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Kenshin vs Shishio
Quest of the Brokenhearted has a lot of battles because a major plot point is the Lacarsis tournament. This means I had to make the action scenes a central focus of at least one scene per non-opener/closure chapter. I couldn’t go with a basic ‘stab, block, stab, parry, ding ding WINNER’ thing either. My fight scenes needed to be wild and choreographed to show the magnitude and weight of them. When people read these, I want them to picture the battle as if it’s on a screen in front of them.
Thankfully, being a Present Tense author helps out here because I’m writing things as they happen. Instead of saying ‘Kira struck a blow’, I would say ‘Kira strikes a blow’ and that creates a different sensation. With a past event, you can stop right after the action if you want. At least to me, there’s a greater sense of urgency in present tense, which means that strike has to either hit or miss. Then, you need a counter or a follow-up. Uh-oh, a mistake was made and the momentum is going in the other direction. Kira has to get some space and is nursing a bruised rib. Where’s an opening for a strike? I didn’t know that character could that. The terrain is falling apart and there’s no time to gracefully get out of the way, so you gotta move quickly. There’s that opening and the battle is done.
I’ll fully admit that Present Tense and battles aren’t for everyone, but they’ve become one of my strengths. In fact, they tend to be what I get the most compliments about. Also the most complaints because it comes off as ‘telling’. My opinion there is the alternative is to make the battles rather bland and not describe a lot of the action. I know that’s not uncommon in fantasy books where the fights seem to happen in the blink of an eye and are bookended by either dialogue or exposition. Probably to my own detriment, I don’t enjoy writing that way. As I’ve been told a few times, my books read like action movies and that’s where I really tried to go with Quest of the Brokenhearted.
Now, I’m not saying you can’t do this in Past Tense, but I don’t normally see it done in that style. Maybe I’m just not looking at the right books, which is fair. Still, battle scenes tend to be more of a movie/TV staple because you want the audience to feel like they’re in the moment. Once you get a reader’s adrenaline pumping, you have them hooked until the final blow. This also means you need to have some of your battles end up being really wild and possibly messy. You can’t start off at the extreme because you need to either increase the oomph-factor or keep it steady. The hard part about keeping it steady is that it can create a blandness or even a numbness to the events.
Another way to increase the wildness of various battles isn’t so much make them bigger, but making them different. Every fight that Kira has involves a different champion and battlefield. That means there’s always a different trick she needs to figure out in order to win. It could be using a new relic the right way, finding a weak point, or doing the unexpected, but she can’t win the same way twice. That brings her back to an underdog status at the beginning of every fight, especially since she never knows who or what she will be facing. The wildness depends a lot on the unknown here, which is another reason I flew by the seat of my pants with the fight scenes. I knew how they started and sort of how they ended, but everything in the middle was on the spot. Took a few editing runs to clear things up to make sure the moves flowed and made sense.
I know this isn’t everyone’s cup of tea, so I might be talking to a small audience here. What do you look for in fictional battles?
#Meetacharacter
A Day in the Life of Dorgo the Dowser.
*Who are you?
Why, I’m Dorgo Mikawber, otherwise known as Dorgo the Dowser. I earned that nickname because of the dowsing rod that I carry with me all the time. This is a rather unique and specialized dowsing rod, because it can detect the ectoplasmic residue of any supernatural presence or demonic entity, and sense the vestiges of any form of magical power used in the commission of crimes, crimes I’m often hired or asked to solve. Without my dowsing rod, I’d be out of work and forced to find other means of employment. I mean, what else can I do? I’ve been a mercenary, a body guard, and even a smuggler. I’m not qualified for much else. Can you imagine me being an innkeeper or a blacksmith? I can’t. And my luck is often so bad when it comes…
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First of all:
There we go, so now let’s get on to the update. I really do think my physical and mental deterioration is getting more attention here than me being an author. At the very least, I’ve proven that pity sales aren’t a thing. Not that I would want that. Just to get this subject out of the way:
Let’s get to the writing part of things because that’s what the blog is about. At least for the most part. I’m almost done with Raven’s Wrath, which will be the final installment of the Dawn Addison saga. That’s the horror story I post throughout October that more people came out saying they weren’t into over the last two weeks than I expected. Well, I’ve come this far and it’s the last time, so bear (bare?) with me for one more year. I’m still trying to decide on if I’ll do the Monster Maker stuff too. It won’t be that long after War of Nytefall: Lost debuts, so I kind of want to do something special that incorporates the vampire thing. This is where things can go haywire. Character interviews get a lot of cheers, but very little interactions. I can only post so many teasers, especially with the story being done every day. Last year, I saw that people left the blog if it was only the story, so I need to keep something going on Mondays and Fridays. Thursday should still have the anxiety stuff and Saturday has these posts. Maybe I can hand the Monster Maker thing off to Lost and have her host it once a week? I could do a poll of Nytefall characters and try a Monday interview since I’m a glutton for punishment. Feel free to voice opinions in the comments here.
I haven’t touched any outlines or the superhero stuff like I’d expected since my time has been really limited. My son is only away for 3 hours a few days a week and he’s determined to do stuff with me. I don’t mind, but it means I have less time than I expected. August will be less because camp ends next week. So, I’m aiming to edit Derailing Bedlam and War of Nytefall: Rivalry using nights and weekends if I have time. It’ll be a trickle of progress, especially with his birthday next weekend. The party is bigger than we expected, so I’m going to focusing on that this week. Maybe I’ll do the future idea stuff at times when he’s willing to play with Legos and only wants me in the room. He can entertain himself, but he definitely likes having an audience. I can try to make sense of the superhero stuff at least . . . Okay, it’s been 18 years since I started that idea, but it has to congeal at some point. Was I putting it back into Windemere or keeping Super Earth? Uh-oh.
Side-note: I just dusted that dresser! How is it dusty again?
I really don’t know what else to talk about here since the week was all writing and parenting. My son got a lot of praise from his gymnastics teacher, which caught me by surprise. He’s usually easily distracted there, but he’s been very focused and his handstands are improving by the day. Just need to remind him to NOT do them when he’s eating. A possible disaster that loomed over his birthday party has been dispelled, but I still need to figure out how to do pizzas for 40-50 people. The following week will probably be filled with Legos and preparing for a family trip. So, I’m already thinking ahead to that. Those are the big events, I guess. Again, I notice it’s not really writing related. At least I don’t go on about sales and promotions, which see to be beyond my control (and wallet) these days.
Only other thing I’m doing is reading manga because I can stop to answer questions in the middle of a page. I’m working through ‘Bleach’, which has a lot of stretched out fight scenes. I think Dragonball Z the anime was bad. How can all these people be using swords and rarely cut flesh? At least the characters are fun . . . Although, my favorite seems to be ignored. I’m switching between this an ‘Yu Yu Hakusho’, but that’s only 19 volumes. So, I’m going to have to figure out another manga to act as my secondary. That way I don’t get bored and just go through the motions like what was starting to happen with ‘One Piece’.
Did I lose everyone on that last paragraph? Okay then lets get to goals:
I happened upon a wonderful post today by Mindy McGinnis on her blog. Check it out here. She gives a list of six ways to support your favorite authors. We authors will thank you for all that you can do to spread word of our books. WE NEED YOU READERS!
I am sending out a call to all my fellow authors to come forward for guest posts or guest interviews on my blog. I would love to show you some love and support by helping you spread word about you and your books. Come on down!
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Universal Monsters
Ogre- Do we have any of the monsters above in this chat room?
Vampire- I’m here, but I’m the romantic kind.
Werewolf- Same.
Dragon- That would be a no then. This is exactly the problem I was talking about last time.
Gremlin- At least the humanization process hasn’t reached all of us. Then again, we’re typically used as fodder for heroes these days.
Zombie- Am I supposed to be slow, fast, smart, dumb, infectious, talkative, or frozen? I don’t know what I am any more!
Demon- I believe we’re overreacting. Our kind have been changed from culture to culture since before the times of fiction writing. Dragon, you’ve been a fire-breathing lizard with wings and a wingless protector over the years. Mermaids have been beautiful and murderous. These changes happen.
Werewolf- I miss eating people.
Vampire- My cousin can still drink blood from humans. Though, he says some strong type that’s immune to sunlight turned up recently.
Fairy- At least you guys know you’re monsters. My kind never knows if they’re going to be good or evil until we appear on the page. The poor Leprechaun has been in therapy for decades.
Dragon- And we’re back to grievances instead of answers. What do you think, Mummy?
Mummy- I’m a terrible person to ask. My abilities have been at the whim of CGI for years and nobody remembers me for anything else. Zombies, skeletons, and ghosts always beat me out for the undead roles.
Ogre- You should get a better agent. I did after ogre was becoming too kiddie. I’ve gotten into a few fantasy stories since then. People still get me mixed up with orcs and trolls though.
Demon- I think that’s part of the problem. Many of us have become interchangeable with those who are closest to us. Authors will grab you, toss you into a scene, and give very little thought to your history. If I asked you to describe a demon then I’m sure you’d all come up with the same picture. Yet, my kind include such variety that is barely used outside of obscure works.
Gremlin- Fans can make things difficult too. An author tries to use a classic version of us and it can backfire. They’re either called a copycat of the current trend or told that they need to get with the times. Monsters are surprisingly criticized too.
Dragon- What about the science arguments? I can barely exist thanks to people pointing out that I make no sense. In a world of people hurling fireballs and making speeches with mortal wounds, it’s the giant flying lizard that’s unbelievable.
Giant- Preach on, scaly brother.
Vampire- On the plus side, we’re still finding work. Things would be a lot worse if people decided that stories shouldn’t have monsters any more. I’m always terrified that all of us will be cast aside because nobody wants us. Can you imagine that?
Demon- Sadly, I can, but there will always be a group in society that needs us. It could be video games, movies, TV shows, or books. You’ll always have at least one author who thinks stories need some monsters.
Ogre- Unless they replace all of us with aliens.
Werewolf- Wait, we don’t count them as monsters?
Gremlin- Not since they made their own guild and stiffed us on their last month of dues.
Werewolf- Oh . . . Screw those guys then.
Hello to all the Story Empire readers and thanks for visiting us once again today. I’m tasked with our Friday writing question this month so I’ve come up with one you may not consider. How big is your audience?
Most of the time we ask the question, who is your audience? While this is a very good question to consider regarding the demographics of readers that you are targeting and one you should keep foremost in your mind, how big your audience is will always be very important. This seems like a simple question and answer, however it’s one that has a deeper meaning, covering how many genres in which you write and much more.
How big your audience is does not depend on the size of your email list. Instead, it depends on how many total copies you have sold of your highest selling book. Audience size also applies…
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This week’s author interview features Debra Purdy Kong. She brings her practical experience on the periphery of law enforcement and her degree in criminology to her writing. Her interview is enjoyable and revealing. I hope you enjoy this latest interview in the series.
On a side note, though the initial response was gratifying, I find myself running out of interview subjects by mid August. If you haven’t been interviewed, or even if you have and you have a new release coming out, please feel free to contact me to be interviewed at don@donmassenzio.com. I will send you the information and get you scheduled.
You can check out the 210 author interviews I’ve conducted thus far on my Author Directory page.
Now, let’s meet Debra Purdy Kong.
Do you try more to be original or to deliver to readers what they want?
It’s a combination of both for me. I try…
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