Origins: Zombie Girl

I’m not putting a picture on this one.  Odd that I’m writing about a zombie story idea and I get creeped out by them.

Some people have pointed out that I use zombies in my fantasy books, which is uncommon.  I come from the land of D&D where zombies are one of the monsters you use when the heroes are wandering around.  So, they’re in Windemere and I decided to focus on them at one point.  I came up with this while buying the Marvel Zombies hardcover with a zombie Mary Jane Parker-Watson on the cover.  That’s Spider-Man’s wife and a pox on Joe Quesada for screwing that up.

I created a society where everyone was a necromancer.  This society holds a hidden city on each continent.  Zombies weren’t bloodthirsty monsters that would turn on their masters.  They were used as servants, weapons, and an essential part of the world.  Zombies also had abilities based on how the person died.  For example, dying by fire can give a zombie fire abilities when it’s raised.  There are also those that can alter and enhance zombies.  The goal of the main character is to become one of the thirteen Decayers (elite warriors and nobles) when she graduated school.

Unfortunately, she tried to use a dangerous magic item in school and the guy who couldn’t raise a zombie interrupted her.  Big explosion and she’s dead . . . until she wakes up as a zombie bonded to the useless guy.  Unlike the other zombies, this girl can still think and talk.  The only way to tell she’s a zombie is the gaping hole in her chest, crushed left arm, and a chunk of right leg missing.  So, she sets out to finish her dream of becoming a Decayer and dragging her new master along with her.  There’s high school rivals, best friends, Dark Gods, family intrigue, and various other challenges.  Oh and people have their zombies fight in arenas at times, so that will come up with her.

So far, I haven’t figure out the powers to give her.  She died by her heart getting ripped out by a mysterious creature that came out of the magic item.  I’ve been keeping her at enhanced strength, speed, durability, and her ability to think.  I think I need a special power to give her, but I want to avoid energy attacks and body weapons.  She’s definitely an in your face fighter.

I also haven’t figured out the exact benefit of zombie and zombie master.  Do the zombies gain strength from the confidence or focus of their master?  Sounds a little lame, but I can’t think of anything else.

The final problem is story and scale.  This used to be 5 books, but now I’m wondering if I can tell the story in one or three.  There’s the initial event of her dying and getting used to it.  Some other people want her as their zombie.  Then there’s the secret behind her family and finally the big secret behind what happened to her.   All of those could make great stories, but I wonder if I could stick them into one book instead.  It might only be a question of format.

Anyway, that’s another Work In Progress that I think about at times.  Final note: Zombie Girl is a redhead.

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Prodigy of Rainbow Tower: Cover Art Up-date

I just received an up-dated cover picture from Jason.  He’s going to get more done this weekend and hopefully we’ll be ready to go within the first week in July.  He’s been working on the face, skin, cloak, and fire of Nyx and I can’t wait for the completed work.

Click here for previous teaser.

Book 2 Cover Progress2

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Marketing and publishing with Harry Steinman–farewell post:(

The final guest post of Harry Steinman. Read his thoughts on how to get your book on the Amazon Top 100 Paid Kindle lists.

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All good things must come to an end eventually I suppose. This is the farewell post of the marketing and publishing series with Harry Steinman. I would like to personally thank him for sharing his insight, humour and overall knowledge and experience with all of us over the course of these weekly posts. Harry! You are one of my very best friends. Would be lost without you. (Enough mush.) Put your hands together for Mr. Harry Steinman. If you are all really nice we might be able to get him back for a random guest post here and there:)

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A Farewell Post By Harry Steinman

 

 

 

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The Crater

The crater is big

That’s an understatement

It looks barren down there

Not from what I can see

I wonder how far down it is

Jump and find out

The sight is simply staggering

Yeah, Yeah.  Can I go now

The wind is getting stronger

I’m more concerned about the blinding sun

Are there any rivers down there

Not the damn crater again

I’m leaving without you

                                                                                                                                                               

This is another poem I wrote in Israel.  Our first two weeks were in the Negev Desert and we stayed in a group of houses near a cliff.  It looked like a vast crater and I spent some time staring out over it.  This was my first attempt at a ‘two voice’ poem.

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I Don’t Know

You ask me to explain
And I say I don’t know

You ask me what the future holds
And I say I don’t know

You ask me if I’m happy
And I say I don’t know

You ask me what I’m feeling
I simply don’t fucking know

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Not Very Chatty

Ever have that period of your life where you’re on autopilot?  You look at your e-mails and the things you should be interacting with.  You stare at them and read them.  You know something is supposed to stir in your mind or heart.  Instead, you hit the ‘like’ button because you can’t think of anything to say.  Words are distant in your mind as if they’re coming from underwater.

That’s where I am now.  I can barely hear the voices in my head this week and I’m struggling to do stuff.  I can fake it in the comments when reacting to people, but I think that’s my limit right now.  I’m just numb.  So, if you notice me not responding as often as I used to, here’s the reason.  I’ll try to repair myself as quickly as I can and be back to the blogging race for first comment, but I can’t make any promises that it will be very soon.

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Sneak Peek: illusions at the waterfall

“She tricked me again,” Trinity growls as she drags herself out of the river. She looks up at the top of the thirty-foot waterfall with a cold, angry stare. Trinity is still amazed at the detail of the landscape illusion that caused her to walk off the edge. The chaos elf thanks the gods that she landed in a deep part of the river instead of smashing into the rocks.

“I always thought chaos elves were the masters of tricks,” laughs a female voice from the trees.

“We are, but my experience with gypsy magic is rather limited,” Trinity begrudgingly admits. She begins walking toward the slippery cliff until a dagger strikes the ground in front of her. The chaos elf stops and looks around the trees for any sign of her prey.

“Then, let me warn you about my kind,” the gypsy announces, her voice echoing among the rocks and trees. “We don’t like being hunted. Following me is unhealthy. You already fell for my illusions and survived. You shouldn’t push your luck.”

Trinity gently claps her hands and keeps her eyes on the top of the waterfall. “As a fellow trickster and caster, I feel I should applaud your skills. I honestly thought that I was stepping onto a rope bridge instead of walking off a waterfall. Skill like yours is rare. Now, little girl, why don’t you come out of hiding and make this easy?”

Sari cautiously steps out from behind the trees at the top of the waterfall. Three throwing daggers are loosely held in her fist while she takes a seat on a large stone. Her brightly colored clothes make Trinity wonder why she was having such a hard time finding her among the browns and greens of the forest.

“That’s a good girl. Are you willing to come down here?” Trinity asks with a fake smile.

“You look smart, but you act stupid,” Sari bluntly replies.

“This coming from the child who revealed herself to her enemy,” the chaos elf points out. “How do you know I can’t kill you from down here?”

Sari grins impishly from her high perch. “How do you know this is the real me?”

“Damn gypsies. I can never see through their blasted magic,” Trinity mutters, the sound of rushing water masking her words.

“If you want to talk without yelling, I promise to let you climb up the other side of the waterfall,” Sari offers. The throwing daggers vanish into her skirts and she puts her hands behind her back.

Trinity watches the gypsy carefully as she walks toward the slick wall. Looking up, she can see enough handholds to easily get back to the top. With a delicate grunt, the chaos elf queen leaps onto the wall and begins to climb. From where she is climbing, Trinity can barely see Sari’s blue hair blowing in the wind. With a cunning smirk, Trinity grips a long vine when she gets halfway up the waterfall. Before she can attempt to swing to Sari’s side of the waterfall, a glint of metal flies through the air and severs the vine. Trinity flails wildly in the air until she can catch another crevice and return to climbing.

“Even if you did make it over to this side, I can disappear into the forest before you can reach the top. So, please stay on your side,” Sari requests with a yawn. She gets to her feet and fixes her skirts while she watches Trinity climb the last half of the waterfall. Trinity gracefully flips over the edge and lands in a crouch with a stiletto in her hand. She takes a small bow when the gypsy starts applauding, but quickly remembers why she ended up going over the waterfall in the first place.

“Hey! Don’t mock me,” Trinity snaps.

“I wasn’t mocking you. That was a good show,” Sari swears, juggling two of her daggers. “Now, leave me alone.”

Trinity doubles over with laughter. “You can’t honestly believe that I will do as you say.”

“There is no reason for you to be following me. Your friends destroyed my family and left me with nowhere to go. You have done enough damage to my life!” Sari shouts, a sudden surge of sadness running through her body. A tear begins to trickle down her face and she swiftly turns away from the chaos elf.

“I’d be lying if I said that I didn’t feel sorry for you, but you are an unfortunate loose end. I can’t let you run around Windemere and return to cause my master some unexpected trouble,” Trinity says, flexing her sore shoulders. “If it makes you feel better, I promise I won’t kill you.”

Sari turns to look at her doubtfully. “Would your friends stick to that promise?”

“Maybe.”

“You might as well have said no.”

“I’m surprised that you haven’t asked me why we attacked your clan.”

Trinity can see Sari bite her lower lip to halt her tears. A trickle of blood runs down Sari’s white skin before dripping off her chin into the churning river. Three river sharks risk going over the waterfall as they rush to the drops of blood. A fight breaks out between them until two are washed away by a sudden wave in the river. Trinity watches the pair of sharks twist in the air as they plummet to the rocks below. She can see more waves coming down the river and cautiously steps away from the rising water. The chaos elf can only assume that a nearby dam has burst, which means she has very little time to capture the gypsy.

“I don’t care why you did it,” Sari angrily blurts out.

“Then, I guess you weren’t really attached to your family,” Trinity coldly counters. A throwing dagger cuts her cheek and slams into a tree behind her.

“I loved my clan more than anything else in this world, but it is not the gypsy way to dwell on the past. I look to the future where I will be safe and happy,” Sari proudly announces. “Now, leave me alone and tell your friends to forget about me.”

“Sorry. I can’t let you get away, girl,” Trinity states before she releases a black tendril from her palm. The magical tendril lances across the river in order to wrap around Sari’s right leg. Trinity smiles victoriously at her prey until she notices that Sari doesn’t look scared at all.

“Are you going to pull me across the river?” Sari inquires, her voice more amused than scared.

Trinity shrugs and nervously laughs. “I doubt you would walk over here, so I guess I will have to. You can’t weigh more than a hundred po . . . what in the name of the great goddess Ambrosine are you made of? Why won’t you budge?”

“I’m not going to make this easy for you,” the gypsy promises as Trinity pulls with all her strength.

Trinity tugs furiously on the tendril until sweat trickles down her face. Sari remains glued to her spot while the chaos elf increases her strength with a spell. Her arms grow to the size of tree trunks before she tries to pull again. A high-pitched scream of rage and frustration escapes Trinity’s lips when she realizes that she would have better luck pushing a mountain than trying to move Sari. A final, desperate yank at the tendril causes it to snap and whip back into Trinity’s palm. Near exhaustion, the chaos elf stumbles against a tree and slumps to the ground.

“I would ask how you did that, but you probably wouldn’t tell me,” Trinity says, gasping for air.

“All I will say is that it was neither an illusion nor a spell. Now, are you going to leave me alone?” Sari asks while she rubs at her bruised leg.

“Not a chance. I love a mystery and you are much more than you seem,” Trinity declares with a hungry grin. She can feel a tremor run through the ground as she gets to her feet.

“I am?”

“Don’t play stupid with me.”

“I’m not playing stupid.”

Trinity grits her teeth and launches another tendril at the gypsy. It catches the gypsy off-guard as it wraps around her neck. A savage yank sends Sari stumbling toward the edge of the waterfall until she crashes to the ground. Trinity leaps across the river to pin the gypsy down just as a rumble begins to grow in the distance. The chaos elf ignores it while she tries to lift Sari to her feet.

“I’m through playing games with you. It was fun at first, but my patience is wearing thin,” Trinity announces. She gets a solid grip on Sari’s wrists and pulls at the gypsy. Again, it is impossible for the chaos elf to move Sari.

“I don’t know how I’m doing it,” Sari cries, her voice rising to a scream. “Stop that! You’re going to rip my sleeves! I only have two other dresses and one of them is already dirty.”

“Stop lying to me,” Trinity demands. “You have to know what you’re doing. Just tell me how you are doing this without a spell.”

“Leave me alone!” shrieks Sari before a deafening roar erupts.

Trinity looks behind her in time to see a wall of water rushing down the river. It is ripping bark and small branches off any trees that are in its way. The churning flood drowns out every other noise as it gets closer to the waterfall. The only way to survive that Trinity can think of is to hold onto the immovable gypsy. She grips Sari with all her might as the large wave crashes over them. The force of the water is strong enough to strain Trinity’s arms while she fights to stop herself from being launched over the waterfall. The water continues to rush over Trinity as she tries to make sense of what is going on.

Her thoughts are interrupted by Sari frantically yelling. “You’re tearing my dress!”

Before Trinity realizes that she clearly understood what Sari said underwater, she feels an increase in the wave’s strength. Her eyes burn when she opens them in the rushing water, but she manages to keep them open long enough to see that the sleeve she is holding onto is starting to tear. It feels like an eternity as she feels the stitching snap loop by delicate loop until the sleeve sloughs off Sari’s arm. Trinity goes limp to let the water send her flying over the waterfall. She stays within the wave while it makes its arc toward the over-flowing river below. A single hand motion sends a purple ripple of magic through the rushing water. Trinity can feel the water temperature drop before a column of ice erupts from the river below. The chaos elf crashes into the column’s smooth surface, which sends cracks dancing down the length of the icy pillar. She refuses to move at all until she is sure that the damaged column will hold.

“That was too close,” Trinity gasps. The remainder of the wave drenches her from above. She is shivering while she casts another spell, which wraps her body in fire and melts the pillar of ice.

“Will you leave me alone now?” Sari asks from the top of the waterfall. The gypsy’s clothes are already dry and her sapphire hair is perfect. Trinity would never have believed that the girl was in the monstrous wave with her if she didn’t have the girl’s sleeve clutched in her hand.

“No. Just run away and I’ll catch up with you later. It isn’t like I can get to you before you vanish. Shoo, girl,” Trinity replies once she gets out of the river. The chaos elf drops to her knees and rolls onto her back before closing her eyes.

“I guess I’ll see you later then. By the way, my name is Sari,” she announces. The gypsy cautiously backs away from the edge of the waterfall until she is out of sight.

Trinity waits for the sounds of the escaping gypsy to disappear and chuckles. “I think I was just beaten by a simpleton.”

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Monstrous Favorites

When working in fantasy, you have a ton of monsters to choose from.  That’s not counting anything you make up.  Still, I wonder if every author has his or her own favorite fantasy monster.  That one monster that has to make an appearance in the world at some point even if it’s in a picture or by name.

I use griffins a lot and have made them a mode of transportation in some areas.  I love their power and grace as well as the overall look.  Something about the griffin is very majestic and I’ve found that I always gravitate toward it.  Guess that’s not a very compelling reason.

So, what is your favorite monster and why?

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Get the hot erotic romance novel, Captive at Christmas for free until June 30th.

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Kin

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It came in my dream

When I was young

A beast of solitude

The cat of coal and fire

We stared at each other

In the jungle of my soul

With a flash

 It jumps into me

Makes me understand

Its power courses through my blood

I am man

I am tiger

Burning bright

In this forest of the night

And none can compare to my

Fearful

Symmetry

                                                                                                                                                       When I graduated high school in 1998, I was given a graduation present by my grandparents.  That present was a summer in Israel with a teen tour.  It was for artists too, so every 2 week stop had art programs.  We told to make a final project and I chose to write 100 poems.  Over half were about the other members of the tour, so I improved my social skills here.  I’m going to put up some of these poems from my 18-year-old self.

The above poem came from a dream during a time I was obsessed with tigers.  I still love tigers, but I think I’ve become more wolf-life in my old age.

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