Historical Writing: Get Your Facts Straight

Hey, SE Readers. Joan with you today. A couple of years ago, I wrote a post about historical fiction and the importance of doing your research. Today…

Historical Writing: Get Your Facts Straight
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Animals that Mate for Life

So, I’m rarely in a good mood on June 4th.  It used to be my wedding anniversary, but now it’s a day that I just want to get through.  Helps if I have to work since I’m too busy to think about anything else.  Keep in mind that I don’t think about missing my ex-wife.  Want to make that clear.  I just start analyzing my life and considering where I made poor choices that brought me to where I am now.  End up fixating on a few other incidents and things I learned that make those even worse.  Just not a fun day without distractions.  I couldn’t even think of a decent animal to showcase.  Tried to gather ‘divorce memes’, but those were fairly mean, especially towards the ex-husband.  Apparently, divorce is still considered freedom for the woman and a reason to laugh at the man for a lot of people out there.  Anyway, I decided to look up animals that mate for life and put up a few of their pictures here.  Seems like a good counter to my mood.  (Note: Humans are not on the list.)

Beaver

Lovebirds

Gray Wolves

Shingleback Lizard

Oldfield Mice

Seahorse

Atlantic Puffin

Sandhill Crane

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Goal Post: Don’t Ask How the Goals Went Last Week

(You know I’ve had a week when I’m writing this post Saturday morning instead of Friday night before bed.)

The thing about coming to the end of a school year is that the soft whimper only comes on the final day.  Once you get into the one month left territory, a tornado of activity explodes around you.  This is for students, teachers, and parents too.  Everyone scrambles to get everything done before the end.  Work is increased to make sure curriculums are done and students rush to finally do the assignments they’ve been putting off since October.  It’s like a ballet of chainsaws in a hurricane . . . I definitely feel hacked up too.

Let’s start with last weekend.  I really did think I could finish the outline for Darwin & the Beast Collector and the September posts.  Got halfway through the first and still have 5 posts to do.  I had so many errands and chores to do that I wasn’t able to really focus until Sunday.  Then, I realized the outline was in worse shape than I remembered and spent the entire afternoon trying to make sense of it.  This flowed into a graduation party for a coworker that night, which involved more sangria than I expected.  Didn’t get drunk or even buzzed, but my body didn’t quite like the following morning.  The heat and mugginess of my room pretty much sealed my fate on Memorial Day, so I snoozed for most of my time.

This is where the end of the school year stuff started to take a toll.  Work was really busy, which was to be expected.  That was fine.  It was my son getting more homework than we imagined and not always remembering telling me until nighttime that caused some troubles.  Multiple nights had us working until after 10 PM, which meant I didn’t get to watch any TV or relax.  He went to bed and then I got myself ready with Zzzquil to watch my ceiling fan until passing out.  I think I got an episode or two of ‘FUBAR’ on Wednesday after he was dropped off at his mom’s.  Didn’t really pay attention since I was worried about his workload.

There’s only 7 days of classes left too.  So, I’m staring at these projects and new lessons while wondering about reviewing for his cumulative finals.  As a student, I always feared these things because they encompassed the whole year.  That’s a lot and my son has a really tough time recalling past information.  This type of test doesn’t play to his strengths and requires a ton of studying beforehand.  That’s what we’re going to be doing this weekend for 4 subjects since the 5th hasn’t posted any review material.  All of this is on top of studying for two normal tests coming up this week.  I’m really hoping this whole mess sorts itself out by Wednesday, but I’m kind of sidelined after that in terms of helping him study for his finals.  Next weekend, he’s with his mother, so it’s all in her hands.

On the lighter side of my life, there were two events that took a bunch of time, but were worth it.  My school started a Unified Basketball team this year and joined a league that’s been around for 7 years.  These are teams made of both special education and general education students.  The Gen Ed kids are supposed to focus on getting the ball and passing it to the Special Ed kids who get to shoot the baskets.  Our team went undefeated into Tuesday’s semi-finals, which were very aggressive.  We won that and got into the finals on Wednesday, which was aggressive, but not as physical.  The final score was 34-40 with us losing, but our kids were still celebrating having fun.  Local news was there and got a lot of pictures, videos, and a few interviews with our kids.  Got to take my son to both games and he claimed a homemade ‘Fathead’ (I think) of one of our students, which he still waves around at times.  Really proud of them since they showed great sportsmanship and made this more experienced team work hard for a win.  Been saying this was our Rocky 1 year and next year will be Rocky 2 when he won.

This weekend is going to predominantly be studying for finals.  Might get a movie in today and we should get things done for video games tomorrow afternoon.  My niece is being dropped off tomorrow too, so that should be fun.  Not much else to say about that because it will be low key.

It’s the week that’s going to be crazy.  My son has an awards ceremony on Monday night, but also an orthodontist visit.  Stressful time management juggling.  There are his two tests that we need to study for on top of finals.  With it being the last full week of classes, I assume there is going to be a lot of rushing around and racing to get things down both at home and work.  It will be incredibly stressful and slide right into next Saturday morning where I have a doctor appointment.  Checking my blood pressure and blood tests, which I’m expecting will be all bad.  Trying to avoid going on medications is an impossible task when you’re being run ragged and have to graze on whatever is at hand to keep your energy up.  Obesity epidemic definitely isn’t helped by people having to be in survival mode and stressed out of their gourds so often.

Goals of the week:

  1. Survive.
  2. Help son study and get homework done.
  3. Son’s award ceremony.
  4. Biking
  5. Get further in this damnable puzzle to clear the table for Lego sets.
  6. Finish September posts if time allows.
  7. (Next Saturday) Finish Darwin & the Beast Collector
  8. Finish watching ‘FUBAR’ on Netflix.  It’s Arnold Schwarzenegger action and campy comedy, so I’m enjoying it.
  9. I’m sure something involving the ex-wife is going to pop up like it’s been doing lately.
  10. Order graduation present for student who is aging out.
  11. Try to sleep better?
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Happy National Donut Day

Been a long week . . . month . . . year.  So, I just wanted to find a fun post for today.  Can’t go wrong with donuts.  HAPPY NATIONAL DONUT DAY!

Homer Simpson

Swedish Chef

Boromir

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Point of View (POV) #2: Structuring

If you missed part one, find it here: “Point of View (POV) #1: Conventions” Structuring POV The number of POVs used in a story is limited only by the…

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Poetry Day: Every Family Has a B-Word

Sun Ce, Sun Jian, Sun Quan

(The actual title had the full curse word.  Definitely wrote this one when I was angry and feeling underappreciated.  Still, you can see this in many families.  There’s a hierarchy, which means someone is going to be at the bottom.  Not the way things should go, but you still see it happen.)

One in every family

Sitting at the bottom rank

Ordered every waking hour

To toil with no compliant

False rewards are given

Simple thanks at most

Lashed out at if seen idle

Whether tired or caught sick

Told to work instead of rest

As the others watch a show

All complaints are met with guilt

You are told that family comes first

But you know you come in last

The treatment sours all your moods

Making you pray to move away

To get some peace and distance

And live your life for you

Nobody wants to be the bitch

For there is no escape once there

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Pros and Cons of the Battle Fiend

Goku

My son and I watch a lot of anime.  These tend to have a very big combat component, which got me thinking about characters who love to fight.  It’s not a bad thing, but there are those that reach a point where it’s all they do.  Take Goku from Dragon Ball Z up there as an example.  He’s a father, friend, and husband, which barely matters because he just loves to battle.  Truthfully, he gets away with it because he comes from long ago when you didn’t see many battle fiends.  He might be the template now that I think about it.  Doesn’t make things any better.

So, what exactly is a battle fiend?  As stated, this is a character who loves fighting.  It’s what they crave and their main goal.  Most times, it’s their first response to issues, so don’t expect them to be big talkers.  They also cross a line where they are consciously hunting down enemies who will give them a big fight.  Their desire is the fight and everything else is extra.  In fact, the rest of the cast may need to be pushing for the real goal to allow the battle fiend to focus.  For example, the other characters will be openly concerned about saving the planet while Goku just wants to fight.  He’ll talk about saving everyone, but it kind of falls flat, especially when you read that the author wanted him to be interested only in becoming stronger.

Let’s look at some pros and cons with the understanding that this isn’t a character that everyone will want to read about or write:

Pro–  Battle fiends can help in making plots progress quickly.  They aren’t very patient and will push events into conflict.  Talking and sneaking around won’t be factors since the big battle has begun.  So, you can use these characters as a way to avoid stagnation or get out of mental pitfalls.

Con–  They will be a hindrance to any plots that require non-violent solutions.  Not that they will try to kill everyone like a psychopath.  It’s just that they want to fight, so they’re going to try to get what they want.  This is their personality and you have to keep them true to what they are.  So, a battle fiend wouldn’t work very well in a diplomatic situation unless part of the tension comes from keeping them in check.

Pro– Battle fiends come with a high degree of action.  For a story that needs an action component, these characters will always provide.  An author can just have them stir up some trouble even on a basic level.  Maybe things have been quiet for too long, so the battle fiend picks a fight in a bar.  It could seem random, but it fits the character and can lead to other subplots.

Con– People can get bored with these characters fairly quickly.  They turn into ‘one trick ponies’ after a while.  So, a lengthy series would be hurt by their presence unless you make it built entirely around them fighting.  This works best with comics because of the visual aspects.  Novels depend too much on imagination and descriptive text, which can get repetitive.

Pro–  The stronger a battle fiend, the stronger the villains.  This character can force you to put some major effort into the bad guys.  You would need them to be strong enough to be a threat and survive the encounters.  This will also give the battle fiend a powerful enemy for them to target.  This gives them more of a goal and would explain why they keep wanting to get stronger.

Con– A battle fiend can skew the power levels to obscene levels.  As I said, they force enemies to become stronger.  This can result in their allies either growing in power or fading away.  They can become so weak that it’s hard to see how they would survive the fights unless they are always kept away from them.  That makes them seem even weaker and gives more spotlight to the battle fiend, who steals the show.  If you boost everyone to higher levels, they can survive, but it can lead to a story that is focused entirely on fighting.  That’s a bad thing if it wasn’t your original intention.

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Who Do You Write Like, and What Does That Mean?

Ciao, SEers! I hope those of you in the US had a safe and happy holiday. I thought we’d have a little fun today. I recently came across a site that …

Who Do You Write Like, and What Does That Mean?
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Revisiting Origins: Delvin Cunningham

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

(Delvin Cunningham had a similar path as Timoran Wrath.  After a cameo, he officially debuted in Family of the Tri-Rune.  He showed up rather close to the end of that book, but proved himself going forward.  This would result in him getting a book that focused primarily on him, which would be The Mercenary Prince.  Did this change up his path?  Maybe.  Definitely have to add to the older post here.)

Delvin Cunningham is a scourge to my spellchecker because Word refuses to believe it’s a name.  This really cements a part of this character where people don’t always pay attention to him.  When teamed up with acrobatic Luke, fire-hurling Nyx, seductive Sari, and powerful Timoran, the ‘standard’ warrior gets overshadowed in terms of combat potential.  Too bad that’s a wrong move with him.

Delvin is the protege of Selenia Hamilton and demonstrates some amazing physical resilience, but his strength is that he’s a thinker.  While Luke is spontaneous, Delvin is a tactician and a quick-witted one at that.  This is why the two of them will typically fight to a draw.  Yet, the sword and shield is rather common, which is why people see Delvin as uninteresting.  This goes for characters and readers. His laid back nature doesn’t help even though that gets cracked a few times in the tenser situations.  Especially when Nyx is involved, which neither confirms nor denies what you’re thinking.

Now, Delvin was played by a friend in the D&D game that the series is based on.  The player dove into the role and was a solid part of the group within one session.  Not much resistance since he was a warrior looking for adventure.  Sadly, we never got to explore much of his background, but the origin of ‘Book Delvin’ is very similar to that of ‘Game Delvin’.  Abandoned on a chunk of ice as a child, miraculously stayed alive, and eventually became Selenia’s prized pupil.  The mercenary thing came when I needed to play around with his origin to give him experience and some characterization meat.  Again, I was never told what the original plan was.

The biggest change between game and book is his personality.  Delvin and Luke were very similar in that they were noble and loyal heroes.  In the game, I couldn’t play Luke with stunts because die rolls aren’t controllable.  So, he was a lot more strategic like Delvin, but I left that trait more with the latter when I wrote the book.  This has turned him into a cautious fighter, so his actions scenes are a lot more block and counter heavy.  He is very precise in most of what he does and has adopted a high sense of responsibility.  Yet, he rarely lets his more intense emotions out, which is different than most of the others.  Timoran does have him beat, but Delvin is quick to find a rational explanation.  In fact, I’ve come to find that he can figure out several scenarios in the time it takes others to think of one.  Most of the character conversations with him, you can get the feeling that he lets everyone else contribute even though he could plan it all himself.  This is why I see him as more of a leader than the others.  He wants everyone to feel like they’re part of a team and tries his best to foster friendships.

A final note with Delvin is that he spent a lot of time as a main/side character.  I never investigated his origins, which led to him being the only hero without a past.  Every other character has something interesting that they face or that built them up.  Delvin had nothing aside from a tale of abandonment, which is what sparked the idea for Book 9 of Legends of Windemere.  I felt bad that he had moments to shine, but was the one hero to never get his own book to shine.  So I get to really explore his mentality, evolution, and past in the next book.  Personally, I can’t wait because it will also reveal the true power behind him.

2023 Update– Delvin definitely mellowed out and become more reactive as the series progressed.  He was still the tactician and thinker of the group, but he adopted a little more of Luke’s impulsiveness than I expected.  Not enough to make them the same type of character, but it loosened Delvin up.  Of course, the big thing for him was the romance with Nyx, which was never hidden.  No matter how much I tried, I couldn’t make it a mystery.  I think this helped with making Delvin a fairly open and honest person because he simply didn’t bother keeping things a secret.  He was an open book for the most part, which was a change of pace.  It also helped make him the leader of the champions even though he didn’t claim the title or act like he was in charge.  Overall, I like how Delvin’s path came about and ended.

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How Do Elementals Work?

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Not sure how much steam this topic has since it’s rather niche.  Just something that popped into my head and I felt like writing about.  You see elementals in fantasy stories a lot, especially as summons.  So, maybe there is something to consider here.

Elementals are rather simple to figure out.  They are creatures composed of, born from, and/or controllers of a single element.  Typically, they are powerful beings that can be friend or foe.  Sometimes there are multiples of an elemental while other times there is a single one for each category.  The whole thing is rather flexible outside of them needing to be connected to one element.  If they have more than one then they are something else, which can be a unique monster or a special elemental.  Maybe find out what happens when you combine things.

I do find it interesting that people divide the elements differently depending on their personal taste.  You can have:

  1. Western Classic– Earth, Air, Water, Fire
  2. Chinese Classic– Wood, Fire, Earth, Metal, Water
  3. Japanese Classic– Earth, Air, Water, Fire, Void
  4. Whatever You Need– Elementals of all kinds including slime, acid, etc.

That really covers everything you can think of.  Mostly because of that final ‘catch all’ category that authors will use to turn anything into an element.  If it’s a natural, non-animal piece of matter then it gets turned into an elemental.  Even that’s not entirely true since I’ve read stories with bone and blood elementals.  They still are composed of the single element, which is how they tend to be.

There are ways to make them look like combinations though.  The broader the category, the more versatility they can have in attacks and forms.  For example, a Fire Elemental in four element system would also have abilities connected to heat, lava, and sometimes even electricity.  You might be scratching your head, but lightning and lava turn into crossover components.  If they can be connected to fire then that’s where they go.  They might be part of an Earth Elemental too.  It really depends on if you can rationalize what they are doing while maintaining the concept of an elemental.

Is there any consistency here?  No . . . Now that I think about it, people seem to go off and do whatever they want here.  You have monstrous elementals composed entirely of their element.  You have humanoids that simply have that element’s power and maybe a few odd physical traits.  Ethereal spirits that can conjure the element is another one.  The only consistency might be that they work with one category.  I keep coming back to that, which is another reason why I knew I couldn’t make this a week-long topic.

Personally, I don’t use elementals that often.  I find them to be overdone and a little too restrictive for what I’ve written so far.  That isn’t to say that I won’t use them when I have to.  I lean towards elementals that are creatures and not humanoid too, so I can’t have them around all the time.  Windemere does have elemental planes where these creatures can be found and mortals can’t survive too.  A rather common thing done in fantasy stories, I might add.  It does mean that they would be rare and usually summoned by a caster.  So, I don’t give them much attention unless I need a creature in that type of situation.

Well, that’s all I’ve got.  Maybe I’ll come up with something better for Wednesday.

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