Immortal Wars: Light, Blood, & Tears Part 19

(Disclaimer: A warning to those who continue.  This is a sequel to a previous story.  Both of these were written in the mid-1990’s.  While the first one was slightly edited and vanity press published, this one has not been touched in over 20 years.  I figure I should do something with it and people may get a laugh or fright from how I used to be.  Every author comes from somewhere, so this is part of my origin.  To that end, I am deeply sorry for whatever nightmares I will inflict on the literary world and the American English language.  Enjoy?)

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While Hydrana is flying toward Central Park, two tired figures are resting by their own spaceship.  Adriana is busy resting by a tree and Tegam is rummaging around inside the space shuttle.  Her hair is now shoulder-length and has a glossy look to it.  She simply stares up at the night sky and silently names every star that she sees.  In her hands is a phone book and an address in Oceanhead is highlighted.

“I can understand you wanting to get your hair cut short.  But I can’t believe you bought that last mall’s entire lingerie selection.  Even after you gave that money to city hall.  That, I must admit, was a very noble act and I was glad to be a part of it.  Still, why did you decide to buy all those intimate accessories?  Or is that something I can find out on a later date,” mentions Tegam while he continues to repair their shuttle’s important systems.  All he has managed to fix so far is the windshield wipers and one of the headlights.

“That’s personal information.  How are you feeling after falling off the mall’s roof?” Adriana replies from outside.  She closes her eyes after picking out a few more stars and she slows her breathing down.  The only sounds that she can hear are the buzzing insects and Tegam’s power tools.

“I’m okay.  But I didn’t exactly fall off the mall.  I jumped.  After following you on a shopping spree, I think I had a right to hurt myself.  Where are we staying tonight?  I heard Draveon and Cybro are staying in one of the city’s fancy hotels.  I’m not sure if they are staying there legally or not.”

“We shouldn’t waste anymore of my easy-earned money.  It will take me a few months of playing stock markets and making deals in order to get my money back.  Besides, it’s a nice, winter night and I want to enjoy it.  Just us and nature without any civilized interruptions.  Ouch.  Damn insect bites are driving me nuts.  Is the television set up yet or are you goofing off again?”  The blond gets to her feet and climbs into the shuttle.  Inside, Tegam is just finishing what she had ordered him to do.

“All I have to do is plug it in.  But I thought you said that you wanted to become one with nature.  What changed your mind?” laughs the jester.  He gets a small slap upside his head as Adriana walks past him.

“Nature isn’t all it’s cracked up to be.  I thought that most of the insects were gone during the winter.  Guess the weather around here isn’t as cold as it was when we lived on Earth.  Some of those bugs nearly ate me alive.  Where the hell is my staff?  I mean, look at these marks on my body.  They hurt like hellfire.  This is definitely the last time I come to New York with a uniform that dips down to my bellybutton.  It’s a good thing I brought that pink bodysuit along with us.”  Adriana continues scratching at her chest and neck as red blotches start appearing.  She finally finds her staff and proceeds to fire a beam of blue light into herself.  The blotches and itching rapidly disappear while Adriana changes into the tight bodysuit.

“That big one in the middle of your chest didn’t look like a bug bite.  Looked more like a human bite mark.”

“So, one of them wasn’t a bug bite.  It still hurt because that big guy used his teeth.  He may have been extremely cute, but I don’t think I will ever sleep with him again.  Even for me he was too rough, which says a lot.  That and he died of a heart attack when I was done with him.  They just don’t make men like they used to.  No more stamina and durability.”

“When did all of this happen?  I was with you the whole time, except for that hour I was part of the pavement.”

“A lot can happen in an hour.  Are you finished with the television?  This is taking forever.  I thought you only had to plug the TV in.”

“Sorry.  I’ve been feeling confused of late.  My mind has been a little on the frazzled side and my attention span is less than normal.  Here we go, Adriana.  The late night news is all we can get for now.  I’ll turn it off and try to enhance the channel selection.  Cartoons have to be here somewhere,” says Tegam.  He goes to hit a few buttons, but Adriana suddenly grabs him by the shoulder.

“Hold it.  Listen to that guy with the dead hamster on his head.  He just said something tragic has happened at Mandervale mansion.  That’s the Neptune guardian’s old home.  Hydrana might be here to help out her family.  We could take the water sprite out before having to deal with the other guardians,” mentions Adriana as she stares at the television.

The man on the television appears again and says, “A tragedy has occurred at the home of multi-billionaire, Bill Mandervale.  Around midnight tonight, a young woman, who is said to resemble his presumed dead daughter, Delila Mandervale III, went on a rampage.  As unbelieving as this sounds, this woman is reported to have superhuman powers and admitted to several of the injured cops that she was a danger.  She flew off in some type of spaceship after paralyzing Bill Mandervale for life.  The girl is a redhead who is wearing a green outfit that is said to look like it should be in a comic book.  If seen, leave her alone and call the police because this Hydrana, as she calls herself, is extremely dangerous.  Now, to George with this week’s weather.”

The television suddenly dies and Tegam whispers, “How bad and painful is this going to be?”

“It depends.  If you want to either land up in traction or die, it’s a good thing.  A rogue guardian is something I don’t want to deal with.  She’s crazy enough to nearly kill her own father.  That puts her very close to Psylon’s level.  Most likely the other guardians will be arriving in order to get a hold of Hydrana.  Let’s just hope we don’t have a first-hand experience with the crazy guardian.  Of course, she could be anywhere since it’s three o’clock in the morning,” replies Adriana.  Before either immortal knows what is happening, a blast of cold water knocks them out of the shuttle.  When they grab their weapons and stand up, an ice cage appears around them.  Standing a few feet away in the shadows is Hydrana with a light blue glow in her eyes.

“Nice haircut, Adriana.  The short cut really does look better on you than waist-length hair.  But do you know that both of you are very lucky?  You see, I want to kill all four of you at once.  But that doesn’t mean I won’t torture you two.  Do you like the new me, psycho slut?” asks Hydrana as she slowly moves up the cage and stares at her prey.  Tegam hits a few ice bars with his copper rope whip, which turns them into jungle vines that grab the guardian.

“Honestly, I never liked sadistic maniacs like you and Psylon.  A good villain is an almost sane one like me, who simply enjoys evil.  People like me are leaders and we have enough brains to prove it.  Now, where are your annoying friends?” Adriana whispers while her staff’s light suddenly goes from blue to bright red.  When she shoots the new type of healing beam into Hydrana, she expects the redhead to return to her old, heroic self.

“Nice try, psycho slut.  But I’m way too far-gone to be brought back by the powers of your puny stick.  At least Tegam was smart enough to run away while I was stuck in these vines,” laughs Hydrana.

Adriana whirls around and doesn’t see the immortal prankster anywhere.  She swears under her breath as Hydrana drains the water out of the vines.  This causes them to become frail and brown.  They easily crumble as she attempts to take a step toward Adriana.  Once she is free, the Neptune guardian punches Adriana in the chest.  The only effect is that Adriana gets shoved back and lets out a puff of air.

“You’re so lucky that you have a lot of padding in that spot.  My hand would have gone straight through your ribcage.  As for the other guardians, I wouldn’t worry about them right now.  They should be showing up as soon as they’re done licking their wounds.  Now, I know you wanted to kill all of us on this trip.  Was there anything else that you wanted?”

“Since you asked so nicely and I don’t care if you do know the basics of my plan.  I was going to check on Fate’s history.  He is the only one that we don’t know that much about.  The rest of you are easier to figure out than a children’s puzzle.  This was also a plan to get back the sword of light for Draveon.  He’s been bugging me about the sword for the past eleven months.  But I doubt you would have that with you.  Only Fate uses that weapon,” explains Adriana.

“On normal occasions you would be right.  This isn’t normal.  I think this is what you are looking for.  I’m surprised you didn’t noticed the extra light in this area of the park.  There aren’t any lamp posts here,” Hydrana laughs as she yanks the magic sword out of a shadow-covered tree branch.

“You stole the sword of light?  I don’t believe this.  Stealing, betraying, maiming, and who knows what else.  You would have made an excellent villain, water sprite.  Of course, you could still join my side.  I’d like to keep it at nine, so feel free to off Psylon when we go back to Pluto.”

A snapping twig is barely heard as Tegam appears behind Hydrana.  He grabs her from behind just as Adriana runs in to repeatedly kick the younger immortal in the stomach.  The guardian takes the painful shots with a few angry grunts until she gets enough leverage to flip herself over Tegam.  Both of them break their arms, yet Hydrana still manages to pick up the sword and hit Tegam in the face with the flat side of the blade.

“My eyes!  I can’t see!  This really sucks!” howls the prankster as a flash of bright light erupts from the sword.  When Adriana fires a beam of healing energy at Tegam, Hydrana simply steps in the way and gets her own bones healed.  Adriana desperately leaps at the Neptune guardian, but gets effortlessly kicked into a nearby lake.  Soon the water is turned to ice and it encases everything below the panicking immortal’s trembling neck.

“I could have sworn you were a better fighter than this, Adriana,” states Hydrana as she glides over to the frozen immortal.

“I’m out of practice.  Been spending too much time in a lab I guess.  Next time we meet, Tegam and I will kick your watery ass all over this galaxy,” threatens Adriana as she tries to struggle free.  The ice around her begins to crack and she starts to pull herself free.  Hydrana suddenly holds Adriana down and proceeds to kiss the stunned villain on her full lips.

“Didn’t meant to be too forward with the kiss, Adriana.  But I have an interesting trick to show you.  I have so many bad memories that I can hand them out to other immortals like candy is handed out during Halloween.  Only these little candies will make you go insane.  You’ll become just like me in two or three days.  Eventually, Fate will join the two of us.  His mental defenses are surprisingly strong for a boy his age, but they are not strong enough to keep my thoughts in check forever.  Anyway, the kiss is only to start the process while the rest is a lot more painful.  Feel free to scream as loud as you want.  I don’t think anyone will really care in this city,” whispers Hydrana as she presses her fingers into Adriana’s skull.

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7 Tips to Deciding on Adventuring Party Size

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First, I realize this is the 2nd of 3 Wednesday ‘7 tip’ posts.  Didn’t realize that was going on until I looked at my dwindling topic schedule.  Anyway, this stems from the challenge of deciding on how big a fantasy adventuring party should be.  Many will say that it isn’t important, but others may think it will impact the entire story.  Both sides make good cases, but saying it doesn’t matter means I have no reason for this post.  Let’s get to the list.

  1. Consider the length of the adventure and series.  If you want a short one then a large group might make things too cluttered or rushed.  If you have a small group and a long adventure then readers might get bored with the same faces.  Leave this flexible too because the quest and the characters will evolve each other.  You never know if a trilogy will lengthen because the party grew or a secondary proved to have more than you originally expected.
  2. The smaller the group, the fewer the subplots.  While you can pile a bunch of secondary quests and issues on 1-3 characters, it eventually drags them down.  They will have so many problems that they’re perceived as a disaster.  It can also drag them away from the main quest, which can be dwarfed by a vast collection of personal issues that need attending to.  If you want a lot of subplots then you need a group big enough to spread the challenges around.
  3. If you have a single protagonist then you probably don’t need a large group.  The attention will be primarily on them, so all of the secondary characters will be there for support.  Having many adventuring companions can bog down scenes and turn the non-central heroes into silhouettes.  You can’t have them overshadow your hero, so you end up having most of them sitting around or getting only one line per scene.  Imagine having 12 people in a room for a discussion, but only 1-2 are talking.  What’s the point of the others even being there?
  4. If the quest is going to involve a lot of traps, spells, and battles then it would be a good idea to create a group with variety.  Think about what you want them to face and craft the party in a way that checks off needed skills and abilities.  Characters can double-up on things since you don’t want clichés, which helps to prevent a group from getting too large.  Leave room for weakness too, so try not to cover every base perfectly.  It can be fun to figure out unique ways out of problems as well.
  5. Don’t be afraid to add or subtract characters from a group.  Maybe one wasn’t working out like you’d planned.  A problem could be impossible for them to solve without recruiting someone.  Adventuring parties don’t have to be written in stone, so it’s fine if the roster changes.
  6. Sometimes the party has to split into smaller groups to continue the plot.  It can be by their choice or caused by an accident.  They’re still a ‘party’ in terms of being the main heroes of the adventure.  It’s simply that they have to be apart for a while in order to grow and move events along.  It can create some new dynamics when they reunite as well because they’ll be returning changed.  At least, they should be different on some level.
  7. Follow your gut.  Not a great piece of advice, but it has to be in there somewhere.  After all, you know your story and world better than anyone.
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Let’s Talk a Little About the Hierarchy of Needs

Hi SEers, John with you again. Today I would like to discuss how your needs could affect your writing. To do this effectively, I’m going to pop back …

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Teaser Tuesday: A Frustrating Stroll #fantasy #vampires

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Not much of a set up for this War of Nytefall: Savagery excerpt.  Just Clyde finding himself in another jam.  Have fun.

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Pieces of an Adventuring Party

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Fantasy adventures commonly have groups of heroes even if only one of them is the primary antagonist.  A challenge for any author is to piece one together that is effective and interesting.  You can go with all warriors or all casters, but most times you’ll find a variety of abilities.  That’s because the more skills and abilities you have, the more challenges you can throw at them.  So, it pays to know the roles that can be held in an adventuring party:

  • Warrior–  I have weapon and I kill things.
  • Barbarian/Brute Warrior–  I have weapon and I kill things better . . . I no think good.
  • Trained Caster–  I’ve studied to hurl fireballs at things.
  • Untrained Caster–  I can just hurl fireballs without trying.
  • The Archer–  Betting I’m either an elf, half-elf, or a woman.
  • Friendly Priest–  Healing and destroying undead.
  • Zealot Priest–  Healing, destroying undead, and trying to convert my friends.
  • Thief–  Traps, stealth, and the source of 75% of the group’s problems.
  • Assassin–  I’m the child of Warrior and Thief with a love of money and death.
  • Necrocaster–  When you REALLY want inner party conflict.
  • Seductive Thief–  Are we going for a rating of R or NC-17?
  • Mascot–  I serve no purpose beyond being cute and promotional materials.
  • Bard–  Let me sing you a song that might be a spell.
  • Shaman–  Spirits do my bidding, but don’t ask about the afterlife.
  • Paladin–  Big horse!  Big armor!  Big weapon!  Holy smite!
  • Knight–  Maybe I’m an armored prick and maybe I’m an armored hero.
  • Inventor–  Even I don’t know how I keep finding materials for my creations while traveling?
  • *Insert Non-Human Race*–  We’re stereotypes.  Please move on.
  • Drunk–  Not just a personality in this kind of story.
  • Hand-to-Hand Guy–  Bruce Lee.  I’m really just an insulting variation of Bruce Lee.
  • Ranger/Wilderness Guy–  I’ve got stealth, weapons, lice, and a pungent aroma.
  • Merchant–  I’m here for the money.
  • Horse–  I forget I’m around too.
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Vella anyone???

Hi gang. Craig with you today and there’s something new on the self publishing horizon. It’s officially called Kindle Vella. I’m kind of interested …

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How to Write a Sidekick

Ciao, SEers! Today I thought we’d talk about a character who isn’t used often enough and is discussed even less. I’m referring to the sidekick. Sure,…

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Semi-Review: Castlevania and Invincible

I binge-watched two animated series that were both similar and different.  ‘Castlevania’ was the fourth and final season of a horror/fantasy adventure based on the video game series.  ‘Invincible’ was the first season of a superhero/coming of age story based on a comic book series.  One had vampires and demons.  The other had aliens and supervillains.  Both had gore, slow builds, and a lot of character introspection.  So, it was an odd, but functional pairing.

I’m probably biased here because I played several of the games, read a comic version at one point, and have loved this series since the start.  That made the viewing rather bittersweet since it was the finale.  What is the story?

Trevor Belmont is the last of the Belmont clan who hunt vampires and the monsters that they control.  Sypha is a sorceress who he travels with and has the best one-liners of the entire series.  Alucard is the son of Count Dracula and Lisa Tepes.  There are other characters, but those are the main three.  Dracula has declared war on humanity for burning his wife at the stake and his vampire court is causing trouble too.  I really can’t go into details without ruining Seasons 1-3.

I enjoyed how all of the characters had their own stories and evolutions.  Though, I was annoyed a few times when characters I truly wanted to despise gained my sympathy.  Says something about the storytelling.  This also ended up being a downside for a bit because it meant the first 5 of the 10 episodes was primarily set up.  Each one focused on a character or group to show what they were doing then episode 6 is where the action explodes . . . I mean, it really just hits the gas and continues barreling ahead.  You will start to question how things will tie up, but it all comes together fairly neatly.  The series certainly ended on a high note.

I really recommend this series, but it does have a lot of gore, monsters, and season 3 added sex to the mix.  Surprisingly, no sex scenes in season 4, but I’m okay with that.

I never read the comics, but I knew of the character for a while.  Still, it meant I was coming in with no pre-existing knowledge.  I’d heard a lot of good things too, but nothing specific.  A few people told me it built up speed slowly, which is what I thought about ‘Castlevania’.  That’s another reason I jumped to it so soon.

The story is about a teenager whose father is a superhero.  He gains his powers and becomes the superhero known as Invincible.  He battles various villains and works with other heroes to show how this work operates.  There’s also a lot of normal life drama he deals with such as bullying, dating, school, and a part-time job.  This reminded me of Spider-Man in the earlier comics.  Not to mention Invincible looks like Peter Parker when he’s not in costume.  Anyway, big things happen that tests his limits and shakes his life to the very foundation.  That’s all I can say there.

As much as I enjoyed this series, it did have moments where I let it be background noise and did something else in the room.  The episodes were around 45 minutes each (Castlevania ranged from 23-31/32) and that felt like it was about 10 minutes too long for the story.  The action would be frenetic and then it would drop right into a talking period for a while.  It’s not necessarily bad, but it was jarring at first.  Later episodes had better transitions.  I also found myself getting bored with the love life chaos and figuring out his path subplots.  They seemed to get reset for the sake of creating evolution instead of letting him explore his choices to their furthest extent.

Maybe I’m nitpicking because I watched it after the finale of a series I really liked.  I’d still recommend this to anyone who likes violent superhero shows.  Almost like an animated version of ‘The Boys’ . . . Which brings me to a sticking point.

The Gore

It was funny.  I could eat while watching ‘Castlevania’, but not with ‘Invincible’.  Both were really violent with blood and guts everywhere.  It took me awhile to figure out why I was okay with one and not the other.

‘Castlevania’ had monsters know for eating flesh and drinking blood.  The setting and tone is very dark, which matches the color palette.  It just felt like the citizens of this world knew how deadly it was and the violence felt natural.  There was never a point where I thought it went over the top for shock value because it always seemed to fit.  I think the violence and gore was also continued.  You could see it coming and knew that it was happening to further the plot along.  Monsters pounce and drive the heroes to fight, which directs the overall plot.  The gore was a device that you don’t really notice unless it’s a big scene that fixates on it.

‘Invincible’ had people and humanoids who weren’t monsters.  They ate burgers.  They lived in cities and the colors were vividly bright.  So, the gore was impossible to let fall into the background.  You saw people pop like red paint filled balloons.  The camera would linger on entrails and corpses for no other reason than to make the audience squirm.  It was the brutal death that showed how violent the world was instead of the guts being highlighted.  The citizens of this world were getting butchered left and right, but there was never a point where it felt like they knew it was possible.  They went about their lives like they couldn’t be splattered by an alien invasion, superhero fight, or villain.

It felt like death had no effect on the average person here and only a momentary one on the main characters.  This made the extensive use of blood rather strange to me.  I became numb to it all by the 6th episode.  Half a city has been wiped out?  That sucks.  That hero is covered in blood?  He’ll be fine.  That man’s head exploded? I guess we’ll have to stare at the detailed corpse for a second or two.

Look, I still recommend both, but I will admit that they use violence and gore in different way.  That really struck me by the midpoint of ‘Invincible’.  That’s just me though.  I’m sure other people will think differently.

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Goal Post: Whirlwind Week with Extra Sprinkles

Ow . . . Just ow.

My heads is still spinning after all of the things that happened.  My brain has this weird time issue right now.  Monday feels both like it was yesterday and a thousand years ago because of everything.  I’d do a daily split up here, but events get repetitive and mangled at some point.

Most of my time was spent proctoring AP Exams at work.  This was a lot and took up most of the day.  You would think I could outline or do some writing while the kids silently took their tests.  Nope.  I couldn’t let myself get that engrossed in another activity because I had to watch what was going on.  None of the kids that I had were the cheating types and I’d seen all of them at some point to know I could trust them.  Still, I had to watch for a variety of situations in case they happened.  Exhausting.  Next week will be one day of proctoring and then back to the old schedule.

Writing has definitely taken a hit, but mostly due to me not having anything ready for drafting.  I’m still toiling away at the ‘Slumberlord’ outlines.  Think I got 2 done already and I should be finishing a 3rd today.  That leaves me with 2-3 to go and then I can decide on the next step.  Do I Need to Use a Dragon? is still in limbo too, but I might have an artist by mid-summer.  Wait . . . I need to jump back to ‘Slumberlord’ for a bit:

Darwin’s series had 8 volumes and then I had another trilogy that takes place 10 years after the last volume.  The problem is that I’m not sure he can shoulder a trilogy or that the story itself can be stretched that far.  It’s about more Slumberlords appearing, the Dreamscape, a feud between Slumberlord families, and an ancient threat that he has to deal with.  I’m wondering if I can condense this into a single book.  Maybe even cut out the feuding families since Darwin is proving to not have any ability or interest in politics of any kind.  So, I’m struggling with this and getting very close to when I have to make a decision.

Parenting has been minimal because my son was with his mom.  Schedules might change soon, which means less or maybe more writing time.  I’m happy because things will be easier on him and I get to be more involved in his schooling for the final month of the school year.  I sense that he’s getting as burnt out as I am, so we could both use the long break.  I got ‘Pokemon Snap’ for the Nintendo Switch too, which I promised not to start without him.  Funny how it’s a present to me, but he calls the shots.  Anyway, I’m looking forward to a change back to normalcy for us here.

Anything else?  I’m working on a jigsaw puzzle that is missing pieces.  I want to finish it and send a picture to the company to see if they can send me what I need.  This will also tell me if there are more missing than I realize.  Makes it pretty tough to finish.  Lots of colors and the guide poster is rather small, so it’s difficult.  Hoping that I can make a puzzle post after this one, a space one, and a Boris Vallejo puzzle I found.  Yes, that last one has bikini armor since I think him and his wife practically perfected that style of fantasy art.

Even though I had Thursday off, I didn’t do much.  My stomach has been killing me all week, which is an IBS issue.  Stress, weather changing, not enough water, and stress really set the issue off.  Thursday helped me get some of the problem handled, but I’m going to be out of it for a few more days.  Yeah, this is gross.  I’ll stop.

I’ve been watching ‘Hunter x Hunter’, which is a long anime for the most part.  This is after I finished ‘Rosario + Vampire’, which was kind of a let down in the second season.  I finished it to get it done.  ‘HxH’ is fun and I found all 148 episodes on HBO Max instead of 70-something like on Netflix.  Looking forward to hitting the point I’ve never seen, which shouldn’t take long.  Actually, I had to take a break because I binged ‘Castlevania Season 4’ and started watching ‘Invincible’.  I should finish the latter today, so I might write up a post about both tomorrow.  They’re both violent animated adaptations of works with one being from a video game and the other a comic.  It was sad to see ‘Castlevania’ end, so I hope they jump to another era of Dracula-battling.

Oh, I was trying to gather strange writing terms to make July posts around.  I’ve got Plot Armor, Canon (Real vs Head), Idiot Plot, and a week on Eucatastrophe.  Trying to find more, but I’m having trouble.  All I find are really niche ones that hit a specific story or the ultra common ones like trope and cliche.

Goals of the week:

  1. Time with son.
  2. Finish 2, if not all, of the Slumberlord outlines.
  3. Work, of course.
  4. Puzzle time.
  5. Finish the poems for June/early July.  Got 6 more to go.
  6. Get a list of odd writing terms for July
  7. Time with family
  8. Finish ‘Invincible’ and write a post about it.
  9. Biking.  I really need to make this a more common thing.
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The Inventor

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There is a need
That not everyone sees
A gap
That lingers in the shadows
Society can live
Without it filled
Yet it holds the whole world back
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A third eye spots the hole
And a mind toils
Crafting the perfect plug
With future dreams
Feeling driven
To advance humanity
Even a single step
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Completion comes
And the inventor tenses
Introducing their baby
The product of tears
And blood-tinged sweat
Hoping it helps
Or harms

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