranked out chapter sections that I would edit later.  It does cut down the editing, especially since my fear of messing up continuity forces me to stop for research at various moments.

Anyway, I’m currently rolling out of bed to make lunches and pack supplies for Go-Fest by the time this post goes live.  The event goes from 10 am to 7 pm today and tomorrow.  My son is determined to complete his list of catches.  So, it’ll be eating on the road, lots of hydration, praying for no rain, and having a late dinner.  Glad I taught him to do the laundry, which he got done yesterday.  That would have been an added headache to the chaos.

Now for the goals:

  1. Enjoy Go-Fest with my son.
  2. Catch a shiny MewTwo.
  3. Stay hydrated and sunscreened.
  4. Eat less and better.
  5. Sleep when needed.
  6. Work on Darwin & the Deadland Queen.  Low on list because 1-5 is all the weekend.
  7. Tinker with Coven of the Gray.  At least decide on chapters or 10-13 short stories.
  8. Work.
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Eternal Characters: Always Reborn and Rebooted

(Originally posted on February 17, 2014.)

Yahoo Image Search (Two versions of Sherlock Holmes)

Yahoo Image Search (Two versions of Sherlock Holmes)

I recently watched the first season of BBC’s Sherlock, I love Elementary, and I loved the Sherlock movies.  I also used to watch Sherlock Holmes in the 22nd Century when I was a kid.  Oddly enough, I still haven’t gotten around to reading the original stories even though I own an anthology.

Now, I know people are already skipping to the comments to declare who the greatest Sherlock Holmes is.  That’s not the point of this post.  My question is about how some characters jump from literature to other mediums and take on multiple incarnations.  I am not talking about characters who change form in their series, but the character is the same and the actor/voice/depiction is different. Sherlock Holmes, Jack Ryan, James Bond, Conan, Batman, and so many other characters have been taken on by more than one person.  Sometimes it’s even another book where the stories continue under a new author like all the people who contributed to Oz.  I think I’m right on that one.

James Bond is probably the most infamous here because there’s a joke about how the villains never realize his face has changed.  Still, I’m seeing a lot of Sherlock Holmes these days, so I’ll focus more on him.  There are personality quirks that one sees in all of his incarnations.  Sharp mind, kind of blunt, obsessive, and nearly self-destructive come to mind.  There’s also the standard of him being terrible at social situations and Watson (with or without boobs) being the only person willing to deal with him.  Though, I’m not always sure why he does this beyond assuming he’s a masochist.  Now, everyone does bring in their own take on this.  The movie version is a very selfish, yet loyal character whose mind goes on borderline precognition.  The BBC version is a very quick mind who seems to be on the edge of snapping and no idea why people have a problem with him for most of the season.  The Elementary version is rude, blunt, and borderline psychotic with a much bigger focus on obsession than the other two.  I do love how the Elementary and BBC versions develop empathy and get rattled in certain situations.  It shows great growth for a character that has been around for so long.  This all personal opinion and I’ve only seen the first season of the BBC version, so I might be missing something that the real fans know.

Personally, I love seeing new takes on established characters as long as they’re respectful to the original source.  There has to be something similar between the characters for me to acknowledge that they’re the same.  Every character has a spark that makes them worth putting into another medium, so that should be held through all versions.  The attitude of James Bond, the aggressiveness of Conan, and the sharp mind of Sherlock Holmes need to be there for me to believe the characters are worth comparing.

So, what do people think of characters with multiple incarnations?  By the way, this is not a call to convince me one Holmes is better than another.  And for anyone wondering about the animated one I mentioned, watch this intro that DOESN’T stand the test of time:

This cartoon intro still works though:

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Poetry Day: The Poem and The Song

Yahoo Image Search

(This stems from the belief that songs and poems are related.  The only difference is one has music and the other doesn’t.)

A debate of recent thought
Noted in the words of others
Forged from a simple question
That has grown into a feud
Battling over minor details

 

Is a poem a song?
Without an open soul
An archaic step to symphony
Dependent on a silent rhythm
That very few can sense

 

Is a song a poem?
More of flash than form
Bratty child of ancient art
Its spirit drowned in noise
Never to be truly heard

 

It is a pointless feud
Poems sing when read
Songs speak when sung
They are the fraternal twins of words
One merely has to listen

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Ye Olde Thief Shoppe?

(Originally posted on September 20, 2014.  Looks like this was the very first ‘Ye Olde Shoppe’ skit.)

Thief from Yahoo Image Search

Thief from Yahoo Image Search

So, you’re about to set out for a life of fantasy thief crime.  Well, you’re going to need a lot of gear.  Unlike warriors, you can’t get away with armor, sword, and shield.  It’s a long list of items you’re going to need.  Do you have a specialty?  Thief isn’t a specialty, kid.  This is going to take a while.  Let’s give you the starter package:

  1. Melee Weapon–  I have shortswords, rapiers, daggers, saps, clubs, and other lightweight . . . put the battle-axe down, kid!  You’re a thief.  This means stealth and speed.  If you want a heavy weapon then become a warrior or a barbarian.  Take a few daggers and a shortsword before you hurt yourself.
  2. Range Weapon– I recommend a small crossbow, but you have to be careful.  Stick to the shadows and time your shots.  No firing away like you’re a crazy cowboy.  What’s a cowboy?  You really have to get out of your genre, kid.
  3. Light Armor–  You can wear normal clothes or lightweight armor.  I may sound like a broken record here, but you have to focus on stealth and speed.  Leather armor is the best I would go because the metal armors make noise.  What do you mean are pants optional for female thieves?  That’s a stupid question . . . they are, but I don’t recommend it.  Customer is always right though.
  4. Lock Picks–  Whether you’re going to be a burglar or not, every thief should have a set of lock picks.  You never know when they’ll come in handy.  Locked in the dungeon?  Have these babies hidden on you and you’ll be out in no time.  I remember buying a few locks and practicing.  Make sure you keep them hidden on your personage and not in a place that is hard to reach.  Nobody will check your codpiece for lock picks, but you’re not going to get to them very easily.  Not to mention the pinching.
  5. Grappling Hook–  You never know when climbing will be necessary.  I could sit here all day naming situations.  Don’t forget to buy the rope too, kid.
  6. Specialty Kit–  I know you said you didn’t have a specialty, but I highly recommend choosing something.  We have disguises for spies and manipulators.  We have blowguns, poisons, and caltrops for assassins.  You can also use the poisons if you aim to be a conniving royal advisor.  Seriously, the classics never die.  Let’s see.  I have forgery kits and . . . I have a pirate beginner set.  Be warned that the ship is not included in that.  Just the hat, parrot, two treasure maps of questionable authenticity and a trainee license to get you started.
  7. Optional Holding Item– You can laugh about this one, but you’re going to be carrying around a lot of gear and, hopefully, loot.  This bag or pocket or whatever you want is a small dimension to hold everything and you can pull it out quickly.  Now, you can go the route of not explaining how you carry everything and pray nobody asks.  Though, you run the risk of people assuming you have all your stuff in an unsavory place.  Just ask Solid Snake from Metal Gear how much fun that accusation is.

Those are the basics and you can look around the shop to see if anything else catches your eye, kid.  What was that?  How are you going to pay for this?  You’re planning to pay me instead of attempting to rob me.  Oh, kid, you’re so in the wrong profession.

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Teaser Tuesday: To The Tower

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Good time to show off a little bit of the action in War of Nytefall: Savagery.  With there being so many puzzles for Clyde to solve, it’s really tough to find a non-spoiler part to share.  So, have fun this intro to one the more maddening challenges.  At least for Clyde because the rest of us will enjoy the fun.

Continue reading

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Questions 3: World-Building

(Originally posted on July 6, 2015.  Figure this would be a good repost since this was the first Questions 3.)

Carl Sagan Quote (Supposedly. Internet isn't always honest.)

Carl Sagan Quote (Supposedly. Internet isn’t always honest.)

I’m still on the road here, which means I needed to think of a post that would be fun and not require me to be around until later.  Then I thought of leaving something that stirred the imagination.

Below, you will find 3 questions.  I’ll be doing this on Wednesday and Friday too because I thought of 3 topics.  You can answer in the comments or on your own blog depending on how much you want to say.  If you choose the latter then please link back to here, so I can find my way to it when I settle in for a lengthy email, comment, tweet, and whatever run.

This topic is: WORLD BUILDING

  1. If you could create a fictional ‘world’, what would it be like?  Would it be similar to Earth or entirely different?  (This doesn’t only mean fantasy worlds.  For example, you can be a crime book author and describe your version of Miami.)
  2. How would your ‘world’ differ from the real world?  If many differences then what would be the two biggest ones?
  3. What kind of stories would occur in your ‘world’?

Just have fun with it.  Use this to show off something you have or come up with something new.

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Rare Flowers of the World

I realized that I’m always talking about animals, which is because that’s an area of interest for me.  Yet, nature also has plenty of flowers.  I’m going to try to do a few scattered about if I can think of fun topics with them.  Today, I got curious and looked up some of the rarest flowers of the world.  Stopped myself after nine, so enjoy:

Black Bat Flower- Self-pollination and very delicate

Chocolate Cosmos- Believed to be extinct, but then rediscovered

Corpse Flower- smells like rotting flesh and blooms randomly every 3-8 years

Fire Lily- rare due to modern agricultural practices

Franklin Tree Flower- Extinct in the wild, but cultivated for lawn ornamentation

Ghost Orchid- Critically endangered due to poaching, climate change, and habitat destruction

Middlemist’s Red Camellia- WORLD’S RAREST FLOWER WITH ONLY TWO DOCUMENTED EXAMPLES

Night-Blooming Cereus- Hard to find and slow growth

Youtan Poluo- Said to bloom only once every 3,000 years

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Goal Post: A Week of Missing Rest

So, this was the week between end of the school year and the start of summer school.  I got my schedule and it isn’t bad, but I’m still going to be tired.  My hope was to relax, write, and get some big things done.  Once next week starts, I’m going to be struggling to set appointments and events.  Unlike the regular school year, I don’t get paid for any days that I’m out.  No sick days or PTO this time.  I’m already having to give up one day and will probably have to give up at least one more.  Really hoping to minimize the loss of the money I typically use for an end of summer father/son trip.

All of that isn’t to say I got nothing done.  I did manage to write the prologue and chapter one of Darwin & the Deadland Queen.  Took me longer than I expected to get back into the flow. Still needing to take long pauses after 10-15 minutes to ward off the brain fog stemming from my stress.  Well, it’s either brain fog or my brain keeps wanting to go back and redo things.  Maybe I’m just more meticulous and paranoid about what I’m doing, so I write slower.  I also needed to check Darwin’s spell list, Darwin & the Joy Path, and a few other resources for continuity.  Still, I got 5 sections done and hope to get at least half of chapter 2 done this weekend.

We’ve been battling a heatwave here for a few days, which I know is nothing compared to other regions.  Still, I don’t do well in the heat, so I had to struggle with running errands that I didn’t get to earlier in the week.  Today is supposed to be the last of the rough ones and then a week of rain.  I’m still going to try to go out for an hour this afternoon for the Pokemon event, but I’m going to stick to the side of the park with a lot of shade.  I have two water bottles in the fridge and will pick up instant ice packs to use.  Definitely not going to push myself too hard.  If I have to come home after 30 minutes then that’s what it will be.  Tomorrow will be easier, but no event means I don’t have to go out if I don’t feel up to it.

Another reason I didn’t get more writing done was that I had my son for the week.  I didn’t plan on this, but it happened.  He had his art lessons and other activities, but we still wanted to do things together.  Watching movies, playing Pokemon Go, and teaching him a variety of life skills.  That last part took more time than I expected and we’ll have to go over things again. It was really just chores and shopping on a budget, but those are important to learn.  This coming week is when I leave a task list for him, so we’ll see how that goes.

This coming week is also the 10th anniversary Pokemon Go-Fest, which means there are events every evening.  My son wants to go to them and I promised I would do my best, but I’m also trying to get some appointments in there too.  This aren’t easy to set up for reasons I can’t get into, especially since summer school starts and that might require some extra set up time.  Not a good week to have appointments popping up.  Anyway, this will culminate in the big Go-Fest next weekend, which runs from 10AM-7PM on Saturday and Sunday.   I have my son for it too, so we’re planning on having fun.  Though, we’re still working on how to figure out lunch.

My hope is that I can tinker with Coven of the Gray when I have some time this week, but Darwin & the Deadland Queen might get some attention.  It really depends on how things go after school.  If I only get the next two sections done then I’m not going to worry too much.  It’s a decent place to pause for a week.  I still don’t know how easy it will be to write on weekdays since I might be exhausted.  Days when I have my son won’t be writing ones either because we’ll have things to do.  Oh well, I’ll be happy if I can get half of the book done before the school year starts in August.  I might even do some book writing during the father/son trip since he’s bringing his computer to do art lessons when we want to rest.

Goals of the week:

  1. Spend time with son.
  2. Start summer school with positivity.
  3. Eat lighter lunches as often as possible.  Need more yogurt.
  4. Enjoy Go-Fest activities.
  5. Handle appointments if they pop up.
  6. Work on Darwin & the Deadland Queen.  Should it be ‘Deadland’ or ‘Deadlands’?  First version sounds better.
  7. Tinker with Coven of the Gray.
  8. Stay cool in the heatwave and dry when the rains appear.
  9. Look out the window to see fireworks, go ‘wow’, and then get back to writing.
  10. Puzzle time to relax.
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Fun With Food In Fiction

(Originally posted on June 9, 2014.)

Alice in Wonderland

Alice in Wonderland

One thing I’ve seen brought up a lot when it comes to adventure fantasy is: what and when do the characters eat?  Oddly enough, you don’t see meals that often and the heroes never go hungry unless it’s essential to the plot.  Starvation and hunting are very useful plot points to show how difficult it is to survive in the wild.  Yet, it’s almost a passing thought and you don’t see it delved into.

In a series that I’m still reading through, Ranger’s Apprentice, there are several times where the characters talk over coffee.  I use something similar where meals are the backdrop for important meetings.  I can never say my heroes go hungry unless Luke does his thing that can burn through most of his caloric intake.  There are points where I think I overuse the setting, but it does make sense.  Preparing or in the middle of an adventure, the break you take to talk is a time to eat too.  Not much different from the real world.  We celebrate events with food, have food at meetings, and even give away some food as prizes or thank yous.  You do get a cookie for giving blood, right?

Personally, I see food in fiction as another window into the world.  If your story is on Earth then you can look up real dishes that relate to your characters’ cultures and locations.  If your story is another world then you can go wild.  A fish that’s as spicy as a ghost pepper?  Apples that can satisfy you for an entire day?  Everyone living creature (and unliving) eat something, so it’s an area that is worthwhile investigating.  The scenes where they come up can be used for character development too.  For example, Nyx loves spicy food and Sari isn’t too big a fan of seafood.

So, what do other people think of food or eating being included in stories?

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Poetry Day: The Pixian Parade

D&D Pixie

(A fun parade of fae.  I forgot the inspiration of it, but I think it comes from a really old story I used to read as a kid.  It wasn’t pixies though.  Think it was animals.)

Deep within the Grimjaw Forest
At the stroke of dawn
As the light beats on the dewdrops
Tiny forms take flight
Preparing for the work ahead
All have roles to play

 

Ferrying light to the shadows
Red-winged Brattins dart
Gorks whirl with bodies clad in fur
Clearing dust left by night
The Pixian cleaning crew toils
Until they tire out

 

Wings of sapphire and amber
Beat the morning air
The noble Tzarkas have arrived
To bloom the flowers
And awaken the early songs
Of sparrows and wrens

 

Others join the Pixian crew
Lazy, pink Sindels
Sneering at the hyper Flyntiks
Wingless Hults on foot
Silver Minjits and purple Karks
Each to play a part

 

Viewing from her throne of birchwood
Crystal wings spread wide
The high queen pixie sits alone
Forced to merely watch
Overseer of her people
Who toil beneath her

 

The Pixian Parade plays on
Work turns into fun
Lasting until the sun goes down
And a scream cuts through
Time of pixies ends for the day
Banshees rule the night

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