Revisiting Origins: Clyde

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(Note: The core cast of War of Nytefall had their origin posts done prior to the release of the first book.  So, it’s kind of interesting to see how I pitched them.)

War of Nytefall is very much about Clyde because he was the first character I came up with and the adventure is based around him.  He is a vampiric thief whose execution by the Followers of the Sun is interrupted by the Great Cataclysm.  This event is when all all of the magic of Windemere went berserk and the entire world changed.  Clyde is one of the results of this event with him becoming the first Dawn Fang.  He is faster and stronger than other vampires, can retain his powers in the sun (‘true’ vampires require a night cloak when operating in the day), and other changes that you’ll learn about when you read the stories.  Because his evolution is a core part of the story, I won’t go much into his powers and secrets.

Like most of the characters, Clyde started as a Vampire: The Masquerade character.  He wasn’t my first one.  That would be a nameless one who was an artist that didn’t last long in a combat-oriented game.  Clyde was the first one I put effort into creating much like Luke Callindor with D&D.  Unfortunately, I still thought vampires should be monsters, so my test game went a little . . . there was the chainsaw . . . a watermelon . . . department store fire . . . car chase . . . lots of bodies . . . Let’s just say the guy running the game told me after the first session that I had to calm Clyde down or he’d take away all of my humanity points.  As it was, we had to drop it to 4 and that’s out of 10.  Clyde would go on to be become a violent force of nature due to my really lucky rolls and him turning out to be the only vampire in a group of Mages.  I didn’t want to switch over because I’d worked so hard, which almost made things difficult.

The solution to keeping him in the game was to make Clyde immune to the sun, which is unheard of in this system.  It came with a price too.  Vampires wanted to eat him because they thought he held the key to daywalking.  Werewolves thought he stole an artifact.  Mages considered him a walking exposure of the magic world, especially when he decided to become a Hollywood action star between adventures.  Men in Black wanted him for experiments.  A demon got pissed about being killed and banished by Clyde for 300 years, so that was going to be a problem.  In his defense there, it had one Hit Point left at Clyde hit it and then everyone else in the group missed.  Believe the finally blow was a halfhearted smack and a lot of cursing.  Still, all of this combined to create the book version that you’ll meet in a few months.

One of the biggest challenges with Clyde in the book is that he’s a ‘hero’ who is normally unstoppable.  He’s fairly similar to early version Wolverine in that he’s loyal to friends, but prone to bestial rampages when angry.  Though, Clyde might do this when bored too unless Mab convinces him to go on a heist.  Because of his power level, it’s hard to call him an underdog in a fight.  So, I had to give him other weaknesses.  This includes a strong desire for a challenge, which leads him to making the wrong decision on purpose.  He’ll let an enemy with potential go in the hopes of getting a better fight or even reduce his strength to their level in order to draw things out.

Perhaps the biggest flaw is that he possesses a powerful blood lust that is always on the verge of taking over.  One of the themes for Clyde is his loyalty and attachment to his gang, who help to keep him sane.  It’s a strange dynamic that I’m struggling to build where he’s a monstrous outsider even among the Dawn Fangs at times.  Yet, he needs social interactions and ‘human’ connections to retain what little humanity he has left.  It’s an issue he’s aware of too, so his arrogance will be covering his worries at points.  My hope is to use the inner turmoil to make him a multi-faceted character regardless of his physical superiority.

I will finish with a small story:  I couldn’t put this into the series, but there is a nod to a game incident.  Not going to say what it is, but I will tell the tale.  During the Vampire/Mage game, Clyde made friends with a child mage who he kept convincing to enchant his chainsaw.  It had unlimited fuel, fire blade, hurts ghosts, could be summoned, and fit in his pocket, which made it an insane artifact.  The guy running the game wanted to stop all the enchanting going on, so he was going to kill off or at least badly hurt the Mage character.  He first step was to make sure Clyde had no weapons to stop the M.I.B. agent sneaking up on the kid.  I still had a move though, so I asked what I had.  The only object in my pockets was an ear of corn I snatched as the characters drove through rural Kansas.  Well, Clyde pumped up his strength, rushed ahead, grabbed the man, and plunged the corn into his windpipe.  It was too glorious and unexpected for anybody to undo it, so the move stayed.  We still joke about it too because that scene seemed to cement Clyde’s personality.  Not declaring he’s a vampire in the middle of a werewolf holy site, killing the demon, punching a ghoul so hard that his arm with through its head, and other cool/comedic scenes.  The ear of corn is definitely an RPG highlight with him and a fun inside joke for something that shows up at times in the book.

2023 Addition–  Wow.  As I said, I wrote this origin piece on Clyde before Loyalty ever got released.  He hadn’t gone through any of what I had planned for him, so I was still seeing him as the unbreakable, monstrous hero of the Dawn Fangs.  My divorce was also exactly 10 months away, so his relationship with Mab was unchallenged too.  More on that next week when I revisit her origin post.  Anyway, Clyde certainly came out differently in that he had more doubts throughout the series.  He was questioning his humanity, his path, his dream, and his power at several points.  It wasn’t possible to have him be extremely doubtful due to him always being confident as well.  So, I ended up giving him private moments of weakness instead of public ones.  The monster showed fear and vulnerability when nobody was really looking.  If I had to change anything about what I did, I probably would have leaned into this part of his personality a bit more.  Not enough to alter the story and his actions, but to expose more of his humanity.  Then again, I was never entirely sure if Clyde retained a lot of that or was a monster faking it for the sake of his more human friends.

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Monster Month: Akhlut

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Starting off October’s monster theme, I’m going with a creature from the frozen north.  It is part of Inuit mythology and not the easiest thing to find a picture of.  To be honest, I got all of these monsters off a ‘Mythical World’ puzzle I did earlier in the year.  So, I went with as many obscure ones as I could, which made pictures and information difficult.  Still, I like a challenge and have rambled enough.

The Akhlut is from Inuit mythology and is considered a rather vicious beast.  As you can see, it has orca traits as well as four legs.  This is because this aggressive spirit takes the form of an orca, but transforms into a wolf in order to hunt on land.  You can tell one has been around when you find wolf tracks leading to or from the icy water.  This is pretty much it as far as physical traits since it is fairly elusive.  There are times where it is described as a hybrid of a wolf and orca like above.

There are many origin myths for the Akhlut, but this is the one I found most often.  A man became obsessed with the sea and wanted to stay there.  It reached the point where the people of his village could not recognize him, so they made him leave.  He ‘hungered for revenge’ and joined a pack of wolves to survive.  He may have worked with the wolves to attack villagers, but that wasn’t consistent.  Anyway, his love of the ocean returned after he fed and he dove in to transform into an orca.  Now, he remains in that form, but returns to land and becomes a wolf whenever he is ‘hungry for revenge’.  It does appear that this eventually evolved into hungry for food over time.

I tried to find more lore, but all I found was a possible origin.  Arctic wolves are able to swim in icy waters, which is why one would find tracks leading to and from the water’s edge.  Fishermen were attacked by mysterious creatures either while on their boat or resting near the shore.  Finding the tracks, people would assume it was a kind of wolf that also lived in the water.  Folklore has a lot of shape-shifting, so that led to the aggressive orca being combined with the wolf.

Another fact that can explain the Akhlut is that wolves and orca both hunt in packs.  They are also seen as dangerous, vengeful, and aggressive.  Orca are even called the wolves of the sea.  So, this could have led to the Inuit thinking that there is a mystical connection between them.  I mean, that does make some sense, especially if you find tracks that head into the water and see orca nearby.  This happening after an attack or disappearance would cement the possibility.

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When Is The End?

Greetings, SE’ers! Beem Weeks here with you again. Today, I’m going to talk about writing the end of the story. Writing entertaining stories and …

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The Fabulous Foxes of Earth Part 1

There are 24 living species of foxes on this planet.  This is why I wasn’t sure where to go with them in regards to a nature post.  I knew I had to since people love foxes.  Still, it’s a lot to do factoids about all of them even if I split them apart.  Instead, I’m just going to post pictures with their conservation status.  Foxes that are endangered are in this state due to poaching, loss of habitat, invasive species, climate change, diseases, and use of some pesticides.  Some are also in trouble because their populations are so small that their gene pool is limited, which is similar to cheetahs.  Not a good situation.

I’m going to start with the smaller genus groups of Canis, Cerdocyon, Otocyon, and Urocyon.  That’s because the other two have 6 and 12 members.  Now, let’s get to the foxes:

Canis

Ethiopian Wolf- Endangered (Also called Simien Jackal or Simien Fox)

Cerdocyon

Crab-Eating Fox- Least Concern (Also called Forest Fox, Wood Fox, Bushdog, or Maikong)

Otocyon

Bat-Eared Fox- Least Concern (Ears are designed for thermoregulation.)

Urocyon

Gray Fox- Least Concern

Island Fox- Near Threatened (Upgraded from Endangered due to breeding programs.)

Cozumel Fox- Critically Endangered or Extinct (Not seen since 2001 and considered a dwarf version of Island Fox instead of its own species.)

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Goal Post: Not a Day Without Drama

Drama might be an exaggeration.  Yet, every day since last Saturday has had something big going on.  That’s why I feel like I’ve lived a month within the last 7 days.  Doesn’t help that the looming ‘life event’ is set to make next week another adventure.  Hopefully, it’s one that doesn’t last too long because it will be painful.  Let’s move on to something I can talk about.

I’ll just flat out say that I couldn’t get anywhere near my book.  I had hoped to work on it a few nights, but things kept happening.  Haven’t been sleeping well too.  All of that resulted in me crawling into bed earlier than usual.  I didn’t fall asleep, but I was lying in bed hoping I would.  Not much exercising beyond Pokemon Go outings too.  I need to make sure I bike more before I start putting weight back on.

Last Saturday was my niece’s 3rd birthday party.  Rain had us move things indoors, but the kids still had a blast.  It was fun watching them play while I ate more of the pretzels than I should have.  Made it home in time to do some Pokemon Go and get caught in the rain.  This would be a running gag for Sunday too.  The weather kept letting up for a while and I’d keep going outside thinking it was over.  Then, it would do that mist thing that’s annoying and gradually drenches you.  Not fun.

Monday was Yom Kippur, so I didn’t eat until the sun went down.  ‘Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time’ was my distraction game this year.  Didn’t get as far as I’d hoped, but I haven’t played it since 2002-ish.  Still, it got me to dinner, which was a foot long Subway meatball sub.  Ate it a bit too fast, so my stomach was giving me trouble.  Didn’t help that I had a 3 scoop sundae later, which meant I didn’t sleep well.  This set the stage for the busy work week . . . That’s not important.

My son had a minor health scare, which was over fairly quickly.  It still had an effect and left both of us nervous.  It caused some issues with mornings too.  Reward systems weren’t working and things got tense leading into a day with 1 quiz, 2 tests, and a take-home quiz.  I think we pulled out a victory in the end.  Hard to tell before all of the grades come in, but we’re all twitchy about next week.  Another stressor was him starting clubs, which threw off my schedule and gave us less time for homework.  It’ll take a week or so for us to settle into a routine.

Health-wise, I got my sleep test results and they’re what I expected.  I have to wait for insurance to weight in before I get my CPAP machine, which could take 2-3 weeks.  I still love how list of advice always includes ‘lose weight’ as if that’s so easy.  Sleep apnea makes it difficult to lose weight due to lack of energy and an increase in insulin resistance.  So, I might need the machine before I start making real progress.  The scary part is that one of my breathing episodes (shallow, faint breathing) lasted for nearly a minute.  Other times I stopped breathing for 10 seconds.  At least that’s how the information appeared.  I’m definitely counting down the days until I get this thing and then get used to sleeping with a mask/hose connected to me.

This coming week should be easier, but the ‘life event’ will be the real mood setter.  I’m hoping to get at least a chapter of Darwin & the Beast Collector done this weekend.  I get my flu shot, so we’ll see if that whups my butt.  I might have some writing time on Monday too.  If I’m lucky, I can get two chapters done.  Once the week really kicks off, I’ll be focusing more on preparing December blog posts to clear that docket.  Pokemon Go outings will be done as well because it won’t be raining or snowing on the days we typically go out.  It will all end with a 3-day weekend, which I have my son for and already have an exciting outing planned.  October has special ‘after hours’ events at the Bronx Zoo and I finally managed to get tickets to one of them.  Going to be a blast.

I can’t really think of anything else going on.  Life is just getting from one day to the next, but I’m starting to see light at the end of the tunnel.  At least with the health stuff and maybe the ‘life event’.  Writing is still going to be difficult since I only have weekends and occasional breaks.  I’m hoping that the reduction or elimination of my sleep apnea will restore some of my author energy too.  Fingers crossed.

So, goals of the week?

  1. Write more Darwin & the Beast Collector this weekend.
  2. Help son with homework.
  3. Handle ‘life event’.
  4. Have fun at work as usual.
  5. Exercise more, especially on days we don’t walk around playing Pokemon Go for 2 hours.
  6. Continue eating more chopped salads.
  7. Start watching ‘Castlevania: Nocturne’ and maybe finish it.
  8. Puzzle time when I need quiet.
  9. Really should clean the bathroom.
  10. Seriously, that ‘life event’ has me nervous.
  11. Oh, get flu shot today.
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7 Tips to Being Interviewed

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Just like before, this was inspired by a class last school year.  I figured if I did tips for one side of the table, I should do it for the other.  Thinking about it now, October is coming up with a bunch of monster posts.  Maybe this interview theme is good way to easy into the kind of scary time.  Guess we’ll find out.

  1. Listen to the person asking a question and try not to think up an answer as soon as they start talking.  You might think you know where they are going, but there’s a chance that you will miss something if you aren’t paying attention.  For example, they could bring up specific character, so you think they are going to ask about the inspiration.  Instead, they want to know about a specific event the character went through.  You might not realize this if you’ve already gone into your own head to craft the ‘perfect’ answer to a question that isn’t asked.
  2. Try to give more to a question than a simple answer.  Some interviewers won’t know exactly what to ask or think you will go running with a topic.  As long as you’re comfortable, build upon what you say in the first sentence.  It’s like writing a book where you need to expand upon the initial concept.
  3. Don’t feel like you have to be rushed for answers, especially if the interviewer appears to be leading you in a specific direction.  Take a breath and think for a few seconds to gather your thoughts.  Speaking vaguely as if to stall for time only helps for a bit and can cause problems.  So, it might be better to say nothing at all.  If you have a drink then take your time having a sip.
  4. Keep your temper in check even if the interview is taking an insulting turn.  Once you explode, you give the person what they may have really wanted.  Remain calm and state that you aren’t comfortable.  You can also polite say that you think the interview is going off-topic or that an area they are heading into is private.  For example, an interviewer is asking about your book, but starts heading into the topic of your divorce.  Not their business or on topic, so you have every right to say so.
  5. Before the interview, feel free to politely request anything that will make you comfortable. Don’t make demands, but ask if a drink or snack can be made available.  You can even try to ask if a specific venue that you prefer be used.  If they say no to the location then don’t take offense because they may not be comfortable there or have another reason.
  6. TURN OFF YOUR PHONE!
  7. Watch the interviewer’s body language and listen to their voice tone.  That will help you get a sense of how they are enjoying your responses.  If they are yawning or slouching, you might be boring them.  Part of doing an interview like this is to show that you are worth talking to.  They may have felt that at the beginning, but now you have to prove them right.
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Brainstorming

Hey, SE Readers. Joan with you today. Today’s post will likely resonate more with pantsers than planners and plotters, but hopefully, everyone can …

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Poetry Day: Fragile Form

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(Definitely wrote this after I pulled a muscle or stubbed a toe.  It got me thinking about how humans are supposed to be the superior species of Earth.  Yet, we are so easily injured and broken that I start to question that opinion.  I mean, many people will be bedridden after a violent sneeze while some animals continue surviving with chunks taken out of their bodies.)

Stubbed toes and papercuts

Broken bones and gashes

Our bodies take all beatings

With skin that tears with ease

And bones that snap with force

Diseases hunt us in our sleep

To cripple our reserves

And sink us to the grave

Still we trudge upon this world

Crowing our superiority

As we hobble and limp away

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7 Tips to Running an Interview

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I came up with this post and the one on Friday while I was a TA in an ELA class last school year.  The students had to interview a person, so they were learning about how to ask questions to get deep answers.  This got me thinking about when I did some author interviews and  similar projects while I was a student.  I didn’t think about job interviews though, so these tips might not work there.  Then again, what do I know?

  1. Go into an interview with some level of background knowledge.  If you are talking to an author, learn about their books, inspirations, and whatever else you can find.  Check out their blog if they have one.  This information will allow you to come up with questions beyond the basics and create better follow-up questions.
  2. Try to avoid ‘yes/no’ and other types of questions that can be answered with a single word or sentence.  This is why planning might be necessary.  Authors might enjoy rambling at length, but you can’t be sure of that.  Some authors can be fairly shy if questions go beyond the book.  Ask about inspirations, concepts that got cut, most difficult of the process, and anything else that might get a conversation.
  3. Speaking of conversations, try to treat the interview like one.  A solid conversation is one with back-and-forth, but also depth.  If you’re simply throwing out a question and receiving a simple answer, you aren’t getting the most out of your time.  This is where spontaneous follow-up questions can expand on things.  It might result in other questions getting dropped for time, but you get a more natural flow.
  4. LISTEN TO YOUR INTERVIEWEE!
  5. Don’t set out to embarrass your interviewee or make them uncomfortable.  There is an audience for ‘gotcha’ questions, but they’re not interested in the author or their book.  They want the type of entertainment that comes from the tearing down of another human being.  Send them to Twitter for that.  You, hopefully, chose to interview this person because you were curious about them, respected them, and wanted to help them get some exposure.  Not to bring them to tears.
  6. Do what you can to make your interviewee comfortable.  This can be a relaxing setting, a drink, snacks, or anything that will put them at ease.  You can even ask beforehand if there is anything they would like to feel comfortable.  This will help the interview flow and prevent the event from starting with tension.
  7. Pay attention to body language.  This will be a clearer sign that you heading in a comfortable or uncomfortable direction.  Avoiding eye contact, tense muscles, twitching, and many other signs will show if you are heading to an early end to the interview.  You can also figure this out if the answers become more limited and restrained.
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Ten Writer Habits That Are a Detriment to the Writing Process

Hi SEers. John is with you on this hump day. I hope your week is going well. If not, just hang in there since relief is only three days away. Today, …

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