Questions 3: Cliffhangers and Transitions

Let’s just dive right into the questions.

  1. What advice would you give an author about writing a smooth scene transition?
  2. What advice would you give an author about writing a cliffhanger?
  3. What is a pet peeve about any type of story transition?
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Poetry Day: Prophet of the Rainbow Unicorns

(A fun poem involving unicorns?)

He stands upon his wooden crate
An island within a human sea
A scrawny form in mottled hair
Wearing rags of every color

 

Only few give him a sideways glance
As they trudge along their path
None stop to give him more than this
Until his voice rings clear

 

He speaks in vivid harmony
With words that stun the crowd
Enchanting in tone and timbre
With a strength to reach all ears

 

The prophet rails against the heart of man
Grown sick with greed and hate
Their happiness is fleet and false
A mask to hide their life of pain

 

He sings about the coming change
A force to heal the broken souls
On the day the rainbows bathe the land
A sign of the beasts’ return

 

They will ride upon the blinding arcs
Steeds with a single horn of gold
The unicorns of legend will return
To a land that needs them most

 

On piercing horns evil is slayed
Freeing man from darkest chains
The world will fall to peace
Beneath the hooves of unicorns

 

He senses anger from the crowd
As if the prophet hit a nerve
With a final yell he bursts to smoke
Leaving rainbow dust behind

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It’s a book, and a confession.

I did it again. I believe this one is the eighth one in The Hat Series. I want to say this at the top, but this whole series is designed to be ready …

It’s a book, and a confession.
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Blast from the Past: Types of Closures and Cliffhangers

(Back on October 1, 2014, I made the following post.  Nearly forgot about it, but I realized it can work better than another 7 tips post.  Enjoy.)

Even if you’re nervous about writing the ending of your story, it has to get done.  You can’t simply walk away and hope people forgive you.  There has to be closure to some extent or even a mysterious ending that keeps people talking.  After all, you brought the readers along for an adventure and they stuck with you to the end.  There should be some kind of payoff even if you believe the author owes the readers nothing.  I believe the author does owe a solid ending if for no other reason than it is an act of seriousness.  For some reason leaving a story unfinished feels wrong to me and I’m talking solely about stories that seem to end abruptly.

So here are some pieces of an ending:

Happy Ending/Sad Ending

This is a big debate, which I never realized could get heated.  There are people who feel that happy endings are unrealistic, so they make sure to end with tragedy.  Other people think the world is harsh enough, so they prefer to end on a high note and not add to the jading of humanity.  Either way, you should make sure the ending fits the overall tone of the book.  It might be jarring and fun to have an upbeat story end with utter destruction, but you should make that a possibility at least.  What I mean is that the possibility of failure should be there instead of pushing the idea that success is the only ending.  Same goes for writing a dark, depressing book where nothing goes write and there’s an abrupt rise to happiness in the last chapter.  People remember bad endings more than good beginnings, good middles, and good endings.  So you have to make sure the conclusion is solid, fits, and isn’t just you going ‘FOOLED YOU, READER!’.  (Yeah, I’ll probably have arguments about this one.)

Closure Needed

 Even if you leave an opening for a future adventure, you need to bring some closure to the end of a story.  This includes the latest volume of a series.  There has to be a sense that something has ended by the time the reader closes the book.  It can be the completion of a quest, finding the item to carry on to the next stage, conclusion of a subplot, or the promotion of a supporting character.  My point is that you need the reader to believe that they have an ending.  It doesn’t matter if another book will come out with events taking place a few months later or if this is the end of the overall adventure.  Readers love closure because it helps them feel like they invested their time, energy, and emotions wisely.  This is where beta readers can come in really hand too.

The Dreaded Cliffhanger

For example, ‘Cowboy Bebop’ ends with some ambiguity in regards to the true fate of Spike Spiegel.  The picture at the top is his final scene before he collapses after the big fight.  Some people think he died and others think he was saved.  Now, creating a cliffhanger seems to go against the idea of closure and that is why so many people hate them.  Yet, you can end a story on this if you do it correctly.  The biggest way to make a cliffhanger work as a story ender is to have it be in regards to a character’s fate, but not the main adventure.  With that central plot over, the story comes to a close and the heroes can be left in a state of ‘what now?’.  This can create a lot of speculation from fans, which can keep a story’s popularity going for a while.  You’re going to have some people that are angry that not every thread is closed up, but that’s the risk with a cliffhanger.

Benefit of Multiple Character Story Arcs

If you’re working with an ensemble cast then you have what some authors can consider a ‘luxury’.  Not every character needs a happy, sad, or completely closed ending.  You can end some characters with marriage, some with death, and leave one or two ambiguous fates.  This can include villains too if your story can end with them simply being defeated instead of killed.  The downside here is that you might get caught in an extended ending sequence in order to cover everyone’s storyline.  It’s easier if all of the characters stay connected like in the epilogue of Harry Potter, but sometimes you might have one or two characters that disappear from the lives of the others.  Feel free to play with the idea of giving a variety of closures if you’re writing such a story because there really are no true rules to this.

So, anybody else have any thoughts on endings?

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Too Many Ideas

Hi, gang. Craig here again. Last time I posted about how to kick the Muse off the couch and make her stop eating all your snacks. I had this awful …

Too Many Ideas
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Teaser Tuesday: Gods in Chaos

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Another fun teaser from Legends of Windemere: Warlord of the Forgotten Age.  Just a look at how the gods are taking the looming return of the one being that strikes fear in their hearts and souls.  I mean, they’re gods and goddesses, so I’m sure they’re taking this like mature adults.  (Hint: They are not.)

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Cliffhangers and Transitions

Now, I know cliffhangers might be seen as a type of transition.  I simply didn’t remember if there was a special name for a smoother flow into a scene.  So, I’m going to use the terms as separate entities.

Both of these things have their place in stories.  We don’t really notice the smoother transitions though because that’s their purpose.  They exist to end one scene and start another without a jolt to the system.  A reader not noticing them means they will effortlessly go into the next scene and might not take a break.  One could say that it increases the chance of immersion without creating tension.  Perhaps an analogy would be drifting down a lazy river going from one section to another.

On the other side, are your cliffhangers, which are designed to create tension and get a person to come back for more.  I think they tend to work best as pauses similar to when an episode ends.  The story will continue, but the reader will have to wait either for the next release or to have more time.  While this doesn’t create the smoother immersion, it does give a person a reason to come back.  It also grants them a point where they can comfortably stop since most don’t have the time to read an entire novel in one sitting.  So, they won’t feel like they have to keep going and possibly quit.

You really do need transitions for longer works since they require more than one scene.  If you have a 300 page novel, you can’t really have it be one long scene.  That could be exhausting to the reader with no clear sense of where they can take a break, which can lead to clunky flow.  I would think the passage of time would be an issue as well since a single scene couldn’t easily cover a long period.  Yet, the person reading it might have to take a few days since life gets in the way.  This means that you need to create some types of breaks if you are going for a longer story.

Each one has their own use too, but we already touched on that.  Smooth transitions can work with you need to skip ahead in time or switch to another part of the story in a different location.  They can even happen in the middle of a scene such as when you are describing a journey using exposition.  Cliffhangers, on the other hand, are clear stops such as at the end of a chapter, chapter section, or any book that isn’t a finale.  There is a definite place to put these because you need to make sure that the reader either stops or doesn’t feel bad if they have to take a break.  Something else is that a cliffhanger lingers in the mind and helps to draw the reader back after they are done with whatever pulled them away.

Personally, I never notice when I create smooth transitions.  Not sure if that’s how it should be or just me.  I find cliffhangers to be difficult, but necessary.  They help to bring at least some temporary closure for a chapter or volume.  I just have trouble making sure I end it dramatically without being cheesy.  My ‘go-to’ tends to be ending with a sarcastic comment, a joke, or an action that the POV character doesn’t notice.  Mixing in foreshadowing with either tool can be helpful, but not necessary.

So, what are your thoughts on this topic?

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Is Fictional Truth Reliable?

Fictional truth is never quite as clear as it seems on the surface. Deceptiveness boils down to manipulation, disguise, and misdirection. The writer …

Is Fictional Truth Reliable?
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Twofer: Mental Health Awareness and Better Sleep Month

So, I stumbled onto this month being ‘Mental Health Awareness Month’ and ‘Better Sleep Month’.  An interesting combination, but one that makes sense.  For today, I just want to see what people think of this pairing.  Why do you think mental health and sleep are intertwined?  (I’m going to give each month their own Sunday that will be more open forums and end with a post about the connection.)

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Goal Post: I Think This Is Saturday

Now, I’m not 100% certain it’s Saturday.  I don’t have work today and my phone said it was Saturday, but part of me is still unsure.  Could be some new day of the week that was invented when my back was turned.  Stranger things have happened to this country over the last few weeks.  Let’s go with the assumption that it’s Saturday.

I’m . . . exhausted.  There wasn’t a single day where I didn’t have a lot going on.  I considered calling out yesterday since I woke up at 1 AM feeling the wrath of Taco Bell, but I pushed myself to get extra sleep and recover.  The main reason is that next Friday could result in me being in worse condition, so I’d rather save my sick day for when I have a higher chance of collapse.  This is because I’m helping with a basketball game on Thursday then rushing to my son’s chorus concert and then finally getting dinner around 9:30/10 PM.  That’s going to be brutal.  Still, this week got a lot of shots in.

The week started with my school doing its first special education field day, which I didn’t know much about going into it.  I failed to prepare very well, so I got badly burned on the face and neck.  Never had any time to properly rest either.  The other days of the week were wild with schedule changes, a basketball game, a day without a break, struggling to do food shopping, drama at home, and enough stress to put me back on Zzzquil to get any type of sleep.  I ended up finishing off two nearly done bottles of wine last night, which probably didn’t help.

Sadly, I wasn’t able to touch Darwin & the Beast Collector even last night because my brain needed to cool down.  I’m aiming to get 2 chapters done this weekend since I’m alone and only have to worry about cooking dinner.  The rain is going to limit my Pokemon Go outings, but there’s one event this afternoon.  Beyond that, I might only venture out for 30-40 minutes in the morning to do the daily stuff after editing a chapter section.  I think I only have 7 chapters to go, so I can really finish it before the end of May, especially if I use Mother’s Day and Memorial Day weekend.  One can dream . . . I’m still scared about what to do when editing is done.  Can I get back on the actual writing horse with the way I can only write every other weekend?  Summer might help a bit.

Looking at last goal post’s list, I see I failed in remembering how I was going to fix some of Rayne’s background.  Right now, she’s an elf who was abandoned in Lacarsis the City of Monsters by her parents.  She was raised by the monsters as a servant until she was convinced to escape.  Down the road, Rayne is going to become a hero and she’s with Darwin in the current editing project.  No real skills yet, so she’s going to be learning a bunch.  The issue is that I wanted to implement a secret to her origins, but I don’t know how to pull it off anymore.  Can’t go further into that without spoilers, but a future event doesn’t make a lot of sense without me changing some things.  This could explain her monster attraction ability too if such a thing was needed.  Guess I’ll tinker when I have the time.

Aside from the jam-packed day of Thursday, I don’t have much else going on besides the usual.  Actually, I’m responsible for dinners for the next two weeks, which is going to cut into my evening time.  Not a bad thing, but some of the requested dishes are work intensive.  I’m going to attempt a new recipe tomorrow with Pepperoni Pizza Lasagna Rolls.  Everything else is an established recipe like sweet and sour meatballs and penne with vodka sauce.  All of this sounds fairly boring though.

I’m still thinking of permanently making all of my eBooks 99 cents.  Nothing sold in March or April.  I know people said I can’t do that without promoting the price change, but I can’t afford to do that.  It’s not like I’m declaring a special sale.  Nobody is buying eBooks or paperbacks of my stuff.  I’ve had a few ask for me to buy them copies of the paperbacks in return for a review or promo, but I’ve been burned on that a lot.  Can’t really afford to buy a bunch of my own books for stuff like signings.  People don’t understand that such an event requires thousands of dollars and a location willing to let you do it.  I doubt anyone would show up anyway.  So, I’m just wondering if a 99 cent price tag is enough to get wanderers curious.

On that note, what are the goals of the week?

  1. Edit some of Darwin & the Beast Collector.
  2. Finish the June posts and start on July.
  3. Cook dinners.
  4. Help son with school.
  5. Use bike if raining or walk 10,000 steps if good weather.
  6. Hydrate.
  7. Catch Pokemon at event this afternoon.
  8. Sleep at least 7 hours a night.
  9. Not eat Taco Bell after sundown.
  10. Enjoy a lollipop.
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