Revisiting Origins: Delvin Cunningham

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(Delvin Cunningham had a similar path as Timoran Wrath.  After a cameo, he officially debuted in Family of the Tri-Rune.  He showed up rather close to the end of that book, but proved himself going forward.  This would result in him getting a book that focused primarily on him, which would be The Mercenary Prince.  Did this change up his path?  Maybe.  Definitely have to add to the older post here.)

Delvin Cunningham is a scourge to my spellchecker because Word refuses to believe it’s a name.  This really cements a part of this character where people don’t always pay attention to him.  When teamed up with acrobatic Luke, fire-hurling Nyx, seductive Sari, and powerful Timoran, the ‘standard’ warrior gets overshadowed in terms of combat potential.  Too bad that’s a wrong move with him.

Delvin is the protege of Selenia Hamilton and demonstrates some amazing physical resilience, but his strength is that he’s a thinker.  While Luke is spontaneous, Delvin is a tactician and a quick-witted one at that.  This is why the two of them will typically fight to a draw.  Yet, the sword and shield is rather common, which is why people see Delvin as uninteresting.  This goes for characters and readers. His laid back nature doesn’t help even though that gets cracked a few times in the tenser situations.  Especially when Nyx is involved, which neither confirms nor denies what you’re thinking.

Now, Delvin was played by a friend in the D&D game that the series is based on.  The player dove into the role and was a solid part of the group within one session.  Not much resistance since he was a warrior looking for adventure.  Sadly, we never got to explore much of his background, but the origin of ‘Book Delvin’ is very similar to that of ‘Game Delvin’.  Abandoned on a chunk of ice as a child, miraculously stayed alive, and eventually became Selenia’s prized pupil.  The mercenary thing came when I needed to play around with his origin to give him experience and some characterization meat.  Again, I was never told what the original plan was.

The biggest change between game and book is his personality.  Delvin and Luke were very similar in that they were noble and loyal heroes.  In the game, I couldn’t play Luke with stunts because die rolls aren’t controllable.  So, he was a lot more strategic like Delvin, but I left that trait more with the latter when I wrote the book.  This has turned him into a cautious fighter, so his actions scenes are a lot more block and counter heavy.  He is very precise in most of what he does and has adopted a high sense of responsibility.  Yet, he rarely lets his more intense emotions out, which is different than most of the others.  Timoran does have him beat, but Delvin is quick to find a rational explanation.  In fact, I’ve come to find that he can figure out several scenarios in the time it takes others to think of one.  Most of the character conversations with him, you can get the feeling that he lets everyone else contribute even though he could plan it all himself.  This is why I see him as more of a leader than the others.  He wants everyone to feel like they’re part of a team and tries his best to foster friendships.

A final note with Delvin is that he spent a lot of time as a main/side character.  I never investigated his origins, which led to him being the only hero without a past.  Every other character has something interesting that they face or that built them up.  Delvin had nothing aside from a tale of abandonment, which is what sparked the idea for Book 9 of Legends of Windemere.  I felt bad that he had moments to shine, but was the one hero to never get his own book to shine.  So I get to really explore his mentality, evolution, and past in the next book.  Personally, I can’t wait because it will also reveal the true power behind him.

2023 Update– Delvin definitely mellowed out and become more reactive as the series progressed.  He was still the tactician and thinker of the group, but he adopted a little more of Luke’s impulsiveness than I expected.  Not enough to make them the same type of character, but it loosened Delvin up.  Of course, the big thing for him was the romance with Nyx, which was never hidden.  No matter how much I tried, I couldn’t make it a mystery.  I think this helped with making Delvin a fairly open and honest person because he simply didn’t bother keeping things a secret.  He was an open book for the most part, which was a change of pace.  It also helped make him the leader of the champions even though he didn’t claim the title or act like he was in charge.  Overall, I like how Delvin’s path came about and ended.

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How Do Elementals Work?

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Not sure how much steam this topic has since it’s rather niche.  Just something that popped into my head and I felt like writing about.  You see elementals in fantasy stories a lot, especially as summons.  So, maybe there is something to consider here.

Elementals are rather simple to figure out.  They are creatures composed of, born from, and/or controllers of a single element.  Typically, they are powerful beings that can be friend or foe.  Sometimes there are multiples of an elemental while other times there is a single one for each category.  The whole thing is rather flexible outside of them needing to be connected to one element.  If they have more than one then they are something else, which can be a unique monster or a special elemental.  Maybe find out what happens when you combine things.

I do find it interesting that people divide the elements differently depending on their personal taste.  You can have:

  1. Western Classic– Earth, Air, Water, Fire
  2. Chinese Classic– Wood, Fire, Earth, Metal, Water
  3. Japanese Classic– Earth, Air, Water, Fire, Void
  4. Whatever You Need– Elementals of all kinds including slime, acid, etc.

That really covers everything you can think of.  Mostly because of that final ‘catch all’ category that authors will use to turn anything into an element.  If it’s a natural, non-animal piece of matter then it gets turned into an elemental.  Even that’s not entirely true since I’ve read stories with bone and blood elementals.  They still are composed of the single element, which is how they tend to be.

There are ways to make them look like combinations though.  The broader the category, the more versatility they can have in attacks and forms.  For example, a Fire Elemental in four element system would also have abilities connected to heat, lava, and sometimes even electricity.  You might be scratching your head, but lightning and lava turn into crossover components.  If they can be connected to fire then that’s where they go.  They might be part of an Earth Elemental too.  It really depends on if you can rationalize what they are doing while maintaining the concept of an elemental.

Is there any consistency here?  No . . . Now that I think about it, people seem to go off and do whatever they want here.  You have monstrous elementals composed entirely of their element.  You have humanoids that simply have that element’s power and maybe a few odd physical traits.  Ethereal spirits that can conjure the element is another one.  The only consistency might be that they work with one category.  I keep coming back to that, which is another reason why I knew I couldn’t make this a week-long topic.

Personally, I don’t use elementals that often.  I find them to be overdone and a little too restrictive for what I’ve written so far.  That isn’t to say that I won’t use them when I have to.  I lean towards elementals that are creatures and not humanoid too, so I can’t have them around all the time.  Windemere does have elemental planes where these creatures can be found and mortals can’t survive too.  A rather common thing done in fantasy stories, I might add.  It does mean that they would be rare and usually summoned by a caster.  So, I don’t give them much attention unless I need a creature in that type of situation.

Well, that’s all I’ve got.  Maybe I’ll come up with something better for Wednesday.

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Happy International Hamburger Day!

As if I would pass up on this day once I stumbled onto it.  So:

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Goal Post: Three Day Weekend is Totally Needed!

I don’t even want to take a peek at the goals I made for this week.  Pretty sure I hit survival mode on Tuesday and everything else became a blur.  Last weekend was fun with quality father/son time, which included ‘Gremlins 2’ and video games.  Once Monday hit, things started to get dicey.  What happened exactly?

Well, the first thing I can tell you is that I didn’t get any writing done.  I think I got maybe 2 September blog posts done.  I stared at a notebook once before I decided that I was more likely to drool on the pages than write.  It wasn’t that there were no ideas in my head.  Just couldn’t muster the focus and energy to get them on paper.  I plan on writing up the outline for Darwin & the Beast Collector this weekend though.  It’s right next to me in the correct notebook as I write this post.  I can even lazily flick at it while I try to remember where I put my outlining paper pad.  These are really personalized pads that I got when I worked my first office job in 2003-2005.  They’ve lasted this long because I only use them for outlining.  Determined to get this done, so I can start in on writing the book once school is over.

Speaking of writing, I’m still worried that I’m a hack.  Hard to shake this when I haven’t published anything for a while.  Maybe it’s a phase because I don’t get any responses to my books.  Makes it hard to really settle down and dig into an idea though.  Anyway, this isn’t really what I want this post to be about.  Pickled pear vodka is making me ramble . . . I’m writing this Friday night, so don’t think I’m starting my day with booze.  I’m starting it with lemon and honey tea, a homemade sausage/egg sandwich, and 30 minutes on the exercise bike.

Returning to the week, work was probably where the lion’s share of my energy went.  I had meetings, party prep, coverages, and a field trip.  Made a tactical error on that last thing because it was a big event for Life Skills classes around the area.  It was basically Field Day with 10 physical events, pizza, and an award ceremony.  The mistake I made was thinking some of the events would be indoors, so I didn’t bring any sunscreen to reapply.  They were all outside, so the back of my neck and . . . exposed scalp got cooked.  Still had a blast and was very proud of all of our students.  Two earned Sportsmanship medals and one took the Cup Stacking trophy.  Always happy to see these kids excel and have fun.  Going to get to see it again next week when our Unified Basketball team steps into the championship games on Tuesday and Wednesday.  They’re undefeated for the season, so they’re going to kick tuchus.

Don’t ask me what happened Thursday because that day was a . . . Oh yeah.  So, my son’ s Lego Robotics team had their tournament yesterday.  On Thursday, I got a text from my son saying that the parent who was going to get pizza wasn’t able to do it and he was giving me the email list to take over.  I took this as him volunteering me, but it was his version of asking if I could do it.  Well, I didn’t figure that out until I said I would do so, which is fine because I pulled it off.  Don’t want the kids to go hungry on their big day.  Already put in for a half work day on the tournament day, so I did my other appointment by phone while on my way to get the pizzas.  Then, off to the tournament, which was an entire afternoon of action, drama, comedy, and interacting with the ex-wife.  That last one is just in its own category at this point.

How did my son’s team and their sister team do?  His team made it into the semi-finals, but lost to get 3rd place.  That’s still very good considering the robot they made and the ones they were up against.  Thinking back, I’d definitely list them and their sister team as underdogs.  Their sister team got into the quarter-finals and won the Sportsmanship award.  Great to see both teams go home with trophies.  Kind of sad that this is my son’s last Lego Robotics tournament and we’re not sure if his high school has a robotics team or not.  Guess we’ll see what happens.  All of the pictures with him had other people in it, so I’ll put up the picture of his team’s robot:

Lego Robot

Can’t think of much else to talk about here.  This weekend is going to be outlining, puzzle work, finishing ‘White Collar’, maybe working on Phi Beta Files, and a few urgent errands.  For the most part, I want to rest and be ready for the last 18 days of the school year.  That seems easier to handle than 4 weeks since there are 2 holidays and 4 weekends in that phrase.  Home stretch of the home stretch here.  I know it’s going to be busy since my son has finals coming.  Won’t be much in the way of quiet times here.  All I can do is rest when I can and think about the finish line.

Goals of the week:

  1. Revise Darwin & the Beast Collector outline.
  2. Finish September blog posts.
  3. Tinker with Phi Beta Files.
  4. Get a surprise thing for a person this weekend.
  5. Go to at least the semi-finals for Unified Basketball.
  6. Work on this blasted puzzle that didn’t come with a clear picture.
  7. Biking and resting to get my blood pressure down.  I’m not sure how the bottom number works since it bounces from 82 to 98 throughout the week.
  8. Look into buying a new ‘meaning of names’ book.  The baby name book I’ve had for 15-16 years doesn’t do it for me any more.
  9. Continue trying to improve diet.  This past week didn’t go as smoothly as it should have, so I need to make major changes.
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Questions 3: How to Make Reading Fun?

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Here we are at the end of the week.  Been an interesting topic.  I figure it’s good to end on a highly interactive post.  For those who are teachers or have children, this might be fairly easy.  For others, maybe not.  Guess we’ll see.

  1. Has the topic of this week changed your view on getting kids to read?
  2. How would you get a hesitant child to read?
  3. As an author, what could you put in your writing to draw in non-readers?
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Why Am I Writing and Publishing Books?

Photo by Becca Tapert on Unsplash Hi, SE’ers. John here on this last Friday of May. (The time flies cliche works beautifully here) I have been …

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Poetry Day: Even When I Win, I Lose

Earl Tyrant from Final Fantasy Unlimited

(This one probably happened after I was forced to go to something and then got lectured because I didn’t look comfortable.  Yet, I chose an activity and the people I was with didn’t take it seriously.  So, it left me wondering why some people ruin events others planned and then get upset when the same is done to them.)

I get to choose the restaurant
But everyone decides to cancel
Leaving me to eat alone

I choose the movie that we watch
But everyone decides to talk
From previews until credit reel

I get to choose the sport we play
But everyone stays on the bench
Forcing us to stop the game

I get to choose the vacation spot
But everyone cries and whines
Never trying to have fun

If I am not the one who chooses
I am demanded to behave
Why can you not do the same?

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7 Tips to Nurturing Reading

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As I said on Monday, there are a lot of threats to reading.  We don’t even realize when they are striking at times.  Most boil down to making the act of reading a chore, which nobody likes to do.  So, what are some ways to avoid this life-changing pitfall?

  1. Book clubs are a great technique for getting kids to read in class.  I don’t remember having this when I was a student, but I’ve seen it in action now.  Kids get to choose the top 3 books from a list of 5-8.  They are put in small groups where they rotate roles every week.  Then, they choose how they get through the book.  Either as a group or individually with a deadline.  They get to discuss what they’ve read too.  It isn’t perfect because you have kids who won’t do the work, but it does wonders for a student who needs more control over their reading.
  2. Do NOT yell at a child who is reading slowly.  Some kids are easily distracted and have deciphering problems.  Heck, there are plenty of adults who do too.  The point of the whole thing is that they read.  There is already a level of frustration if they sense that they are going too slow.  It gets amplified if they keep having to ask for help with words too.  Be happy that the child is working through a book and not trying to get out of doing it.  They might be going slow, but they could also be enjoying it a lot.
  3. Try not to immediately correct words that are misspoken if you’re working with a child who reads out loud.  Wait for them to finish the paragraph or page or the entire reading time.  Then, tell them that they did a great job, but they got a few words wrong.  Go over it with them with the clear indication that this is to help them when they run into it again.  If you stop them immediately, it can jolt them out of the story and make them think that they made a big mistake.  It also helps to remember words that you got wrong and tell them about it.
  4. Let kids pick their own books during the summer and for the weekend.  It can be anything they want.  If they want to read comic books then let them do it.  If they want to read the dictionary, let them do it.  The key is making them feel like they are controlling what they read.  That is essential to creating a lifelong reader.
  5. If you want to get them to think about what they are reading, do NOT focus entirely on analysis.  Many kids won’t care what the author meant and some aren’t even capable of delving that deep into literature.  Their minds aren’t wired that way.  What they can connect to and enjoy talking about is how the book makes them feel.  If a child is raised to have an emotional reaction to reading, then they are more likely to pick up a book in their later years.  You get them to this point by talking about how they feel.
  6. Accept that there are all types of books, including those that are more than words.  I’m talking about graphic novels.  Some people gravitate towards these for a variety reasons, especially children.  They are easier to read because you don’t have to picture the characters and setting.  They can be read in a shorter amount of time and easier to put down in mid-chapter.  Graphic novels take the visuals of other mediums and combine it with writing, which can be what draws a child in.  This tip goes for genres as well because we may find that a child enjoys a genre that we don’t like.  For example, I love fantasy books while my mother enjoys mysteries, which I don’t get into.
  7. If you’re really fighting to get your kid to read even if they choose the book, it doesn’t hurt to create a reward system.  Maybe they get a certain amount of money for every book they finish.  My son and I have a deal that I buy him a new Funko Pop for every book he finishes.  Is this bribery?  Yes, but for a good cause.  The child is reading for a reward, but they are still reading and getting into the habit of doing so.  Is there anything wrong with them becoming an adult who will reward themselves for finishing a book?  Even without that, you have now increased the chances of them reading for fun when older.  That is key.
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The Vanishing Review!

Greetings, SE’ers! Beem Weeks here with you again. Today, I’m discussing vanishing reviews on Amazon. Last year, I wrote a post on the necessity of …

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Revisiting Origins: Timoran Wrath

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

(Let’s keep the champions coming with Timoran Wrath who made his official debut in Family of the Tri-Rune.  He acting made a cameo earlier, but I don’t remember if his name was revealed.  Don’t know if there’s a lot for me to add here because Timoran was the stable rock of the series.  He changed, but he didn’t divert from the story or his original plan like many of the other characters.)

First, Timoran Wrath is a barbarian, so he has an uphill battle in terms of the audience view.

Most people think of the wild, illiterate berserker when they think of a barbarian.  Not always true.  After reading some of the original Conan stories, I have a different take on them.  They are primal, easy to anger, and brutal, but they’re not stupid and they can possess honor.  This led to the barbarians of Windemere being more war philosophers.  At least the Snow Tiger tribe.  They have the aggression and rage when they need it, but they’re very wise and remain calm when around non-clan members.  In fact, every barbarian must take a journey to find honor and wisdom when they turn 18.  Even the women do this because they can throw a beating as well as the men.  Timoran mentions this several times as well as pointing out that Nyx would make an excellent barbarian if she was bigger.

The original Timoran was a non-player character in the D&D game, who the gamemaster used to give us the power that we were lacking.  At the time, we had the speedy blades of Luke, the basic magic of Nyx, and the quick daggers of Sari.  We lacked strength and that’s where Timoran came in.  He had no last name, so I called him Timoran Wrath in the book.  He was calm and wise while staying in the background because he wasn’t supposed to solve the puzzles.

Then, he was up-graded when a new player adopted him.  Now, Timoran was talking and drinking and fighting and drinking.  Yeah, the guy played a really good barbarian by the traditional sense.  I loved playing the game with him, but Timoran was slowly eroding into a battle-hungry drunkard.  For example, Luke had come into possession of an ancient wine cellar and it was mentioned that there was a vial of ancient Elven wine.  Rare and not made anymore.  Timoran raced off to drink the wine right after the battle, which I shrugged off on the surface.  Luke didn’t care about the alcohol. Beneath my surface, I made a mental note to revert Timoran back to his original state.  Look, players can do whatever they want and more power to the guy for making Timoran his own.  I just didn’t think a drunk, battle-loving barbarian would be a good fit for what I had planned.  Also, it was kind of cliche.

This brings us to the book Timoran Wrath.  When he appears, the group is nothing more than the three most emotional character in the story.  Luke is reckless, Nyx is temperamental, and Sari is a flirty ball of mischief.  I knew they needed somebody to be their common sense or they wouldn’t make it through the up-coming battles.  Timoran adopted a habit of sharing wisdom and speaking very eloquently by using the same noble speech pattern as Aedyn Karwyn.  This created a barbarian that I couldn’t enrage at the drop of a dime and I love that about him.  You really need to push his buttons to unleash the whirlwind of death.  He also developed a heightened sense of smell, making him a perfect tracking ally for Luke. I have to admit that Timoran had the smoothest transition into the group, which says something about him.  Though, he is still nervous about Nyx’s magic.

I’m having a lot of fun writing him now even though he’s starting to adopt some of Luke’s recklessness, which is becoming a disease among my heroes.  All of them pull an occasional crazy stunt worthy of Luke.  Is there a reason for this?  Maybe.

2023 Update– With the series finished, I look back on Timoran rather fondly.  He was in the background and low key many times.  I realized he didn’t have a strong personality, but he was the type to speak when he has something to say.  It was always to the point and cleared confusion.  Even in his own book, Tribe of the Snow Tiger, he didn’t ramble on very often.  He definitely shined in that book and went on to develop some great abilities.  I loved it when I could give him a chance to cut loose.  It was just combat for him too because he got to act as the foundation of the team at times.  I really do think Timoran kept everyone somewhat grounded even when they were acting up.

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