Derailing Bedlam: Flirty Fish Tails Part 2 #fiction #adventure

As usual, here is your warning that this story has cursing, sex (not graphic), innuendo, and violence.  It’s my Rated-R action adventure called Derailing Bedlam.  This is the fourth outing (third official) for Cassidy and Lloyd, so feel free to click on one of the two covers to see how it started.  Each one is 99 cents!

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Cover Art by Jon Hunsinger

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7 Tips to Creating a Fantasy Army in Fiction: Add More Than Swords

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You might think it’s easy to simply plop an army into a story and watch the soldiers clash in the background.  Well, it can be done that way, but that prevents you from doing some world-building.  You can learn a lot about a world and its kingdoms by the military forces that exist in there.  So, it’s a good idea to put a little more depth into these creations and here are some semi-serious tips to help.

  1. Uniform uniformity is important.  Bandits and a mercenary force can have a variety of looks, but an organized military needs some commonality among its members.  This is because your rank and file soldiers have probably been given the same gear with only a few having unique looks.  It’s the officers that might stand out with flashier weapons and armor, but even they might have a common theme.  This can show the smithing culture and technology that exists in the kingdom as well as direct the tactics that they will use.
  2. Study some real world military systems to get an idea about how such hierarchies work.  This really helps with knowing how to use the ranks and lingo.  Call an army leader an Admiral instead of a General and you’ll get lectured.  Only way out is to make it clear that your world uses the terms in this way.  That means you can’t use them interchangeably.  A great source for this would be to talk to a veteran or someone who is currently serving.  You might get more info than you expected.
  3. It’s always fun to create some unique forces for the army.  This can be a humanoid squad of specially trained soldiers or technological wonders.  The former can be useful for heroes/villains that are pushed as threats that go beyond your basic enemy.  The latter really only comes into play with large scale battles and sieges.  Consider the environment that the army operates in for the most part to help.  Can’t have war elephants in the arctic, but you can have mammoths.
  4. Remember the size of the army.  They can’t march through an area without leaving a sign of their passage.  You can see them coming from far away as well because you have hundreds to thousands of soldiers. Stealth is not an army’s strength, so don’t have them suddenly appear.  I mean, it could work for humor if a hero wanders out of a tent or hotel to find themselves surrounded.  Then again, they still see the army and it was only them being unaware that led to the incident.  Doesn’t really work this way without author intervention or magic.
  5. Flags.  Can’t have a fantasy army without flags.
  6. People talk about armies in fantasy worlds, so create some rumors or facts to help give the reader a sense of their reputation.  This can reveal information about the rulers as well.  Maybe people fear the soldiers or think they are champions of peace.  Perhaps they are proud of never losing a battle or some other kind of record.  It’s your choice on how much you show here, but just consider how we respond to our own military and work from there.
  7. If you put a lot of work into designing your fantasy army, try to use them for more than a quick scene of carnage.  As tempting as it is to build up this amazing military force and then have a hero or villain crush it, you might regret making them a throwaway gimmick.  First of all, the ‘one destroys many’ thing has been done, so it won’t have the shock value that you expect.  Second, you can find more to do with them such as an extended battle or potential allies.  In the end, this is the author’s decision, but it’s one that should probably take more thought than is usually given.
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Smorgasbord Blog Magazine – Guest Writer – Frank Prem – Welcome to Beechworth, Victoria, #Australia

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Teaser Tuesday: Welcome to Your Mind, Sari #fantasy #adventure

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

A fun blast from the past with Legends of Windemere: The Compass Key.  This is really where the central plot with Baron and temples took off.  The section I’m presenting is pretty long, but it’s from one of my favorite parts.  Battles within the mind are always a joy because you can be really weird and bizarre.  Sorry that this one is so long, but I couldn’t find a good cut-off point.

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More Challenges Faced by Indie Authors

Don Massenzio's avatarDon Massenzio

ChallengesThis is the second in a series of posts centered on the challenges faced by indie authors as we try to compete in the vast ocean of competitors/cohorts that is filled with sharks and other predators. Here are more that I’ve come up with to get you thinking and to foster a discussion:

bad reputation speedometer illustration designThe Stigma of Self-Publishing

I refrain from calling what we do self-publishing. I am an independent author. My publisher is Amazon. Instead of having services provided to me by a traditional publisher, I outsource them to providers that fit within my budget and style.

I recall trying to join a local author group and being refused because I was “one of those self-publishers”. Truth be told, I had essentially published more books than the total of all of the authors in the group. Many of them were waiting for some big publisher to say yes. Of those…

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Fantasy Armies: Popular Tools of the Trade

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This theme is probably going to be very similar to the City Guards week from December, but that isn’t surprising.  Guards and soldiers get used interchangeably in a lot of fiction because they are part of the setting.  The nameless warriors who are there to either be in the background, push the heroes to the next plot point, or be taken out in a scene to show how powerful/evil the villain is.  Yet, there is one subtle difference between the two that drives me to do a week for the military characters.  So, what am I talking about?

That would be location.  City guards are in the city and that’s where they tend to stay.  It’s in the name and they are closer to police than soldiers at times.  While still working for the same kingdom, soldiers are more prone to traveling away from the city.  They patrol the wilderness instead of the streets and march to war when necessary.  You tend to have larger armies than guard forces too because this is where the true might of a nation will be displayed.  Gear might differ as well because guards need to chase criminals while soldiers need to clash with their charging enemies.  This could mean the military has stronger armor, heavier weapons, and more advanced technology such as catapults.  Not that different from the real world.

Even with all of that, guards and soldiers tend to get the same roles.  Unless they are going to join the main or supporting cast, these guys are nameless victims of the story.  You do get a grander scale with armies though.  Think about how often you see two opposing forces crash together like tidal waves of bodies and metal.  It sets a chaotic and bloody scene for the heroes to work within, but it doesn’t do anything to develop the armies beyond ‘the fight and die’.  We really do rate battle scenes on the enormity of the forces and the brutality of the fighting, which really drives home the idea that these nameless characters are fodder.  Heck, I remember ‘Game of Thrones’ gloating in December about one of the final episodes having ‘the biggest battle ever shown in a TV show’.  That tends to mean a lot of soldiers on the screen with no reason to be there other than fighting and dying.

It’s not the deepest role and it is kind of sad since any character who steps out of the army to be more than scenery loses something.  They may still be a soldier, but they aren’t part of an army for the most part.  At the very best, they are acting as a representative of that nation for the sake of the story.  It’s not that easy to do the jump either.  Those with high rank would come off as odd if they’re taking orders from the main hero, so they might create tension in the cast.  Those of lower rank might require more orders and fall further into the background until they become something else.  I’m not saying it’s impossible, but it is a challenge for a fantasy author, especially if the story involves adventuring.  The life of an adventurer is one that doesn’t always follow the rules, which is the opposite of the law-abiding soldier.

Have you ever used a military character in your story?  What were some of the challenges?

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How You Can Grow with Self-Publishing

Great list that brings some positive clarity to the life of a self-published author. We really do overlook the changes because we focus more often on the challenges.

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Happy President’s Day to all the Story Empire readers! Best wishes to everyone and enjoy the day if you have time off.

Being a writer is lonely and being a self-published author can be trying to the nerves as you constantly juggle writing, publishing and marketing. The latter can challenge even the most stouthearted among us. The question can often linger in our minds if we’re actually doing anything useful, but we manage to keep going just because we enjoy the creation of a book and we love books!

Our view can often be myopic as we’re just too close to what we’re doing to notice how the writing changes us. But there are changes and there are affects that make a difference. Let’s zoom out from that up-close view and take look at the bigger picture. Here are some ways that self-publishing can benefit you as an author:

  1. You…

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Guest Post: Katia Raina

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Please welcome to the blog the awe-inspiring Katia Raina, who is here to talk about her young adult novel! Take it away, Katia!

I find myself at a thrilling turn of my life’s journey. Today, I am the debut author of Castle of Concrete, a young adult romance set in 1990s Russia, coming this June from Young Europe Books. Once a relentless journalist, now a goofy middle school English teacher, always a stubborn early morning writer, I am excited to share a bit of my story with you here on L. Marie’s blog.

My story starts across the ocean in a small Ukrainian city, then Siberia, then Moscow, Russia.

On the outside, I was a quiet Russian girl (photo at left), a shy one, an odd one. On the inside, I was Jewish, and proud, even though I knew early on it was not a thing to advertise…

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This Week in Indie Publishing

Unknown's avatarDon Massenzio

Hello,

This was a relatively popular feature on my blog and I’ve decided to resurrect it. I will try to curate four to five interesting stories each week related to Indie Publishing. I hope you find them useful and enjoyable.

5 Tips for Self-Publishing a Book

Have you always wanted to see your words in print? Publishing a book used to be a drawn out, complicated process that was left only to the pros. Nowadays, it’s easier than ever to get your words out there thanks to self-publishing.

In the Kindle Store, 31% of all e-book sales were for self-published books. Those are good stats if you’re hoping to earn a living from writing alone. Whether you’re experienced in the world of publishing or this is your first project, here are 5 tips for self-publishing your book in no time.

1. Don’t Skimp on Editing

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April Post Idea Drought

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To be honest, these posts usually don’t get a lot of attention.  Yet, I’m finding myself struggling, so what do I have to lose?  I’m trying to come up with posts for April, but there’s a catch:

They have to connect to War of Nytefall: Rivalry in order to help hype the new book.

So, the topics can involve vampires, specific characters, fantasy, the series, or writing in general. I can use the book as an example.  This isn’t going to be easy since people haven’t read the book, but it’s worth a shot.

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