Secrets in a Party

LOTR

I thought of this ‘issue’ when I was rewatching an anime called ‘Delicious in Dungeon’.  A character ends up keeping a secret from the rest of the group, which causes some trouble at a pivotal moment.  They still find success and survive, but it created a brief argument and lecture afterwards.  Not a shattering of the group, but reminding the character that they need to trust each other.  So, it got me thinking about how authors have used the secret trope.

Minor

These are small background secrets of a character that come out as flavoring throughout the adventure.  It isn’t that they are purposely keeping a secret out of shame, but these things aren’t important enough to mention.  Regional knowledge can fall under this category since it wouldn’t come up outside of specific situations.  Nobody is angry about the ‘secret’ here because it doesn’t do any damage before or after its revelation.

Fear/Shame-Induced

This one is fairly common and can go either way with hurting the group.  The premise is that there is a dark secret the character fears others knowing, especially after they have found a place to belong.  For example, the hero who comes from a family of villains might do this.  It can backfire when they bring extra attention and threats to the group, who don’t know what is going on.  The revelation can be met with shock, a sudden loss of trust, and confusion.  Yet, this most often results in the character proving they aren’t like their family and solidifying their role in the group.  So, one could see this as a predominantly positive secret situation.

Greed-Induced

Definitely a destructive secret since this is intentional and comes from a darker part of the soul.  This can cover a character who takes a powerful artifact, money, or an essential item without telling anyone.  Problems occur because of this action either because other people want it or there are challenges it could help with, but it wasn’t used.  Many times, the character knows they shouldn’t have or keep the item to themselves, but they do it anyway.  The revelation can, and usually does, break the group in a way that the secret holder is ostracized.  If not kicked out right away, they are not fully trusted until they get some redemption.

Unknown Secret

This is a weird one that just came to mind.  A character has a secret, but they don’t realize it’s a secret.  They might have some information or an item that they feel is mundane, but is really important.  So, they don’t realize they are keeping a big secret from the rest of the group.  It usually stems from ignorance or innocence.  Once the revelation happens, there can be some anger from the others.  It has to be made clear that the character had no idea they were doing anything wrong.  That way, the group isn’t shattered, but they might be more ‘parent-like’ with their friend.

Dark Secret

Feel like this is mandatory since people love using the term.  It can probably be considered the same as ‘fear/shame’ though.  There could be a slight alteration on some of them though.  Typically, a dark secret is one where the character doesn’t want people to know because they are ashamed or afraid of the consequences.  Now, I have seen some uses where the character keeps the dark secret because they know it will not be accepted by the others.  They aren’t ashamed of it.  They simply know it isn’t seen as a positive by society, so they keep quiet.  When revealed, it can cause a big mess with the character refusing to be sorry since they have rationalized it.

Bright Secret?

Not sure what to call the opposite of a ‘dark secret’.  These are harmless ones that will cause joy or help when revealed.  Somebody caring a powerful, one-use weapon for an emergency is an example.  They don’t say anything because they don’t want to be forced to use it for a situation they feel isn’t worth it.  Might be a little annoyance at the use, but a simple ‘I cannot use it again’ explanation can fix that.  I would say surprise parties, gifts, and other positives can fall into this category.

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Daylight Savings Time Comes to An End

For those of us unfortunate enough to live under the rule of Daylight Savings Time, we end up turning our clocks back an hour.  Supposed to save money, help farmers, reduce accidents, or some reason that seems to change every few years.  All I know is that I have to change my car clock and it’s a sign that darkness is going to start in around 4:30.  The park will close around 5, which means months of having to go to the mall if I want to take a walk after work.  The onset of seasonal depression starts appearing for many as well and that pretty much turns the next 5 months into a miserable experience.  Here are some memes from a Google Image Search:

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Goal Post: Halloween In The Rearview Mirror

First, I want to post the link to my son’s Chorus trip fundraiser.  They are performing at Disney World next year, so they’re doing a fundraiser.  It’s just a donation thing, but I figure I would post the link and see what happens:

Donation

Now . . . What in the world happened this week?  It was a full week of work, but things were crazy with Halloween yesterday.  That holiday always creates a weird vibe in schools because the kids are gearing up for the fun.  Many teachers are too, so it can become a clash of energies on the actual day.  It’s definitely been worse though.  A bunch of other stressful work-related things probably added to the vibe.  At least we’re doing a virtual day next Tuesday, which can help.

Writing-wise, I did manage to get one section of Darwin & the Joy Path completed while my son hung out with friends.  That was last weekend, so the week wasn’t nearly as kind.  I was hoping to get some writing done on Wednesday, but a storm on Thursday forced me to use that time for errands.  The actual day of the storm would have been good for writing, but I . . . was driving through it for an appointment.  Let’s just say things weren’t on my side once Monday hit.

To be fair, I couldn’t wrap my head around the last section of Chapter 6.  I realized I had dangerous trees again.  Yes, they’re traveling through an eerie forest where there are barely any animals.  Yes, there is fog everywhere and trees make for good obstacles.  I just can’t keep having them fight the damn things, so I needed to come up with a new threat to close this part of the story.  Didn’t help that a character basically shows up and is no longer needed, which is how it was supposed to go.  Only I made an actual history for this tertiary character and they don’t even get to speak.  This one is entirely on me, but I have a brain itch to still find a way to get their history noted in the text.

My writing goal is to get through Chapters 6 and 7 this weekend.  It’s possible since 7 is a downtime chapter after an action-packed one.  Not that it’s boring, but it has more dialog and a set up for Chapter 8.  If I’m lucky, I might be able to start 8 and even get a little written during the week.  I won’t get my hopes up though.

Starting to wonder about my writing style too.  I keep wondering if it’s more simplistic than when I started.  Can’t exactly explain it.  I still use as many big words as I can without losing comprehension, but my stories kind of feel lower key.  Trying to find a way to explain this without making it sound like a negative.  Almost like the stories I’m writing might be better for teenagers and those who aren’t hardcore fantasy fans.  Maybe those who simply want a story to casually read and relax with.  Pure escapism that can trigger deeper thought if the reader wishes it to.

I think one source of fear is that I see so many readers attack stories for not being deep enough or being ‘standard’.  Everyone wants something new and surprising, but go out of their way to find a reason for a story to not be categorized as such.  Since my stories are follow traditional hero patterns with character-specific twists, I think I’d be an easy target for this criticism.  On the other hand, my son has been talking about what he likes about Beginning of a Hero and the simplicity is kind of what is drawing him along.  He isn’t getting confused by the story and characters.  Then again, he isn’t very far into the story, so that could change.  Maybe I’m looking at him as an example of what my target audience should be.  Not that I know what that would be.

Next week shouldn’t be too busy and I might be able to sneak some writing in on a few days.  I won’t hold my breath though.  The week after is going to be a wash because it’s the BIG Pokemon event for the season, which will run from Monday through Sunday night.  I will accept that right now and not get my hopes up.  Anyway, I’ll try to focus on January blog posts (minus the Tuesday stuff that I haven’t figured out yet) and working in my notebooks.  Need to make some progress, right?

Goals of the week:

  1. Write more of Darwin & the Joy Path.
  2. Clean the bathroom.
  3. Spend time with son.
  4. Don’t eat too much leftover candy.
  5. Catch Pokemon.
  6. Improve sleep since my anxiety has been causing issues.
  7. Puzzles!
  8. Figure out a show I can watch.
  9. Finish more January blog posts.

Son’s Halloween costume since I apparently never posted it before:

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Happy Halloween!

It’s the usual today.  Bunch of memes I found on Google and a music video of one of my favorite Halloween songs.  Took a lot to hold off on it until today.

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Poetry Day: Speeder

Google Image Search

(We’ve all seen people like this.)

I saw you

Nostrils blazing in my rear view

Your tongue licking your lips

As you rocket by me

Windows shaking in your wake

Those around you are fools

Inching along at fifty

Kissing bumpers as they go

You are a true mastermind

Finding the smallest gap

And plugging in at eighty

Ignoring the honking horns

The highway is your playground

Nothing can stop you

You are invincible

Until your car hits the overpass

And you keep sailing on

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Hard Science Fiction

(Cracks knuckles) (There is no emoji for that one.) Hi again, Gang. Craig with you for another dive into the speculative genres. So far we have …

Hard Science Fiction
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Questions 3: Ghosts and Hauntings

Coming to the end of the ghost month, I think I’ll open the floor to people.  If you don’t believe in ghosts then don’t feel obligated to answer or give a long comment about why they don’t exist.  I’ve walked into that one before and it isn’t fun.  This is all about fun.

  1. What is your favorite ghost story?
  2. Have you ever had a paranormal experience? (Think hard)
  3. If you were a ghost, what would you do?
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Teaser Tuesday: Needing a Challenge

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

(A short and ominous scene from War of Nytefall: Savagery.)

With a half-hearted swing of his arm, Alastyre decapitates two of the Dawn Fangs that jump on him from the rooftop. The third fighter is grabbed by the face and held aloft while the hunter admires the unique collection of buildings that make up Nytefall. For years, he has tried to imagine what Clyde’s kingdom looks like, so the reality has been a constant source of amusement. Instead of dark streets and eternal night, the island is bathed in sunlight and more reminiscent of a tropical paradise than a crypt. He notes that every Dawn Fang has built a home or business using the architecture of their homeland, which makes him wonder why these citizens never attempted to return to the mortal world. With a  shrug, he twists the head off his flailing sparring partner and examines the snarling face before tossing it into a cart. With a tired sigh, Alastyre wipes his hands on his bare chest and turns to see if his latest display of strength has had any effect on his audience. All of the silent Dawn Fangs stare ahead and stand at attention like they have been doing since he left the fortress. He frowns and at how they are ready to be called on to fight the monster in the name of their leader regardless of their low chances of survival. Glancing at those standing high atop the fortress wall, he can see that his special prisoners remain unfazed by the carnage.

“You look disappointed,” Kai says after he gathers the last of the severed heads. Gently placing them in the cart, he goes about stacking the bodies in a collection of coffins. “They know Clyde is alive and believe he will save them. The deaths of their kin only fuel their desire to stand strong until salvation arrives. Those brought over from Nyte are the ones showing any amount of wavering, but they are taking strength from Xavier and Nadia. You need to make an example today. Not what you did to Chastity and Archillious. While their heads being mounted on the wall had an initial shock, the impact has already disappeared.”

“I was hoping that the death of twenty brave citizens would get the job done,” Alastyre admits in a low voice. His eyes fall on a young Dawn Fang, the halfling already brandishing the axe blades that come out of her wrists. “They are scared, but not enough. I thought their spirits would break as easily as their flesh. There are fools who believe Dawn Fangs are mortal in how they think and feel. Not driven by hunger, but by emotions. If that is the case then I will have to attack their hearts.”

“What do you have in mind?” the spymaster cautiously asks. The thought of the killer stumbling onto the true way to destroy a Dawn Fang makes him shiver, but a sneeze helps him hide the reaction. “I mean, decapitation is how you defeat a vampire. Just because their hearts beat doesn’t mean destroying them will be effective. Perhaps symbolic, but that will only work once and fade much like the wall display.”

“I meant that I should deal an emotional blow.”

“I see. Sorry for my foolishness.”

“No, I understand why you would think so literally.”

“May I make a suggestion?”

“Of course.”

“Defeat one of their heroes in combat.”

“And who did you have in mind?”

Find out who the victim will be in War of Nytefall: Savagery for 99 cents!

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Ghost Month: The Poltergeist

Poltergeist

This could be the most famous type of ghost because of the movie.  At least it’s a name that people recognize.  So, what is a poltergeist in terms of folklore?

With the name originating in Germany, poltergeists are spirits found across the globe that caused physical disturbances.  Their most common activities are making noises and moving stuff around.  Sometimes they simply move an object when nobody is looking, but other times they will hurl it in anger.  Other stories talk of them attacking people through mysterious bites or even tripping.  Flickering lights, foul smells, and sudden fires are considered signs of a poltergeist even if they are not done consciously by the ghost.  A person could see how these ghosts are the most physically interactive ones out there.

Now, a poltergeist isn’t tied to a dead person.  They could be considered a spirit born from strong emotions of a living person.  Many stories tie them to teenagers who are suffering from depression and/or anxiety.  If this is the case, a poltergeist would be a manifestation of emotional turmoil.  It could even be that the people who conjure them have some level of telekinesis or psychokinesis, but can’t consciously access these abilities.  So, a poltergeist is created by the subconscious to unleash these powers.  Of course, this is all theory.

Poltergeists have been tied to a lot of hoaxes as well.  It seems fairly easy to rig things to move using finishing line, magnets, and/or shadows.  Not sure how I feel about this because I know many ghost stories can be chalked up to hoaxes or misunderstandings.  It would be why many people don’t believe in them, which I think the poltergeist perfectly encapsulates.  There have been so many fakes that most would never believe such a thing exists.  The possibility is denied, which means any evidence that it could be real simply points to another hoax.  Not like a poltergeist is going to get offended and jump on the news to declare its existence.

This makes me wonder why people are so quick to say ghosts don’t exist.  I have a few theories:

  1. Many require tangibility to believe something.  You need to see it, feel it, hear it, or have some sense trigger it.  Ghosts may do that at times, but in ways that a rational mind can put on another source.  Not like you can grab one, so it’s something fairly impossible to prove.
  2. Religion ties much of the supernatural into God, angels, and demons.  This results in other paranormal entities falling outside of a person’s belief circle.  It could even go against their beliefs, which many don’t want challenged.
  3. The existence of ghosts can bring in difficult questions about the soul and afterlife.  I think many people go with either Heaven/Hell or nothing.  There are other ideas about what happens after we die, but becoming a ghost is typically seen as a negative.  You are either being punished or have become trapped.  You can’t move on to the true afterlife and join your loved ones.  A ghost is simply stuck on Earth with no way to truly interact and communicate with those around them.  It sounds like Hell and believing it’s a possibility can shake a person to their core.  Better to feel like that isn’t an option at all.

Odd question:  Anybody think they’ve ever encountered or seen the aftermath of a poltergeist?

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Happy National Pumpkin Day

The picture above speaks for itself.  Happy National Pumpkin Day whether you look the spice, pie, carvings, color, or the Great One.  Enjoy.

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