What Do You Look For In a Hero?

One of the more interesting things about Beginning of a Hero reviews was that a few of them mentioned how Luke Callindor wasn’t heroic.  He was immature, unpolished, reckless, and selfish.  First, this is the beginning of a series, so starting him out as the perfect hero is ridiculous.  I have 15 books to grow him into that role and even at the end he’s going to have moments.  All of that is for another topic.  Today, I’m curious what people want in their fictional heroes.

I’ve heard everything on this topic.  Many times I’ve heard people voice what they want and then deny a character to epitomizes it.  For example, I spoke with a person who wanted a powerful, unstoppable, beacon of justice hero.  When I mentioned Superman, this person scoffed at the idea because he was ‘lame’.  So, I guess there was something else in their personal hero equation that Superman didn’t meet.  They claimed Batman as perfect, so I’m guessing smart and tortured soul were secretly on the list.  It’s funny how many people go on about the noble, shiny hero and then gush about an anti-hero that’s about as shiny as a broken lightbulb.  So, there is an element of a person not accepting what they really want in their heroes.  I’ve yet to figure out this mentality.

Personally, I want my heroes to have a weakness.  I’m not talking about kryptonite or the color yellow (Green Lantern at one point).  I meant, I like my heroes to have aspects of humanity in them.  They can get mad, get sad, be happy, and have a range of emotions.  I think this is why I have trouble getting behind Batman because I always see him as tortured, which gets old.  To counter this vulnerability, I like my heroes to have a lot of courage and the drive to help others.  Even if they are tossed into an event that they don’t understand, I like it when a hero decides to be the good guy.  It doesn’t have to be at the beginning, but at some point the hero has to acknowledge being a hero.  To go through an entire adventure and continually deny you’re a hero against all evidence rubs me the wrong way.  Tim Burton’s Alice in Wonderland comes to mind.  By the middle of the film, I was ready to slap Alice because all she did was deny she was ‘The Alice’ in the face of constant evidence.

Power-wise I’m torn.  I enjoy Superman even though I don’t like heroes to be utterly unstoppable.  He might be the exception to my rule because he’s been around so long and he is what he is.  More current heroes that have multiple powers, no weaknesses, and are perfect make me mad.  Eragon came off like this to me.  I believe in fantasy, a character needs some training or a history.  If they don’t have it then they need to make mistakes as they go on their adventure.  For example, Luke Callindor starts his adventure after a lifetime of training.  That’s why he can do what he does.  Darwin Slepsnor gains his sleep magic at the beginning of his story, which is why he works of instinct and causes a heap of trouble.  I need that explanation of why a hero is the best in the room or proof that he or she is not the best in the room.

There are other little facets of heroism that I look for, but they tend to come to mind only when I’m reading.  So, what do other people look for in their heroes?

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For Charles!

Poem dedicated to me by Howanxious. Check it out and follow. You won’t regret it.

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*Please pardon me for my futile efforts, Charles. And a message to everyone- please don’t read if your poetic ears are quite sensitive. I won’t take the responsibility. I have already warned you. 😀

Hey,

you re-blogged my post

when I did it finally-

framed a poetry collection

and put it up online,

then you followed me

and I followed you back,

and what a pleasure I do have

in reading your creations:

the publishing suggestions,

your experiences you share,

post the tidbits from your books

or your poems from the age

I find myself at, today,

you show your kindness

always in your remarks

and provide a nice feedback,

I am thankful for all that,

it is always difficult for me

to write something keeping

a particular being in mind

but I tried and wrote up

something you would find

without any rhythm or rhyme

but this is…

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Heartsick

I sit so far away

Knowing you’re in pain

Tasting fear

Not sure if mine or yours

My heart aches

Cracking at the seams

I think I feel it bleed

Dripping under my skin

The universe feels cruel

Revealing us now

When we cannot touch

Or declare our truth

I hold onto hope

Yet my strength stumbles

Tears are finding cheek

As I wish I was there

My love is yours

To draw into your heart

I pray it is the cure you need

Even if it sucks me dry

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Return of the Son of Goal Posts

Snoopy!

Been a while since I did a post about goals.  I think because they were staying the same and there have been some rough times.  I reached the point last week where whatever I got done, I got done.  Let the chips fall where they may.  For my British viewers, I mean poker chips and not french fries, which have nothing to do with France.  I’m sure this is going to be more popular in the comments than anything else.

The heatwave is relatively over here, so I can get some of my overheated mind back on track.  Having my heroes wander through a mountain of ice while in a heatwave was a little relaxing.  Although, doing research to see if hunger pangs can be undone by eating ice was an interesting adventure.  So, that brings me to the goals of the week:

  1. Finish writing Legends of Windemere: The Compass Key.  I have 1.5 chapters left, which is 5 sections and a cliffhanger, mystery discussion with no names.  I would say it’s 50/50 that I can get this done.
  2. Continue the hyping for Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower.  This includes the character and city poems.
  3. Make daily ‘What do you look for in . . .’ posts to stir discussions about themes and foci of Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower.
  4. Prepare and send e-mail for the July 30th Blog Blitz.  Just waiting for the cover art, so anyone can join in to help.
  5. Create more characters for The Slumber Wars.  Finally made one of the ‘villains’ last night and decided on the major players in each family.  Probably don’t need much detail on a lot of them.
  6. Start reading The Crimson League (The Herezoth Trilogy).
  7. Clean house over the course of the week for my son’s 4th birthday/playdate.
  8. Keep pestering Ionia.  I miss my WordPress bestie.

That’s the extent of my week and I think it’s doable.  Most of these are small, easy things and the only BIG one is the first one.  If I can get a section done tonight then I’m ahead of the game.  Fingers crossed that everything runs smoothly.  Maybe I’ll take some time to write the special blurbs for Legends of Windemere: Allure of the Gypsies if I get far enough ahead.  That sounds greedy though.  Best to leave that for next week.

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Battle of the Chicken Nuggets

5-11-2011 Daddy feeding Aidan whipped cream at Friendly'sGoldfish crackers
Whipped cream alone
Chips and fries galore
This is all you eat
Today I say no more

A bag of carrots
That you refuse
Yogurt that you request
We try them all
It’s become a patience test

Late afternoon
Your tummy roars
Still you will not dine
I have had enough
Today victory will be mine

Screaming from us both
Negotiating with tears
Stubborn to our cores
Bribery and denials
Our voices shake the doors

Eventually you give
As your tummy roars again
Chicken nuggets heat
As you wait upon a lap
Today you have been beat

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Character Poem: Nimby

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Charming halfling
Smelling of sawdust and guile
Loyalty in his blood
Sleight of hand to pick all locks
The world’s pockets are his to loot
A noble heart beats in his chest
While mischief’s in his eyes

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Deeper by Jane Thomson

I recently finished reading Deeper by Jane Thomson.  This is the story of a mermaid (they’re called mers) that wants to be human, so it’s a retelling of ‘The Little Mermaid’.  That’s where the similarities end.

There is an odd brutality to the book, which isn’t shocking or grotesque.  It comes off surprisingly casual and part of the world.  Mer society does come off as survival of the fittest and primal at times with the characters biting and attacking each other.  I didn’t feel like I was reading about a human world under the water.  Through detail and character actions, I felt like the Mer had a rich, deep world that was entirely different from the world I’m used to.  One can tell that Jane Thomson put a lot of time and effort into crafting their world.

A difficult part about this book is that I loved the Mer world so much that I lost momentum during the human part.  I missed Melur’s sisters (sort of) and Che and even her disturbing Grandmother.  That was a world that I wanted to keep exploring with her.  You spend the majority of the book in that world and learning about the characters, so you feel torn when you leave them behind.  As I’m writing this, I’m wondering if that was the intention of the author.  She makes the reader love that world so much that we feel as lost and out of place as Melur.  Whether she intended to do it or not, that is how I felt and that is a big plus for the book.

The only disappointing part of the book was that most of the characters had similar temperaments.  Melur, Che, and Grandmother were the ones that stood out because they reacted differently than the others.  At first, I thought only one sister had a tendency to physically lash out and then I realized all of them did it.  I couldn’t tell if that was the way their society was or it was supposed to make the reader dislike them.  The humans had some major jerk moments too and I could never figure out why they disliked Melur.  Their motivation was never made clear and even the human lead was difficult to understand because I was never allowed in his head.  So, the characterization did get a little muddy at times when emotions ran high.  When characters were calm and kind, I got a better sense of individuality.

I highly recommend this book and hope Jane Thomson continues to publish such gripping tales.  Maybe another that takes place in Mer society?  Please?

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The Official Website of Briana Vedsted

Check out the official website of Briana Vedsted! Pre-order her book ‘Me and Billy the Kid’

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Okay, so now that my work on the novel, Me and Billy the Kid, is officially done and awaiting the okay of my editor and project managers, I’ve got a link to share with you all. It is the address of my new, ‘official’ website through Tate Publishing: http://me-and-billy-the-kid.tateauthor.com/
On my new site you can pre-order my book, stay up-to-date on all the events and book signings I have scheduled (none just yet), read reviews (soon to come!), and find out more about how the book was ‘brought to life’, as well as read more about little ol’ me. Oh yeah, and you’ll find some short excerpts from the book there, too!

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Slight Change of Plans

Now, I’m still working on figuring out ways to hype Prodigy of Rainbow Tower.  So far the character and city poems are working as is the gathering of people for the July 31st blog blitz.  Although, I do have a question on that:

Should the blog blitz with cover art, description, Beginning of a Hero link, and other info be done on July 31st when the book debuts or July 30th BEFORE the book debuts?

Speaking of questions, I think this week has shown me an avenue of posting that I didn’t consider before.  Debate questions that relate to the book.  I already know that I can do one on sequels, magic, rivalries, character development, journeys, ‘the spotlight’, demons, and other topics.  I would do a debate question and my own answer every day starting this Monday.  Get people talking and interested in what this book is going to be about.

First question, when Hermione and Harry use that time turner in the third movie, how do they know that nobody is going to be in the infirmary when they appear?  I would think that would be an incredibly busy place.  The movie is on behind me and I just realized how odd that is.

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City Poem: Rodillen

Beautiful city
Sitting on the L’Dandrin
Welcoming and bright
Full of quiet quaint
In the wake of a gnomish home
The metal dome filled
With booming invention
And the only place of peace

Night will fall
And change the face
Revealing roofs of death
Designed to keep true rulers out
As they prowl the shadow streets
To bloat their hidden hordes
Welcome to Rodillen
The two-faced city of thieves

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