
HI SEers! Denise here with my first post of 2024. This year, I’ll explore twelve things that writers should know. I will be incorporating information…
What writers should know! Part one: Grammar

HI SEers! Denise here with my first post of 2024. This year, I’ll explore twelve things that writers should know. I will be incorporating information…
What writers should know! Part one: Grammar
(This was originally posted on February 15, 2023.)

Young Frankenstein
Let’s be clear. There really aren’t many solid rules to monster making. At least when it comes to fiction. In reality, you have to struggle with the ethics of creating a monster and hope it doesn’t kill you when it escapes. Anyway, let’s dive into some general advice that can help you along.

Greetings and Happy New Year to the Story Empire community. Beem Weeks here with my first post of 2024. Today, we’re talking sex in fiction! Many …
Sex in Stories? What’s All the Fuss?

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A conversation started at work between two coworkers and I got pulled into it. One person was stating that they didn’t think the classics should be taught any more because it’s hard for students to connect. The language is older and the themes might not come across as they would in a more modern story. He used ‘Catcher in the Rye’ as an example of a book that doesn’t really connect any more. The other coworker talked about how the classics should still be taught because they are designated as such for a reason. You can probably guess the generations/ages of these coworkers. It wasn’t an argument, but a friendly conversation.
I fall in the middle here because I hated some of the classics that we were forced to read in school. ‘Catcher in the Rye’ and ‘The Pearl’ were agonizing to the point where I stopped reading them. ‘Slaughterhouse 5’ was fun, but I don’t remember it anymore. ‘One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest’, ‘To Kill a Mockingbird’ and ‘The Great Gatsby’ were also good reads, but I don’t remember as much as I do from the books I read for fun. ‘Of Mice and Men’ is one of the few that I have good memories of reading, which was surprising. Still, I don’t remember thoroughly enjoying any of the books.
One of the problems with classics is that they’re typically assigned reading instead of students choosing them. So, you already have a sense of a chore, which is made worse when you have to analyze. The classics are infamous for having deep meanings that even the author might not have intended. Some ELA teachers go to town on these books to the point where all sense of enjoyment is driven out of the experience. That doesn’t really help them maintain their use when students who hated them, but love reading end up becoming teachers. Then, you get some teachers who go through the motions of teaching the classics because they’re state requirements. A book that survives in a culture solely by being assigned to students doesn’t help its reputation as anything other than a forced reading.
Recent years have shown that more modern books are being put in place of some classics to give students a look at other cultures. ELA is now used partially to expose students to ideas, lifestyles, and cultures beyond their own. For example, my son read ‘To Kill a Mockingbird’ last year, but also a WWII book called ‘Unbroken’. He’s started reading ‘Of Mice and Men’ this year and will also do ‘Romeo & Juliet’, but he also read some Edgar Allan Poe and other short works. So, there’s definitely a mix of stuff unlike one classic after another when I was in school.
A small aside: Why does William Shakespeare continue to survive in academia? I know much of what we read can be traced back to him and his stories are considered timeless classics. Yet, them being required texts can lead to issues. Teachers have trouble teaching Willie’s works because of the language and the fact that they were supposed to watched on stage instead of read. You have to really make it an interactive lesson, which is difficult when you have students glued to cellphones. Makes me wonder if there will ever be a time that Shakespeare is pushed to college or an elective class after you’re introduced to one of his works in 9th grade.
Getting back to the classics, I think there is a place for them, but your average student won’t really get hooked. They’ll see the books as forced reading from an older age, which they can’t usually understand. Maybe it’s better to have these books as part of elective courses for those who want to read them. Have them listed for extra credit if a student wants to do an analysis on their own. Classics really do come from an older age that modern students don’t always comprehend just like people from that era don’t always get the modern stuff. So, it really doesn’t do any good to force these books on them because they don’t always benefit. Not to the extent that was done when I was school anyway, so maybe having fewer of them in the curriculum is better.
This also creates a future problem from book snobs. You know the people who rattle off the classics they read as if that’s an award-worthy activity? Those types probably make it even harder for others to get into the classics. It gives off the idea that these books are either difficult to read or pretentious. Even worse, a person can go in expecting one type of story and get something else, which could ruin the concept of classics entirely. This really can’t be solved by forcing everyone to read them though. You avoid the future problem of book snobs, but sacrifice or at least endanger a person’s enjoyment of reading these types of stories. Just can’t win at times.
So, what do other people think about students having to read the classics? Should they be retired, put into an elective, continued to be assigned, or something else?

Hi, gang. Craig with you once more with one of my ill conceived posts. I stumbled across something interesting and am trying to turn it into a …
Inverse Ninja Theory
Way back on December 2nd, I went with my family to the see the Bronx Zoo Holiday Lights. I’ve never actually been there before. Surprising since I’ve had the membership for about a decade. The stars and finances never really aligned until last month. So, here we are with some of my favorite pictures from the event. Although, the first one is not of a light, but a snow leopard cub that had recently been shown to the public.

Baby Snow Leopard!


Peacocks in the trees


Chainsaw Ice Carving


Ouch.
Not a day has gone by between last Saturday and today where there wasn’t some ridiculous drama. So, I didn’t get any writing or editing done. Managed to fiddle with some Lego sets and a puzzle, but that was it. The stinky stuff was flying and it even forced me to take one of my ‘when needed’ anxiety meds to help me sleep. You know it’s bad when a full dose of Zzzquil doesn’t make a dent.
I can’t really talk about much of what happened in detail. At work, we had to get back into our regular schedule, but obstacles occurred. The temptation to let my aching mind and body get a day off was high, but I didn’t want to leave my coworkers in the lurch when we were already strained. Didn’t think it would look good if I took a day off so soon after a long break too. Figure I can make it to the weekend where sleep and hydration can push me towards recovery. Last night, I could feel a familiar ache in my gut and lower back, so I might be bedridden at some point. As long as it’s over the weekend and doesn’t strike next week. Friggin’ IBS hasn’t reared its head in well over a year, so I guess it was due to remind me it exists.
The bigger issue was something I had to deal with outside of work. I feel like I’ve been backed into a corner with a certain situation. Also that being a person who openly shows his emotions results in me being seen as a monster by those who don’t really know me. I show my anger and frustration, which makes me an easy target for those with more control to trigger me around others. Feeling like I’m being poked and prodded like a captured beast until I flip doesn’t help my psyche. Seeing how other people with less visible, but equally vicious, tempers get a pass because they don’t appear angry causes frustration. Even when I hold myself back, the few blips get pointed out and I feel like I’m being vilified again. Having to face this on top of the whirlwind of work and not being able to rest has left me drained.
No idea what I can do about it. Long ago, I was the type of person who kept his anger on the inside and never talked about it. That was making my insides feel rotten and I’d lash out when I couldn’t hold it in anymore. So, I decided to not let the negative feelings get pent up and let people know I was upset. Sad thing is that only gets people to tell you to stop complaining, grow up, or another comment to minimize my feelings. Is it any wonder I get confused or even argue with people who try to compliment me or say that my emotions are justified? Doesn’t say much about my life if comfort and positive comments are practically an alien language. Then again, I’ve been reading up how this is fairly common among people. Huh, pretty weird goal post, but my mind is wandering and letting stuff out to clear the weekend.
My only plan for this weekend is to edit as much of Darwin & the Fate Bracelet as possible. I kept bringing it to work to do some editing, but I never had any time to tinker with it. Maybe next week and hopefully I get far this weekend, which means staving off whatever my guts are attempting to do. Hydration is key. Since I’m using a paper copy, I’ll be able to move around the house and give myself a change of scenery from time to time. Let’s see. 16 chapters and I can typically edit 3 per day, but it might be more since this is the 4th time I’ve gone through it. Just trying to tighten up any areas that seem flimsy. Makes for a good January project since I can’t touch Darwin & the Joy Path until February when the ‘life event’ has either ended or hit a new stage.
I was going to say that I won’t get much done this week, but it might end up being the opposite. Tuesday is going to be messy since that’s the only day to jam in a bunch of appointments and activities. The rest of the week might not be too bad. My son is in a special music festival called All County, which requires several late nights at school to rehearse. That gives me a bunch of afternoons and evenings to do writing and biking after work. Be great if I can get the editing done and inputted by the end of the month. Not sure what to do with Darwin & the Fate Bracelet after that since it will still be a while before I can publish. I was aiming for end of summer anyway. Guess I can start writing Darwin & the Joy Path. Weird idea:
What if I edit all 5 finished Darwin books before I begin the 6th?
Goals of the week:

So, I’m using this month to get a few things started and other things finished. Also, I need some time to formulate more types of Tuesday posts and other topics. Not to mention the ‘life event’ is still going on and no idea when it will finish. In other words, I’m going to be doing ‘Questions 3’ for the January Fridays. Enjoy!