
Greetings, SE’ers! I’m back again with another common word we all use in our writing and some substitution ideas that will be more impactful. Today’s…
Words that pack a punch – part 7

Greetings, SE’ers! I’m back again with another common word we all use in our writing and some substitution ideas that will be more impactful. Today’s…
Words that pack a punch – part 7
Three of these Bellbirds are found in South America while the vulnerable Three-Wattled Bellbird is in Central America. They are all part of the ‘cotinga’ family, which are birds that live in or near forests. So, what are bellbirds?
They are known for being very loud, especially the White Bellbird at 125 decibels. They are sexually dysmorphic, which means the males and females look different. Males have either the wattles or bare skin on their face with brighter white coloring. Females are more olive with yellow streaks to help them blend in while on a nest.
Let’s just get to the pictures and videos since they are an auditory experience.

Bare-Throated Bellbird

Bearded Bellbird

Three-Wattled Bellbird

White Bellbird
I made it to summer break, which is bizarre considering it’s mid-August. Guess that week between the end of the school year and start of the summer session would count, but it didn’t feel like it. Now, I have 1.5 weeks before I’m back at work . . . I know beggars shouldn’t be choosers, but that still hurts.
The last week of summer session was filled with activity, but nothing was really worth posting about. All of the kids had fun. The adults had some fun and I think our sanity survived intact. Final field trip was to the big mall nearby, which was the smoothest trip all summer. Even I got to buy a few things, which was great since I learned I had about $50 credit to use at the Lego Store. Got the two newest botanical sets to continue making my room pretty without needing to water plants. The week ended with a pizza party picnic that included bubbles (bubble tornados to be specific), attempts at kite flying, and a lemon lime cream cheese pound cake. Tasted really good. Anyway, that brought about the end of the work period of the summer and my son finished camp.
For the next week, I’ll have my son and that means a lot of . . . appointments. He has a bunch of things that have to get done and they can’t be done during the time he’s with his mother. Just bad timing, so he has 4 appointments. Monday is fairly shot along with Tuesday and Thursday afternoon. So, we’re going to try to make the most of what we get, including getting haircuts. We both need those.
The outings are mostly going to be for Pokemon Go since there are a few single period events and the one going on for the next few days. Those are easy to factor in since I play now too. Today is our traditional summer trip to the big zoo, but we’re meeting up with my sister, BIL, and niece this time. My car was fixed just in time for that, but no real story there since it was maintenance. Wednesday is a trip with my parents to the New York aquarium for the morning. Beyond all of that, we might get ‘LOTR: Two Towers’ in using the two butchered afternoons. My son wants to work on art, so he’ll do that while I work on a writing project.
Speaking of writing, I managed to get all of the hand edits typed into Darwin & the Avenging Elf. That means I can dive into Darwin & the Demon Game once I get back from Oswego. I still plan on only doing notebook work. I’m also borrowing my son’s Chromebook for anime watching when I need a break. So, I won’t be doing any typing or setting up blogs. Everything through October is done, but I don’t think I’m going to dive into my November topic list until after the break. At most, I’ll set up the poetry and teasers posts. For the most part, I want to get my mind turning towards ‘Phi Beta Files’ and anything that comes after that.
The only other event that happened this week was a negative. Last weekend, I was out in the heat doing Pokemon Go a bunch. I hydrated and got indoors before I got too overheated, but it was enough. So, I started the week fairly tired and it became a long drag to get to Friday. Other events triggered my anxiety, so I didn’t get to start any of the packing. Made a list for it and instructions on how to design my son’s Halloween costume, which I might start this week. Probably should do that since I need his body to get proper measurements. Kid is turning me more and more into an amateur (and terrible) seamstress. The worst part about sewing for me is getting the string through the eye hole and those dang helper things never actually help. At least I know where to get a lot of the parts.
Nothing else to mention about the future since it’s all appointments, outings, some form of art, and packing. I’m going to have less ‘me’ time in Oswego than I planned, but I don’t mind seeing old friends. One goal I have is getting up there before this exotic candy shop closes at 9 PM. It won’t open again until Tuesday and I’ll be on the road by then. It has flavors of KitKats and Lays chips that are normally only found in China and Japan. Want to buy a few to snack on that Monday when I’m doing most of my writing. I’d bring some back for my son, but the ingredients are supposedly in Japanese or Chinese, so I won’t know if he’s allergic to them.
Well, let’s look at the goal list:

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Well, we did elves and dwarves. Always felt orcs were the third fantasy species that showed up all the time. Sometimes they are simply goblins, but they usually have the same themes. Definitely big stereotypes with these guys too. So, what are they?
You get the point. This is why I changed the orcs in Legends of Windemere to be more than monsters. I felt like they were always what you see above even if they were thrown into a non-fantsy setting. I still made the males kind of ugly, but the females are gorgeous with the same strength and prowess as their counterparts. The idea was a ‘beauty and the beast’ species where looks don’t mean anything to them. Still had to skew it towards human asthetics to get the point across. A few stories have come out with orcs as more than violent threats to the prettier species. Maybe things are changing.

Greetings Storytellers, Diana with you today with a quick post about names. Now and then, I get stuck for a name. I need a ship name (The Devil’s …
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Lego Robin (Also Lego Batman)
(The desire for attention is stronger today than when I wrote this poem. Sad thing is that it seems to be more financially sound to do this.)
Stupid stunts and sickness
Done in the camera’s eye
And posted without fears
All for a stranger’s cheers
With dignity tossed aside
Clutching to your ignorance
These will come back to roost
At a time you have matured
Forgetting this act is there
Before the world it’s bared
Its return is reassured
Then it will be your noose

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Can’t talk about elves without touching on dwarves. Let’s just dive into the first one:

Hello, Story Empire Readers! It’s Liz Gauffreau with you today. Let me start by saying that this is not the post I intended to write. I was going to …
Tertiary Sources: Not Just Tangential Anymore

Cover Art by Alison Hunt
Here we have the penultimate volume of War of Nytefall. You can tell from the title that things are going to go wrong. The overall story ending up becoming more complicated than I originally planned too. Lost took a more central role too because of one of the new characters. Maybe Anarchy is a good word for this since it was chaos in my mind while juggling everything.
With Xavier and Clyde becoming more active against each other, the vampire civil war is actually moving along. At the same time, someone is going around killing priests of different temples, which is why a paladin army is being formed. Clyde is off to solve another mystery and stop the murderers before the Dawn Fangs are exposed before mortal-kind is ready. Two new recruits don’t make his job any easier since one is a fangirl of his and the other is her boyfriend. A tale of mystery, intricate plots, boastful paladins, jealousy, and vampires.
Seriously though, Anarchy was going to be a story about youthful energy and impetuousness causing disaster. That didn’t work very well because it resulted in a bunch of characters coming off as stupid. So, I had to create a more sinister and intentional underbelly. This is one of the reasons Lost took a bigger role since I noticed she would be the only one to sense a problem. Her getting drawn into a rivalry with Luna the Clyde fangirl was a bonus, which helped both characters stand out. Unfortunately, I couldn’t do the same for Joran (Luna’s boyfriend) who was just too sulky and easily annoyed to get him to be friendly. So, he kept the youthful arrogance even when he was being taught lessons by his elders.
I can’t really explain a lot about Anarchy without revealing most of the twists. So, I want to talk about the paladin leader who was going to be a nameless warrior. I was only going to have him show up a few times to scare off the vampires until he finally faces Clyde and is killed. There was no personality to him until I reached his first scene and needed to do something. A friend at work had been asking me to put him in a book, so I came up with Sir Adam of Crego. It was going to be a purely comical character. In fact, I wrote a location wrong when he was talking and kept it to give him a habit of saying places incorrectly. Of course, I couldn’t be mean to the guy, so he did turn out to be a physical threat and a cunning warrior. I was happy with how he came out since he was another last minute addition like Eighty and Kira Grasdon.
Would I change anything? As I said, I really wish I could have done more with Joran since I needed him for the plot to work. He simply couldn’t establish a decent personality. Part of it could have been that he was supposed to be mild compared to Luna’s energy and excitement. Having Lost around him didn’t help since that’s another character who claims attention in every scene. Yet, he couldn’t even overshadow Titus for a moment when they shared a scene. Guess there are always some characters who get put in these situations since such people exist in real life. At least I gave Joran a few good fight scenes, which I guess was his main purpose.
Question time!

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I was thinking about fantasy stereotypes a while back. Naturally, my mind went to elves and how they are typically depicted the same way in fantasy. The above meme notes a lot of what people think, which primarily comes from Tolkien. He set the standard that we use, so most authors don’t want to stray from it. I’m not going to talk about reinventing elves though. Easy to do if you try and many have done it successfully. So, what are the stereotypes?