Immortal Wars: Light, Blood, & Tears Part 28

(Disclaimer: A warning to those who continue.  This is a sequel to a previous story.  Both of these were written in the mid-1990’s.  While the first one was slightly edited and vanity press published, this one has not been touched in over 20 years.  I figure I should do something with it and people may get a laugh or fright from how I used to be.  Every author comes from somewhere, so this is part of my origin.  To that end, I am deeply sorry for whatever nightmares I will inflict on the literary world and the American English language.  Enjoy?)

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Nothing makes a noise or even moves in the space skimmer for over two hours.  Fate and Hydrana are lying in a barely breathing heap near the crackling telepathic scanner.  Artificial brain juice is running down the console and making a pool around the two guardians.  The first sign of any life is when they suddenly jump to their feet in shock.  Thousands of joint cramps and a few sleeping body parts greet the guardians return to consciousness.  It is a greeting that makes both of them want to go back to the painless darkness.

“What the hell happened to us?  And, why do you keep saying that I better be sane?  Well I am, so don’t worry.  Your nasty trick worked just like you planned it and this Neptune guardian is back to normal.  Well, as close to normal as I can get.  Let’s just say I’m back to perfection and leave it at that.  Thanks, Slane,” Hydrana says while she massages her numb legs.

“Your welcome.  But I wasn’t talking.  I was repeatedly thinking that you better be sane.  I take it that you were reading my mind.  Guess this is one of those side effects of the cure, which is a lot worse than the disease.  The last thing I want is you picking up on my thoughts.  Can you still hear them?” asks Fate.  He straps the sword of light to his back before sitting onto a large box.

“Not right now.  I do have something that can scan us and find out what exactly happened here.  The telepathic bond could have only been for a few seconds.  God I really hope it was only for a few seconds.  There are some private thoughts I don’t want you picking up on.”

“Hold on.  I have to ask this before anything else happens, Delila.  Do you have any grief about any of the things that you did while you were a raving lunatic?  No offense,” mentions Fate.

“Why would I take offense at the truth?  Look, I’m really sorry about all of the cops that I hurt and what I did to you and the others.  But I am not sorry for what I did to my father.  In my mind, he was more sadistic than any of Adriana’s friends.  The things he did to me earned him the punishment of life long paralysis.  Now he’s as helpless as I was.  I told you about the verbal abuse and hinted at the . . . other thing.  Miracle knows the basic problem, but I don’t know if she mentioned it to anyone.  So, here comes the painful truth of my life.  My father sexually abused me every day since I was eight-years-old.  Mom and Rose were forced to keep their mouths shut or he beat them up.  Hey!  I thought about it and nothing happened.  I might be cured of the rage and cowering attacks,” explains Hydrana as she gets to her feet.  She does a very long stretch to get the kinks out of her shoulders and spine.

“Good for you.  Of course, I don’t want this whole problem to happen again.  None of us like what you did to your father because it was still wrong.  You should have told one of us or you should have gone to the police before you even agreed to become a guardian.  Take care of your own problems before you try to fix those of the universe.  That’s the best and safest thing to do.  If you have to talk to anyone about this or anything else, I’ll listen.”

“I know.  Miracle and Infinity are probably going to give me the same tear-jerking speech after we find them.  But I swear on my eternal soul that there will be no repeats of the past few days.  I promise.  Now, where is that lead box that I took with me?  Ah, here it is.”  She yanks the large box out from under Fate and opens it before the Mars guardian can get off his backside.  Hydrana pulls out a large, black diamond, which she places on a clean shelf.  She carefully attaches some wires from the damaged scanner and tries to put a charge into it.

“You stole a containment diamond?  SEAS is not going to like this stunt.  You’ll be lucky if you’re let back on the sun base at all.  Those things are beyond impossible to find in this galaxy,” states Fate as the diamond slowly starts to turn red.

“They are also indestructible, which means we can’t destroy them if we tried.  I took this one awhile ago in order to put it into one of the space skimmers.  That way we could immediately find out about anything new that we run into outside of the sun base.  We still don’t know enough to investigate things without the computer’s help.  Are you in there, SEAS?”

“Yes.  I have already done a brain scan and I have found two side effects.  You can read each other’s thought during extreme mental trauma, which I sincerely hope, happens rarely.  The other effect is that both of you can track each other by locating brain patterns.  I can get rid of these effects once one of you returns to the sun base.  That is, if you want me to.  What will you two do now?” inquires SEAS.  The diamond abruptly goes black again.

“I guess he can’t be out of the sun base’s system for too long.  I think we should get rid of these recent improvements, but that will have to wait until we finish everything here.  Infinity and Miracle are somewhere in this city along with Adriana’s group, so let’s go find them.  Hurry up,” orders Fate.

“Am I your second-in-command?”

“What?  We don’t have any time for this.  I mean, can’t this question wait for a couple of hours?”

“No.  I want to know your decision right this minute.  After all I went through, I deserve an answer to the question that helped push me over the edge.  You owe me that much, Slane.”  Hydrana blocks all the exits with walls of ice and stands directly in front of Fate.

“Fine.  The answer is yes.  It would have been that answer no matter what you went through.  Miracle talked me into it a couple of hours before you decided to attack Infinity.”

“Seriously?  Then I just wasted everyone’s time for something I was going to get anyway.  I feel like an idiot.”

“Can you feel like an idiot while we move?  Steve and Kelly need our help if they managed to run into all four of the evil immortals.”  Hydrana gives a quick nod before letting the ice walls down.  Both of them leave the inside of the space skimmer in time to see a ball of light shoot into the sky.

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Interview with CS Boyack

I’m being interviewed by Rox Burkey today. Please stop over and visit her wonderful site. Fictional Authors are a different species. They use …

Interview with CS Boyack
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NEW ANTHOLOGY!

Long time, no post! A couple weeks ago, or so, the authors selected for the next Fiction-Atlas Press anthology were announced, and I’m one of them. …

NEW ANTHOLOGY!
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Questions 3: How Do You Like Your Penultimate Volumes?

Supernatural

That’s true.  I’d heard the word for a long time, but it always went one ear and out the other until it started popping up everywhere.  Maybe I’ve had too many of the series I’ve watched come to a close, so I noticed it more.  Not sure if most people even know what the word means.  Well:

Penultimate- The second to last in a series.

War of Nytefall: Anarchy would be the penultimate book of the series.  It certainly feels that way too.  I made sure to have all of the loose ends converge into the big headache that’s going to give Clyde his final challenge.  This makes it easier to focus on the finale because I’m not trying to jam all of the closures into one volume.  Now, I merely have to put a cap on the whole adventure.  Don’t worry.  Putting caps (some may say lids) on require twisting, so you know it’s not going to be a straight or clean shot.

Let’s see what everyone thinks about this type of volume.

  1. What do you look for in a penultimate volume of a series?
  2. Does it help you prepare to say good-bye to the characters?
  3. What piece of advice would you give for this kind of story?
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Teaser Tuesday: An Awry Battle #vampires #fantasy

War of Nytefall

Time to start off the Teaser Tuesday for War of Nytefall: Anarchy. Figure I should start at the beginning.  Here’s part of the opening scene.

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‘War of Nytefall: Anarchy’ is Coming

War of Nytefall

Time nearly got away from me on this one.  You can tell because this post is really just to get the ball rolling and buy me a few hours to get the promos fully prepared.  Honestly, I had so much going on that I kept wondering if I would get things done and be ready to publish in September.  Thankfully, I’m coming in under the wire.

War of Nytefall: Anarchy is the penultimate book of the series, which means big things are going to happen.  It was a challenge to write because I had to bring everything I’d been setting up into place for the finale.  That’s really what this story is about, but it still stands on its own.  I’m always worried about writing the second to last book of a series because I feel a lot of pressure.  You want things to be set up perfectly for the last hurrah while not giving too much away.  You don’t want the book to be flimsy either, so it’s a juggling act from start to finish.

It’s going to be tough to promote this one too.  So much happens and there are a lot of twists and turns.  Teasers will be shaky and introducing the new faces will have to be done careful.  Got a few wild characters thrown into the mix.  Throughout the entire process, I had to keep my eye on the solid landing too.  I couldn’t deviate to a point where I screwed up what’s happening in the end.  Much of this related to Clyde’s behavior and the state of his leadership, which has been a central point in the series.  I mean, you have a thief who is now the ruler of a kingdom, so his confidence has never really shifted entirely to this aspect of his life.  Guess we’ll see how I do.

Yeah . . . I’m sorry.  I seem to no longer know how to promote a book anymore.  The posts coming up with be interesting and fun, but I’m not sure what to do on this one.  All I really came here to say is:

War of Nytefall: Anarchy
Is
Coming!

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Want to Make a Change in Process? Here is Lewin’s Change Theory to Help

Pixabay image Hi, SEers John with you again today. In the past, I have discussed some of the theories around being the best we can be. Today I would …

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New #shortstory: OUT ON A LIMB @vocal_creators

Ciao, amici! I did it. Eight stories in eight weeks. I wasn’t sure I had it in me. This week’s theme was to write a story featuring a pear tree. …

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War of Nytefall: Anarchy Volunteers Post (One More Try)

War of Nytefall

Since I’m still hoping to get War of Nytefall: Anarchy released next month, I figure I’ll do one more request for volunteers to host a ‘book is live’ post on their blog or other social media.

The way this works is I send a copy of the post I’m going to have on my blog.  It will be either in HTML or Word form.  I can help anyone who wants the easier HTML thing by walking them through the usage.  Due to work starting tomorrow and limited time, I can’t really do anything personalized right off the bat.  If you have an idea for a post then let me know in the comments and we’ll see what we can do.  Just want to get some announcements out once the book is live, which I’m hoping to do on Labor Day weekend as long as life goes smoothly.

So, leave a comment if you want to help.  I’ll send an email to the address connected to your comment unless you give me a different one.  Thanks in advance.

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Last Week of Summer

As stated above, this was the last week of my summer break.  I’ll be putting a mask on and going back to work on Monday.  My son was nice enough to point out that this break wasn’t even 10 weeks long.  Feels like it was a blur with everything that went on, but here we are.

From Sunday through Wednesday, I was away with my son.  We went up to Oswego, NY, which is on Lake Ontario and where I went to college.  Last time I was there was April 2013 to try to sell Beginning of a Hero at a local convention.  So, it was more of a business trip where I got to see a few friends while standing behind a table.  Prior to that, it was 2003 until I moved back to Long Island.  The town was both the same and different than I remember.  I’ll admit to getting hit by the nostalgia bug and I’d just stare out the hotel window at the river whenever my son was still asleep.  Maybe I miss the quiet scenery compared to my life here.  Either way, it was fun and hurt a little when it was time to leave.

Just to get the driving part out of the way, it wasn’t easy since I was the only driver.  Keep in mind that my shoulder was, and still is, in bad shape.  It’s healing very slow, but the 6 hour drive was brutal even with the breaks.  Didn’t help that we left just as Hurricane/Tropical Storm Henri was hitting.  Seriously, the rain started coming down just as we pulled away from the house.  Felt like every time I dropped below 60 mph, the rain would get stronger, so it was like we were being chased.  This resulted in us getting up to Oswego much earlier than expected, but we made it.  Got to give my son a tour of the town and campus by car . . . This was done mostly because I got lost.

The full days we were up there were Monday and Tuesday, which I learned was when some of the places I chose were closed.  So, no Fort Ontario or bumper cars in Syracuse’s Destiny USA mall.  We did get to go to two zoos.  One was the Rosamond Gifford Zoo in Syracuse, which I’d been to before.  It was great and we were able to go around it twice before we left for lunch.  My son got to feed a camel and got a lot of use out of his new camera.  There were a bunch of animals he’s never seen before like Golden Lion Tamarins, Stellar’s sea eagles, and gray wolves.  We went to the mall for lunch after that and hit up an arcade to make up for no bumper cars.  Got lost finding the exit, but managed to get back before my shoulder gave out.  Then it was resting in the pool, which we did all 3 days we were up there.

The second zoo was the Wild Animal Park in Chittenango.  This was smaller and more expensive, but it had more first times for my son.  He got to hold a baby kangaroo (yes, I know it’s a Joey) and we went on a small train that went through the deer area.  They had every big cat there too.  He fed a giraffe too.  New animals to him included binturongs, badgers, fishers, and pygmy hippos.  Also, he got to see this:

That would be a white tiger.  We had to go back a few times before leaving for this, but the white tiger still lost out to holding a baby kangaroo.

The second day included going to a mall I used to work at and finding out that it was open, but a ghost town.  Stores were there, but the food court and anchor stores were gone.  It was both sad and creepy.  Just headed back to the hotel and grabbed lunch nearby.  Got to have dinner with two friends from college who I haven’t seen since 2013.  They never got to meet my son either, so it was a big event.  Good memories were forged before the long drive home.

Nothing else to really say about the rest of the week.  I had no time to write and it was hard to muster the energy for it with other things going on.  The notebook I brought on the trip got no attention and I still don’t know what grouping of ideas I’m going to put in there.  It may be a while before I tackle that.  Thinking of slowly printing out War of Nytefall: Eulogy and edit when I have downtime.

Next weekend will be the release of War of Nytefall: Anarchy and I’m planning to announce it on Sunday.  That gives me Friday evening and Saturday to get everything in place.  Not sure if Sunday is a good day to announce, but it doesn’t feel like I have good timing on releases at all.  At this point, I’m simply doing this for myself.  Still, it’s nice to think that someone will catch wind of my books and that could create a little buzz.

Didn’t watch any TV while away or after my son went to sleep when home.  I typically went to bed soon after because I was drained.  Probably toss on an anime called ‘Combatants Will Be Dispatched!’ starting tonight and then another when that’s done.  I don’t know exactly how next week will go with everything, so I’ll play it by ear.  Maybe I’ll start fiddling with ‘Phi Beta Philes’.  Nah.  That spelling isn’t going to work.  ‘Phi Beta Files’ looks better and less . . . I keep thinking ‘philes’ is short for pedophiles.  Might want to remember that thought for the book.

Goals for the week:

  1. Start work.
  2. Prepare son for first day of school.
  3. Get back on sleep schedule.
  4. Maybe some notebook work.
  5. Release War of Nytefall: Anarchy.  I only have to hit publish at this point.  Want to wait until my son starts school because that requires my full attention.
  6. Drama . . . It’s inevitable.
  7. Seriously, I will get on that exercise bike now that my shoulder isn’t in agony with the slightest twitch.
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