War of Nytefall – Ravenous #fantasy #vampires

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The world of the Dawn Fangs is about to explode into chaos thanks to Desirae Duvall.

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

In the shadows of Windemere, fangs are sprouting from the least likely of maws.

News is spreading that wild beasts with vampiric natures have been attacking mortals and carrying off random victims. With the Dawn Fangs still a secret from mortal society, Clyde fears that these strange creatures will reveal…

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The Art of Apology

(With mistakes comes apologies, which will be another big thing in War of Nytefall: Ravenous.)

A single word
That depends on tone
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Sorry
Used in sincerity
To repair the harm
That one has caused
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Sorry
Used like a defense
To avoid blame
And consequences
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Sorry
Used out of fear
To dodge a rage
That hunts for a target
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Sorry
Used without a care
Dripping with sarcasm
That seeps into a wound
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Sorry
Used without thinking
A knee jerk reaction
When attention fades
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Sorry
A chameleon of emotion

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Special ‘War of Nytefall: Ravenous’ Questions 3!

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Now that War of Nytefall: Ravenous has been released, it’s time to promote.  That’s hard to do these days since you need word of mouth.  I’ve been thinking really hard on what I can do since I already made the ‘book is live’ post.  I figure now is the perfect time to do some interaction.  These are questions that relate to some of the themes of the book, which might throw readers off.  After all, isn’t this just a vampire action adventure in a magical world?  Well, I’ve gone into some heavy topics throughout this series and this book is going the deepest.

  1. What are your thoughts on grief?
  2. How far do you go to survive and escape a horrible situation?
  3. What is the scariest thing about addiction?

Yeah.  This isn’t all battles and humor.  I mean, I have those too, but I really dove into the concepts of grief, addiction, and desperation.  Not enough that they consume everything, but one character has an emotionally brutal story arc.  It was really tough to do this and maintain some of the lighter mood.  That’s a plus side about having an ensemble cast.  You can have some that are happy and some that are emotionally crushed.  They fit together because that’s life.  People, even friends and family, aren’t always in the same emotional place and it’s about perceiving how those around us are doing.  Sadly, some characters aren’t very good at that.  Want to know what I mean?

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Announcing the Launch – War of Nytefall Ravenous by Charles E. Yallowitz

The world of the Dawn Fangs is about to explode into chaos thanks to Desirae Duvall. In the shadows of Windemere, fangs are sprouting from the least …

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I Don’t Really Have a Title for This One. Hope People Read Everything Though

I’m just going to start on the first issue that struck me without warning and is going to turn into a warning/rant.  I’m supposed to be publishing War of Nytefall: Ravenous this weekend and I did hit publish Thursday night.  In fact, I’m writing this on Thursday because Friday is going to be a scramble.  Why?  Because I just stumbled onto a really big problem with Amazon.  A few actually:

  • War of Nytefall gets changed to ‘War of Nitefall’ when you search for it.  This is a series that doesn’t exist, so people who search this way don’t find my books.
  • Rivalry and Eradication don’t appear even if you search with the full series and book title.  They’re invisible unless you go to the other books and see them listed as part of the series.
  • Family of the Tri-Rune, Curse of the Dark Wind, The Mercenary Prince, and The Spirit Well  do not show up if I search by their names or ‘Legends of Windemere.  All are seen if you search for one of the other books and look under the series page.
  • Allure of the Gypsies and Tribe of the Snow Tiger only show up if I search by book names and not by series.

That’s 8 books that are scattered about 2 series that DO NOT show up under searches.  I’m worried that War of Nytefall: Ravenous is going to start like this. Worse is that I have no idea how long it’s been like this.  Why did this happen?  How did this happen?  Can it get fixed?  If it doesn’t then what am I going to do?  This is one of the worst things that could happen to an author who just hit publish.  They’re all in the middle of the series too, so it could explain why even ‘Legends of Windemere’ abruptly died a few months ago.  I don’t even know where to go with this post after writing about this.  Pretty sure this is what’s going to get everyone’s attention.  Really hope it’s been fixed by the time this goes live, but I’m keeping it so people may considering searching their own stuff.

(Friday Update–  I heard from Amazon and did some digging.  The disappearing books only happen when searching on Chrome.  By phone or Firefox, they show up.  Thank god because it isn’t like schools supply Chromebooks and there are a ton of people who use that specific browser.  Fuck.  As far as ‘Nytefall vs Nitefall’, I have to keep doing the search and clicking on the tiny ‘Search instead for War of Nytefall’ link that shows up under the ‘Showing results for War of Nitefall’.  Apparently, the system is supposed to get the point eventually.  I’ve been doing it for 10 minutes now and it’s not learning.  I doubt any potential readers are going to go through the hassle and many might not even realize the switch.  I had to email Amazon again and ask if there was anything that they could do on their end.  Feel free to check these things out on your own and let me know in the comments if it works better for you.)

This really makes me wonder if I should bother dropping certain books to 99 cents.  What’s the point if people aren’t seeing them anyway?

I went back to work and helped get things set up.  As usual, I can’t really go into details because of privacy and such.  It’s going to be an interesting year. Not only for me, but my son too.  Things will be getting adjusted as we go along because we have no idea what the future will bring.  Gotta stay fluid, so planning is going to be rather vague.  The only other thing in this arena was that I got 2 days with my son where we had some casual fun.  Went to a park, played frisbee, did more drawing, played board games, and did some video games.  I made sure to have some dramamine before that last one, so I didn’t end up hugging the toilet like last time.  The camera in Lego Harry Potter is brutal.

I didn’t get any book writing done since I had my son and then work.  I did finish the rest of the December blog posts, so I’m set for the rest of the year outside of Tuesdays and weekends starting in November. Might do a poll about Tuesdays.  I’m running out of blog topics as well.  Hard to think straight tonight because of the messes I’ve been having to tackle.

Oh yeah, I witnessed my first ‘Zoom Bombing’.  Not going into details about what the meeting was about, but here is what I’m talking about.  Somebody finds a way to bust into a Zoom call and causes a big enough disruption to end it.  Guess they go running off to the rest of their buddies to gloat and get a congratulatory wank.  This one used swastikas, the n-word, mention of rape, death threats, f-bombs, lots of insults, comment bombing with the n-word, and just going full on berserk.  I’ve heard of this happening and it’s why I don’t really like Zoom.  Seeing it in action is horrifying, especially when you see that some people in the meeting had their kids with them.  Just another reason why I’m not in the best mood when writing this.

Next week is the first official week of school, so that’s where my focus is going to be.  I might do some outlining at night, but writing more of War of Nytefall: Eulogy isn’t going to happen.  Then again, I might have to pause that until I can figure out what to do about the Amazon issue.  I’m just not feeling a lot today and probably won’t for a while because that blow is severe.  We work our asses off to write and publish books.  We try our best to promote within our budget.  Then, we have something like this happen.  How do you combat that?

Goals for the week:

  1. Promote War of Nytefall: Ravenous.  Any help and suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
  2. Work.
  3. Time with son.  Mostly homework.
  4. Outlining at night or maybe set up Sunday posts.  Just do something.
  5. Finish watching ‘Cobra Kai’.  Maybe I did this last night if my mood improved.
  6. Puzzle work, I guess.
  7. Fix the Amazon issue, I hope.
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War of Nytefall: Ravenous Promo Post – by Charles E Yallowitz…

The world of the Dawn Fangs is about to explode into chaos thanks to Desirae Duvall. In the shadows of Windemere, fangs are sprouting from the least …

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Now Available on Amazon! ‘War of Nytefall: Ravenous’! #vampires #fantasy

The world of the Dawn Fangs is about to explode into chaos thanks to Desirae Duvall.

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

In the shadows of Windemere, fangs are sprouting from the least likely of maws.

News is spreading that wild beasts with vampiric natures have been attacking mortals and carrying off random victims.  With the Dawn Fangs still a secret from mortal society, Clyde fears that these strange creatures will reveal his peoples’ existence before they are ready.  Old enemies and trusted friends begin to disappear as the investigation goes deeper into a business that has been lurking in the shadows of Windemere for decades.  Those who return are beholden to a new master whose cunning is matched only by her primal desires.  As his allies disappear, Clyde is left with the one he trusts the most in all of the world to help him solve this mystery.  Too bad Mab has her own secret that can cause more damage to Nytefall than any vampiric beast.

Is this how the Dawn Fangs will be revealed to Windemere?

Still need more to wet your appetite? Then enjoy this excerpt:

Titus shrugs the girl off his shoulders and grips his blades, but refuses to draw them to avoid causing a scene. The warriors around him are on edge from overhearing Lost’s words and seeing his reaction, but they follow his example and keep their weapons sheathed. The Vengeance Hounds know that it is only a matter of time before the mortals with weaker wills lose control and drive the others into panic. They can hear the rumors of a deadly beast stalking the hunting party ripple through the crowd, each telling more gruesome and bone-chilling than the previous version. Several warriors ignore the warnings of their companions and draw their weapons, but keep them out of sight. Two of the casters begin to chant, which is revealed by the sparkle of magic on their lips. One by one, the lines of warriors stop walking and assume various defensive formations. Frustrated by the collapse of her army, the priestess turns around and tries to assure everyone that they are safe. Standing in the middle of the blossoming chaos, the Vengeance Hounds can only watch as the woman loses her temper and shouts at the archers who were supposed to maintain control.

The warriors go silent when a booming roar erupts from above and a large shadow passes over the area. With a gurgling scream, the priestess collapses in a heap and stares unblinking at the sky. The archers move away from the drooling woman, whose breathing has stopped as if she has been instantly turned off. Landing in front of the hunting party, a crimson-scaled Verenstone Dragon unfurls its muscular tails with one to each side and the other arching over its reptilian head. The thick ridge of black hair going down its back rustles and shivers in the breeze, which heats up as the monster bellows once more. Curled against its side are wings composed entirely of blue flame that licks at the trampled grass, but they are not hot enough to ignite the emerald blades. Leaning forward, the terrifying predator sniffs at the braindead priestess and chuckles before swallowing the body whole. In the brief moment that its mouth is open wide, the Vengeance Hounds notice that two of its teeth are changing as if they are stretching out of the gums. The plaque-covered ivory is curved in a way that makes it clear that they are fangs and the beast is in desperate need of a fresh meal. Its eyes scan the mortals and stop on the three Dawn Fangs for a moment, but it is enough to tell them that the cunning creature recognizes their true nature.

“A vampiric dragon,” Titus mutters under his breath.

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Need to catch up? Then, check out Volumes 1-4 of War of Nytefall!

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Interested in more Windemere?  Then don’t forget to check out Charles E. Yallowitz’s first series: Legends of Windemere

All Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

About the Author:

Charles Yallowitz was born and raised on Long Island, NY, but he has spent most of his life wandering his own imagination in a blissful haze. Occasionally, he would return from this world for the necessities such as food, showers, and Saturday morning cartoons. One day he returned from his imagination and decided he would share his stories with the world. After spending many years fiddling with his thoughts and notebooks, he decided that it was time to follow his dream of being a fantasy author. So, locked within the house with only pizza and seltzer to sustain him, Charles brings you tales from the world of Windemere. He looks forward to sharing all of his stories with you and drawing you into a world of magic.

Blog: www.legendsofwindemere.com
Twitter: @cyallowitz
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You’re Only Making Things Worse: Cascading Problems

War of Nytefall: Ravenous isn’t the first time I’ve had a character make bad choice after bad choice.  In fact, I enjoy having my heroes and villains think they are doing the right thing and it ends up being a disaster.  Luke Callindor was practically the king of wrong moves in Legends of Windemere.  This time, we have a few characters who make a big decision that blows up in their face.  There are two ways that this can be handled by them:

  • Taking a step back and thinking of a way to undo the damage.  This is the response that we all imagine we possess under pressure.  It is what we expect all of our characters to do as well if they ever make a wrong choice.  Step on the wrong?  Well, you just have to go backwards and we’re all good.  Yeah . . . Just that simple.
  • The character panics and tries to make a quick fix, but this results in making things worse.  They react again to repair one part of the damage, but it ends up making a mess in another area.  Repeat because your head is spinning.  You take a step back and try to think of a plan, but you don’t have the time and resources to make a clean fix.  Just do what you can and soak up whatever damage you can’t erase.  With any luck, you’ll walk about with all of your parts intact and able to rest for a minute.

Would you be surprised to know that the second option is the more realistic one?  We all admire those who can make a mistake and fix it quickly, but we probably know more people who create an avalanche of wrong turns.  They get out of it eventually, but there’s a period of arm flailing and panic.  A reason for this is that we get tunnel vision when an unexpected problem arises.  Our instinct is to handle the immediate threat and we don’t always remember to think ahead.  It’s like being focused on cleaning a floor and then finding yourself trapped in a corner until things dry.  You were so focused on the task at hand that you failed to notice the disaster looming.

In fiction, we tend to expect better from our characters.  Even those who want flaws in their heroes may get frustrated when they see mistakes being made.  That’s because a reader is sitting back and knows more about the situation than the character.  They are also able to keep a clear mind since they aren’t in the thick of it.  You ever yell at characters in a horror movie for going into the scary basement to check things out?  It’s because you know you’re watching a horror movie and aren’t in danger.  The characters aren’t stupid, but unaware of their situation or too scared to think clearly.  Besides, how many of us have had a power outage at night and gone into the basement or wherever to check the circuit breakers?  How do you know there isn’t a monster or serial killer waiting for you to do just that?  (I am so sorry if anybody is now scared to go into their basement.  I recommend running down there shrieking like a banshee and swinging a rolling pin around.  Be crazier than the things that want to eat you.)

Personally, I think it is very believable for a character to make so many mistakes and still come out victorious.  If anything, this gives us hope that we can get out of any hole that we find ourselves in.  Sure, we might have bumps, bruises, scars, and that knee won’t ever bend the right way again.  Yet, we still reach our goal and, hopefully, we learn from our mistakes.  That’s what we try to teach our children, but I’ve met many adults that forget this and are terrified of the slightest misstep.  That fear can be paralyzing and lead to the domino effect of mistakes, which is what we really should see characters do.  At some point, they will have to put a hand out and stop a domino from hitting its neighbor to begin moving forward again.  In many ways, that is life and shows us that we are always learning.

Getting back to War of Nytefall: Ravenousthis cascading avalanche of disaster happens a few times.  I was tempted to remove or minimize it, but the story really works as you watch the characters in question make one wrong move after another.  The one that thinks they’re in control and gets more desperate as events continue forward was my favorite to write.  They are constantly swearing that they are in control while stuff falls apart around them and they have to implement a new plan.  I had several points where I wanted to have them just stop the disaster and move on, but that never felt natural given the emotions and mindsets involved.  Again, that’s reality.  People get stuck in self-destructive spirals all the time.  Now, do the characters ever realize that they are the cause of their own headaches?  Well, you’ll have to read to find that out.

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Immortal Wars: The Summoning Part 34 #fiction #throwback

(Previously on Immortal Wars.)

(Again, we shall revel in my teenage originality.  Everyone groan in unison.)

Disclaimer: Immortal Wars was the book I came up with and wrote in high school.  I hadn’t even hit college by the time I wrote the first two books.  That means I hadn’t developed my style yet, wasn’t good at self-editing, and the story was fairly basic. So, you’ve been warned that this is the ultimate author throwback segment for my blog and will show my author origins.  FYI-  I put the first book (The Summoning) through a Print-on-Demand publisher and the second one (Light, Blood, & Tears) never saw the light of day.  Enjoy!

Outside is a naturally formed arena that has Adriana’s dragon throne positioned in front of it.  Pointy rocks that form a distorted circle, which is about twenty feet across in every direction, make up the outskirts of the arena.  The inside is a flat area with a few obvious dips in the ground here and there.  Kilanus is already sitting cross-legged in the middle of the arena with her eyes closed.  The only people missing when Adriana arrives is Tegam and Draveon.

“Should have known that someone would be late.  Where’s Tegam and Draveon?” she asks when she sits down.

“Draveon wanted to finish something up first.  He said that he’ll arrive as soon as he can.  And as you can hear, I’m right next to you.  Nobody beside you and Startrix know that I am hiding here and let’s keep it that way,” whispers Tegam, who is invisible near her throne somewhere.

“Let’s start this!” exclaims Psylon.  She starts walking towards Kilanus until Startrix gets in her way.  A sizzling arrow is aimed at Psylon’s throat and the silver longbow glows in the armored immortal’s hands.

“Hold on.  Let’s go over the rules.  This is to either submission or knockout.  There is no killing to be committed in this event.  Unless it is done by my daughter considering she’s the only one that can bring you back.  All of you cannot use the guardian weapons, so you must use all physical and supernatural abilities that you were born with.  The order is Psylon, Hellax, Cybro, Mindtrigger, and Draveon.  That is if the oversized muscle shows up.  Begin.”

“Finally.  I owe you, pipsqueak,” growls Psylon.  She runs at the stationary Kilanus, who is still sitting with her eyes closed.  Psylon grins as she hurls a fireball at the girl.  There is a small explosion and when the smoke clears there is nothing but a burn mark.

“Oops.”  Psylon starts laughing until she notices everyone looking up.  When she looks up, she sees a black boot smash down on her face.  Kilanus nimbly lands on her feet and runs at the redhead.  Another fireball shoots past her as she slides under it and sweeps Psylon’s legs out from underneath her.

“Here’s a new word for you, Psylon.  Aim,” whispers Kilanus.  She picks the other woman up by her neck and tosses her across the arena.  Psylon lands headfirst against the armored back of a large, black-scaled lizard.  It just snorts before looking down at the groaning form next to it.  The massive creature just continues walking off while Psylon stays down cursing at nothing in particular.

“Next victim.”  Kilanus points at Hellax and beckons him with her finger.  The armored man walks toward her.  He throws a punch at her and she simply sidesteps it.  She kicks him in the gut, which sends him flipping into the air.

Hellax lands on his head while he says, “What do I do now?”

“Just leave.  I don’t want you to waste my time.”  The blond effortlessly punts the gold-armored warrior up into the unfinished tower.  As soon as he’s gone, Cybro begins shooting at her.  One of the lasers passes through Kilanus’ left shoulder before she has time to start dodging the rapid shots.  Cybro manages to keep her far away and get some shots in before he runs out of ammunition.  The lasers make a sad sparking noise whenever he tries to use them.

“Ouch.  That hurt.  At least you were a little more of a challenge,” announces Kilanus.  She flings herself into Cybro and knocks him onto his back.  She grabs his head for a knee strike, but the thing comes off in her hands.

“Does this count as a win for me?”  The rest of the body suddenly punches her in the face and reattaches the head.

“Do not act so confident.  There is always someone better.  Now fight,” says the angry cyborg.  He hits Kilanus with a taser prong in his foot and starts electrocuting her with a flurry of kicks.  Surprisingly, she keeps walking towards him and manages to get her hands on him.  His circuits are fried from the high voltage going through her and the electricity also sets off his jet boosters.  The robot goes flying off into a nearby boulder and is forced to try and pull himself back together.

“That’s it.  I’m not going through with this.  She’s already proven herself, Adriana.  Besides, I’m a scientist and not a savage warrior like the others.  I say that we end it!” shouts Mindtrigger.

“I agree.  Good job, Kilanus.  I’m sorry it wasn’t as much a challenge as you had hoped for, but the others want to concentrate of the battle with the guardians.  Let’s go celebrate in the dining hall,” says Adriana as she gets up from the throne.  Mindtrigger walks off and Kilanus is about to leave the arena when Draveon arrives.

“It seems far too early to celebrate your daughter’s success.  Besides, there is still a challenge that the young warrior has to defeat.  And that’s me,” he says.  Without any warning, he shoulder rushes Kilanus.  She manages to cushion the impact with her forearms and cautiously lands on all fours.  Draveon tries to smash her down into the ground with an elbow drop, but she rolls out of the way with lightning speed.

“The rules said not to kill anyone!  So stop trying to kill me!” yells Kilanus as she jumps over another charge.  She turns around and kicks Draveon in the back a few times before he turns around.  When he does, she jumps up and wraps her legs around his head.  They grip his skull like flexible steel as he stumbles blindly around.  She throws herself backwards and slams him into the ground as hard as she can.

“Battle is death.  There is no avoiding it.  This is to show you what combat really is.  So this means you could die.  Sorry.  But that’s how our world works, little one.  You are no longer a child for me to protect.  You are a warrior that is either fighting by my side or lying dead on the battlefield.”  The muscular man grabs her by the leg and starts pounding her into the ground like she was a sledgehammer.

“Bite me, big boy.”  Kilanus kicks herself free and let’s loose with an extremely loud roar, which sounds like a combination of a dinosaur and a lion.  She charges at him and dodges all of his slow punches.

In between growls of anger, Kilanus starts shouting; “There is only one reason you can’t beat me, Draveon.  And that’s because I’m faster.  You can’t hit what you can’t catch, loser.  So this is over.”  She starts punching and kicking Draveon all over the place and she makes every one of her moves melt into the next like liquid.  One move ends just as another begins so that she never has to stop.

“That’s all that you’ve got, Kilanus.  I’m disappointed.”  Suddenly Draveon feels himself get lighter as Kilanus lifts him above her head.  She takes a running start toward the unfinished tower and manages to leap up the side of the infrastructure with Draveon in her hands.  She has his arms pinned to his sides and keeps spinning him so that he can’t get his bearings.

“Give me one reason that I shouldn’t destroy you right now,” whispers the blond immortal.  Draveon spits on her head before she launches herself into the air.  On the way down, she flips Draveon underneath her, so he takes most of the deadly impact.  They land in the middle of the arena, but they go straight through the surface of the planet for about twenty-seven feet.  A minute later, Kilanus drags herself out while carrying the bloody body of Draveon.

“Kilanus?  Are you ok?” asks Adriana as she runs over to her daughter.

“Yeah, mom.  I’m fine.  Draveon’s kind of dead right now.  Sorry about that.  But the bastard deserved it.  Can we go eat now?  I’m hungry,” replies Kilanus.  She strides off toward the warship with a slight limp and is obviously nursing a broken arm.

“Kilanus!  Bring him back!”

The teenager turns around and simply states, “I will.  When I’m ready and after I’ve eaten.  As long a decade has not passed since he died, I can bring him back.  Now, I want food.”  With that she just walks away to heal and get some food.

“What are you thinking, Adriana?” inquires Startrix as the two women look down at Draveon’s body.  His limbs are mangled and a look of closed-eyed shock is on his face.

“I can’t believe I gave birth to something with so much power.  I’m so glad that she’s on our side.  Or else we’d probably be dead before we knew it.”

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Fading into the Background: Characters and Spotlights

This is a big challenge when it comes to ensemble cast stories.  Yes, there are those that take the reins of the story and others that float into supporting cast.  Yet, each player is important to the overall story.  Unfortunately, you can’t have them be in the spotlight for every volume.  That could result in 20 plots competing for attention if everyone has their own journey.  At best, you can put them into groups of 2 and 3 to give them more time in scenes, but that’s not perfect.  War of Nytefall: Ravenous ran into this problem and the next volume has it as well.  Is this really a bad thing?

For those who love the characters that take a step back, it will be a disaster.  Their favorites aren’t getting the attention they deserve.  Doesn’t matter that they already had at least one volume where they got to shine.  Anger might be aimed at the characters that maintain their status because they have claimed the ‘main’ cast moniker.  You hope this isn’t the case, but people are funny and unpredictable.  Some can turn on a series if you don’t cater to their whims, which you can’t avoid.  There’s a reason characters are rotating in and out of the spotlight over the course of a series.  It helps to keep things fresh and opens for more stories. People don’t always realize that characters may have a specialty instead of being a Jack-of-all-Trades.  This means that there are adventures when they aren’t going to be as useful.

Aside from keeping a series fresh and moving, you get another big benefit.  These characters that are stepping out of their limited roles can be flushed out and gain their own fan-bases.  My goal is always to create a variety of characters, so that readers can connect to at least one of them.  There’s no rule that you can’t have multiple favorites or switch to a new one.  Kai Stavros was a minor character to me until Eradication and now he has a really interesting story arch that will go on for a bit.  Decker is getting some attention in Ravenous and I’m enjoying doing that.  From the hero side, Titus and Bob get to shine a bit more.  They’ve really been in the shadow of Lost, Mab, and Clyde for much of the series.  It’s a more difficult balancing act than with Legends of Windemere because I have a bigger cast and no ‘destiny’ storyline.

I’m laying the groundwork for bigger jumps in this volume because I need a lot of heavy hitters for the finale.  That is the ultimate goal for an ensemble series.  By the end, you want every character to have changed in some respect.  If they were around for everything and remain the same then you missed an opportunity.  That or they’re really a statue and you never realized another character was lugging the thing around.  By the end of even a small series, you need your heroes and villains to be at the final stages of their journey.  If you had to phase them in and out of importance throughout the volumes then that shows you gave them the proper amount of attention.  As an author, we do need to focus on only a handful of plots or we end up with a muddled mess.  At best, we get a book that is thousands of pages long in order to cover everyone from the protagonist to the antagonist to the janitor who cleans up after the battle in chapter 4.  Poor guy wasn’t even supposed to be at work that day.

My point here is that you have to pick and choose when and where to progress with a character.  It’s a challenge because we have our own favorites.  It’s hard to push Lost into the background because I enjoy writing her, but Desirae sure as hell wasn’t going to let that loose cannon run around for long.  I guess you can make your choices depending on the actions of the villain too.  Who would they target or who would be the best choices to get in their way?  It depends on the story.  This is a personal balancing act that I could continue writing about for hours.  Yet, in the end, it comes down to what the author wants and the story needs.

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