Investigating the Mary Celeste by D. Lawrence Young

“Investigating the Mary Celeste” by D. Lawrence-Young “Investigating the Mary Celeste” by D. Lawrence Young is a compelling dive into one of the …

Investigating the Mary Celeste by D. Lawrence Young
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Goal Post: Brain Be Fogging All Week

(For anyone annoyed that I used this theme song instead of the Japanese one, you need to understand something.  ‘Rock the Dragon’ was the first intro I heard when I got introduced to the series in college.  I love the others, but this has a special place in my memory banks as the ‘first one’.  I also find it funny how it was for the Dragon Ball Z series when most of the footage is from ‘Tree of Might’ and ‘World’s Strongest’ movies.  For anyone who wonders why I picked this, Akira Toriyama (creator of DB and inspiration for millions) passed away this week.  All of the manga and anime that I love wouldn’t exist without him.)

The title pretty much says it all.  Not sure what’s been going on, but I haven’t been feeling great.  It isn’t a sick feeling, but really off, especially in the morning.  My blood oxygen level one morning was 90 after waking up, which means it probably dipped into the 80’s at some point.  Had a few dizzy spells and one day where I didn’t have any appetite until dinner time.  I have been stressed a lot and tests showed no presence the usual suspects (flu, strep, covid, etc.), which means my anxiety might be rising.  Strangest part is that I’m not having more than 0.7 apnea events per hour when I sleep, but I wake up like I did when I had tons of them.  Only major difference besides a massive leap in stress/anxiety is I went from 500 mg to 1,500 mg of ashwagandha before sleep.  This was starting to happen beforehand though, but maybe I’ll take half a dose tonight to see if I feel any better in the morning.

Could be the weather too since it’s been rainy . . . That would be a lingering gift from my two bouts of Covid.  Joy.

Sadly, the state of my mind and body made me push back the start of editing Darwin & the Halfling Hunt.  I’ll try to tackle it either next week if I feel better or next weekend when I don’t have anything planned.  I did finish typing in the edits of Darwin & the Fate Bracelet.  Having that under my belt is good.  I probably could have started editing, but I wanted to be fresh of mind and that wasn’t happening.  The book has 19 chapters and I can usually do 2 a day if I have nothing else and I’m in decent health.  This is all hand-editing too, which takes longer since I see the changes alongside the previous stuff instead of the old being replaced like on a computer.  Kind of sad that I stopped doing this way back even though it saved on ink and paper.  Another reason I need to work on getting my own printer in my room, which requires making space.

That will segue into the other event that stopped me from editing last weekend.  I have a large, spinning DVD stand that holds about 400 DVDS.  It takes up a lot of space and I don’t watch them any more since I have streaming.  I’d love to put a small table with a printer in its place, which requires getting rid of stuff.  So, I got a plastic container to save the DVD’s that I refuse to part with for sentimental reasons or they are series you can’t find on streaming (Adventures of Brisco County Jr.).  Then, I typed up the list of what’s going to be sold in a garage sale or somewhere.  Took most of Sunday to do and now I’m kind of stuck wondering when the next stage will come.  We’ve been saying we’re going to do a garage sale for years and it never happens.  If it fails again this year then I’ll try to bring all of this to a place that might buy them all.

Doesn’t sound like I had the most exciting week.  The rest of the week was work, parenting, and . . . dealing with one of my top stressors.  Oh, I worked on the Mario Lego sets that my son never did since he’s switched to Pokemon Go.  At least it gives me something to do for a little destressing.  Wasn’t enough to stave off the worst of what was happening.  Things got really bad in a few arenas and some days they went off the rails on the same day.  Another reason I think I’m sliding into survival mode, which stops my brain from focusing on writing.  Need to figure out if I’m going to work this summer and my health will be the deciding factor.  Could use the money, but it won’t do me any good if I break myself.  Guess thinking of that is a big issue too.

That’s really it.  Didn’t get to watch much TV.  Going to be doing a bunch of Pokemon Go this weekend and check out a flower show with my son.  Probably post pictures from that on the next free Sunday, which might be April.  Going to be watching ‘Ghostbusters’ and ‘Ghostbusters II’ to prepare for the new movie that comes out the next weekend I have my son.  Then, the week is going to be the usual.  Parenting, work, trying to relax, and hopefully finishing the April blog posts.  There’s a big event going on all week at school, so our kids might be off since it changes schedules, makes a lot of noise, and can be generally disorienting.  Going to need a lot of rest . . . Oh, I have a training thing on Tuesday.  I almost forgot about that.

Goals of the week:

  1. Rest and keep checking vitals.
  2. Help son with school.
  3. Start editing Darwin & the Halfling Hunt
  4. Finish Lego sets.
  5. Finish April blog posts.
  6. Make chopped salad and rice bowl stuff for lunches.
  7. Keep up the biking on days I don’t walk a lot for Pokemon Go.
  8. Do whatever I’m forgetting to do at this moment.
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Packing Up for Exploration!

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Adventurer 1– So, we haven’t been to this place before.  Let’s make sure we’re prepared, Jimmy.

Jimmy– You got it, Bart.

Bart– Extra clothes, backpacks, bedrolls, food rations, rope, torches, flint and steel, and weapons are first on the list.

Jimmy–  All checked off.  Not sure if they go under clothes, but I have some cloaks for rain.

Bart–  Good idea.  Each of us should take two signal flares in case we get separated.

Jimmy–  Only have two left, so one each.  I’ve got a map

Bart– Excel . . . How do you have a map?  This is uncharted territory.

Jimmy– It’s uncharted, but not unmapped.

Bart–  I think uncharted means it has never been explored and mapped out.

Jimmy–  But the guy next door swore this was legit.

Bart–  Let me look at it.  This is a map to the amusement park we wanted to visit, but never got around to doing it.

Jimmy–  Shame it got shut down over bad food.

Bart–  Well, they shouldn’t have let a mad scientist be the cook.  I hear they’re still hunting down man-eating churros.  Refocus.  Compass and waterskins.  Can’t believe I almost forgot those.

Jimmy–  Big checks.  Maintenance sets for our gear too.

Bart–  Dragon musk.

Jimmy– Che . . . I don’t think we should bring it.

Bart–  Why not?  We could run into dragons out there.

Jimmy–  Yeah, but I’ve noticed a problem with the dragon musk.

Bart–  Explain.

Jimmy–  Well, a musk makes me think it would attract dragons.  It isn’t a repellant like the mosquito, bear, goblin, shark, and ex-lover stuff.

Bart–  They store just uses a different name.  Still smells horrible, so it has to work.

Jimmy–  Maybe, but I don’t think it works really well if it is a repellant.

Bart– Why?

Jimmy–  Because every time we use it, dragons show up and chase us.

Bart–  Fine.  We’ll leave it behind to test your theory.  What else is on the list?  Lucky charms . . . The cereal or actual magical charms.

Jimmy– Both.  I have Cinnamon Toast Crunch for you.

Bart–  Then, our gear is complete.  This will be an excellent adventure.  Time to dive into the unknown.

Jimmy–  I’ve got the map!

Bart–  Dammit, Jimmy.

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What Writers Should Know! Part Three: Setting

Hi SEers! Denise here with the third part in the What Writers Should Know Series to talk about the setting. Why is the setting so important? What if …

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The night guest by Hildur Knutsdottir

Review of “The Night Guest” by Hilda Knutsdottir “The Night Guest” by Hildur Knutsdottir, set to be released in September 2024, is a novel that I …

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Poetry Day: I Love You, Cake

(I think this poem speaks for itself.)

You are the true centerpiece
To every wedding

 

You are the great reward
For living another year

 

You come in many sizes
And all are delicious

 

You come in many forms
Including rolls and sheets and towers

 

Your flavors are limitless
Even carrot is your type

 

You are not afraid of fire
Candles are your jewelry

 

You are our greatest friend
From the sinful dessert cart

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7 Tips to Exploring New Lands in Fiction

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Is having your characters explore a new world difficult?  Maybe.  Some authors have an easier time than others.  This depends entirely on how your imagination works and what your writing style focuses on.  For example, I think those who work hard on settings will have an easier time than those who concentrate more on characters.  You really do need to pay attention to setting, mood, and tone when the story involves exploring a new land.  So, are there some tips?

  1. Research couldn’t hurt.  This might sound like an obvious thing, but many people assume they already know enough about the real world biome to get by.  The truth is that we might have less knowledge than we realize unless we’ve experienced that type of place ourselves.  For example, I’ve met people who only know that the desert is hot and sandy with an occasional oases.  They don’t realize that it gets cold at night, so they keep the area scalding.
  2. As much as as it is to have set pieces that break the laws of physics, you have to be careful you don’t overdo it.  Having a land with reverse waterfalls, floating islands, increased gravity zones, low gravity zones, and whatever else you can imagine will come off as too much.  Think about what the purpose of going to and through this area is then create set pieces that work for that.  They can be obstacles, helpful regions, or awe-inspiring background.  A simpler way to say this is that you shouldn’t overwhelm your audience.  Keep them satisfyingly whelmed.
  3. Having your characters show up with no knowledge of the area does make for great tension, but you don’t have to make them 100% ignorant.  Them stumbling around and getting panicked by the surprises can only last so long.  Perhaps one member of the group has heard rumors or read books on the region, so they think they’re aware of the dangers.  Some information could be right and others wrong.  This gives the characters a better and more believable chance of surviving.
  4. Not every new wilderness has to have a stereotypical tribe covered in war paint and wielding spears.
  5. While the flora and fauna should be unique, you don’t always have to make everything lethal.  Think about real world areas and there are many things that are harmless.  It would increase the impact of the dangerous organisms to have them be outnumbered by the benign.
  6. If you establish that a place has never been visited before then you have to make sure that there are no signs of previous visitors.  You can’t have characters be told that they are the ones to discover the land then find skeletons of previous adventurers.  It could be that they were lied to for a variety of reasons, but that’s the only situation where you can get away with it.  Beyond that, your readers will notice when signs of civilization and previous visitors are mentioned in an uncharted, previously undiscovered location.
  7. Have fun with it.  I really can’t think of a 7th tip, but you should have fun with creating a new land.
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Poverty by America by Matthew Desmond

Title: Reflecting on “Poverty, by America” – A Confrontation with America’s Poverty Crisis In “Poverty, by America,” Matthew Desmond, who previously …

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We Used to Live Here by Marcus Kliewer

“We Used to Live Here” by Marcus Kliewer “We Used to Live Here” by Marcus Kliewer is a masterful addition to the horror genre, and I find it to be …

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To Cuss or Not to Cuss? Swear Words in Fiction.

Greetings to one and all. Beem Weeks here with you again. Today, I thought I’d share my thoughts on cuss words in fiction. Some years ago, I had a …

To Cuss or Not to Cuss? Swear Words in Fiction.
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