Author Growth

Hello, SEers, and welcome to another Mae Day on Story Empire. Let’s chat writer growth.  Last winter, a local newspaper featured me in an article. I …

Author Growth
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The Coatimundi: Arboreally Adorable

What is a coati or coatimundi?

This omnivore is found in North, Central, and South America.  They’re a relative of the raccoon, but they’re diurnal (daytime) instead of nocturnal.  You’ll see in the pictures that they have long tails, which are used for balance.  This is why somebody mistake them for a type of lemur.  They are very similar since they’re arboreal, which is a species that mostly live in trees.  While coatis hunt on the ground, they sleep, mate, and birth children in the canopy.  This lifestyle is helped by them having double-jointed ankles, which can rotate 180 degrees.  This allows them to easily climb down headfirst.

It’s unclear how threatened the coatis are.  All 4 species have to contend with deforestation, hunting, and getting attacked by domestic animals.  Yet, it’s difficult to get an exact idea of their population.  The two mountain species are listed as threatened/endangered though.  A problem is that there aren’t any solid populations to use for study.  They’ve been found to be highly adaptable too, which adds to the problem of locking down a clear picture.  So, it seems they’re listed as endangered on the belief that we underestimate the influence of the issues.

Let’s get to the pictures and videos.  Coatis are cool, but I’m finding they’re better to see than read about.

White-Nosed Coati

South American Coati

Easter Mountain Coati

Western Mountain Coati

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Goal Post: The Week of Recovery and Progress

Well, another week of summer is done.  Means I’m inching closer to the school year, which is promising to be exciting.  I think.  I’ll get a better idea this week when I go in for two days to get some special training.  Not sure how professional I should dress because I don’t know the air conditioning situation.  That’s become a really important thing to consider as I found out this week.  More on that later.

The big event was that my son had his 13th birthday.  I was nervous about it, but it ran very smoothly.  The kids enjoyed the video game truck and then enjoyed playing around while we handed out pizza.  There were some ‘no shows’ and surprise appearances, so things kind of evened out.  Only a few parents stayed, so I was left with 6 out of 10 pizzas once the party was done.  Two friends were given full pizzas as extra goodie bags, but it still left me with another entire fridge shelf of slices.  Made my way through this as best as I could.  Got half a cake left too.  That came out really well:

The day after the party, we went to see ‘DC League of Super Pets’.  It was me, my son, and his godfather, who made it for the weekend.  The movie was a lot of fun and had us laughing a decent amount.  They gave out free comics to the kids.  My son’s first one fell into the reclining seat though.  We got another and then it was back home for lunch and more video games.  It was a great and exciting weekend that I knew I was going to pay for later.

Surprisingly, later wasn’t Monday.  I was doing okay for the first three days of the week and got a good amount of Darwin & the Avenging Elf done.  I’m currently on Chapter 4 of 16 and I should be able to get up to chapter 7 before I go in for training.  I’ll be happy if I can get up to chapter 8 before the weekend.  That would leave me with 11 days needed to finish, but that’s only if I can do 3 sections per day.  At best, I’m going to come up 3 days short by the time the school year starts.  Probably going to be closer to 5 because I want to hang out with a few friends.  That has me a little upset.

The big reason I’m upset is because I gave myself a 10 day cushion at the beginning of the summer.  What went wrong? Fucking LONG COVID put me on my back far too many times.  The training days, special events, and days given up to hang out with friends would have been nothing.  The thing that killed me was that I had so many days where I simply couldn’t function.  For example, I woke up Thursday feeling like my head was encased in Jello and barely able to move.  I had to sleep the morning away and got a little writing done in the afternoon before I went to get my son.  I lost nearly an entire week back in July like this.  I learned this week that hot weather makes long covid worse and we have a friggin’ heatwave here.  This is why I sometimes wonder if the universe has it out for me or at least wants me to quit writing.

Speaking of Darwin & the Avenging Elf, it’s difficult to write even when I’m not suffering from brain fog.  Darwin’s newest ally isn’t the brightest and he’s more interested in charging in first.  Yet, the story calls for them to be tricky.  So, I had to make the guy a little smarter or at least have a reason to behave.  Without going into details, he’s a vengeance-fueled berserker and Darwin has promised to help him get his revenge on a warlord. I should be getting to the actual infiltration of the enemy organization tomorrow while today is the last part of bungling preparations.  Still, Darwin and this guy aren’t supposed to be able to make intricate plans.  Yet, I need them to make progress enough before things go wrong.  It’s a pretty frustrating headache at times.  Maybe I’m only saying this because the last section I wrote didn’t always feel right, but I needed it to explain why they are about to do something stupid.

Television has been limited.  Writing this Friday night before I watch ‘Prey’ on Hulu.  I’m curious to see how that movie is because I’ve heard good things.  Beyond that, I watched an anime called ‘Jobless Reincarnation’.  The story is that perverted jerk (who it’s revealed was bullied into isolation) dies and is reborn in a world of magic with all of his previous memories intact.  It was an interesting story where several characters were despicable, but would try to be better at times.  The main character kept having an inner monologue that would be perverted, which threw me off.  I can see why this is a controversial anime as well as people saying that they ‘loved the story, but would never recommend it’.  There really was a good story and 3-dimensional characters in there.  Just many of those dimensions were morally wrong or questionable.  I heard the creator wanted to get people to think about the concept of redemption by showing these characters be terrible, suffer, and try to be better.  At least it’s done and I’m rewatching ‘That Time I was Reincarnated as a Slime’.

So, goals of the week:

  1. Write as much of Darwin & the Avenging Elf as possible.  Hoping to finish 4 chapters before next weekend.
  2. Training for 2 days.
  3. Son’s art show at the end of the week.
  4. Time with him whenever I can get it.
  5. Rest.
  6. Try to do biking a few times.
  7. Prepare stuff for the one week I get my son this summer.
  8. Video games?
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When the Character Doesn’t Want to Go Back

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Author– As their swords collide and the battle reaches its climax . .. FLASHBACK!

Hero–  Wait!  What are you doing?

Author–  Perfect time for a flashback.

Hero–  No!  It’s a terrible time.

Villain–  Let’s hear him out.

Hero–  Shut up.  You’re about to lose, so you want a break.  Look, buddy, I have my sword inches from this guy’s face.  His knees are buckling.  I see no reason to jump into the past at this point.  What could you possibly show the audience that would change this?

Author–  Rapid fire scenes of you two as kids growing up together.

Hero–  But we didn’t grow up together.

Villain–  Or did we?

Hero–  No, we didn’t.  You’re an evil warlord who was born two hundred years ago and I’m a chosen farm boy who can’t even legally drink in the real world.

Author–  It’s more about how your lives would have been different if you had grown up together.  You probably wouldn’t be in this situation at all.

Villain– Then, it’s not a flashback.  Those are real events that connect to the present.  Can I sit down while we-

Hero–  Don’t you dare rest your aching muscles.  I worked hard to weaken you and you’re going to stay that way.  Try again, author.

Author– Hmmm . . . It will show how your father was killed by the villain in the same manner.

Hero– My father is dead!?

Villain–  Apparently . . . Do I have a reason for doing that?  I assume the old man is just a farmer.

Author–  He was at the time, but he was a great warrior who could be a threat before he retired.  In fact, he ran away with your daughter.  They married and had a kid.  She died in childbirth.

Hero–  My mother is dead now!?

Villain–  This brat is my grandchild?  I’m a rare breed of elf and this kid is human.  He has no elven features even though he would have to be a half-elf.  Also, didn’t you establish that I had a habit of sacrificing my children to demons for dark favors and to make sure they never try to overthrow me?

Author  You missed one.

Villain–  I guess that makes sense.  Is all of this going to be in the flashback?

Hero–  Am I an orphan?  I mean, my parents saw me off on this adventure.  That was a month ago and this guy hasn’t left his castle since.  That explains the smell.

Villain–  For the last time, that’s the moat.  It hasn’t been cleaned since the monster ate the last workman.  Nobody wants the job now.

Author–  Well, I want to do a flashback and I’m in charge.  So, we’re flashing back to something.

Hero–  Couldn’t it show this guy’s life of evil and selfishness running up to this point?  It isn’t a true flashback, but it could be like his life flashing before his eyes.

Author–  That only works if he’s going to die and that doesn’t happen.

Hero–  What!?

Villain– HA!

Hero–  Just end the story.

Author–  No.  I’m going to work on another one.  You two can stay like that until you remember who’s in charge.  Find some characters who respect my creativity.

Hero–  But my shoulders are cramping.

Author–  Don’t care!  La La La La La!

Villain– Told you we shouldn’t have let him know we were sentient.

Hero– Shut up.

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Indie Versus Traditional: The Author’s Dilemma

Greetings, SE’ers! Beem Weeks here with you again. Today, I am going to share my thoughts on indie publishing versus traditional. What would make a …

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Poetry Day: Boozing with Fiction

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(This was a fun one I put together long ago.  Wanted to see how many types of alcohol I could use before I ran out of steam.)

Drink tequila with a pixie

To say no would be quite risky

Chug vodka with a gnome

You may never find your home

Down jager with a wight

It will help to stop your fright

Slurp whiskey with a dragon

Who will grant you his best flagon

Guzzle beer with a troll

Enough will pay his toll

Swallow absinthe with an elf

You might trick him from his wealth

Gulp scotch with an imp

Prepare to wake up with a limp

Pound moonshine with the reaper

He is now your keeper

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7 Tips to Using Flashbacks and Not Lose the Audience

Aquaman

Flashbacks are popular.  They’re also misused all the time because people think they can be dropped in whenever they want.  It’s like having a smooth ride and then throwing a cardboard box in the way.  Sure, you might run it over, drag it for a while, and get back on track.  You could also get it stuck in the undercarriage and never recover because damage has been done.  Fine, I stretched for that analogy.  Let’s get to the tips.

  1. Use flashbacks sparingly!  If every third scene is a flashback then you have to rethink the overall story.  This means that you’re spending nearly as much time in the past as you are in the present.  Flashbacks are supposed to be informative and to help reveal things without info dumping.  They shouldn’t be repeatedly sucking the air out of the main story.  Think of using only one flashback unless you build jumping back and forth into the narrative.
  2. Flashbacks that happen after the action has started need a trigger.  You have to justify stepping away from the main story and stepping into the past.  Without leading into the flashback, you create an abrupt transition that can jerk the reader out of the experience.  They’ll be confused on what is going on and might put the book away for a while.  I’ve read a few stories that did this and wondered if I had bought a copy that was missing pages or the publisher accidentally put pieces of another volume of the series in the book by accident.  So, have a trigger such as a question or statement.  You can even have a scene end on a cliffhanger that will lead into the flashback.
  3. Depending on how far back you’re going, the characters in the flashback need to look different than their modern day versions.  If it’s only a few months, you won’t have to worry much.  Years means they will certainly be younger unless they’re some kind of immortal.  This isn’t just for physical description.  Mental and emotional growth may need to be pushed back to have them act more their age.
  4. There has to be a reason for this to happen.  A flashback needs to reveal, foreshadow, or explain an event connected to the main plot.  Doing it simply to show a cool scene that has no real purpose won’t get you very far.  Once the readers come back to the main plot, there is a high chance that they’ll notice you threw some pointless filler at their face.  Have the focal point be informative because that’s the key reason to have a flashback.
  5. Never do a flashback in the middle of a scene with no warning.  This sounds like an obvious tip, but it’s apparently done at times.
  6. Be careful introducing new characters in flashbacks, especially if they haven’t appeared in the present.  They can be supporting characters with no impact, but they can’t be heavy hitters without an explanation as to their absence.  If they aren’t supposed to be around in the present then you need to explain why.  It doesn’t even have to be killing them off.  They could have left between the flashback and present, which can be shown in a single sentence.  It also helps to have these past influencers mentioned prior to the flashback.  Otherwise, you have readers wondering why this important person is missing.
  7. If a flashback is so good that you want it to be more then try to fight the urge to extend.  Instead, put information on the side and consider writing a short story or novella about that time period.  Many side stories have been written because the author and/or readers found a view of the past intriguing.
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Characters and Diversity. Part 3 – PHYSICAL ABILITY

Hello SE friends, Gwen with you today, and together we will venture further into the theme of diversity. In June, I wrote about including racial …

Characters and Diversity. Part 3 – PHYSICAL ABILITY
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Teaser Tuesday: Nocturnal Chat

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I really liked this exchange between Darwin and one of his friends.  It was kind of sweet since they were just getting to understand each other.  You get a good sense of how Darwin thinks too.

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What Writers Should Do During the Dead Month – by Erica Verrillo…

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August is affectionately known as the “dead month” in the publishing industry. During August all work comes to a virtual halt as editors, agents, proofreaders, typesetters, CEOs, dog walkers and everyone else on the planet takes a much-needed vacation.

So, all you aspiring authors, don’t submit your manuscript to publishers, and don’t send your queries to agents in the month of August. (To be fair, the two weeks up to and after the Frankfurt Book Fair in October are not so great either, and mid-November to mid-January is also a bad time, but for different reasons.)

If your manuscript is ready to go, you have several choices of what to do during the dead month. You can head to the beach, you can write your next novel …

… or

You can…

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