Guest Post: Charles Yallowitz on Sequel Writing

My guest blog on ‘Tips to Sequel Writing’ on Michelle Proulx’s blog. Check it out and take a look around her blog while you’re there.

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Tips on Writing a Sequel

First, a big thank you to Michelle Proulx for letting me write a guest blog in honor of the July 31st debut of my second book, Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower.  I think that covers the shameless self-promotion part of the program.  Wait.  Feel free to buy and readLegends of Windemere: Beginning of a Hero, so you’re ready for the sequel.  There.  That should do it.

So, you want to write a sequel.  It’s a common malady for fiction authors.  You love your characters and you have subplots that need more time to run their course.  You have a new villain that you want to use. That infomercial at 3AM gave you the best idea for another story with the same characters.  There’s also the chance that you had a series planned all along and this is the natural progression…

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Ask a Character: Trinity

In honor of Prodigy of Rainbow Tower debuting at the end of the month, I’m opening the floor to one of the new characters.  I already did an interview for Nyx, so we’re going to get to know her sinister rival this time.  As an added bonus, the best questions are going to be put into a post on Sarah M. Cradit’s blog later this month.

Trinity is the Queen of the Chaos Elves, who used to mischievous troublemakers until they abruptly became assassins.  She is a very powerful spellcaster with enough magic to rival Nyx.  Her power is increased by the three enhancer games, one in her forehead and one in each palm.  Unlike Nyx, Trinity doesn’t have a favorite spell category, so she is very versatile and unpredictable.  She loves puzzles and challenges, which can get her into trouble and make her disobey orders.

So, ask away and see who is ready to heckle our guest.

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Sort of Helping? Told of Typos

I woke up (begrudgingly) to an interesting e-mail from Amazon.  Somebody reported that there were typos in Beginning of a Hero, so I was being notified about this.  This struck me as a great idea, especially when I saw a typo listed and I was directed to where it was.  This would be such a helpful tool for self-published writers.

Unfortunately, it was only one example and a message that basically said ‘you have typos in your 312 page book, so you must read through it again’.  Look here, perfectionists.  I’ve been writing and editing this book since 1999.  There are going to be some typos that even my years of beta readers won’t catch.  It’s inevitable even with professionally edited manuscripts.  Things slip through the cracks.  In this example it was ‘he was in dagger’ instead of ‘he was in danger’.  The line was in the middle of a long paragraph that I must have read at least 10 times in my life.

This isn’t saying this is a bad idea, but I think this goes under a ‘no kidding’ category.  Maybe list a few more examples or make that spell checking during the upload process actually useful.  What is that thing checking?  I’ve had words misspelled and it doesn’t catch them.  Hell, I did it on purpose once to see what would happen and nothing.  At the very least, some of the creatures and names in my world should be pinged.

The new version of Beginning of a Hero is being uploaded with the one line fixed.  Thank you to whoever pointed this out.  Maybe this is the start of a new system by Amazon, but I don’t see many readers wanting to play the role of proofreader.  Still, an interesting system that they could make.

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Why You Shouldn’t Leave the Bed While Tired

I hate waking up.  It’s the worst way to start the day.  Yes, I know one has to wake up to start the day.  Not waking up is a clear sign that something is medically wrong.  Still, bad things happen within that first hour or two of consciousness.  If you’re not ready then you’re in for embarrassment.  Here’s some lessons:

  1. Shaving with toothpaste does not work.
  2. Brushing teeth with shaving cream does not work.
  3. Pants go on the bottom and shirt goes on the top.  Do not leave the room until you confirm this system.
  4. Do not make your toddler breakfast and then eat that breakfast in front of him.
  5. Remember to cook your breakfast if it needs it.
  6. Unwrapping Poptarts improves the taste.
  7. Open the door to the bedroom before walking through.  Trust me.  It helps.
  8. Wearing your clothes into the shower does not count as laundry.
  9. Wearing glasses in the shower does not help your eyesight.
  10. Thinking about breakfast while in the shower can possibly lead to the accidental drinking of shampoo.
  11. When taking toddler to the bus, make sure you have shirt and shoes.  It is respectful and no child should see your beer gut.
  12. Do not attempt morning biking when your eyes are still closed.
  13. If you need to change your toddler’s diaper, do not forget to put fresh diaper on before walking away.
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July 31st Blog Blitz

So, I was thinking of a big on-line effort on the morning of July 31st when Prodigy of Rainbow Tower debuts.  This would involve many bloggers posting the cover art, description, Amazon site, Goodreads site, and the site for Beginning of a Hero.  I would e-mail all the necessary information to anyone that wants to participate.

I’m waiting on the cover art with title and author name, so it won’t be immediately.  Anybody want in on this?

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3 Ways to Get a Free Copy of The Storm and the Darkness

Enter three contests for chances to win a free copy of The Storm and The Darkness by Sarah M. Cradit

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Have you picked up your copy of The Storm and the Darkness yet? If not, consider a free copy, via one of these options. Click the appropriate links below.

Goodreads Giveaway: Enter to win a signed paperback. Ends August 6th.

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Championship for the Ages Round 3!

Round 3 of Championship for the Ages! Charles Yallowitz vs. Cookie Monstah! Vote for your favorite of these two fantastic poems.

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Character Poem: Fritz Warrenberg

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This old gnome
Full of life and knowledge
Builder of the future
With a brain that never sleeps
Distracted by a female form
No matter size and shape
Fritz is a lover of all things
Be it women or inventions
A lustful leer is on his face
Hiding a brilliant mind
Enjoy your time with this greasy gnome
For he travels on the road
To stand beside his friends
With the loyalty of a warrior true

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Craft

Very true poem about the art of writing.

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Sneak Peek: Proving Themselves

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“What if we could prove that we aren’t useless?” Luke suggests, clearing his throat and standing at attention. “I’m a graduate of Hamilton Military Academy and this woman is an apprentice of Rainbow Tower. Surely these credentials should allow us to join your hunt.”

“Don’t overact,” Nyx mutters under her breath.

“Sorry,” Luke hisses.

Lord Highrider smiles and nods at the bickering half-elves. “The Hamilton Military Academy is a fine institution, but I do not believe I have heard of the other location. From the look of your ally, I can see that she has a warrior’s spirit. It’s a fire in her eyes that many men lack. I wish the looks in her eyes and your credentials were enough to put my mind at ease. Unless you can prove your experience, I must refuse to take you along.”

“Then, I challenge you to a fight,” Luke snaps before he lets the thought fully form in his mind.

“Such action could result in both of us being injured,” the knight states as he turns to leave. “Your mouth betrays your youth and recklessness.”

“Wait. What about this?” asks the forest tracker. He undoes his shirt as quickly as he can to reveal his bright scar. Lord Highrider raises an eyebrow of interest at the obvious battle wound.

“Stripping in public is your last defense?” Nyx groans in embarrassment.

“That looks like a mark left by a magical blade. Did you get into a bar fight with someone?” the half-orc jokingly asks.

“I wish. It’s a present from a Hellfire Elf wielding a Chaoswind blade,” Luke says, buttoning his shirt back up. This news catches the attention of a few other warriors who stop talking in order to listen.

Lord Highrider nods his approval before admitting, “I can believe the part about the magic sword, but not your claim about a demon. I would request that you prove it if such a thing could be proven.”

Luke silently reaches into a side pocket on his pack to pull out the shoulder spike of the Hellfire Elf and holds it a few inches from Lord Highrider’s eyes. A sickly white hue covers the knight’s face as he examines the spike. He pushes it back to Luke without another word and breathes a sigh of relief when it is pocketed. A blind wave of his hand sends the loitering warriors ahead while Lord Highrider eyes Luke and Nyx thoughtfully.

“Can we come along now?” Luke asks with a grin.

“I believe you,” Lord Highrider replies, his face still slightly pale. “I must ask your names, so that I can put them on the official record.”

“I am called Nyx,” she says, giving a stiff bow.

“My name is Luke Callindor, son of Ilan Callindor and the grandson of Talos ‘Doubleblade’ Callindor,” he announces with pride.

“I see. It seems that I have a hero in the making on my hands. May I ask what brings you to this town?” Lord Highrider asks, immediately putting up a hand to stop Luke from answering. “I apologize and retract my question. It isn’t my business and it’s rude to ask. I will put you in one of the flanking groups. I see that your friend is a crossbow fighter, so she can stay in the back with our archers. No offense to your possible talent with that mourning star, but I feel that a solid range attack is essential in these kinds of fights.”

“Wait a second!” explodes Nyx, whose patience finally breaks. “Why does he have to prove himself and I get brought along as an archer? Am I not worthy of a test? Who said I was a warrior in the first place?”

“I meant no offense,” the half-orc swears, a hint of confusion in his voice. “I merely assumed that being with someone like him meant you were also a capable warrior. I promise that it won’t happen again, milady.”

“You’re damn right it won’t happen again,” Nyx snaps. Lord Highrider glares at her before she hops onto the sign-in table and looks him in the eye.

“Your boyfriend must have a god’s patience when dealing with you,” the half-orc quips with a friendly smile.

“He is not, and never will be, my boyfriend,” Nyx proudly declares, ignoring the mortified look on Luke’s face. “He is my adventuring partner. Now, follow me and I will show you just what you have on your hands.”

“Let’s just go and you can prove yourself during the battle, Nyx,” Luke quietly begs her. The furious look from Nyx makes him stop talking immediately.

Nyx cracks her neck and storms off toward the front gate. Lord Highrider and Luke follow her to the front of the gathered army of warriors. People are whispering to each other and pointing as Nyx stands at the front of the army, her arms across her chest. A few knights try to move ahead of her and she starts to motion for them to move away. They ignore her until she angrily curses at them and points to the army behind her. Lord Highrider gives them a signal to obey her before they willingly move away.

“You better have a good reason for being so disrespectful to the knights and warriors who will be protecting you,” Lord Highrider says sternly.

Luke nervously looks at the crowd of irritated warriors. “Can’t you just tell him, Nyx?”

“This way is more fun,” Nyx mentions with a glimmer of joy in her eyes. “You said something about trolls, Lord Highrider.”

The knight clears his throat, determined to regain control of the situation. “Our scouts reported that the camp is of some newly arrived orc bandits. There are signs that they have recruited trolls. It will be a challenge for us to defeat them due to their regenerative and chameleon abilities. Destroying the heart is the best hope we have since none of us have magical weapons and the city paladins are busy with an undead threat to the east.”

“With all due respect, your plan for the trolls is flawed. First of all, a troll’s ribcage is thicker and tougher than platemail. Getting to the heart would require that you immobilize the creature and risk breaking your normal weapons to get through the bone. With their regeneration, this feat would be impossible before all other enemies are destroyed,” Nyx carefully explains, her voice magically traveling across the open area. “Second, you will have to find the trolls if they are hiding, which means getting close to them. This puts you in range of their claws, which cause icy numbness. I spent a month studying troll physiology and I have found that you can only use two strategies with a high chance at success.” Everyone is quiet and listening to her with their undivided attention. She stops to look at Lord Highrider who is as stunned as the other warriors.

“Please continue,” Lord Highrider requests with a beckoning wave of his hand.

Nyx smiles sweetly before continuing. “For warriors without magical weapons, you need to forget about the heart. It’s the brain that controls the powers of a troll. If you stab through the eyes, you will damage the front of the brain. The monster will be confused and disoriented. Regeneration will be slowed since the front of the brain is what controls the rate of recovery. It would have to fix the brain before repairing any other damage that you inflict. Blending into its surroundings will also be limited because of glands behind the eyes that help with this ability. Without these glands, their chameleon ability only works flawlessly when they stand completely still. Otherwise, they resemble large blotches of heat haze when they move. I hope everybody is paying attention.”

“Ingenious. What is the other strategy?” the half-orc curiously asks.

“That one is reserved for me,” Nyx claims, a mischievous sparkle in her violet eyes.

“We might have other archers that can copy you.”

“This isn’t an archer thing.”

“What do you mean?”

“It works off the naturally secreted oils of trolls, which are flammable.”

“Fire arrows are not too advanced for these men.”

“I’m not talking about fire arrows.”

“Then, what are you talking about?”

“I guess I’ll stop teasing.”

Nyx grins wide as she turns to the wilderness around Hero’s Gate. She shakes her arms and stretches a little while letting her eyes scan the area. Many of the warriors pretend to yawn while others hurl mocking comments at the caster. She turns to them calmly before raising her hand to the air. A small glowing dot in her palm catches the attention of a few observant warriors while the rest continue laughing at her. They are all silenced by the eruption of fire from her hand that licks at the sky. Her other hand weaves a web of protection around her, which turns into a dripping shell of acid. The fire continues to spew from her hand, which is the only body part that sticks out of the deadly cocoon.

“I should have mentioned that Rainbow Tower is a caster school in Gaia,” Luke whispers apologetically.

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