When Every Character Is A Villain

The Penguin

I watched ‘The Penguin’ months ago and I liked it.  Not saying I loved the characters in a way that I wanted to be them.  Some of their actions were horrific, but it worked for the story.  In fact, I can’t think of any character that would be considered a hero.  They were all mobsters, drug dealers, manipulators, murderers, and corrupt officials.  Yet, I didn’t find myself shoved out of the story by the lack of a noble hero.  Got me thinking about how an all villain story can work.

First, I know this type of story isn’t for everyone.  Many people need good in a story to balance the evil.  They need that ‘black and white’ or at least no slide into terrible actions like grotesque murders.  Audience members like this will hate such a story because they will be focused on how wrong everything is.  Not that others won’t see that as well, but there will be no justification for any of the actions.  It will be seen entirely as evil with no reason.  I thought I would feel that, but it never happened with ‘The Penguin’.

Right off the bat, you’re shown that this is going to be a morally dark story.  This doesn’t start in a bright, happy place, but in a desolate area and the atmosphere kind of stays that way.  I think that’s an important factor for a story where everyone is a villain.  If you start them in the light, they might be seen as being heroes when they aren’t even close.  So, the story needs to begin dark and brutal to set the tone.  This way, nobody in the audience can be fully surprised by future actions.

There’s also a fascination with people doing evil things.  Through the eyes of a hero, we only see them as bad and nothing else.  A story like this will show them as multi-dimensional.  We get an origin to show how they turned out this way, which touches on how villains aren’t typically born evil.  For some, you end up seeing that they were a bad apple to begin with and nothing was done to turn them away from darkness.  Others are born into the evil and only know that life, so they grow into it.  Then, you have the villains who do start off good and inevitably fall into darkness.  ‘The Penguin’ had a good variety of these types, which made it even more fascinating.

The funny thing for me is that I did find myself rooting for characters, but it wasn’t always for them to win.  Many times, it was for them to get their comeuppance.  There were times I felt that I had to side with Penguin too because the other villains were acting worse than him.  Without wishing for a hero to show up, I think I was simply indulging in the experience and letting the tension take over.  I knew the entire time that every character didn’t deserve to win.  Yet, someone had to and it came down to simply seeing which monster was left standing.

I almost compared this type of story to one where you have monsters fighting each other like ‘Freddy vs Jason’ or the original ‘Godzilla vs King Kong’.  Those stories don’t match with ‘The Penguin’ because they had heroes or at least innocents.  It wasn’t the monsters you were following as the audience, but their victims.  In this series, you’re sitting on the villains’ shoulders and have nowhere else to go.  There are no other points of view to give yourself a flicker of light and hope.  Probably why I couldn’t binge watch more than two episodes at a time before taking a break.  The later ones especially required that I walk away and defrag my brain before going back.

Personally, I enjoyed this type of story, but I can see how it’s very hard to pull it off. An author can fall into the trap of making the villains cartoonishly compete with each other to be the most evil character.  You need to keep them serious and within their abilities and personalities.  A psychopath with a temper will kill at the slightest provocation, but the more tempered villain will be more elaborate and cruel with his actions.  One can be shifted to the other over time, but you need to have that play out.  So, you can’t really rush the story and depend entirely on shock value.  Characterization is essential here.

So, anybody else like stories with all villains?  I mean, real villains and not the Disney origin ones we see all the time.

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The Growing Influence of Podcasts

Greetings once again. Beem Weeks back with you for another post. This month, we’ll look at podcasting as a marketing tool for writers and indie …

The Growing Influence of Podcasts
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National American Paddlefish Day

Stumbled onto this holiday and thought this was an interesting animal to make a post about.  I don’t touch on fish outside of sharks very often, so I jumped at the chance for a new critter.  So, what is an American paddlefish?

First, it is the last living species of paddlefish after the Chinese paddlefish was officially declared extinct in 2022.  The factors that led to the latter’s extinction is what the former now faces.  They have been overfished for caviar and suffer from habitat destruction.  Yes, they are a target of sports fishing, but that is highly regulated and only allowed in areas with high populations that can safely support the activity.  Still, the global demand for the caviar has creating a poaching issue.  Finally, American paddlefish lose much of their food source to zebra mussels, which is an invasive species.  All of this makes them listed as vulnerable and is why there is a really big conservation and reintroduction program in the USA.

The American paddlefish is a unique species that is found in freshwater.  They eat by swimming around with their mouths open to filter out plankton.  Inside their gills are structures called gill rakers that catch the food for swallowing.  From the pictures below, you will see that they have long ‘noses’ called a rostrum, which makes them oddly shark-like in appearance. They also have cartilage skeletons instead of bone, but they are more closely related to sturgeons than sharks.  As for the rostrum, it isn’t a nose, but part of their skull.

Here are some other facts:

  • They sexually mature later in life with females not spawning anywhere from 7 to 18 years old.
  • Hatchlings are not born with the rostrum fully developed.  It grows over time.
  • They average 40 pounds, but some have been found at 200 pounds.
  • It’s range is mostly the Mississippi, but it was once found throughout the Great Lakes.
  • They can also be found in Montana.
  • Paddlefish ancestors lived here about 125 million years ago.
  • The rostrum has electroreceptors on the tip to help them find plankton.

Time for pictures and videos, so people get a good idea of what they look like.

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Goal Post: Not A Week For Umbrellas

The last week was a bit too crazy for me to get any editing done.  Not for lack of trying since I did spend at least 2 hours overall staring at chapter 7 of Darwin & the Beast Collector. I shouldn’t be upset about this considering I’m writing this at 10 PM on Friday and barely keeping my eyes open.  Just plain exhausting.

Part of the reason is that work was busy and the time afterwards wasn’t much better.  My son had a bunch of tests that he needed help studying for.  Promised to fit some Pokemon Go in there too.  This resulted in ‘me time’ starting at 9:30 and ending around 10, which isn’t much.  Even last weekend felt too rough due to things forcing me to spend most of my time out of the house.  By the time I got home, I was too drained to do more than put on ‘Brooklyn 99’ and tinker with a jigsaw puzzle.  Barely managed to pull those things off too, so it was definitely a week.

One reason for the exhaustion and mayhem was the machinations of other people, which I can’t get into here.  There was one day where a decision was made that threw my schedule off and forced me to run errands in a downpour.  Got really soaked, which gave me a chill for the rest of the week.  I tried to squeeze in some biking too and that may have contributed to my overall fatigue.  On the other hand, it may have helped me get slightly better sleep because it was a healthy way to use energy.

Another issue I had this week was the wind coming back.  I know I’ve talked about this a bunch, but it was really bad.  The previous week was pretty good and the weather was warming up.  It was nice when I went out for a day of Pokemon Go last Saturday until midafternoon.  Heard a howl and was immediately struck by a wind that must have dropped the temp by 15-20 degrees within 30 minutes.  It was so sudden that it actually hurt.  Things warmed up again a few days later, which I fell for and went out to the park after work on Thursday only to be smacked by the wind coming back.  It’s still around until Monday, but I’m scared to drop my guard.

Can’t say I was entirely useless this week.  I managed to get a bunch of May posts scheduled since I didn’t have time for anything bigger.  There was a moment where I figured out a plot point for Darwin & the Beast Collector . . . And promptly forgot about it because I was driving at the time.  Chalking it all up to being one of those weeks where I simply needed to get to the end of it.  Surprised how drained I feel right now too because I haven’t been this tired in a while.  Head is almost swimming as I try to write this up.

Next week isn’t going to be very exciting since there are multiple appointments on top of work and parenting.  I’m going to try to get some editing in, but that won’t be easy given how things are spread out.  Yeah, there’s a Pokemon Go event, but it’s something I can do at my leisure and won’t take all day.  That means I can participate for an hour or two then head home to edit.  It’s probably a good thing that I’m not able to rush into editing since that means I won’t finish it before the end of the school year.  Starting a new book before July would be a test of frustration since my time is so limited.

I guess my head isn’t on straight much either.  Keep having bouts of a sensation that I can’t put my finger on.  Usually triggers old memories like from college, late high school, and even a bit of Florida.  Nothing with people so much as places that come with smells, tastes, and sounds.  I can’t figure out what’s triggering the memories to return or put a finger on how they make me feel.  A few times I’m on the verge of tearing up while other times I’m left relaxed.  As much as I want to call this nostalgia, I don’t think that’s the correct term for this.  All I know is that I drop my guard, usually when falling asleep, and my brain time travels to the past.  Weird and a little disconcerting.  Damn brain never goes back to any of my old story ideas too.

So, what are the goals of the week?

  1. Edit more of Darwin & the Beast Collector.
  2. Get better sleep.
  3. Help son with studying.
  4. Start new jigsaw puzzle.
  5. Take advantage of the warmer weather.
  6. Do more May posts when possible.
  7. Drive carefully.
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Well It Works For Me

(We’ve all heard this one.)

This is the way to win
It always works for me
No other path
No other act
Shall lead to victory
It is genius
Look at my proof
View my success
Listen to my tale
Know that this is truth
It will not fail
It failed?
Well
It always works for me
You must have done it wrong

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Serialized Fiction Today

Hi, Gang. 👋🏼 Craig with you once more. This is more of a research and debate posting than my usual fare. It all started one Sunday when Old What’s …

Serialized Fiction Today
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Poetry Day- Orbs of Mind and Color

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(A poem about eyes.  Simple and fun.)

Vivid blues to tempt our heart

Deepest browns to calm our soul

Brilliant greens to enchant our mind

Noble gray to ensnare our sight

Soft hazel to warm our spirit

Rarest amber to grab our curiosity

Our eyes are key to taking hold

Growing deeper with each year

Wisdom shines behind their hues

Purest orbs that twinkle in elation

Or weep when sadness hits

They will see it all until they close

And take their final blink

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I Never Made Such Mistakes

(Poem #2 and I guess I should make it clear that the inspiration is seeing how some people respond to posts and comments.  I’m sure we’ll all guilty of at least one of these at some point in our lives.  Though, arguing that could result in you falling to this one.  :D)

I am clearly perfection
The mistakes of others
Are beyond my ability
Your messes
Will never touch my life
For I am careful
And cautious
So that I act
With untainted excellence
To err is human
Is a ridiculous phrase
Unless I
Am above humanity
A superior species
Who never strays
From beautiful
Unsullied
Perfection

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A Guest of Fresh Ink Group on YouTube Tonight

I’m very pleased to have been invited for a video chat with Stephen Geez and Beem Weeks tonight at 8:00 PM Eastern time. We will be discussing Detour…

A Guest of Fresh Ink Group on YouTube Tonight
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Honey, the Squirrel #WriteTip

While watching my favorite squirrel forage, it occurred to me that she approaches the forest like a novel, working from the beginning in front of my …

Honey, the Squirrel #WriteTip
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