
Greetings to all in the Story Empire universe! Beem Weeks back with you today. What sorts of responsibilities do writers have toward their readers …
Reading, Writing, and Responsibility

Greetings to all in the Story Empire universe! Beem Weeks back with you today. What sorts of responsibilities do writers have toward their readers …
Reading, Writing, and Responsibility
In my years of reviewing nonfiction books, “Against All Odds: A True Story of Ultimate Courage and Survival in World War II” by Alex Kershaw stands …
Against All Odds-Alex Kershaw
Well, it’s Super Bowl here and I’m sure most people don’t care. You have those who watch solely for the commercials. You have those who watch only if their team is in it. You have those who are here only for the halftime show. You have those who apparently are watching for Taylor Swift even if she isn’t there (I’m writing this on December 31st.). It really doesn’t matter. My family has always had a Super Bowl party, which has dwindled in size since the Covid year. It’s a tradition, so I like this day for the memories I’ve made and will make. Now, enjoy some funnies while watching the commercials or only caring about the Puppy Bowl.

Guess I succeeded in my goals. Didn’t get to spend as much time with my son as I would have liked. Lots of appointments, homework, and other stuff showing up during my days of the week. Feels like everything was a blur too. Even last weekend was less than relaxing due to some drama. Some battles don’t really end. They simply move on to the next phase of things.
Darwin & the Fate Bracelet got a little progress last weekend. I hoped to do more, but Saturday afternoon fell apart to heated texting. I got chapters 8-most of 10 done. The week was too rough with work and other drama for me to get more done. Not doing much for my self-esteem and hope to publish this later this year. I might be able to finish the editing during the upcoming break, but I was really thinking I’d get this all done by the end of January. Will it really take me 2 months to edit one book? I’m not even being thorough. It just takes that long to find time and then I move slowly through everything, which could be meticulousness. I’m noting up this thing a lot with changes, corrections, and notes to check continuity.
With it being Super Bowl weekend and me having my son, I’m not going to get any editing done this weekend. Maybe if I wake up early and can’t go back to bed. Get a few pages in while the house is quiet. Beyond that, it’s going to be a lot of Pokemon Go, time with family, and resting up for the week before break. I don’t get the first half of winter break with my son, so I want to make what little time I get count. We’re getting a visit from my 3-year-old niece for Super Bowl too. The rest of the family is coming as well, but we all know toddlers are the main event.
Can’t really get into work or other dramas here. That doesn’t leave me with much since the puzzle stuff is kind of boring. I started a Pokemon one, but didn’t make progress due to exhaustion. Television was minimal after the weekend. I did manage to watch a new anime called ‘Zom 100: Bucket List of the Dead’, which is the opening above. It’s a fun series about a guy who works a soul-sucking job. Then, the zombie apocalypse happens and he realizes he doesn’t have to work ever again, so it’s time to live his life. He makes a list of things to do before he becomes a zombie. Enjoyed it a lot more than I expected even though it was highly recommended, so I knew I’d like it.
Wish I had more to share, but I don’t. Last week was about making it to the weekend and next week is going to be about making it to break. Got some big training on one day as well, so less time for editing. I might use what little free time I have to work on April blog posts. Don’t have any ideas for May, which is worrisome. Anybody know of any good topics about books, writing, authors, etc.? I feel like I’m out of the loop on a lot and am grabbing stuff from things I’m watching or reading.
Chopped salads and rice bowls are working for lunch. Still having trouble getting the rice to be soft instead of clumpy by the time I eat it. Putting three ice cubes in and nuking it for 1.5 minutes helps. The cubes aren’t melted right away, but the container is warmed up. So sealing it and putting it in my insulated lunch bag helps. Going to be tough to make all of my lunches this weekend due to the fridge being full for Super Bowl. I think I can get the salad in there, but I’ll have to wait for Monday before I make the rice bowl. Not going to be easy.
I should stop dancing around with this post and get on with the goals. My brain is too mushy to figure more out. I’m really hoping to have a better post next Saturday even though next week is going to be crazy. Good luck to anyone who is cheering for one of the Super Bowl teams or Taylor Swift or whatever. I’m focused on the pizza, wings, and commercials this time.
Goals of the week:

Popeye (Clearly)
This post might not be as long as I planned. I mean, it’s pretty self-explanatory. You can boil power catalysts down into two categories using what I mention in the title. So, let’s look at each one.
Permanent Power Up
First example that comes to my mind is Spider-Man. The radioactive spider bite was the catalyst and it created a permanent change. He cannot go back to normal without going through a bunch of hoops. This is Peter Parker’s new life and he needs to figure out how to live with powers. He can’t turn them off, but can restrain them. They’re still there though, so he can easily access them when needed. As the story progresses, the powers can evolve due to continuous use too. It opens the door for a lot of possibilities in terms of abilities branching off the original.
A potential downside here is that the villains need to be boosted to maintain a threat to a hero who is never without their abilities. As those abilities are honed and new ones acquired, stronger enemies will be needed. You can end up going to an incredibly high power scale, which can create some boredom. It can be avoided if you simply figure out new ways the basic power set can solve problems, but staleness is a constant threat. This is something you can find with any story that involves a superpowered character though, but I feel like it’s easier to fall into this trap with a permanent power up.
You do tend to pigeonhole yourself with this category. Going back to Spider-Man, you have to stay within the range of spider abilities. You can’t suddenly give him heat eye beams or an electricity form. Even real-world spider abilities can be a stretch since not every species can do every trick. You would have to explain how the one type of spider gives him the powers of a different one. So, you can get yourself stuck in a tight box of powers, which is a headache for superhero stories that tend to go without an ending.
Temporary Power Up
Let’s look at Popeye. He’s a pretty strong fighter to begin with, but he becomes nearly unstoppable when he eats spinach. The boost doesn’t stay forever though. He has to consume it again after the previous can wears off. Yes, it’s definitely an analogy for steroids either by accident or on purpose, but we’re not getting into that. It’s more how this type of power up works. You get incredible power for a limited time by using this catalyst.
The downside to this is pretty obvious. A character who depends on a catalyst being used repeatedly can be caught unprepared. If they are separated from whatever gives them a boost, they are rendered harmless. Might be a problem for the character, but it’s an easy way to create tension. Of course, it gets repetitive if you’re always having to figure out a new way for them to get to their catalyst. Again, we run into an issue if this is a long, on-going story like we see with cartoons and comics. You won’t really have this problem in a shorter adventure where it can only happen once.
You get limitations with a temporary catalyst as well. It’s more of a pigeonhole than the permanent situation I mentioned. Unless the character has a variety of items to create multiple abilities, they really only get the one thing. For example, Popeye only gets incredible strength, which can be used in a lot of ways. This can limit the evolution of abilities or remove any growth at all. How can these be enhanced if they disappear and return at base level? They don’t last long enough to improve upon, so a character can only come up with new tricks. This is why a temporary power up tend to be massive in scale and scope. The jump in power is enough that one wouldn’t really need or couldn’t expand it any more.
So, what do you think of these two categories? Have a preference?

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(Well, this is a dark one. Came from a really rough time where I was using poetry to just get my emotions out. Definitely needed the release. Reading it over, I definitely remember the job that caused this poem. Very glad I left before I broke and am now at a place that I love going to.)
Another day passes
With the horrific dance
That is my daily grind
Working in a cage
Where I am poked
And prodded
I feel no respect
No sense that I should stay
All I feel is rage
My inner, shrieking beast
Driving me to destruction
Reminding me of dreams
Hopes I once held dear
Raped and butchered
As if they asked for it
Leaving them deformed
Twisted by the pain
That pushes me to despair
Forcing me to strive
And stumble
To find a reason to go on
A single reason
Not to drive ahead
Smashing into a bus
Or spinning off an overpass
Damaging my body
To match my shattered mind

Luffy Eating the Gum-Gum Fruit
I’m going to say ‘some’ because I’m sure I’ll have missed something. There are so many methods of triggering powers or magic. Probably a bunch that haven’t been invented yet. So, let’s dive into the list.
Magical Ingredients/Gestures/Words
I’m going to start with the big fantasy one, which is rather broad. This is rather self-explanatory. Those who use magic tend to need some type of catalyst. It could be components for a spell or ritual. They might need to make certain gestures and know the right words to get the magic to work. Since they’re dealing with a raw energy that is usually a piece of nature, a caster needs a way to call it forth and craft it into the required form. Doing it solely with the mind can be seen as too powerful and make one wonder why training is needed, so this can be used.
Born That Way
Not the greatest catalyst, but it’s fairly common. A character was simply born with these abilities and they get woken up somehow. For mutants in Marvel, this would be puberty activating their genes. For aliens, they’re simply different or exposure to Earth makes them change. For example, Superman gets his powers from absorbing radiation from our sun, but not Krypton’s red sun. Some may say that this isn’t even a catalyst because it’s just how they are. Powers are always there, but they get activated by something else. It’s not always the case though.
Accident
Classic superhero origins. Could be getting caught in a chemical explosion, struck by lightning, or bitten by a special creature. The result is that a normal human being is given powers that they didn’t have before. That or they become a terrifying monster that retains or loses its humanity. The accident catalyst opens the door for the whole ‘coming to terms with the new me’ story arc. It’s a fun ‘man vs self’ conflict that can be pushed alongside other ones.
Eating Something
You might laugh at how I made this category, but it’s amazing how often a character gains power by eating. You have Monkey D. Luffy with the Gum-Gum Fruit, Itadori with the Sukuna fingers, Popeye with Spinach, and the list goes on. Sometimes these powers are permanent and other times they go away once digestion is finished. This type of catalyst makes sense from a biological standpoint too. At least in a simplified way. We get energy from what we eat, so eating something with special abilities means we would get those abilities. Kind of like what holistic medicine claims to do. (Honestly, I do use some stuff from this way of thinking for my health, so I can’t mock it.) Potions would fall into this category as well.
EMOTION!
I was going to say ‘rage’ entirely since that’s a common power catalyst. Then, I remember how many times I’ve seen other emotions trigger a surge in strength. We make fun of the whole ‘power of friendship’ boost trope, but it’s around. Happiness and love don’t get used as much as rage, but they show up at times. The concept works off how our emotions can cause physical symptoms to appear. You can understand why rage is the big one when it comes to triggering a surge in strength. When angry, we want to attack and fight whatever has hurt us. It would be a challenge to use other emotions to trigger abilities, but not an impossible task.
Technology
Not really sure how to go into depth with this one or if it counts. I’m talking about characters who simply create or find advanced tech to make themselves stronger. I guess these would be physical catalysts, but it’s really a stretch for me. Tony Stark builds his suits with intent and doesn’t just stumble onto them. I think. Probably happened once or twice somehow.
Training
Figure I should add this one to the list. Sometimes all one needs for a power to appear is to work hard. This happens a lot with mental powers and stories that involve ki-based fighting. Really not much else to go into on this since it’s easy to figure out. It’s how people get stronger in the real world too.

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So, I’m hoping to publish Darwin & the Fate Bracelet this year. Need to finish the editing and decide on how to do the naming. The Slumberlord Chronicles: Darwin & the Fate Bracelet is far too long. Maybe just write it once, but refer to the volume name. The series name will probably be noted somewhere. Do authors skip putting series names out there? Anyway, I wrote up the blurb for this book about 2 months ago. Let it sit and went back to it. Figure I would give it a test for the public. I’m doing something entirely new as well. Specifically, I’m having Darwin do the blurb, so it’s not going to look ‘professional’ in terms of focus and word usage. At least, not as if the hoity toity author was doing it. Here we go: