Curved vs Straight Blades

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Saying ‘versus’ isn’t correct.  Yet, I do see many people trying to claim that one type is superior to the other.  Becomes a whole ‘knight vs samurai’ thing at times.  Meanwhile, I’m sitting here owning both styles of swords.  I still want to do a short post since some people might think a sword is just a sword.  Many are surprised to learn that each one has its own strengths and weaknesses.

Curved Blades

Let’s start with blades such as scimitars and katana.  These weapons have a backwards curve, which helps with slashing and cutting.  A warrior can deliver a blow across an enemy who has none to light armor.  These wounds are deep and the movement results in the blade cutting through a bigger area.  For example, a slash starting at the right shoulder can go all the way to the left hip with enough power.  Heavy armor can be a problem since the force isn’t hitting a single point to penetrate.

Curved blades were especially useful when it came to cavalry.  Needing less accuracy than a stabbing weapon, it’s supposedly easier to wield from atop a moving horse.  Being a weapon that depends on momentum, the speed and power from a charge can add to the slashing damage.  Some people believed this would mean less training necessary for cavalry when compared to a knight.

They are also easier to draw and work better in large army situations where there are plenty of targets.

Straight Blades

Longswords and rapiers can cut, but their strength is in stabbing and piercing.  They can be used with more accuracy since you’re aiming a straight thrust.  This allows for hitting gaps in defenses and even breaking armor since all of the power is being focused on a single point.  With chainmail being the most popular during Medieval Europe, this piercing power was essential.

Straight blades are better for small group fights and duels, which was what you found in the regions they were used.  A defensive reason for this is because they are better for blocking.  The straight blade deflects a blow with very little chance of the opponent sliding along and into you.  A curved blade has a chance of directly the blocked weapon towards your body if you aren’t carefully.

In General

Everyone who is into swords has their own preferences in opinions.  Mine is that I like both and see a use for each type.  I’m sure there is plenty more information out there than the basics I wrote here.  So, what do you think?

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Writer’s Self-care -Pursuit of Hobbies

Hey, SE Readers. Joan with you today continuing my series on Writer’s Self Care. If you missed the first posts, they are: Today, we’re going to talk …

Writer’s Self-care -Pursuit of Hobbies
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Questions 3 and Looking Back at ‘The Mercenary Prince’

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

The 9th volume was another that appeared after I had already started the series and planned the entire plot.  The Mercenary Prince filled a gap that I didn’t realize I had made.  Well, I felt that I would eventually, but then I realized I was wrong.  Once I outlined the original volume 8, I had to made two more.  This volume was designed to focus primarily on one champion: Delvin Cunningham.

Poor Delvin debuted during the third act of Family of the Tri-Rune and then he casually integrated.  There was never a book to highlight him or give him a grand adventure to join the group.  He simply happened to be in the right spot and got recruited due to his destiny.  Even the other champions accepted it without question and that was the end of it.  Not much concern about his past or interests.  One would think was be a disaster, but I got this to work in my favor.  Mostly, Delvin eventually realized that he was seen as ‘just there’ when the champions were discussed. His ego and sense of purpose got hit, so he headed home to find himself.

The Mercenary Prince allowed me to do a lot that I never realized I needed too:

  1. I established the mercenary leadership system.  It was hinted at before, but now it has more clarity.  This created a better culture around mercenaries.
  2. I got to bring back Delvin’s original mercenary crew since he didn’t want to bring the champions with him.  I had a lot of fun with these guys.
  3. Yagervan Plains was just an unused part of the map.  The entire area was built up as well as establishing a nomadic tribe culture.  Each tribe was named after a bird.  I also finally gave a name to Pynofira Forest (originally Conifer Woods), Crysvale Tundra (originally just Tundra), and the Frost Barrens (originally Cold Desert).  Not sure if I used the Tundra or Frost Barrens.
  4. Much more character development for Queen Trinity as a subplot with her, Nyx, and Stephen Kernaghan went on a collision course with Delvin.  This also helped me do more with Stephen and make him clearly more deranged.
  5. Finally, I used this as an introduction to the Dawn Fang vampires.  These would be the focus of the War of Nytefall series.  The character who debuted was Mab.  She was popular and helped to show how these special vampires operate.  It also made it clear that they weren’t all monsters.

All that being said, Delvin was the one who I wanted to focus on.  He no longer felt like he deserved to be a champion.  He also was heading to a home where everyone thought he died at the age of 8.  So, I ended up designing his history and some old enemies as I went along.  Lots of fun and I think it finished clearing up some loose ends between what one could consider the two halves of the ‘Prophecy Temple Story Arc’.  Okay, I just made that up, but it did stop me from having 6 temple adventures in a row.  Got to do some great world-building and character development here as well as setting things up for future series.  After all, Darwin Slepsnor (my newest hero) starts off in Yagervan Plains, so The Mercenary Prince helped me get an idea of his origins too.

Can’t think of anything I would do differently.  This book was one the stories made to suit a specific purpose instead of just being there for the main plot.  Not that the other books were bland, but they always had an eye to the future.  The Mercenary Prince was all about the past and present.  I knew it would impact the rest of the story, but that would be tertiary.  I gave Delvin his book to shine and settled more of the loose ends that I couldn’t push any further.  The foundation I established for what happened next was always going to happen, but now it was much more stable.

Some fun questions:

  1. What do you do if you feel unimportant?
  2. Are heroes wrong to be upset if they feel their deeds go unnoticed?
  3. If you were a fantasy mercenary, what would you name your group and why?
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Hostile Vs. Friendly Planet

Avatar: The Meh One

This subject came about after I read an interesting comment on a Reddit forum.  The topic was about the Avatar movies and how humans are the bad guys trying to destroy the environment.  Most of the comments were praising the Nav’i and saying humanity had to be more like them.  I’ve seen that before.  We are a species that really tears into ourselves over how we get along with our environment.  I see it with every ‘Animal Post’ even on the positive ones.  Anyway, the comment that got my attention went like this:

“Of course, humans are going to be aggressive while the Nav’i are peaceful when it comes to nature.  The Nav’i exist on a planet where they can physically and spiritually bond with the other organisms to create peace.  Humans are from a planet that actively wants to kill us with diseases, predators, and nature disasters.  The Nav’i are allowed to live in true peace with their world while humans can never truly achieve this, so they will always have the mentality that they have to be aggressive to survive.”

I think this is true.  Even the human cultures that live alongside nature still have to get involved in survival of the fittest.  Predators won’t just ignore a human just because they’re being nice.  In reality, we are prey to a variety of animals, which means we always have to fit to survive.  Just that technology and other aspects of our culture have made it an unfair battle with us at the top of the food chain.  Pretty much the exact opposite of the way the Nav’i could go, which really shows how environment can shape the direction of any species with higher cognitive functions.

Expanding to fiction in general, I can see how this can influence nearly every world that authors have created.  Those with harsh, brutal lands tend to create characters who are tough and somewhat callous.  Those with pleasant and unchallenging lands have more peaceful and relaxed characters.  Shows that you really need the personalities to fit the environment.  The deadlier the world, the harder you need the people to be in order to explain how they survived.  I don’t know if we do this consciously or it just makes sense to us on a psychological level.

I don’t know, which I prefer as both an author and a reader.  Having there be no danger from the environment does seem rather boring, but I think it would have appeal due to not be a common theme.  Not sure where I would go with it besides having a dangerous entity appear to cause an upheaval.  Makes me think of ‘Demolition Man’.  So, I do gravitate more towards a world that isn’t easy for humans to live in.  There has to be some obstacle for humanity or the stand in for us to have created a civilization.  Without a need for community to survive, I don’t think they would evolve beyond simple packs moving around for food.  No arts or the like would appear, so there might be something beneficial to a harsh environment.

What do you think of these two types of worlds?

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Writing with soul

Hello, Story Empire friends. Gwen with you today, and I’d like to begin with a reflection. Several years ago, I read a fictional short story that …

Writing with soul
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Happy National Dolphin Day

Today is National Dolphin Day.  I was going to do a bunch of info on them, but . . . I just couldn’t get this out of my head (Volume is oddly low):

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Goal Post: Bonk on the Head and Two Aching Ankles

That’s pretty much how I finished the week.  Sure, my birthday was in there, but I didn’t do much for it.  Stayed late at work to help with basketball and got home in time for dinner and Pokemon Go with my son.  That was pretty much it.  One ankle had already taken a tweak at this point too.  The other one went the wrong way on me yesterday and was followed 1.5 hours later by me hitting my head on the bottom of a freezer door.  So, it wasn’t a stellar week.  A ton of personal drama that is carrying into next week happened too.  Really, really, really wish I could talk about that, which should tell you what arena it stems from.

On the plus side of things . . . Surprisingly, I’m not being sarcastic.

My phone decided that retaining a predictable charge was for suckers on Monday.  It didn’t die, but it couldn’t give me a straight answer on how it was doing.  This happened to my last phone, so it was time to get a new one.  Of course, I’m in New York and had to wait for the solar eclipse to end.  Got to watch that with my son, parents, neighbors, and I invited my son’s mom to join us as well.   That was fun for what it was, but you can only stare at an eclipse with the right glasses for so long.  Once it was done and dinner was eaten, my son and I were off to Verizon.

I usually only get the cheapest phone, but they had a good deal on the iPhone 15 Pro Max along with a nice bundle of accessories.  This included an iPhone 15 for my son, which I got him since he could use a faster one.  It also puts our devices on the same upgrade schedule, so I can get us deals in the future.  After the activation fees, I’ll only be spending an extra $20 per month for both phones combined.  This was what I was paying for my son’s phone alone last time, so I’m happy with it.  Taking me a while to get used to not having a home button and having to swipe for various things.

Got to test out the camera when we went out to the park on Tuesday.  There’s a pond we walk around for Pokemon Go.  Everyone does it, but we saw a bird flying around with a fish in its talons.  There are red-tailed hawks, so we didn’t think anything of it.  At one point, it must have dropped the fish and went hunting again.  I was watching as it rose high and did a dive for the water that wasn’t like a hawk.  It missed and fly close enough for everyone to see it was an osprey.  Managed to get these pictures as I tried to use my camera for the first time:

The rest of the week was a crazy slog through mayhem and chaos.  I got no amount of editing done, but I did manage to finish the May blog posts.  I’m hoping to get through a few chapters of Darwin & the Halfling Hunt this weekend.  Got a little of chapter 9 to finish and then I’ll try to get through chapters 10-13.  That leaves me 5 more chapters to hopefully work on this coming week.  If I can get through more than I’m in the clear to print Darwin & the Angry Elf for the father/son trip.  Need something to work on when we’re relaxing and he’s drawing his video game creations.

This coming week is going to be rough at the start.  Basketball is Monday and Tuesday, which isn’t too bad.  Got appointments on Monday, Wednesday, and Friday too.  So, editing is going to be a challenge before the weekend.  I have to start packing for the trip too.  Should get an idea of the weather and can get tickets to a bunch of things we want to do.  Lots of little things to do while editing and resting up.  Shouldn’t be a problem if I get a bunch done today.  Then again, I want to binge ‘Fallout’ on Amazon Prime before one of my friends watch and spoil it.  So much to do.

That’s really it for this week.  Some bright points, but there is a personal storm brewing again.  Not sure if it’s better or worse than what I survived earlier this year.  Just once I’d love to catch a break and have something really good happen to me.  Sell a few books.  Have someone reach out to turn one of my stories into a show/comic/movie/something for more press.  Win a $500 Lego gift card.  Get more time with my son since the next 1.5 months is going to be sparser than I would like.  2024 really isn’t turning out very good and I’m kind of done with it.

Goals of the week:

  1. Help son with pre-break schoolwork.
  2. Edit more Darwin & the Halfling Hunt.
  3. Reserve trip events.
  4. Start packing for trip.
  5. Help with basketball at work.
  6. Make a few June blog posts.
  7. Watch ‘Fallout’ on Amazon Prime.
  8. Biking if possible.
  9. Probably something else I’m forgetting.
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What To Do If a Reboot Fails?

Fant4stic . . . Yeah

The title speaks for itself here.  What do you do if you make a reboot and failed?  By failure, I mean it’s received the same way one would greet a bag of flaming doggie nuggets on the front porch.  People just hate what you have done.  Some to the point where they can’t even watch the originals without thinking of the horror you created.  You might think that’s an exaggeration, but I know some ‘Airbender’ fans who still feel the pain of the M. Night movie.  Anyway, your reboot is abhorred instead of adored.

Personally, I would simply apologize.  Admit what you did was wrong and you screwed up.  I would look at complaints and recognize the ones that are viable.  Maybe you disrespected the message, characters, setting, or story of the original.  You were so focused on leaving your mark that you forgot you were playing with someone else’s toys.  It happens and it doesn’t hurt to admit that.  Learn your lesson and move on to either your own story or to tangle with another reboot.  Humility couldn’t hurt.

That’s my take on it.  What do you guys think?

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Outlining Finesse, Part 4

By Stephen Geez This is the final installment of my 4-part Outlining Finesse series. Here are the links to the earlier installments in case you need …

Outlining Finesse, Part 4
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Poetry Day: Idea Barrage

Gomez Addams

(This is pretty easy to figure out.  I wrote it back when my imagination was a lot stronger and less controlled.  So, ideas would come to me all of the time and I’d struggle to make sure I got them written down in some form.  Kind of miss having that happen to me.  Time and stress does a number on the imagination since the brain is focused on so many other things.)

They come at me at once

A horde of thoughts and dreams

Each wanting to be heard

An evolution of an older plot

Pushing newer ones aside

Clashes of warriors

That will never meet in ink

Monsters slither from all corners

Some born of darkest magic

Others from the vilest science

I try to sort them all

Weaving order from the chaos

Pulling merging forms apart

So that they do not spoil

Only some will survive the day

As I struggle to find time and pen

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