Chest in a Vise Week

There’s no other way to describe it because my week ended with me feeling like my chest was stuck in a vise.  Drama in every direction.  This is coming off a break, so I might have had my defenses down.  Still, I didn’t expect to get so wrecked that every night was a struggle to stay awake long enough to get a little me time.  I wasn’t always successful, which resulted in me falling asleep and then waking up earlier.  That continued the cycle, but I got to sleep in a bit this morning.

Most of what happened can’t be talked about here.  Just a combination of getting back to work, my son getting back to school, interacting with people, and a sense of feeling both lost and forgotten.  Beyond work, there wasn’t much in the way of socialization even last weekend because things didn’t work out that way.  I couldn’t even tell you what I did beyond laundry too.  Everything is a blur from the stress.  Before anyone suggests relaxing, I did that and it seems to only tee me up for a blow to the head.  Pretty sure this is where many people will stop reading and jump to the comments too.

Do I Need to Use a Dragon? (Fantasy Writing Tips) is in limbo for now.  I’ve been unable to find any beta readers or an artist to do both the cover and a few inserts.  Tried my best, but nothing happened and I have to barrel forward with both work and getting War of Nytefall: Savagery ready for an April release.  Need to do the blurb and a final editing run on that, which might start this week.  Things are definitely getting more difficult since I can barely keep myself afloat on the blog and writing.  Doubt the will change any decade soon. I think that realization added to the stress because I have no idea what to do with Do I Need to Use a Dragon? and I refuse to put it on the blog for free.  I spent 2 . . . 3 years working on that one during lunch breaks, free periods, and whenever I had some extra time.  So, it’s on the shelf until I can get beta readers and an artist.  Those internal pictures are the reason why I can’t go to 99designs even though that isn’t always the best option either.

The only other thing I did was outlining, which led to the completion of a short story collection set up.  Realized I had enough space in the notebook to squeeze in a 6 book spin-off series of a Windemere character that was influenced by James Bond.  Not a huge amount of core characters there and I think I’m only going to do 14 chapters per book to keep things simple.  Much of it depends on how he comes off in the series he debuts in since he wields a six-shooter.  Every time I mention him, people start struggling to explain how the technology can be abused and why it shouldn’t exist.  They bring up methods to undo it that go against the Windemere rules, so it’s almost like the appearance of a gun in fantasy triggers something in people.  It’s weird and has me nervous about using him in general, but he’s a character that I’ve been tinkering with since high school.  I think he’ll work out fine.

Well . . . I don’t really have anything else to talk about since last week was all work, little play, and massive stress.  Think seeing politics appear from corners that I never expected them caused me to pull back too.  Watched another live-action ‘Rurouni Kenshin’ movie and an anime called ‘Vandread’.  First thing was fun and I learned right afterwards that they’re making two more, so watching the third doesn’t mean it’s the end.  The anime was . . . eh.  Really old-school and corny, so I faded in and out.  Oh, and I watched ‘Murder Princess’ too, which was only 6 episodes, but fun and to the point.  Haven’t picked out another series yet either.  I might just go down the queued list, which means it will be ‘Scrapped Princess’ and I’ll go through the motions.  Not touching any major outlining until I’m out of this funk, so there may be some anime sacrifices to my mood.

Next week is all work and maybe some play.  Really need a haircut.  I have my son for part of the week too, so I won’t attempt anything big while he’s here.  If anything, I’ll start editing War of Nytefall: Savagery for neatness and typos.  That might take me a week and a half, which puts it in perfect position for release in April.  Yeah, I’m not that interesting right now.

Goals of the week:

  1. Work
  2. Parenting
  3. Finish scheduling April posts.  Any May topics?
  4. Outline series
  5. Final edit for War of Nytefall: Savagery
  6. Blurb too
  7. TV?
  8. Puzzle time to help relax
  9. Haircut
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Poem for the Stars

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Sparkles in ink
Perhaps ever changing
Though we will never see
How many have ceased?
And we still receive their glow
Carving pictures
To tell our tales
Or using them to guide
Helpful to our people
Evoking dreams
And calm
From infinities away

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Immortal Wars: Light, Blood, & Tears Part 7

(Disclaimer: A warning to those who continue.  This is a sequel to a previous story.  Both of these were written in the mid-1990’s.  While the first one was slightly edited and vanity press published, this one has not been touched in over 20 years.  I figure I should do something with it and people may get a laugh or fright from how I used to be.  Every author comes from somewhere, so this is part of my origin.  To that end, I am deeply sorry for whatever nightmares I will inflict on the literary world and the American English language.  Enjoy?)

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Soon after the four villains had left for Earth, Mindtrigger had dragged Kilanus to his lab.  The ninety-foot square room is filled with computers, chemicals, and alien bodies that are being dissected by small robots with treads.  Attached to this room is another room of the same size.  One large computer is in this area as well as several pieces of unique, high-tech workout equipment.  A small table with a pile of magazines is next to the door.

“Don’t worry, Kilanus.  I don’t need too much of your blood.  Only four or five pints.  They’ll be back in your system within two minutes at most,” says Mindtrigger, who has an empty syringe the length of an adult’s arm.

“There really is no need for this.  I feel far beyond perfect.  So, just put the big needle down,” laughs Kilanus as she backs away from him.

“Don’t be such a wuss.  It won’t hurt at all after the first few seconds.  You’ll only feel a very big pinch.  I promise.”

“Seriously.”

“Yes.  Try not to pass out though because then we will have to do it again.  Hold very still.  I don’t want to miss or put the needle through you.  That would be messy and my cleaning drones are being upgraded to clean faster.”  The scientist plunges the tip of the needle into Kilanus’ left arm and spends the next ten minutes dealing with a thrashing teenage super weapon.

“There we go.  I need this in order to study your DNA and find out about your full power potential.  How do you feel, Kilanus?” asks Mindtrigger as he puts the blood in a thick, metal container.  He puts the container into a compartment that resembles a small microwave, which is in the center of the computer.

“I’m fine.  But will somebody please stop the room from spinning.  This kind of thing happens to me way too often.  And why can’t I feel my legs!” yells Kilanus in a dizzy voice.

“Hmmm.  It would appear that your body’s recuperative enzymes are still working on some minor internal injuries.  I had hoped that you would have recovered faster than this.  So, the blood will be back in a minute or three.”

“What internal injuries?”

“Some of your organs are still somewhat damaged from the atom smashing missile that hit you two days ago.  It probably took a lot of power for you to pull yourself back together so quickly.  Honestly, I’m surprised you were able to pull yourself back together at all considering the mess you made on the space bar walls.  That should teach you to pick a fight with a Dorian mercenary while she has any weapons with her.  Feeling any better?”

“Yeah.  Why are we having this surprise examination?”

Mindtrigger stares at his computer for a while before saying, “Since your psyche was been fixed, you have changed physically.  The changes started immediately and finished appearing last week.  The obvious changes are that you have become taller, leaner, and your body is more . . . mature, to put it bluntly.  I’ve been wondering if there are any changes in your powers and abilities.  Adriana has been keeping me so busy with pointless anti-guardian projects, so I have not had a chance to examine you.  But when she was here, I finally talked her into permitting these tests.”

“Tests?  As in, more than one test.  How many are we talking about?  Why don’t you just copy Fate’s abilities?  Our DNA is similar.”

“Fate?  I tend to ignore that minor fact, since I have noticed some genes in both of you that have managed to mutate every week.  Both of you have DNA that remains unstable and never stays the same.  This allows for your immunity to the guardian weapons.  It is only a rare and, I hate to admit this, unexplainable coincidence.  Now, which piece of data do we want first?”

“The blood sample.  Definitely the blood sample.  Gives me more time to figure out how to get out of this.”  The young blond carefully makes a fist-sized ball of green energy and starts bouncing it off the walls like a rubber ball.  The evil scientist doesn’t realize the flying emerald sphere until it nails him in the back of his head.

“What the hell is that, Kilanus?”

“This?  I think it’s some of my excess life force.  Neat trick, huh?  Now, I don’t have to wait for someone to die.  I can store these things for five months.  After that, they automatically get reabsorbed into my body.  Is this a problem?” she answers as she catches the ball by blindly raising her hand.

“No.  But now the blood test is completely useless.  I was going to use it in order to find any changes in your birthright powers and for a better explanation of its applications.  If you had told me about this trick, I would have used the smaller syringe and you would not have been hurt.  Step up to the machine over there, please, and we’ll continue the tests.”

Kilanus steps up to a bulky piece of equipment with a bright red number screen on the top of it.  The front of this machine is in the shape of a large, multi-limbed alien with a big sensor pad in his stomach and chest.  A low hum rises from the machine’s coolant system once Mindtrigger pushes a few hidden buttons.

“This is to test your muscle strength.  Hit the sensors as hard as you possibly can.  Use each of your limbs in a clockwise cycle, so I can properly gauge each one’s physical power.  The average for an immortal is five hundred and forty pounds of force for every two square inches.  I doubt that you’ll be able to beat Draveon’s one thousand pound record.  Left arm first when you begin and try to go slowly,” explains Mindtrigger as he fine-tunes the sensors.

“Do you think my mom’s plan actually work?” asks Kilanus as she begins to punch and kick the sensor pads.  She does about five cycles before Mindtrigger even looks up to speak to her.

“Depends.  The forces of luck are truly impossible to predict and I never expect anything to go exactly the way that Adriana plans.  You can stop now.  Seven hundred for both arms and seven-fifty for both legs.  This means you can crush rocks with your legs and hands if you decided to use all of your strength.  Of course, the bones and organs of any healthy immortal can usually deal with impacts of, at most, eight hundred pounds of force.  We also tend to pull our punches unless we get very angry.  Unconscious control of one’s abilities is just another joy of being an immortal.  Get on the funny looking treadmill and start running.”

“What do you think can possibly go wrong?”  Kilanus begins running, but after three or four minutes of doing her top speed, something in the machine burns out.  The speed testing treadmill simply stops in the middle of the test and the blond girl runs into the wall.  As she gets to her feet, Kilanus looks at the dent in the wall that is shaped just like her.

“That had to hurt.  I knew I should have put more than a forty mile-per-hour limit on the treadmill.  We have about two more tests before I do what your mom really wanted.  Hurry up.”

“You didn’t answer my question,” says Kilanus.  She is put into a large, glass box that is pulled up to the ceiling by a pulley system.  Hundreds of tiny lasers are on the box’s surface and once Mindtrigger hits a blue button, the violet lasers start firing inside the box.  To make things even worse, the violet beams bounce around for a little over a minute before disappearing and being replaced by another one.  As time goes on, the lasers become more numerous and faster.

“Let me answer your question.  Your mother never puts much thought into her plans and this one is just a way for her to release some of her pent up anger.  She doesn’t really care if the planet guardians win or die during this mission.  As long as she hits something very hard, and she can hit very hard, your mother will be happy.  Are you doing okay in there?”

“I’m fine.  What is this box supposed to test?  How long before I get pissed off and break something?”  She is busy bouncing and dodging lasers like a demented kangaroo on a sugar rush.  As soon as the violet beam gets an inch away from her body, the immortal quickly jumps, ducks, or twists out of the way.  When the tight, ebony garbed girl has finally had enough of the exercise, Kilanus smashes through the box’s floor and lands gracefully on the ground.

“Not bad.  Your reflexes and flexibility are astounding.  I’d take a guess that you could dodge super sonic attacks and practically bend your body in half.  That’s better than anybody unless in the Black Tower.  Adriana would find some real use for that particular move if she could accomplish it,” says the scientist while a small, three-legged robot begins to clean up the shards of glass.

“That’s something I never wanted to know about,” mutters Kilanus as she leans against the wall and takes in a deep, strong breath.

“Sorry.  I thought you knew everything about her . . . hobby.  Anyway, your flexibility is slightly above average, which proves that Fate’s connection to you is next to nothing.  He’s very agile, but not as flexible as you are.  We can skip the durability test if you would tell me how long it takes for your left big toe to grow back.  I’ll just mention the durability test deals with many hammers and knives.”

“I don’t want to know.  It takes approximately two and a half days to grow my left big toe back.  Is that a good or bad thing?”

“It’s average.  For some reason, the left big toe heals slower than every other part of an immortal’s body.  Your limbs would take up to an hour and your other body parts would take around one day.  This is without putting any conscious effort into the healing factor.  Now, let me just lock the doors and we can finish the examination.”  Mindtrigger starts pulling out normal medical equipment from a drawer while a cushioned table rises under Kilanus.

“Don’t worry about a thing, dear.  I will be as gentle as I possibly can.  At least, you’re not as nervous as Hellax because panicking only makes the examination long and rather difficult.  Now, lie down on the table and take off your clothes.  Please.”

“What the hell are you talking about?  My clothes are not coming off, you ancient pervert!” yells Kilanus.  The table clamps down on her limbs, but she eventually breaks free and tries to run through the door.

“Just calm down.  Adriana asked me to do a full medical check up on you.  I am a skilled physician as well as a talented scientist and I won’t do anything that would be considered unprofessional.  Now, take off your clothes and get on the padded table like a good little patient.  Just leave your underwear on.”

“That could be a problem since I’m not wearing any.  I’m out of here,” says Kilanus.  She knees Mindtrigger in the stomach before two large robots enter the room and they attempt to get her ready.  Both robots are beyond repair after a few minutes, although they do manage to get most of her clothes off in one piece.  Only her shirt has been ripped into shreds because of her constant thrashing about.  Throughout the entire examination the blond screams and complains like a five-year-old.

“On days like this I think that I should have listened to my mother and become a dentist,” thinks Mindtrigger before a quick, bare foot hits him in his nose.

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Poem for the Moon

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Trying to light our path
In the midst of darkness
A glowing orb
That casts shadows
And dreams
Taking several forms
As it circles our lives
Even vanishing
Though we know
It shall return
To play games with those
Who roam the night

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Music of Legends of Windemere: Path of the Traitors

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The penultimate post and volume!  Legends of Windemere: Path of the Traitors was a slight deviation.  I don’t know how people came to it because things were cooling off in general around this time.  Instead of following the champions after the horrors of their previous adventure, this focused on Queen Trinity and other former villains.  The goal is to help the champions and it sets up where many of them end up for the final book.  Prior to creating this volume, I didn’t think of that and they just appeared when needed.  That wasn’t good.  So, I made this book about determination and working for redemption.

This song made me think of Trinity.  The mention of darkness and isolation connects to how she grew up.  Speaking of someone taking everything from a person is Baron Kernaghan and what he did to the chaos elves.  Trinity standing up to the monster who has enslaved and controlled her people for centuries made this one a no-brainer.

This is another one that I can imagine a character rocking out to.  Can’t fully explain why this makes me think of Trinity, but it’s probably because it deals with being free.  There’s a bluntness to the song too.  Thinking about it, other characters show that they are trapped and work towards freedom in this story too.  It comes in different forms, so not everyone sees freedom the same way.

This is a song I’ve loved since high school.  It was one that I went to and tried to think of where I could fit it in.  It landed here because of Trinity’s journey throughout the entire series.  I can’t really put into words how this song makes me feel and the images that it conjures.  Though, I should probably listen to it more often because they’re definitely on the positive side of things.

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Poem for the Sun

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A blazing ball
That would kill us
If we dared approached
Scorching worlds
Or leaving them to freeze
Yet we get its gift
Heat to stop the chill
Light to see our path
It ebbs and flows
Beating down on some
While merely visiting others
A fickle provider
Of what we need to live

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Holistic Reviews

Hello S.E. readers, Gwen with you today to discuss a familiar topic — book reviews. If you’ll journey with me, I hope to spark a smile or two. …

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Do I Need to Use a Dragon? . . . Guess the First Draft is Done

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Haven’t used this picture for a while, but I guess it works.  So, I mentioned yesterday that I completed the first draft of Do I Need to Use a Dragon? (Fantasy Writing Tips).  I don’t know if I should keep that part in the parenthesis though.  Feels too clunky and the blurb will make it clear what it is.  Anyway, I’m now left with the following issues:

  1. I need to find a few beta readers who are willing to do so with specific targets.  Not sure how well this works with guidelines.  If I’m going to publish then it will be a summer thing.
  2. The cover art and the 4 internal pictures.  I think I can do pictures in a Word document and they’ll fit?  I’ve never done that before with an eBook.  Are full page interior pictures even possible?  Honestly, I don’t even know where to go with this one because I don’t have a lot of money to spend on 5 pieces and I’m twitchy about this one since all of them will have my characters.  I kind of want an artist familiar with them and not risk their pictures looking nothing like what they do in the books.  For some reason, I’m worried about that.  Then again, I also have these issues:
    1. First picture is from Legends of Windemere, but I don’t know what it should be.  All 6 champions together?  Just Luke Callindor looking out over a wilderness since this is for the ‘World’ section?  So confused here.
    2. Second picture is from War of Nytefall, but I again don’t know what I should do here.  It’s for the ‘Character’ section and I’ve got is that Clyde should be prominent here.  Again, do I have him be alone or match him up with Mab?  Should they be relaxing or in action?  I’m extra worried here because I know when people see the word ‘vampire’, they’ll make the characters look monstrous and villain-like.
    3. Do I use Fizzle or Lost for the good-bye picture?  I’m leaning towards Fizzle only because I want him looking either confused or sad on the cover.
    4. Just to clear things up, the third picture for the ‘Quest’ section is Ichabod Brooks.  That’s the only one that I think I have, but I don’t know what he should be doing.

I hate this part of the whole thing because it’s where a massive amount of doubt and my anxiety turns up.  The moment I have to interact with somebody new, I start to lock up and consider hiding.  Then, I say yes to whoever responds to my request first and become submissive during the process.  Probably a terrible author to work with when it comes to art.  That or a great one because I agree to nearly everything.  Definitely need an agent or publicist here.

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Goal Post: Winter Break Lived Up to Its Name

Well, it was certainly a break from work and school.  It was also cold and we got some snow, so it felt like winter.  Can’t complain about that since I live in New York, so we expect that weather.  Been fairly dry the last few years, so we were do to get some rapid fire snowstorms around here.  Of course, it hit when I was the only one around to shovel, so I’m sore.  My son tried to help, but a little guy with a large shovel can only do so much before he goes to play.  I’ll take what I can get since he could have refused to help in general.

With there being no work, the week was primarily video games, television, Lego sets, and relaxing.  We watched ‘Godzilla: King of Monsters’ to get ready for ‘Godzilla vs Kong’, so now my son loves Mothra.  Kind of hope that one makes an appearance in the next movie for his sake.  I introduced him to ‘Dragon ball’ too.  The original with 11-year-old Goku and we’ll work our way up to ‘Z’, ‘GT’, and the newer one that I know nothing about.  Got some episodes of ‘One Piece’, ‘Fairy Tail’, ‘Dr Stone’, ‘Pokemon’, ‘Yugioh’, and ‘Animaniacs’ too, which makes it sound like we were always in front of the television.  Most of those are the night viewing before bed, which helps him relax a bit.  The rest are breakfast or lunch because he won’t sit still to eat.  A family dinner is the only time we get him to stay at the table.  Oh well, it’s winter break.

Speaking of Lego sets, I bought my son the Lego Super Mario Starter course.  This is a set based on Super Mario and you need to get this one before getting any of the others.  That’s because it’s the only one with the Mario, who has Bluetooth, a scanner on his bottom, digital eyes for expressions, speaker for sounds, and a chest screen for coin and power up display.  Yeah, this was high-tech.  I had to put an app on my iPhone, which was a major battery drain.  That was the only way to get the instructions, but my son liked how he could move the images around to get a better look at what he had to do.  It records the coins you collect since several pieces have barcodes that Mario responds to.  Also, he acts like he’s fallen into lava if you put him on anything red.  It’s pretty fun because we couldn’t figure out why he kept making the noise until we saw he was placed on the red rug.  I also bought the Bowser Castle Boss Battle, which you add to the overall set.  That took 2 days to put together since we were shoveling as well.  Needless to say, my son loved it and played with it all the time.  The pieces are all over the floor of his room though because he can build different courses.  Have to tread carefully when I check him before I go to bed from now on.

I finished Do I Need to Use a Dragon? last weekend, which I’ll talk a bit more about tomorrow.  I’m at the point where I need to figure out how to gather the rest of the pieces such as beta readers and cover/interior art.  Never did interior art before, so I’m not sure how to include that into an eBook.  Do I put it directly into the Word file and hope the formatting doesn’t mess it up?  I’ll ask that again tomorrow.  When I wrote the post for tomorrow, I was exhausted.  Still, another project is done and I’m aiming to finish the outlining of another series this weekend.  That clears the deck for fresh outlines at work and getting ‘Tales of the Slumberlord’ into its final outline stage.  Fingers crossed that things work out.  We’ll see what happens though because weeks after breaks are either quiet or chaotic.  There is no in-between.

Did I mention the exhaustion last weekend?  That was because I got the second Covid vaccine shot last Saturday.  I thought that the achy arm and feeling a little sleepy that evening were the common side-effects people talked about.  Nope.  It was around 10:05 the next morning that I was hit by a fatigue like a bus coming out of nowhere.  This was in the middle of working on Do I Need to Use a Dragon? and I was determined to finish that project.  It took me all day with several pseudo-naps and a slight bit of masochism where I pushed on the injection spot to send a jolt of pain through me.  Coffee makes me drowsy and I had nothing else in the house.  No way I was driving either.  I think I was annoyed at being nearly laid out too, so I fought to finish the project primarily out of defiant spite.  Who or what was I spiting?  I have no idea, but I can through in time to have a big dinner.  Then, I promptly laid down to . . . Not be able to sleep because the fatigue wore off and I found myself wide awake at midnight!

Any new anime by myself?  Just ‘Goblin Slayer’ and ‘Maria the Virgin Witch’.  I struggled through the second one because of the fatigue.  Really enjoyed the first even though it’s incredibly violent and the first episode is a shock to the system if you’re not ready for what happens.  They set out to make you despise goblins within the first 5-10 minutes.  Now, I’m working through ‘Samurai 7’, which is based on the ‘Seven Samurai’.  It’s an older anime and not as exciting as I’d expected.  Slow pace, but the characters are keeping me going.

Goals for the week:

  1. More April blog posts.
  2. Finish outlining ‘Ruins of the Zodiac Gods’.
  3. Divide my stories into idea books to decide on next collection.
  4. Try to find an artist for Do I Need to Use a Dragon?
  5. Start outlining ‘Tales of the Slumberlord’?  I might wait on this in case next week is crazy.
  6. Biking a bit more
  7. Puzzle time when stressed
  8. Really should make a blurb of War of Nytefall: Savagery.  Maybe I’ll do one later today and have it be tested in March.  I’m definitely being lazy on this whole thing for some reason.  There’s excitement in me, but I just can’t muster a lot of physical pep lately.  Weird.
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Biographies and Character Evolution: A Head Start?

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A goal of writing is to evolve our characters.  If they are the same at the end of their adventure as they were at the beginning then we missed something.  Even if they go back home, there needs to be a change.  We call it an evolution or development, but know that it isn’t always an advancement.  Some characters may end an adventure in a bad position, but they have changed.  That is the point.  Now, how can character biographies help with this?

Again, we’re talking about pre-writing planning here.  So, if you aren’t going to do that then this probably won’t help you.  It’s possible to do it in your head, but that doesn’t guarantee that things will stick.  With a biography, you can have permanent notes in regards to where you want the character to go.  You define their role in the story and show where they have come from.  It’s the basis of everything that is about to happen and lead to an evolution.  Without this foundation, you might be working on shaky ground and the evolution can be clunky or unnatural.  Key word there is ‘might’ because some people can keep it all together or have tools to help with that.

It’s up to the author to decide how specific to be with these parts of a biography.  Some will give a general idea or a variety of choices.  Others will write it out to the letter and never stray from the concept.  Depending on the length of your story or series, it’s difficult to pull off that last option.  You may have to go in stages or state the changes in each book.  For example, I had to make notes for Mab’s evolution in War of Nytefall.  I couldn’t go into details because I didn’t know exactly how I would do her addiction storyline.  All I could do was make note of how bad it was and if people knew about it within each book.  The rest had to be developed in real-time since evolution is partially influenced by interacting with other characters.  This means the biography can only bring you so far and may work best as guidelines.

Of course, you don’t have to go along with your initial idea.  Things always change when you start writing.  A better evolution may come to mind or the original plan can go against the main plot of the story.  You could have intersecting evolutions that negate or damage all characters involved too.  Never think that these biographies are written in stone because they are merely a jumping point.  Sticking to this can harm the evolutions, which damages both the characters and overall story.  Audiences connect with your heroes and villains, so you need their growth to feel natural.  An idea that you come up with at first may work, but it will probably need some level of tweaking as you move along.  This is an inevitable part of author life.

So, what do you think about biographies and getting a general idea of a character evolution?

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