Poetry Day: Morning in Kelsbrig

Dr. Stone

(No idea what I was thinking of here.  Probably just letting my imagination running wild.  Makes next week’s poem even more amusing.)

Sun rising
Above the lunder trees
Mottled leaves
Of blue and gray
Glinting
Like dull-edged daggers

 

The dew drops fall
Pelting
And waking
A herd of Gulberdin
Once sleeping peacefully
Among the mushrooms

 

A Untyril sings
With a voice
Of gooey garbles
Summoning
Juicy Barrenworms
From a rotting stump

 

Many more
Enter the day
Yawning
And singing
Until
A sudden threat

 

Shattering the wind
The loudest shriek
Coiling
From a lightless cave
Announcing the arrival
Of the Heldron

 

Lumbering
And shrieking
Eying all around
Nothing moves
Nothing speaks
In fear of crushing teeth

 

A Porglin sneezes
Then caught
And dragged
By poison webs
Drawing it
To the hungry maw

 

The Heldron feeds
And retreats
Back into the cave
Leaving all
To live
Another day

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The Reformed Punk Character

Great Teacher Onizuka

This could be seen as an off-shoot of ‘reformed villain’ doing a redemption arc, but it’s kind of different.  The delinquent, punk part of the character is in the past and not something that is shown to the audience.  They are told about it and see some actions that hint heavily at what they used to do, but this character is now reformed.  Of course, they still have some old habits that appear at times.

Something that I think makes this differ from a villain’s redemption arc is that the punk tends to have not gone too far.  They are still able to function within society even with some judgement.  Fighting, theft, vandalism, and misdemeanors tend to be the bulk of what they did.  Much of it gets described as when they were minors too, so they step into the story with a clean record as an adult.  This doesn’t erase what they did from existence, but it doesn’t create a paperwork obstacle that can be overused.  It makes their attempt to be a ‘normal’ citizen easier, but not without difficulty.

The challenge ends up being their own mindset.  The reformed punk still has the urges and reactions from their old life.  For example, an attempt at intimidation from a boss could be met with threatening or physicality.  They are shown to be still learning how to NOT do the things that got them in trouble.  I think this makes the audience root for them to improve, especially if there’s a comedic aspect to their mistakes.  There has to be consequences as well even if their actions end up getting results.  Sure, the boss might leave them alone after being intimidated in return, but now the reformed punk has to figure out how to get his vacation time approved.

I guess this character tends to be more common in manga and anime too.  Not sure how gangs and delinquents are different in Japan, but Americans tend to think of these characters as drug-dealing murderers.  So, a redemption arc like this tends to be heavier and more difficult.  With anime and manga, the delinquents don’t seem to be going that far unless they’re storyline involves getting deeper into the criminal world.  For a reformed punk, it’s the opposite, which is why the previously mentioned limit has to be there.  If they go too far, even prior to the story, the audience will deem them unforgiveable and there goes the entire project.

A key point to these characters is about getting and succeeding at a second chance, so I would say a major theme is hope.  No matter how much they get rejected, they should keep trying and have at least one person who thinks they can change their ways.  A common secondary theme is to never give up and do whatever it takes to prove you’re no longer a punk. That or to prove punk habits can come in handy with certain situations, but we’re going back into comedy there.  Either way, this type of character works to make the audience believe the hero has a bad past, but can still be whatever they want since they are striving to be better.

Two characters come to mind and both are anime/manga:

  1. The character at the top is Eikichi Onizuka from ‘Great Teacher Onizuka’.  He is a former motorcycle gang member who gets licensed to become a teacher and make something of himself.  That and get a girlfriend, but that plays to his immature and comedic nature.  He messes up a lot, but continues trying and finding his own way to solve problems.  There are themes of education being too focused on grades and not the individual in his story too, which is why he continues to demonstrate his punk-like habits throughout the whole thing.  Still, it is repeatedly made clear that his past didn’t turn him into a heartless villain.  Onizuka cares about all of his students and shows that there is good in his heart, which helps with his ‘redemption’.
  2. The other character I thought of just now is Yusuke Urameshi from ‘Yu Yu Hakusho’.  He is a punk who sacrifices himself to save a kid and is brought back to life to become a Spirit Detective.  Like Onizuka, he retains his punk habits, but it is a much bigger scale since his situation allows him to be violent.  Yusuke is fighting demons while Onizuka has to deal with school administrators, parents, and students.  I would say Yusuke is given harsher edges, but he still works as a reformed punk character.  It’s on a grander scale because his story is about how a violent delinquent can step up to be a hero who saves the world.

So, the reformed punk can be used for different scales of story.  I feel that a sense of comedy is needed in general to soften their missteps, but you can go dramatic too if you want it to be very serious.  Either way, it’s an interesting and rather uncommon hero type from what I’ve seen.  Be curious to see more too.

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The Biggest Book Formatting Mistakes Self-Publishers Make – and How to Fix Them

In the world of self-publishing, writing your book is only half the battle. The way your book looks on the page can make or break your reader’s …

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Teaser Tuesday: A Guest!

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Here’s an old excerpt from War of Nytefall: Lost.  This involves Stephanie, who was the ritualist of Xavier Tempest’s team.  She didn’t get as much page time as the stronger personalities.  Still, I had fun when I did find a place for her, especially when she was part of a mission group.  Not sure why I always put her with Archillious (psychotic assassin) and Kenneth Decker (dwarven general).  Just seemed to work.

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Happy Veterans Day

I got that chart from THIS SITE!

Now, I’m sure I’ll have angry people in the comments.  Some may say that you can thank a veteran any day of the week, which is true.  Others may point out that I never joined the military, so my opinion doesn’t matter.  Well, that’s your opinion and it kind of ignores the whole ‘fight for Americans’ rights’ and that includes the freedom of speech.  I’ll decide on if I’ll respond or remove.

It really did confuse me when I was in college that people treated Veterans Day and Memorial Day like they’re the same holiday.  Once both were explained to me, I couldn’t figure out why people just lumped them together.  Then, I learned about Armed Forces Day a few years back and that one doesn’t get any attention.  You don’t even get off from work on that, so I guess it isn’t a national holiday.  Feels like this country simply grabs every opportunity to celebrate the military, which is kind of strange.  Each group is unique and should get their own recognition.  That’s my opinion anyway.

So, happy Veteran’s Day to everyone who served and got to retire.

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Happy Sesame Street Day

Sesame Street

Stumbled onto this and had to do a post about it.  Like many people, I grew up on Sesame Street.  I believe the group up top is the cast I grew up with since Elmo wasn’t around that much.  This was the 1980’s.  The show has been around for a long time and appears in multiple countries, which is amazing.  My son was never heavy into ‘Sesame Street’, but was into the ‘Elmo’s World’ part.  Wonder what the show will be like when he has kids since I assume it’ll out last us all.

So, do any other people have fond memories of this show?  My favorite was the big reveal that Snuffleupagus was real.  That was probably my first big plot twist/shift when watching a show.

Enjoy the theme song too:

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Goal Post: Things Happened And Now I’m Here

This week was crazier than expected and I’m not counting the election results in that statement.  Not going to get into that chaos . . . Again.  Anyway, I’ll try to recap a week where nothing writing-wise got done.

Look, I tried to do some editing, but I didn’t see a few things coming:

Monday

I got an email on Sunday that there were parent-teacher conferences for my son on this evening.  It was ‘first come, first serve’, so I got there early while my son studied for his unit math test, math quarterly, and science quarterly.  This event took most of the evening, so I just went home to watch a cartoon with my son then crawl into bed.  I mean, I had Tuesday off, right?

Tuesday

Election Day, but also virtual training for work.  My son studied with my mom while I wen through the training.  That was the entire morning and we had an appointment in the afternoon.  So, it was all of that with a lunch in the middle.  Afterwards, it was going home with dinner and studying some more.  Also, I started my online defensive driving course.

Wednesday

Work . . . Schedule got changed due to needs again.  Tension and high emotions due to the election.  By the time I got home, I was drained and handling texts from people who had stuff to say.  Got some Pokemon Go in that evening then it was home for more defensive driving course before bed.

Thursday

Work . . . Pokemon Go . . . Appointment . . . Dinner . . . Defensive driving course.  Oh, one of my headlight bulbs went out, so I had to work with my dad to change it at 8 PM.  This was done in the dark and I came back to find that I left the online course running.  So, I had to take extra time to get myself logged back in.

Friday

Work . . . Appointment . . . Finished defensive driving course.  Crawled into bed after all that to whimper myself to sleep due to other issues.  Seriously, this week ended up being more emotionally taxing than I expected.

I really did hope to finish editing chapter 10 of Darwin & the Demon Game.  It was short and I thought I’d have some evenings free.  Couldn’t even pull it off last night after finishing the course and writing this post.  My hope is to get it done this morning and start in on Chapter 11 (that’s ominous).  There is a Pokemon Go event going on, but I did all of the research.  An event runs from 2-5 tomorrow, but I can use the morning to get even more done.  There’s also having Monday off for Veteran’s Day, so I can edit before I get my son at 9:30 AM.  It’s still looking like I won’t finish this until late December unless I can finally get a few of my evenings back.

Another issue is that I have no idea what to watch on TV right now.  Don’t feel like live-action or hour long episodes due to my crazy schedule.  Seriously, it’s like every weekday has an appointment.  Oh wait, they do for the next week or so.  Can’t choose an anime that is interesting me either.  Simply not feeling motivated to do anything.  Really, I’ve just gone numb after this week.  Probably not a good sign, but I have therapy to help me through it.

This coming week is going to be a crapshoot as far as time.  Got my son on Monday, Tuesday, and next weekend.  Wednesday is solidly booked and Thursday only has an evening appointment after work.  I might try to do the daily Pokemon Go stuff Thursday morning in the cold in order to clear up the afternoon for editing.  That or I get into work early to edit before other people arrive then do more while I’m waiting for the appointment to start.  Totally an option that I might have to attempt in order to cover all of the stuff I want to do that day.

I’m just going to dive right into the goal list:

  1. Edit at least 2 chapters of Darwin & the Demon Game
  2. Get fresh air with Pokemon Go
  3. Enjoy time with son when he’s here
  4. Remember to take Dramamine before we play Lego Jurassic World
  5. Buy pineapple or strawberries for one of my lunches.
  6. Laundry as usual
  7. Check in on friends who aren’t doing well
  8. Pick a new show to watch
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Questions 3: What If You Can’t Publish?

Simpsons

Let me clarify.  It isn’t if you don’t want to publish.  These questions deal with situations where you aren’t able to publish.  Maybe you can’t afford cover art or lack the time to properly edit.  Maybe you don’t have the time to promote it, so you don’t want to put it out until you can give it some attention.  The reasons are endless and personal.  So . . .

  1. How would you keep your confidence up during a period where you can’t publish?
  2. Would you continue writing new books or stick to the old ones?
  3. How would you handle the ‘just do it’ statements when you simply can’t do it?
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What’s Happening in the Writer’s World–Publishing multiple books at once

Jacqui here at Story Empire with the November edition of “What’s happening in the literary world?” What used to be a simple process of penning what …

What’s Happening in the Writer’s World–Publishing multiple books at once
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Poetry Day: Morning Dancers

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(Fog.  I’m pretty sure this came to me as I watched fog roll across a road towards a misty lake.)

They drift across the road

Following a subtle breeze

Amazing creatures

Of grace and mystery

Found only at first light

Hair of fragile ivory

Twist and twirl behind them

As they dance among the trees

Billowing gowns

Made of grayest satin

Swirl with every step

At times a violent action

Yet it never stirs the dew

The dance continues on

Until a lake is reached

The dancers leap

Upon the placid surface

Merging into mist

Supple limbs entwine

As they settle on the water

Too crowded for the dance

The mass is forced to wait

As the sun and wind

Tear them all to shreds

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