Using Analogies is like Giving Yourself an Ink Blot Test

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Did the title work?  Maybe not, which is one of the challenges with analogies.  They’re like jokes in that they depend on the audience and don’t always hit their mark.  You can share an analogy that has one person nodding in agreement and another scratching their head in confusion.  Why is that?

Well, the big thing is that analogies require pre-existing knowledge.  I remember one from the animated X-Men that was ‘Nervous as a long-tailed cat in a room full of rocking chairs’, which I’ve been told is a Southern expression.  Pretty simple to understand as long as you know what a cat and a rocking chair are.  You also need to know how painful that experience would be.  If you’re missing any of those elements, you’re going to have to explain what you meant.  Again, this is like a joke where it loses its impact if you have to explain it.

I’ve noticed that I use analogies a lot.  People may have picked up on that in comments over the years.  By analyzing myself, I tend to use an analogy for one of two reasons:

  1. Explaining a difficult subject.  Example:  The Big Bang is like when you put an burrito in a microwave and it explodes.
  2. Humor.  Example:  That’s as useful as a slotted spoon when eating soup.

Both areas have shown analogies to be useful in getting a point across.  This is because it simplifies and familiarizes things.  If a person doesn’t understand a concept then it can be made clear by connecting it to something they do know.  It won’t give them an intricate understanding of the details, but they can get the general idea.  This opens the door to introduce the more nuanced and difficult pieces.  Take the Big Bang example where the person now gets that something exploded outwards.  Now, you can explain how this created the galaxy (mess) and the planets/stars/etc. (burrito pieces) exist individually instead of connected.  Eventually, you can phase out the comparison and they’ll be left with the information as well as a simple way to explain it to others.

Analogies can be used in writing too. They’re really useful in non-Earth fiction.  As the image states, they can be used to pump up your stories.  Narrators can explain things in a fictional world by connecting it to the real world.  Characters can explain magic systems, historical events, and other unfamiliar pieces of world-building with a simplification for those who don’t know.  It helps the readers know what is going on without getting an info dump or being talked to directly.  Analogies are so common in our lives that this tactic makes them feel organic.

This doesn’t mean analogies are perfect and safe.  As I said, they depend a lot on pre-existing knowledge.  There’s also an issue where a person might not like analogies and see them as idiotic.  I’ve met many who are able to grasp concepts easily, so they see analogies as ‘dumbing down’.  Even if they’re not the target, they will feel like they are and the analogy can come off as insulting.  Doesn’t matter with some people that others might need it, so you can inadvertently rub someone the wrong way.  Can you do anything to avoid this?  Only by not using analogies, but then you’ll have people who don’t understand.  Best to weigh your options on which scenario you would rather deal with if you have to.

Another challenge with analogies is just coming up with them.  They aren’t easy regardless of the time we take to craft one.  A long time can lead to us second guessing our connections and making a mess.  Too little time can create an analogy that makes about as much sense as playing chess on a highway.  I’ve found that there’s a balance between instinct and conscious thought with these things.  Rush into it to see what comes up first and then come back to it later.  A first shot at an analogy is rarely on point.  If you can’t understand it a week later then you need to do it again.

So, what do you think about analogies?  Got any favorites?

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How to Use Prologues, Part 3, Prologue Dos and Don’ts

Hi SErs! It’s a day of Harmony here at Story Empire 🙂 Today, I’d like to talk about prologue dos and don’ts. Here’s a link to the previous post on …

How to Use Prologues, Part 3, Prologue Dos and Don’ts
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Happy Macaroon Day! (Eat Some while Enjoying a Fantasy Adventure for $2.99)

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Grab your snacks and get comfortable for a wild jungle adventure in Legends of Windemere: Charms of the Feykin!

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Floyd’s Fantastic Flower Shop: Allergy Meds in Back

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Welcome to the magic flower shop.  Each of our flowers bestows a special ability if you wear it.  These last until they die, so work hard to keep your purchase alive for as long as possible.  Please be aware that if any of our flowers crosspollinate with those around you, the offspring will have no magical properties.  We learned the hard way that you need such a safeguard.  So, what would you like?

  • Roses–  Sprout thorns from skin when stressed; Favored by introverts
  • Orchids–  Create kaleidoscopic lights from your hands; Do NOT use while driving
  • Sunflowers– Emit solar blast from mouth; Risk of burning off taste buds
  • Lilies– Shed skin like a banana peel to reveal new skin beneath: Gross at parties
  • Daisies– Detach hands and throw like a spinning blade; Creator has been sacked
  • Tulips– Cause others to fall in love with you; CAUTION: Spells dies with flower
  • Carnations– Full knowledge and ability to ballet dance; Tutu and tights not included
  • Narcissus– Utter confidence at whatever you do; High risk of being a jerk
  • Irises– Heightened senses; Sense of smell will be overwhelmed by flower
  • Bird of Paradise– Ability to fly; Accomplished by taking the form of bird of same name
  • Violets– Super agility and speed; Deep fear of chewing gum
  • Daffodils– Grow to twice height with proportional strength; Does not change clothes
  • Mums– Able to turn into a ball and roll with precision; Lose ability to speak
  • Jasmine– Heat vision and create gentle stream of water . . . You can make tea
  • Dahlia– Increased luck in matters of money; May awaken an Aztec God
  • Lotus– Can never be stressed or upset; Overuse leads to loss of all emotions
  • Hibiscus– Telepathy; Only works on members of the opposite sex with no control
  • Snapdragon– Arms can be used like whips; Grow scales for a week
  • Marigolds– Crimp any object with bare hands; Favored by crafty people
  • Cockscomb– Watch your language
  • Foxglove– Trasnsform into a fox; Be aware of local hunting seasons and rabies risks
  • Primrose– Walk with grace and elegance regardless of surface; People will stare at your butt
  • Snowdrop– Create snowstorms; We are NOT responsible for people hating you for ruining picnics, summer, or any other events
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Happy Pink Flamingo Day! Let’s See the Inspiration

So, today is the National Pink Flamingo Day, which is about these guys:

Not Real Flamingos

I thought it would be more interesting to do a post about the real thing.  After all, flamingos are one of the most identifiable and popular birds around.  Their pink coloration, long necks, and how they stand on one leg are practically iconic in the animal kingdom.  They’re also filter feeders and eat by straining food from mud, which involves eating with their heads upside down.  Really cool.

Also, none of the 6 species are endangered.  That means, we can dive right into the pictures (all found with Google Image Search) and videos.

Greater Flamingo

This is the Greater Flamingo, which has the greatest range.  It’s also the largest. They’re found in Africa, Southern Europe, and South/Southwest Asia.

Lesser Flamingo

The Lesser Flamingo is found in Sub-Saharan Africa and western India.  These are actually the smallest flamingo species.

Chilean Flamingo

Found in South America, the Chilean Flamingo is considered near threatened.  This is because they live in salt lagoons and soda lakes, which are at risk of pollution.  Some have been introduced to the Netherlands.

James’s Flamingo

The James’s Flamingo has more yellow in its beak than other species.  The live in the higher altitude plateaus of the Andes like in Peru and Bolivia.  They were thought to be extinct until a colony was found in 1956.

Andean Flamingo

The Andean Flamingo is closely related to the James’s Flamingo.  They live in the same region too.  You can see in the pictures that they differ in beak color.  This one also has a deeper mandible than other species.  Mining has made this species vulnerable.

American Flamingo

The American or Caribbean Flamingo is the only one that inhabits North America, but it isn’t exclusive to the continent.  It can be found in the Caribbean, Florida, Belize, Colombia, Brazil, and Venezula.

Here’s an informative video to learn more:

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Goal Post: A Possible Return to Writing

The last time I wrote anything new was late August/early September.  I’m talking stories and not blog posts.  This school year has been really busy both as a TA and as a parent, so time and energy weren’t there.  Now, I’m hoping that can start changing and I can pull off writing two books before the next school year.  That’s the plan and I’m sure people have already rushed to the comments to say good luck.

The problem is that I’m still getting life thrown at me.  I factored in my son’s Lego Robotics competition today.  I didn’t expect to be getting new air conditioners installed today, which means I can’t work on the book before I meet him for the competition.  This also meant that my room had to get rearranged to a point where the energy is so off that I’m simply uncomfortable.  So, I couldn’t start last night and will have to start tonight once I put everything back.  This means I’ll come one section short of finishing 3 of 19 chapters before things get busy again.  Hopefully, nothing else comes up and brings that number down.

Then again, I might be writing slow because I’m not feeling very confident.  It’s been so long and my stress is still high.  Feels like people throw things at me every time I try to get close to writing too.  Guilt trips for not doing other stuff even though I haven’t touched my books in 9 months.  So, I’m mentally battered.  It doesn’t look like that’s going to change any year soon either.  After all, I’ve been pushing the whole ‘I can write when the chaos is done’ timeline for months and it keeps getting longer.  With my son’s extracurricular events and the AP proctoring done, I shouldn’t be crashing before nighttime.  That’s a good step towards the physical thing, but the mental and emotional state are going to be the hurdles.  It’s far too easy to shove me into a melancholy and there are too many people in my life who see that as a hobby.

So . . . what happened this week?  It’s a smattering of stuff.  I finished all of the October posts. Work was busy since we were heading for a 3-day weekend.  For obvious reasons, there was some tension.  My son had his chorus concert on Tuesday and we celebrated with Friendly’s ice cream afterwards.  The usual schoolwork was going on too.  Last weekend had my niece joining us for Saturday and part of Sunday.  My son cooked my mom’s chili recipe for both dinner and a Home & Careers final project.  Worked out well and then . . . we found out the refrigerator had died.  Yeah, that threw a chaotic monkey wrench into the whole week until we got a new one.  At least I have space in this one and the ice maker works.

Only other big thing is that my son is back to drawing and is now attempting to do stuff by eye.  No more step-by-step videos.  He’s going to take a picture and try to draw it on his own.  Here’s his first attempt:

Princess Peach

He plans on drawing Princess Peach multiple times and with different dresses.  This is how he’s going to practice and he wants to cover all of her Super Smash costumes.  At least he’s back to this and not just playing video games.

Can’t think of much else to talk about here.  I’m not feeling entirely on the ball, which has me nervous about attempting to write tonight.  The idea of trying to get back into it and failing miserably keeps running through my mind because I don’t have it in me to handle that scenario.  Waited so long to try again and I’m doing it after taking such an emotional beating.  I’ll just be honest.  There is no real support system for me doing this any more and that hurts.  People see it as a useless hobby that I need to put away because I tried and failed already.  Nobody wants to hear about my ideas or give me real time and space to write unless they have no use for me.  So, for the first time in my life, I really do feel like I’m walking this path in total isolation from this side of the computer.  It’s not sitting well with me and makes accessing the Darwin Slepsnor part of my brain more difficult.  At least I won’t get to writing him until tomorrow after lunch.

So, goals of the week:

  1. Start writing Darwin & the Halfling Hunt.  Hoping to get 3 chapters done before next weekend.
  2. Work as usual.
  3. Parenting as usual.
  4. Continue biking 3-4 times a week.
  5. Hydrate because I need it.
  6. Put my room back together after the new AC installed.
  7. Work on ‘Lego Globe’ a bit.  Can’t now because the work desk is covered in stuff moved away from AC area.
  8. Finish watching ‘Outlaw Star’ and start watching ‘The Pentaverate’.
  9. Continue making list of healthier foods to start eating over the summer.
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Questions 3: The Power Up for You!

Blue Shell from Mario Kart

This might be more difficult than I assume.  Being someone who has played video games since childhood, I’m used to temporary Power Ups.  Others might not be so quick to think up anything.  So, take your time if you want to answer.  After all this is all in good fun and maybe you’ll think about something you really need.  We could all use some kind of power ups in our lives from time to time.  (I’m pretty sure that’s a slogan for coffee.)

  1. What type of Power Up could you really use?
  2. How would you take it?
  3. Would there be any side-effects after it worked?

Mine answers:

  1. Mental clarity to help with focus and time management.
  2. It would be a potion because I hate pills.
  3. Side-effect would be that coming down would result in an hour of being entirely useless.
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Anthologies

Hey, SE Readers. Joan with you today. In my last post, I talked about the advantages of writing short stories and how they could be stand-alone works…

Anthologies
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Poetry Day: Bad Weather Bastards

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(Seriously, why do so many people lose their minds when the weather turns?  It’s the opposite of what one should do on the road.)

As rain falls in powerful sheets.

All the idiots with cars enter the streets.

Acting like nothing can get in their way.

And they see this weather as their time to play.

*

Slow movers crawl from home and from work.

Stifling cars that move with quick jerks.

Stopping at every light that they find.

Spiraling you out of your frustrated mind.

*

Speeders are out and they pose a great threat.

Skidding out of the fog that makes the road wet.

Stop signs and lights are ignored as they roar.

Some come very close to hitting your door.

*

Heart attacks near when some change with no lights.

Hiding in gloom that turns days into nights.

How lucky are you to see one of them weaving.

Hope your wife is ready to be left grieving.

*

One truck is enough for you on this trip.

On wheels that launch water that cracks like a whip.

Once the tractor is swerving you are in a bad place.

Only choice you now have is to say final grace.

*

Last stretch of the road is appearing ahead.

Looks like the sky is turning blood red.

Little change in the cars that you find yourself near.

Lunkheads and psychos that you have reason to fear.

*

Every storm brings out the worst of the pack.

Enjoying the weather as if on a closed track.

Easing into your driveway with all your nerves bent.

Exit your car and ignore that new dent.

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7 Tips to Using Power Ups in Fiction

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We do tend to think more about video games than books when it comes to temporary Power Ups.  Yet, they are around with much less fanfare.  You don’t have to hit a block with your head to get them out.  Just need enough gold or loot the right body after a battle.  Either way, they kind of pop up and get used down the road.  So, what are some ways to give them a real impact?

  1. Establish that such things exist early on in the story.  Don’t drop a potion or scroll into the mix then act like it’s normal.  Not every magical world has these things.  This doesn’t even have to be complicated.  Mentioning them in passing establishes that they are around and gives their use meaning.  Otherwise, they can turn into a Deus Ex Machina and throw readers off.
  2. Even if you don’t mention it in the stories, have an idea about how long an effect will last.  These are supposed to be temporary boosts or solutions.  This depends on what they do as well.  A healing potion would be immediate and no longer be active once the damage is undone.  A strength salve could work until it is sweated off or the person takes a bath.  You can fiddle with the times if you don’t declare specifics, but you need them to stop at some point.
  3. You can only get away with a character having the right Power Up out of nowhere so many times.  If they have just been introduced or were shown to have gotten supplies then it can work without much questioning.  An adventure that has been going on for a long time and given them no time to restock makes this less believable.  I’m not saying you can’t do it, but try to give even the slightest explanation.  After all, modern audiences seem to enjoy tearing stories down for inconsistencies and plot holes.  It’s like a drinking game for some.
  4. These items need to be used in the spur of the moment, but also can’t be something in constant use or on hand.  Exceptions are jewelry and other gear that is worn, but those are the gray area of ‘limited charge’ items.  Potions, scrolls, salves, and other temporary Power Ups typically need to be pull out and used.  Otherwise, they could be triggered by accident like other magic items.  Last thing you want is a hero to have an expensive healing cookie and it appears in his mouth due to a paper cut.
  5. Consider that the stronger the boost, the less time it lasts and/or the harsher the side-effects.  Small things like minor healing or small increase in speed doesn’t have to come with a downside.  If your hero suddenly has the power to lift a mountain and they have the power for days then there should be a downside.  That’s a massive upgrade that changes the dynamic of the story and character.
  6. Be careful of story damaging Power Ups.  If a hero takes a Power Up that gives them an ability that solves every problem then readers will wonder two things.  First, why they didn’t wait until they were at the final challenge to use it and secure victory?  Second, why don’t they have a bunch of the Power Ups?  In other words, be careful with what these things can do.
  7. Power Ups can’t be made easily even if their effect is simple.  You’re still dealing with magic, so a person who hasn’t been trained shouldn’t be able to craft their own Power Ups with ease.  Ingredients and brewing techniques are needed for items you ingest or put on your skin.  One that you activate by reading needs special language or phrases, which wouldn’t be known by your average citizen.  Consider which type of people would know or bother how to make these items.  Showing specialty stores or making them designed exclusively by one order can help here.
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