What Do You Want in Female Characters?

One of the big things about Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower is the introduction of Nyx and Trinity.  They are the female spellcasters for both sides of the conflict and I think they’re badasses.  Very powerful and very tough while still retaining their femininity.  I’m proud of how they turned out because they are the types of female characters that I love to read.  I will mention that I read mostly fantasy and action, so this is going to be a light combat-skewed.

I picked the Mr. & Mrs. Smith clip because it is one of my favorite fight scenes.  Not because of the banter and the flow of it.  Those are good, but I love how there is not a single point where Angelina Jolie’s character felt weak or overpowered.  This was done without making Brad Pitt’s character come off as weak.  They are even in terms of skill, physicality, and determination.  She gives as good as she gets and the movie wasn’t afraid to she her taking a shot.  I think female heroes shouldn’t be treated with kid gloves and should be shown taking a hit.  More importantly, taking a hit and fighting back.  I’m not talking about taking a hit, crying, and then doing a cheap shot.  That makes a female character cunning, but rather weak.

Xena: Warrior Princess

Focusing on the giving part of the equation, I love it when a female character can take out a male character without converting to a masculine version of herself.  Speed, agility, skill, and grace over power and brawn.  Even better if both characters are cunning because that makes either of their victory a lot sweeter.  It’s strange how people still do the weak female character or turn them into a tough, heartless bitch that will inevitably be thawed by the male lead.  I think I threw up a bit on that one.  Give me my Xena’s, Fiona from Burn Notice, and Buffy.  Still moments of sensitivity, but they will happily beat the crap out of someone that crosses them.

The third factor of a female character that makes me enjoy her is the retention of her female mentality while still being a badass.  I’m not talking beating people up while breast-feeding, which is a scene written by someone in college that I shall never cleanse from my mind.  I mean the character can be emotional in a tender, gentle way when the situation calls for it.  She doesn’t get confused when a guy hugs her after she’s killed a band of orcs.  She hugs him back and makes a joke about getting blood on him.  I say this should go for male characters too if you’re aiming for the sensitive hero.  Sensitivity does not equal weak, which is an assumption that has to stop.

Finally, I love my female villains to be smart, but still able to fail and not whores.  I’ve noticed a trend with many female villains that they are one of two types.  They are either the seductive ho villain or they are so smart and perfect that you can’t believe they’re going to be defeated.  It’s like the writers are either misogynistic (that right?) or are terrified to make a female villain that is as bungling as some of the male villains.  I’m looking at you Gargamel and Skeletor.  I want my female villains to be as realistic as my male villains with the same amount of smarts, evil, confidence, and touch of ineptitude.  That might sound strange, but it makes me enjoy the character even more.

Heck, I like it when my female heroes have the same level of ineptitude of a male hero.

Mother of true female heroes?

That’s why Nyx is about as flawed as Luke Callindor in terms of personality.  She might not have his ego and recklessness, but she has that nasty temper.

So, I like my female characters to be smart, flawed, able to take a hit, and able to go toe-to-toe with the male characters.  What do you look for in female characters?

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Feast of the Scavengers

They smell it
A time of weakness
When I am not me
Distracted and hurt
The stress
Has taken its toll
I am weak

I give them an opening
An accident of thought
They strike
Decimating confidence
Making my life shit
As if that is how it is
I’m meant for nothing more

Flesh torn to the bone
Reminding me of the past
When I was the creature
Cowering and crying
His path beyond his grasp
A worm to be pitied
And kept under thumbs

The scavengers hate me
I no longer fit their mold
I have stepped onto my path
Working against time
Popping pills to keep me sane
Ending life a broken shell
That knows not how to live

Trapped within their walls
I need to find escape
Weighed down by mistakes
Some my own and not
Seeing the world I forged
Threatened by the ones I see
Every time I wake

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City Poem: Gaia

The western Sister
Largest of her siblings
Bustling with every race
From orc to elf to calico
Each living side by side
As griffins guard the sky

Sun glints off the tower
Built by rainbow stones
Cascading on a marketplace
Bigger than most towns
Estates and simple homes
Scattered about the landscape

Gaia is a gem of law
Where Grand Counselors rule
Keeping thieves at bay
And helping all live strong
Yet there is always struggle
In a metropolis so vast

The city still has brothels
And bars along the docks
Thieves still claim the shadows
Against the mighty guard
A paradise it may not be
But the city is always true

Gaia has its mysteries
The southern mountain out of place
Home to griffins and their guards
Arena ancient and defiant
Here before the city born
Do they hold secrets from the past?

So visit here and see what is
Step behind the wall
Of thickest stone
See the sights and people
And hear the common phrase:
All heroes pass through Gaia

Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower Coming July 31st!!!!

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Pointy End Goes Into The Other Man

Many people believe it is that easy when it comes to swordsmanship.  You can see it in writing where characters are stabbing others with amazing precision and no resistance.  As if blocking and dodging are illegal.  There are many moves with all weapons and you should know the basics when you use them.  I’m not talking about being able to physically do them, but visualize them.  A fight scene needs to be thought out if you want it deep, extended, and interesting.  If you don’t want that then here is what you do:

“Hero stabs villain and goes to bang the damsel out of her dress.”

So, what should you do to improve your medieval weapon knowledge?  Research.  These are weapons that have been around for centuries and the most complicated weapon you might find are crossbows and siege weapons.  Even those have enough information out there for a 7th grade boy to make a basic crossbow for his Technology Education class.  I don’t recommend fiddling with it in math class and accidentally having it pointed at the teacher.

Your research tools are:

  1. Pictures to study the shape and form of the weapon.  For example, some swords are better at slashing than stabbing.  Lances can stab, but have no edges.  The length of a chain on a mourning star.  These are important facts that you should know before arming your hero.
  2. Books to tell you about the weapon’s limitations and strengths.  What is the range of a recurve bow?  How do you reload a crossbow?  How do swordsmen draw their weapons from their sheathes?  Is a rapier able to parry a saber?  Just read up on your weapons of choice, especially for main characters.
  3. Videos of weapon practice and sparring while give you an idea of how the weapon is used by the warrior.  You will see the range of the swing and how the weight of the weapon effects a person’s movement.  Don’t watch one video.  Try to find people of various skills and body types using the same weapon.
  4. If you have the opportunity to learn then take it.  Free fencing lessons at a local community building or cheap archery lessons could be used.  Hands on use will teach you so much more than only studying.  This isn’t an option for everyone, which is why #5 makes a decent substitute.
  5. Goofing off by pretending to act out your own fight scenes.  Laugh if you want, but slowly moving your arms through the moves will help you see the exchange.  I do this all the time.  Luke Callindor uses two sabers, so I have to see how a block spinning into a slash works with every enemy.  Most times, I figure it out easily while other times, Luke crashes into a shield.  You will look silly doing this, but it’s worth it to make a detailed fight scene.

All of those tools are important and you must also remember that combat is not just offense.  There is defense to be considered.  Parrying (blocking) and dodging are very important because it is the only way a character stays alive.  Otherwise, your fights scenes always boil down to first strike kills or a embarrassing series of misses until somebody connects.  Use the combination of offense and defense to make the fight more interesting.  Have a parry followed by a strike that is dodged and then another attack that is parried before a kick to the chin send the combatant to the ground.

Let’s talk a bit about character type and weapon.  Unless you’re going for physical enhancement, the body type of a character decides the weapon and fighting style.  If I gave Nimby the halfling thief a battle-axe, he wouldn’t be able to use his agility and stealth.  This goes for armors too.  Stealthy characters should not have heavy, loud armor.  A good rule is to think of the fighting style first.  If your character is a speed fighter then you need light, quick weapons.  If they’re strength then you can go heavy and bashing.  A defensive character would need a shield and could use heavier armor.  A fully offensive character would need lighter armor and lightweight weapons.

A final note on combat scenes: Even if you’re not putting the move into the writing, think of it.  Part of the combat might remain in your head, but you need it to pull the other parts together.  These are the areas where you see ‘a series of parries and strikes’ or ‘he dodged every move’.  Try to think of the actions and movements of the characters during this times.  It allows you to get the location of them in the setting, their level of fatigue, and their mentality after being on the losing side for a bit.

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And Finally the Sun has Dawned over the Horizon (otherwise known as the official release of my novel)

Dawning by Olivia Stocum is now available on Amazon. Buy it and enjoy!

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Pageflex Persona [document: PRS0000026_00024]I’ve never liked beating my own drum, but as writers we have no choice. So I will make my own drum roll here as I announce that Dawning (which many of you have heard SOOOOOO much about that you’re either waiting in eager anticipation, or you’re ready to smack me up-side the head) has now gone live.

http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00DYSM6DO

Scotland, 1599 . . .  He abandoned her. She had failed to be enough for him. The empty space he left behind hollowed out her heart, and she wondered what to do with the rest of her life.

When Ronan leaves the clan to seek his fortune, Triona MacAlastair fears she will never see him again. Four years later, a threat against her life forces her to depend on a mysterious, cloaked rogue known as Blackhawk.

She knows he is capable of protecting her, but what is he hiding? Why does he…

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Unwhole

Something isn’t right
I knew it from the start
Maybe a taste upon the breeze
That something was amiss
My mind wanders off
Seeking an answer
To a question from my dreams
That left me long ago
All I know is I don’t feel right
A bleeding in my chest
Of blood that cannot be seen
As if something was torn out
While I slept and dreamed
Leaving me unwhole

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Destroyer of His World

Fire in his wake
As his tears fall
Burning the world
To its molten core
With every care he razes
Shredding the world around him
Despising the screams
From the bodies in his wake
The ones he loves
And hated
None were saved from his blind wrath
A roiling force of nature
That will only fade away
When the monster is alone
Standing cold and crying
Upon his shattered world

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Herbs and Spices

Tired of pepper and salt
I peruse the book
Dreaming of oregano
Maybe a little thyme
Cilantro ribbons
Hidden in the salad
Aside a breast of beast
Flavored with paprika
A stew of cumin
And its brother coriander
Maybe a dash of cinammon
Fresh bay leaves
Begging to be crush
Merged with garlic
And his wife ginger
The spice rack
Is my chemistry set
Let us see what I may find

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Character Poem: The Lich

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Eyes of red and malice
Brimming with lust
For power beyond his reach
Embedded in a skull
Of tattered flesh and bone
Lurking in the bowels
Of a swamp of death
He plots his evil path
Knowing heroes are in his way
And they will be crushed
Beneath his skinless heel

Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower Coming July 31st!!!!

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Catalysts & The Pen Name

With the release of Prodigy of Rainbow Tower looming, my mind is wandering to the next stage.  Aiming for a Halloween release of Allure of the Gypsies, which is doable.  Yet, there are two projects that I don’t have any debut date or idea for.  These are the two completed novellas.

One is Catalysts and it is a gory horror novella that used to be on this site.  I took it down when I thought I was about to publish and go KDP Select.  The other is The Pen Name and it is a drama.  These are two genres that I don’t typically play in, so I’m nervous about them.  Catalysts got good reactions, but nobody noticed The Pen Name.

I’m wondering what I should do wit them.  I need beta readers to read them over and I need cover art, but I can’t afford the cover art.  I have cover art in the works for Catalysts, but not The Pen Name. So, these projects are stalled until I find a way around that issue.  When would I debut them anyway?  With Allure of the Gypsies taking Halloween, Catalysts has no clear thing.  Unless I release both around Christmas, but I can’t package a horror and drama in the same thing.

I guess what I’m saying is:  Does anybody want to read two novellas or have an idea of what to do about cover art for free/cheap?

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