Hostile Vs. Friendly Planet

Avatar: The Meh One

This subject came about after I read an interesting comment on a Reddit forum.  The topic was about the Avatar movies and how humans are the bad guys trying to destroy the environment.  Most of the comments were praising the Nav’i and saying humanity had to be more like them.  I’ve seen that before.  We are a species that really tears into ourselves over how we get along with our environment.  I see it with every ‘Animal Post’ even on the positive ones.  Anyway, the comment that got my attention went like this:

“Of course, humans are going to be aggressive while the Nav’i are peaceful when it comes to nature.  The Nav’i exist on a planet where they can physically and spiritually bond with the other organisms to create peace.  Humans are from a planet that actively wants to kill us with diseases, predators, and nature disasters.  The Nav’i are allowed to live in true peace with their world while humans can never truly achieve this, so they will always have the mentality that they have to be aggressive to survive.”

I think this is true.  Even the human cultures that live alongside nature still have to get involved in survival of the fittest.  Predators won’t just ignore a human just because they’re being nice.  In reality, we are prey to a variety of animals, which means we always have to fit to survive.  Just that technology and other aspects of our culture have made it an unfair battle with us at the top of the food chain.  Pretty much the exact opposite of the way the Nav’i could go, which really shows how environment can shape the direction of any species with higher cognitive functions.

Expanding to fiction in general, I can see how this can influence nearly every world that authors have created.  Those with harsh, brutal lands tend to create characters who are tough and somewhat callous.  Those with pleasant and unchallenging lands have more peaceful and relaxed characters.  Shows that you really need the personalities to fit the environment.  The deadlier the world, the harder you need the people to be in order to explain how they survived.  I don’t know if we do this consciously or it just makes sense to us on a psychological level.

I don’t know, which I prefer as both an author and a reader.  Having there be no danger from the environment does seem rather boring, but I think it would have appeal due to not be a common theme.  Not sure where I would go with it besides having a dangerous entity appear to cause an upheaval.  Makes me think of ‘Demolition Man’.  So, I do gravitate more towards a world that isn’t easy for humans to live in.  There has to be some obstacle for humanity or the stand in for us to have created a civilization.  Without a need for community to survive, I don’t think they would evolve beyond simple packs moving around for food.  No arts or the like would appear, so there might be something beneficial to a harsh environment.

What do you think of these two types of worlds?

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Writing with soul

Hello, Story Empire friends. Gwen with you today, and I’d like to begin with a reflection. Several years ago, I read a fictional short story that …

Writing with soul
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Happy National Dolphin Day

Today is National Dolphin Day.  I was going to do a bunch of info on them, but . . . I just couldn’t get this out of my head (Volume is oddly low):

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Goal Post: Bonk on the Head and Two Aching Ankles

That’s pretty much how I finished the week.  Sure, my birthday was in there, but I didn’t do much for it.  Stayed late at work to help with basketball and got home in time for dinner and Pokemon Go with my son.  That was pretty much it.  One ankle had already taken a tweak at this point too.  The other one went the wrong way on me yesterday and was followed 1.5 hours later by me hitting my head on the bottom of a freezer door.  So, it wasn’t a stellar week.  A ton of personal drama that is carrying into next week happened too.  Really, really, really wish I could talk about that, which should tell you what arena it stems from.

On the plus side of things . . . Surprisingly, I’m not being sarcastic.

My phone decided that retaining a predictable charge was for suckers on Monday.  It didn’t die, but it couldn’t give me a straight answer on how it was doing.  This happened to my last phone, so it was time to get a new one.  Of course, I’m in New York and had to wait for the solar eclipse to end.  Got to watch that with my son, parents, neighbors, and I invited my son’s mom to join us as well.   That was fun for what it was, but you can only stare at an eclipse with the right glasses for so long.  Once it was done and dinner was eaten, my son and I were off to Verizon.

I usually only get the cheapest phone, but they had a good deal on the iPhone 15 Pro Max along with a nice bundle of accessories.  This included an iPhone 15 for my son, which I got him since he could use a faster one.  It also puts our devices on the same upgrade schedule, so I can get us deals in the future.  After the activation fees, I’ll only be spending an extra $20 per month for both phones combined.  This was what I was paying for my son’s phone alone last time, so I’m happy with it.  Taking me a while to get used to not having a home button and having to swipe for various things.

Got to test out the camera when we went out to the park on Tuesday.  There’s a pond we walk around for Pokemon Go.  Everyone does it, but we saw a bird flying around with a fish in its talons.  There are red-tailed hawks, so we didn’t think anything of it.  At one point, it must have dropped the fish and went hunting again.  I was watching as it rose high and did a dive for the water that wasn’t like a hawk.  It missed and fly close enough for everyone to see it was an osprey.  Managed to get these pictures as I tried to use my camera for the first time:

The rest of the week was a crazy slog through mayhem and chaos.  I got no amount of editing done, but I did manage to finish the May blog posts.  I’m hoping to get through a few chapters of Darwin & the Halfling Hunt this weekend.  Got a little of chapter 9 to finish and then I’ll try to get through chapters 10-13.  That leaves me 5 more chapters to hopefully work on this coming week.  If I can get through more than I’m in the clear to print Darwin & the Angry Elf for the father/son trip.  Need something to work on when we’re relaxing and he’s drawing his video game creations.

This coming week is going to be rough at the start.  Basketball is Monday and Tuesday, which isn’t too bad.  Got appointments on Monday, Wednesday, and Friday too.  So, editing is going to be a challenge before the weekend.  I have to start packing for the trip too.  Should get an idea of the weather and can get tickets to a bunch of things we want to do.  Lots of little things to do while editing and resting up.  Shouldn’t be a problem if I get a bunch done today.  Then again, I want to binge ‘Fallout’ on Amazon Prime before one of my friends watch and spoil it.  So much to do.

That’s really it for this week.  Some bright points, but there is a personal storm brewing again.  Not sure if it’s better or worse than what I survived earlier this year.  Just once I’d love to catch a break and have something really good happen to me.  Sell a few books.  Have someone reach out to turn one of my stories into a show/comic/movie/something for more press.  Win a $500 Lego gift card.  Get more time with my son since the next 1.5 months is going to be sparser than I would like.  2024 really isn’t turning out very good and I’m kind of done with it.

Goals of the week:

  1. Help son with pre-break schoolwork.
  2. Edit more Darwin & the Halfling Hunt.
  3. Reserve trip events.
  4. Start packing for trip.
  5. Help with basketball at work.
  6. Make a few June blog posts.
  7. Watch ‘Fallout’ on Amazon Prime.
  8. Biking if possible.
  9. Probably something else I’m forgetting.
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What To Do If a Reboot Fails?

Fant4stic . . . Yeah

The title speaks for itself here.  What do you do if you make a reboot and failed?  By failure, I mean it’s received the same way one would greet a bag of flaming doggie nuggets on the front porch.  People just hate what you have done.  Some to the point where they can’t even watch the originals without thinking of the horror you created.  You might think that’s an exaggeration, but I know some ‘Airbender’ fans who still feel the pain of the M. Night movie.  Anyway, your reboot is abhorred instead of adored.

Personally, I would simply apologize.  Admit what you did was wrong and you screwed up.  I would look at complaints and recognize the ones that are viable.  Maybe you disrespected the message, characters, setting, or story of the original.  You were so focused on leaving your mark that you forgot you were playing with someone else’s toys.  It happens and it doesn’t hurt to admit that.  Learn your lesson and move on to either your own story or to tangle with another reboot.  Humility couldn’t hurt.

That’s my take on it.  What do you guys think?

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Outlining Finesse, Part 4

By Stephen Geez This is the final installment of my 4-part Outlining Finesse series. Here are the links to the earlier installments in case you need …

Outlining Finesse, Part 4
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Poetry Day: Idea Barrage

Gomez Addams

(This is pretty easy to figure out.  I wrote it back when my imagination was a lot stronger and less controlled.  So, ideas would come to me all of the time and I’d struggle to make sure I got them written down in some form.  Kind of miss having that happen to me.  Time and stress does a number on the imagination since the brain is focused on so many other things.)

They come at me at once

A horde of thoughts and dreams

Each wanting to be heard

An evolution of an older plot

Pushing newer ones aside

Clashes of warriors

That will never meet in ink

Monsters slither from all corners

Some born of darkest magic

Others from the vilest science

I try to sort them all

Weaving order from the chaos

Pulling merging forms apart

So that they do not spoil

Only some will survive the day

As I struggle to find time and pen

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7 Tips to Making a Reboot

Hellboy

The temptation to use an existing concept for yourself can be big.  At least, it seems to be these days.  Even retellings and adaptations of public domain things might fall under this umbrella.  So, what are some things you can do if you really want to create a reboot of something that wasn’t originally yours?  Yes, I know many people will claim they have no interest and I agree.  Just roll with the post.

  1. If you must do this, research the source material and figure out what made people enjoy it.  This isn’t to make an identical copy, but to discern what earned the story its fandom.  There has to be some reason people will go to a reboot beyond it simply having the name.  Unless it’s a blatant cash grab and cry for attention.  In that case . . . Just don’t touch other people’s things.
  2. Don’t start bashing the original within the context of the reboot.  You’re trying to attract new fans while retaining the old.  Insulting those who have supported the story prior to the reboot will cause an uproar.  Guess this is a tactic for gaining free publicity and get some people to watch the movie out of spite.  Could be spite for the haters, spite for the original story, or even the chance to knowledgably declare your spite on the Internet.
  3. There’s no reason that you can’t change things around, but there could be a limit.  If you leave nothing resembling the original then you will have people wondering why you didn’t just make your own story.  The point of a reboot was supposed to be that you revive a dying, dead, or sleeper franchise.  This means you saw something in the original that you thought could work.  Changing the whole thing around and keeping only the name is going to cause confusion.
  4. Rebooting a story that did terribly gives you more flexibility.  Still, you need to have some of the original left.  Maybe the characters or the world depending on if they worked out.  Really depends on why the original failed.  If it’s an issue of overall story then you’d need a big rewrite.  If it failed due to a handful of characters that didn’t click them rework those.  A bad story is one you’re trying to repair with a reboot because you see something worth your time.
  5. Be careful about how you talk about the original.  You will have people expecting you to be a fan, which is where research can come into play.  Saying you despise it will make your reboot come off as a project of hate.  In general, audiences react better when they know the person behind the reboot loves what they are working on.  Why take on a project that involves a story you hate instead of one you love?
  6. Make a list of stuff you want to keep.  Make a list of stuff you want to get rid of.  Make a list of what you need.  Just make lists to organize your thoughts because going pantser on a pre-existing story could lead to trouble.  At least, starting off that way.
  7. Maybe just don’t do a reboot and make an original story even if you’re using public domain stuff?
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MANAGING TWO AUTHOR PROFILES

Hello everyone, it’s Robbie here today and I’m discussing the pros and cons of two author profiles. I have two completely separate author profiles: …

MANAGING TWO AUTHOR PROFILES
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Happy National Unicorn Day!

I couldn’t resist a post about unicorns since April 9th is apparently National Unicorn Day.  I’m definitely more of a griffin person, but I can appreciate an animal that comes with a built-in stabbing device.  Enjoy!

Oh, it’s also my 44th birthday, so I guess I’ll put up a few things about that too.

This one is because there is an after-school meeting on my birthday, but it’s not about me

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