Detour on the Eternal Road

It my great pleasure to welcome John Howell today. He is here to tell us about his latest publication. I got an advance look at this one and you’re …

Detour on the Eternal Road
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How To Master The Art of Misdirection

Misdirection is the intentional deflection of attention for the purpose of disguise, and it’s a vital literary device. To plant and disguise a clue …

How To Master The Art of Misdirection
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Teaser Tuesday: The Sneaky Giant

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Here’s a fun teaser from War of Nytefall: Rivalry.  I posted this a long time ago, but I wanted to do it again because it was kind of funny.  For those who don’t know, Titus is a vampire who stands around 7 feet tall and is very muscular.  Not a man who is built for stealth, which made this even more exciting to write.  I couldn’t treat him like a smaller character.  This really demonstrates how he isn’t a dimwitted fighter and why he is the leader of the Vengeance Hounds.

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The Reincarnated Hero

Kazuma from Konosuba

This is a niche type of hero, but I think it shows up more often than we realize.  It’s definitely a big fantasy thing though.  Now, a hero who has been reincarnated can go one of two ways:

  • They are a regular person who has died and gets reborn as a hero.  Either they appear in the world as a child to grow into a hero, stay as themselves, or become a different adult.  In the end, they leave their mundane life behind to carve out a new legend for themselves.
  • The other way is that they are a previous hero who has been reborn.  They don’t always remember their past, but they have the abilities of a hero who has died.  It can even be for non-her0es.

This brings up a bunch of story options since the new hero has a lot to come to terms with after being reincarnated.  At least, they should for character development purposes. In an Isekai, they have to learn about a new world and find allies among the denizens.  Those from the second category have expectations to live up to since they are putting on the shoes of an established hero.  Doubt, ego, fear, and a wide variety of emotions will stir this character as carry on through their adventure.  The internal conflict alone would make for a fun tale that focuses on character psychology.

I think the psychology is where some authors can go wrong too.  We tend to believe that everyone will be happy to become a hero.  So, these characters rarely want to walk away from their new life.  They typically accept their second chance at living with all of the danger and figure they’ll be fine through hard work, luck, friends, etc.  This is why many of them get overpowered fast when an author fails to make them have any resistance towards taking up a hero’s title.  Not that this is a bad thing since there’s a big audience for overpowered protagonists.  For other readers, it will get boring fast unless they are giving at least an emotional conflict.

A lesser use for reincarnation is that it is designed to be a curse.  This might be a third category, but it’s actually closer to resurrection.  The difference is that the reborn character isn’t exactly the same one.  They may look similar to their previous self with the same powers and dark fate, but they have their own personality.  For example, the manga ‘Seven Deadly Sins’ has a character named Elisabeth.  She has the same name, powers, and appearance as all of her previous incarnations.  Her personality is very similar, but she is noted as being a new version that was born to die after falling in love with a specific man and learning about the curse.  This borders on resurrection, but it’s much closer to reincarnation with a twist.

Personally, I like the reincarnated hero concept even though I haven’t really used it.  I like how it can create a conflict between destiny and free will, which is something I toy with in my stories.  Does a reincarnated hero have to follow their path or can they leave their previous life’s work undone?  What if they get a second lease on life and don’t want to spend it saving the world?  I would assume the entities that brought them back would have issues with that mentality.  So, there is a lot of fun you can have here.

What do you think about this concept?

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Does learning to be a good writer matter anymore? Or will AI fix your problems?

Jacqui here at Story Empire. My theme for 2025 is: 2025 Writers World: Trends, Questions, Concerns, More This monthly post will discuss topics that …

Does learning to be a good writer matter anymore? Or will AI fix your problems?
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Happy Groundhog Day

Apparently, it’s also Marmot Day and Hedgehog Day.  Lots of rodents today.  Well, let’s hope the varmints give us good news.

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Goal Post: Made It to 202 . . . It’s Only February!?

Okay, who’s bright idea was it to jam so much chaos and crazy into a single month?  I feel like I’ve aged 5 years and it’s only been 31 days.  This week wasn’t much better and I even got Wednesday off for the Lunar New Year.  Happy Year of the Snake to everyone who celebrates.

On the plus side, I didn’t have a cold this week.  I can only imagine I was so stressed that even viruses and bacteria didn’t want to go near me.  Can’t even tell you what caused the mess, but work was definitely wild on a few days.  That left me tired and then helping my son with stuff put me over.  All I really accomplished was a bunch of April blog posts while I was waiting for appointments to start or since I only had 30 minutes of free time.  So, not a stellar author week.

That isn’t to say I did nothing.  I did almost nothing!  The only progress I made on Darwin & the Beast Collector was printing out the whole book.  I wanted to start editing it on Wednesday when I had off, but a bunch of appointments left me too unfocused to start.  I want to dive into this book with a semi-fresh mind since it’s one that I’m uncertain about.  Changing the ending and realizing a few issues that might not really exist has me in doubt.  For example, a group of monsters have individual names, but I don’t know how to introduce those since they don’t really talk and nobody can research them.  Right now, everyone uses a descriptor with a species until names start getting discovered.  Is this a good thing to have for most of the book?

Another issue is that my villains didn’t come out as evil as I wanted.  One is almost nice and another is simply a creepy jerk.  Guess this also isn’t a bad thing since it can open the door for more sensible actions.  The more evil a villain is, the more outlandish some of their actions can be.  Am I just giving myself excuses?

My plan is to start editing Darwin & the Beast Collector today between running errands and attending a Pokemon Go event.  Tomorrow will have more open time, but I’ll be fine bringing chapters to work to edit during breaks after I start.  Really didn’t want to begin with other people around.  We have a break in February that will help me get through a bunch of chapters too.  I’m looking at finishing this by the summer, which means typing it in during that time.  I might even be able to start Darwin & the Joy Path by end of August.  Fingers crossed.

I’m feeling like this is a precursor to the 7 week stretch of no days off between winter and spring break.  That’s always stressful because the weather is changing, a lot of events are going on, the 3rd quarter push, and meetings.  This is both as an educator and a parent, so I’m getting it from both barrels.  It’s weird because I’ve done office, retail, and food jobs with these kind of stretches, but that didn’t drain nearly as much as working in education.  It isn’t the physical drain either.  It’s the emotional one, but that could also be due to the personal stuff I’m getting battered with.  That’s going to be getting fairly interesting this coming week too.

Speaking of next week, I’m not going to plan out a lot because there are changes coming down the road.  Mostly, a new doctor for something that is a weekly appointment.  The place isn’t as close to home as the previous person, which means I lose more of at least one evening.  Plus side is that I was successful enough at this Wednesday’s Pokemon Go raid that I don’t have to go out for the next one.  I can do some catching after work, come on home, and maybe do some editing.  Guess this is balancing out, but next weekend is Super Bowl and we’re having a party.  That’s going to change things a bit.

Haven’t talked about what I’m watching these days, but I only tried a few fringe anime series that sounded interesting.  One was decent and the other I stopped halfway through the first episode.  Last night, I started a show on Amazon called ‘Cross’, which is based on the Alex Cross series.  Stars Aldis Hodge, which is why I started it, and I like it so far even though it’s not my norm.  Probably finish it before Monday since it’s only 8 episodes.  Be even easier if my back continues giving me trouble and I have to stay lying down with a heating pad.

Goals of the week?

  1. Start editing Darwin & the Beast Collector.
  2. Watch ‘Cross’ this weekend.
  3. Play Pokemon Go daily for exercise.
  4. Help son study for tests.
  5. Prepare throughout week for Super Bowl to avoid rushing next weekend.
  6. Hydrate!
  7. Sleep!
  8. Figure out what to do for dinner tonight and tomorrow.
  9. Do whatever it is I forgot to put on the list.
  10. Tolerate and survive the upcoming stress storms that I can’t talk about on here.  :-s
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Top 5 of 2024- #1 Various Cardinal Symbol Systems

This post originally went live on February 21, 2024.

Cardinal Symbols

I mentioned that there have been plenty of uses of the cardinal directions to create fantasy and mythological systems.  Sometimes, you even have a 5th direction of ‘center’, which is important when we get to Wu Xing.  I wanted to give a list of various cardinal systems that have been created in mythologies.  Many authors use these for inspiration even though only stick to the one that is from their own culture.

Four Classical Elements

This is very common in Western fiction because it is what we are used to.  Earth, Wind, Water, and Fire are the elements that we focus on.  They’ve been connected to many fictional stories such as ‘Avatar: The Last Airbender’.  Now, authors may mess around with the connections here, but the traditional version is:

  • Earth is North
  • Air is East
  • Fire is South
  • Water is West

Authors will occasionally switch things around to make Fire vs Water and Earth vs Air oppositions.  This is because the compass is used as compatibility tool.

Wu Xing (Five Elements)

Similar to the four classical elements, Wu Xing comes from China with 5 elements.  They also use a 4 element system that ditches Earth, but this is typically done when the beasts are involved.  I’ll get to them next.  Before you ask, ‘Air’ is not one of the elements for a variety of cultural reasons.  This Five Element/Direction system looks like the following:

  • Wood is East (One theory is that air is part of life and falls under wood)
  • Fire is South
  • Metal is West
  • Water is North
  • Earth is Central

It’s interesting how fire is in the same spot as the previous system.  Earth being central makes sense if you think of it more as the planet than dirt.  Don’t really know about the others off the top of my head.

Wu Xing Four/Five Auspicious Beasts

These guys get used in anime a lot. I can think of three series right off the bat that used them as either villains, monsters, or plot points.  Each of the beasts is a god-like guardian of each direction.  They are connected to a direction, color, season, emotion, and many other things.  Authors may use them as a simplified Zodiac sign determined by birth season or person’s natural temperament.  Either way, a direction tends to be associated with each one.

  • Azure Dragon of the East
  • Vermillion Bird/Phoenix of the South
  • White Tiger of the West
  • Black Tortoise of the North
  • Yellow Dragon or Qilin in the Center

Japan uses a 4 beast system off this with names too.

  • Seiryu the Azure Dragon of the East
  • Suzaku the Vermillion Bird of the South
  • Byakko the White Tiger of the West
  • Genbu the Black Tortoise of the North

Greek Skies and Winds

Greeks actually had two cardinal direction systems.  Not sure if Rome copied the one that was about astral phenomenon, so I’m going to leave them out.  Does look like they made a 12 cardinal direction system. Anyway, the Greeks had one cardinal system to work off of sky events and another with where winds came from.  It was originally only North and South winds, but East and West were added.  These systems can be useful if you’re working with a large sailing culture who would be focused a lot on stars and wind.

  • Arctos (Ursa Major) and Boreas the North Winds
  • Anatole (Dawn) and Eurus the East Winds
  • Mesembria (Noon) and Zephyrus the West Winds
  • Dysis (Sunset) and Notus the South Winds

This is a simplified version of this.  From what I’ve read, more complicated systems were created over time.  Homer may have implied that there were 8 wind directions.  Aristotle made a 10-12 wind/direction system, which the Romans seem to have copied.  This just means authors have a lot to work with if they use Greek mythology and history for inspiration.

Native American

This one is difficult to look into because every tribe had their own symbols.  At least from what I can tell.  So, take this with a grain of salt because I’m trying to find connecting information.  Basically, the four cardinal directions can be connected to the four seasons AND the four stages of life.  This can be depicted on what are called medicine wheels in some cultures.  Each one has a season, stage, and an animal connected to it.  For example:

  • North is Winter, Elderly/Death, and the Bear
  • East is Spring, Birth/Childhood, and the Eagle
  • South is Summer, Youth, and the Wolf
  • West is Autumn, Adulthood, and the Buffalo

Now, this can be very problematic if you take it as this across the board.  First, not every area in the Americas has the same weather during each season.  Summer in Florida is WAY different than summer in Alaska.  So, the life stages might differ if you don’t have harsh winters and the summers are the most brutal season.  Second, those animals are not found in every region.  This is an important note for fantasy worlds too.  If an animal does not live within the territory of a culture, why would it be a symbol?  It shouldn’t even be known unless talked about by foreigners, which wouldn’t put it on the same spiritual level as the local fauna.

So, those are a handful of cardinal direction systems.  There are plenty more out there and much more details for each of these.

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Should You Use Clichés in Writing Your Book?

Posted by Joy York What is a cliché? A cliché is a French word meaning “stereotype.” It was originally used long ago to describe stereotype: a metal …

Should You Use Clichés in Writing Your Book?
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Poetry Day: No Harm

Samurai Champloo

(This poem came after a series of arguments with someone.  They were always right and I was always wrong in their eyes.  It eventually hit a point where anything I said or did made them upset.  Hence, the situation you see below.)

We look through different prisms

See the world in different light

And neither of us wrong

You rail against my thoughts

Ripping at my words

When I simply say my heart

If I do the same to you

I am the ignorant fool

While you are the wisest sage

I seem to lack your insight

That brings up your boiling rage

My beliefs do you no harm

Since they are mine alone

I never push them forward

Or utter them out loud

I only mention them when prompted

Then shunned for being me

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