Revisiting Origins: Queen Trinity

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Where to even begin with Trinity?  Over the course of Legends of Windemere, she has worn the mask of a villain, hero, savior, tormentor, victim, friend, rival, and a few others.  I think she’s the most diverse one of the whole cast because I had to move her from one spot to another.  It wasn’t really supposed to be this way either.

Trinity is the ruler of a species called ‘Chaos Elves’.  These are a species of elf that maintain some of the demon taint that was thrown into the mix of the original model, which nearly destroyed Windemere.  They live on the shadowy continent of Shayd and are known for being deadly assassins.  Although, they used to be known as annoying pranksters before the Great Cataclysm happened.  Very few people know that Baron Kernaghan’s prison cracked enough that he managed to enslave the chaos elves and turn them into his personal army.  He’s gone through many puppet rulers to keep them under his thumb, but now he has Trinity.  This might not be a positive for him.

Originally, Trinity was a deal-loving caster who debuted in Prodigy of Rainbow Tower to counter the power of Nyx.  She was actually stronger at first because she had more experience.  While Nyx trained for most of her life in Rainbow Tower, Trinity took the throne and became an agent of the Baron at a very young age.  By the time she appears in the books, she’s had a lot of kills and misery under her belt.  Plenty of suffering too because she’s done what no other ruler has done before.  She accepts the punishments of her people, which has kept many of them alive because the Baron would never dare to kill her.  This upbringing always made me think of Trinity as a mirror image of Nyx and that either one could have become the other under different circumstances.  In fact, this is a plot point for one of the books when Trinity confronts Nyx . . . This is also where I began having problems.

I always expected Trinity and Nyx to be bitter rivals who would push each other to the highest levels of skill.  Then, they’d settle their feud once and for all with all of the hatred coming out at once.  Unfortunately, I could never maintain their hate because I would see how they’d respect each other.  Nyx wouldn’t hate Trinity who does evil to protect her people.  Trinity wouldn’t hate Nyx for following her destiny.  This would result in them being forced to team-up at times, especially since both of them despised Stephen Kernaghan.  I did manage to create a few scenarios where I could have them really throw down with each other, including their final encounter.  Yet, it never had the emotions that I wanted.  Instead, there was an odd amount of pain and anguish that they felt when doing battle.  It came alongside a sense of pleasure and excitement since nobody else could challenge them in the same fashion.  So, my bitter rivalry became a friendly one that made me change a lot of stuff later on in the books.

For those that made it far into the series, you probably know more about the Trinity/Stephen stuff.  This is probably the darkest I got and it’s a big reason I hated the guy.  I was never sure if I should be overt with the fact that he had raped her and probably threatened to kill her people if she said no.  Before anyone freaks out, I’ve made it clear many times that Stephen is the irredeemable monster of the series and I had to take a shower whenever I wrote a scene where he wasn’t getting his ass kicked.  I think Trinity helped to flush out the horror that he was and it strengthened her a bit because she got to fight back at times.  There’s a big scene that touches on this and Nyx is involved too, but it’s kind of a spoiler.  I didn’t let this part of Trinity’s history define her either.  It was another scar for her to have among so many others, but this is the one I think about the most.

2023 Addition–  You know, I don’t really know what to say about Trinity.  Like Kira, she evolved rapidly and without much concentration.  She went from the sole female flunkie of Baron Kernaghan and Nyx’s rival to an eventual anti-hero.  Part of it might have been that I slowly realized that I didn’t want the chaos elves to remain on the side of evil since they weren’t monsters.  They were clearly being manipulated and having them abruptly revealed as such near the end didn’t feel right.  Trinity gave me a way to demonstrate that her and her people weren’t just villains.  There was situational nuance to them, which enhanced her purpose and symbolism.  She became a savior and martyr for her people even though she was standing with Baron Kernaghan.  I think the way she changed also led to me altering how evil he was too.  That’s why Stephen Kernaghan really stands out as the only ‘evil for the sake of being evil’ type.

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Smorgasbord Book Promotions – New Book on the Shelves – #Humour #Fantasy – Goodbye Old Paint (The Hat Book 7) by C.S. Boyack

Delighted to share the news of the latest release by C.S. Boyack…Goodbye Old Paint (The Hat Book 7). On pre-order for October 2nd. About the book …

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It’s That Time of Year Again: Yom Kippur

The Day of Atonement is upon the Jewish people.  Another day of not eating from sundown last night to sundown today.  That means, I’ll be tackling a video game to distract myself from my hunger.  My choice is from the N64 collection the Switch.  I missed playing ‘Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time’.  Had a lot of good memories playing this game in college.  Anyway, enjoy the funnies.

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Blurbs

Ciao, SEers! We’ve been discussing famous authors, their styles, ways to emulate them, and ways to stand on their shoulders. If you need to catch up,…

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Autumn Allergies . . . I’d Laugh, but I Can’t Afford to Lose Oxygen

My hay fever has been brutalizing me all month.  It got really bad a little over a week ago and reached a point where I got myself covid tested.  As if this time of year wasn’t bad enough without a disease that mimics allergies.  Doesn’t help that the only parking space I have is under an oak tree (lungs are not a fan) and ragweed appears to be the flavor of the year.  I’m waiting for this to be like autumn 2010 when my allergies were so bad that I ended up getting a severe upper respiratory infection.  So much mucus and such a disturbing shade of green.

Anyway, here are some funnies.  I’m off to eat enough to survive Yom Kippur tomorrow.

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Goal Post: Started Off Sleepy and Ended Exhausted

This week didn’t go as planned, which I’m sure will be written on my tombstone.  I had glorious intentions, but life decided to intervene.  Specifically, my ragweed allergies and mild bronchitis made it difficult to do complicated things like sleeping, breathing, and exercising.  So, what did I accomplish?

Writing-wise, I didn’t get the two chapters done that I wanted.  Darwin & the Beast Collector only made it a chapter ahead.  A big part of this was because I only wrote one section a day and ended up junking the 4th section due to it not fitting.  It was another talking one, which didn’t make sense.  I was aiming to do some writing after the ominous life event on Monday, but that left me too emotionally drained.  By the time I got my head together, it was time to pick my son up from school.  The torrential downpour setting off my sinuses didn’t help.  Maybe I’ll have better luck this coming week . . . Which starts with Yom Kippur the Jewish day of fasting.

I couldn’t do any writing during the week due to appointments and my son needing a lot of help with school.  Not just with the work, but rewards for when he finished.  This was typically a Pokemon Go outing, so I was doing a lot of walking.  This is on top of biking 4-5 miles whenever I could.  There was also ‘Meet the Teacher Night’, which I was on the teacher side.  I only had the mental capacity for November blog posts on Tuesday and Wednesday was about errands.  Just so much going on, but I guess I accomplished small things.

Going back to my son with school, he’s doing pretty good.  Grades are high and his anxiety is low.  Clubs start next week, so we’re going to see how things keep up.  It might be a challenge to get all of his work done in time to get cartoons at night, which might end up being an issue.  Those help him relax for bed.  I can’t let him stay up too late, so we’re going to have to adjust.  I refuse to tell him to quit clubs, especially if he’s having fun with them.  Kids need socializing after all.

As I said, Yom Kippur is this week, so I won’t be eating from sundown on Sunday until sundown on Monday.  My plan is to play ‘Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time’ on the Switch, but I need to pay $35 for a special membership.  Trying to decide on how badly I want to play one of my favorite games.  It’s for a yearly and the package comes with other games like Mario 64, Star Fox 64, and Goldeneye.  All of that might be worth the money as long as I don’t let it renew automatically.  It will definitely kept me distracted from the fact that I’m hungry.

Let’s see . . . I took my home sleep apnea test last Friday night.  It wasn’t that hard to set up beyond a picture that didn’t really explain things.  Took me a few tries to get the nose tubes set up.  The issue was that I didn’t feel comfortable sleeping even though it was possible to roll onto my side.  I think I spent the whole night in one position, which was on my back.  I was out for the required 6-7 hours as far as I can tell, so I’ll get to discuss my results eventually.  This was probably another reason I had trouble writing last weekend because I started with a rough night’s sleep.  Then, my breathing issues gave me another tough night, so there was a domino effect.  It took all of my energy to make it through the work day.

This week is going to be wild and crazy, but next weekend doesn’t look that bad.  My son has appointments, but nothing that will cost me more than a single evening.  So, I should be able to write.  Maybe I’ll even get through 2 chapters.  Kind of harping on that, but the loss of my writing stamina is agonizing.  Used to be able to write 3 sections in a day without mentally feeling it.  Now, I do 1-2 sections and my brain is about to drip out of my ears.  Been that way ever since I had Covid last summer, which has me wondering about what’s going on in my skull.  Could I have some kind of brain damage that would cause me to wear down quickly when I push my imagination or brain in general?

Really isn’t anything else going on that I can think of talking about.  Got my niece’s 3rd birthday today, so it’s a celebration.  Tomorrow is the promised day of Pokemon Go since I’ll be out of commission on Monday.  Come to think of it, Septembers are always pretty crazy and Octobers aren’t much better.  It isn’t until November that things begin to settle down a bit.  I should just accept this and not get my hopes up in terms of having writing time and energy.

Goals of the week:

  1. Family time!
  2. Help son with school.
  3. Enjoy another week of job sites with students.
  4. Start watching ‘Castlevania: Nocturne’ when it comes out on the 28th.
  5. Play ‘Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time’ to survive fasting.
  6. Pokemon Go outings.
  7. Write more Darwin & the Beast Collector before next weekend if time and brain permits.
  8. Finish November blog posts and start December posts.
  9. Exercise and eat better.
  10. Sleep better.
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Why Is It Usually Zombies?

Zombieland

I’m probably going to open up the floor pretty quickly because everyone has a fun opinion on this.

Whether you like zombies or not, most people are aware of them.  They’re a staple of survival horror, which can seem rather repetitive.  How many times can you watch a hero run away from a shambling horde?  Well, some people can watch it hundreds or thousands of times.  For the rest of us, we might be left wondering why zombies are so common in survival horror stories.

I actually wondered about this many years ago when I got a critique.  The person was complaining that I had zombies in Windemere.  Apparently, zombies weren’t seen as a fantasy monster, but a horror one.  Makes all those D&D games I fought zombified creatures rather strange.  I guess the person had a point though because zombies tend to be pigeonholed into one genre.  That would be survival horror.  So . . . Why?

  1. The Uncanny Valley–  This is the theory that humans are made uncomfortable and sometimes even scared of anything humanoid.  These are beings that look and act human, but clearly aren’t human.  Usually, this is used in regards to androids, but it works for zombies too.  After all, a zombie is a rotting person, so it has human features and movements.  Yet, it’s clearly not, which makes it unnerving.
  2. Infection–  Similar to werewolves and vampires, zombies usually turn humans with a bite.  The difference is that one doesn’t get any useful powers and gradually becomes a mindless, rotting, groaning corpse.  That means there isn’t even a slight upside to being infected.  It also tends to look rather painful when one turns, so there’s an added fear of an excruciating death.
  3. Cannibalism– If you aren’t turned into a zombie, you’re devoured.  This has to trigger our instincts from when we were hunted by predators in the wild.  The idea of being pounced on, torn apart, and eaten sends chills down many spines.  It’s even more gruesome when you remember that zombies aren’t like animals.  They won’t kill you first and then start munching.  You’re alive when they eat you.  An added horror is the possibility that they leave enough that you become a partially eaten zombie and have to drag yourself along the ground for eternity.
  4. Swarms–  I’ve read a few articles about how humans don’t like swarms.  We can tolerate them if we prepare or get used to them, but there’s a limit.  A beekeeper being around bees while in a protective suit can be calm.  They’re trained, experienced, and protected from being stung.  That typically isn’t the case when zombies are involved.  You have a mob of shambling or sprinting human corpses, who might have been stirred into action by a loud noise.  Even if you get into a safe place, you’re trapped and have to hope they don’t get in and go away before you need supplies.  I guess you can compare them to Hollywood’s version of piranha, which doesn’t makes things better.
  5. Partial Invulnerability–  This isn’t a big one, but it could be a factor.  Most zombie stories require that you damage their brains.  So, shots to the torso won’t do more than push them back a bit.  Arm shots are useless for the most part.  Leg shots can be helpful, but it only means you have crawling zombies.  Those can be forgotten and get you by the ankle if you’re not careful.  So, you can’t really go plowing through zombies unless you have a vehicle, chainsaw, or rocket launcher.  Oh, and flamethrowers sound like a good idea until you consider that you might just have fiery zombies trying to tackle you.

So, those are the reasons I think zombies are big in survival horror.  What do you think?

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Metaphysical Elements in Fiction Writing – Scents

Hello, SE’ers!! It’s Jan again to talk about another aspect of the Metaphysical world: Scents. We often hear advice about incorporating all five …

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Poetry Day: Four Season Moons

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(This one is pretty simple.  It was a short poem about the four moons of Windemere.  They debuted in Legends of Windemere.  I still have to stop and consider the season whenever I write night scenes.  With each one being a different color, I need to make sure the color and visibility is right.)

Bloody Vir brings summer blaze

Before the wind of amber Ult

Who is driven off by Tavon’s ice

Until emerald Canst frees the land

Then Vir reclaims his throne

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7 Tips to Writing Survival Stories

Silent Hill

I might start leaning more towards Survival Horror here.  Still, most of the advice should be able to work for non-horror survival stories.  I was wondering if Swiss Family Robinson would count too.  I mean, things seemed a bit too easy in that movie even when things were getting dicey. That should be a good segue.

  1. A hero who is struggling to survive can’t be overpowered.  They are an underdog and the selling point is the looming threat of death.  If they’re able to defeat every monster or create every comfort they need on a deserted island then there isn’t any tension.  A reader will never fear for the hero’s life and start to feel like they’re dealing with a ‘no stake’ story.  So, they need to be a balance of defenseless/weak and capable.
  2. Obstacles need to be difficult, but not impossible.  Just like in #1, making things too easy eliminates tension.  Authors tend to avoid this, but they’re more likely to create an unwinnable situation.  This comes from a desire to make the victory that much sweeter, which is fine.  Unfortunately, an author can go too far and make an obstacle that the hero shouldn’t be able to survive.  The results are either death/end of story or an unbelievable success that reduces the sense of danger.
  3. Survival heroes need to have some victories.  Even if it’s simply getting out of a situation alive with injuries, they cannot continue losing.  It can reach points of comedy or, at least, have the readers wondering why they don’t change tactics or learn from mistakes.  Survival stories benefit a lot from a rollercoaster series with several ups, downs, and loops.
  4. Turning to those stories that use a villain or monsters, you don’t have to have other targets to show that they’re deadly.  Having them kill other characters is the easiest way to create jump scares and increase tension.  It’s just not the only way and can result in readers seeing their appearance as a sign that someone will die.  Alternatives can be them giving chase to the hero, causing non-lethal injuries, and forcing them to hide until the coast is clear.
  5. Don’t overuse jump scares even in books.  Less is more here.
  6. A key point to surviving is having an idea of what is coming or at least a sense of what needs to be done.  A hero who is running around without a clue or plan is going to die fairly quickly.  That or depend exclusively on luck.  You don’t have to drop huge hints or have every expected scenario happen.  Yet, a hero with a sense of forethought opens the door for more believable victories.
  7. Having a mystery to solve alongside the survival is fairly common, especially in survival horror tales.  At least, the video games do this.  Adding this creates a subplot, which maintains the readers’ interest.  Now, it is no longer just about the hero surviving, but also discovering what caused their situation.  The hero may want to know this information as well.  The only downside here is that it’s fairly easy to get convoluted or create plot holes that make one wonder either how things went wrong or how anyone survived the initial event to be the survivor hero in the first place.
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