An Interview with Nyx, From the Legends of Windemere

An interview with Nyx (and her hecklers). Big thank you to Sarah M. Cradit for letting me submit this guest blog. Check out her site and her book series, The House of Crimson and Clover.

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Please join me in welcoming Nyx, a powerful half-elven and the star of Charles Yallowitz’ upcoming novel, Prodigy of Rainbow Tower. If you are not already familiar with this awesome fantasy author’s work, make sure to visit him at The Legends of Windemere site, immediately following your enjoyment of this awesome interview.

Also, don’t forget to add Prodigy of Rainbow Tower to your Goodreads TBR list!

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What Do You Look for in Demons?

Etrigan the Demon from DC Comics

Traditionally, demons are the bad guys.  The monsters and eaters of human.  There has been a slight change with characters like Inuyasha and Etrigan where circumstances have made the demon a hero.  Typically, this is done with half-breeds and those that are bound to a heroic human.  I’m talking fictional literary demon and not the religious type of demon.

Demons turn up a few times in Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower.  Not just the Hellfire Elf, but several different types.  You get a sense of demon society through one of them.  That’s something came out randomly that I kept.  Demons are always these monstrous, evil beings with nothing really behind them.  You get the occasional world-domination or birth my child demons, but most of them are mindless creatures of destruction. Here the demons have a society that I plan on exploring as my various series progress.  Will I make a demonic hero?  I have a few planned including one or two that are full-blooded demons that make the conscious decision to fight for good.  Demons can have honor too.

This has led to me getting easily bored with demons in stories.  I don’t like the pure evil creature path that they’re given.  It lacks depth and means they’re only useful for sudden fights or possession scenes.  Only so much you can do with an exorcism scene.  I hate to say that I don’t like demons in stories.  Probably closer to say that I want them to get more depth and versatility.  After all, I’ve read and seen stories where angels are the bad guys and fall from grace.  Why can’t a demon rise to heroism?

So, what do you look for in your fictional demons?  If you don’t typically read such books, what would you want to see when such creatures are used?

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City Poem: Hero’s Gate

Walled and beautiful
This city born of heroic paths
Surrounding the Flooding Falls
That plunge beneath the surface
Where no man can see

Friendly people
Safe among the guards
Greeting all travels
Never fearing the brewing threats
Until the streets turn red

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What Do You Look for in Character Evolution

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One of the benefits to writing a series is that you get to extend your character’s evolution. They don’t have to fully mature by the end of the first book. This is something for readers to remember too. Once a character hits his or her final form, the adventure has to eventually come to a close or you devolve them. Look at comic book characters and the sudden rise of reboots because they’ve done everything for decades. With novels, you don’t really have this luxury. You need to raise your character at a proper, steady rate to an endgame. Going further can weaken your character and series.

I like a slow growth with ups and downs. A character that wins and loses is believable because you can’t always win or lose. Even if you win, there can be a twist or a sacrifice to it. Save the damsel, but lose your hand type of thing. For me the character must be evolved by their decisions and situations. You can’t step into a war or decide to let someone die to save someone else without changing. That isn’t human and reeks of lazy storywriting. Doubt, grief, anger, fear, happiness, sadness, numbness, determination, and all the other emotions are needed for this evolution.

So, what do you look for in character evolution?

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L.o.W.- Prodigy of Rainbow Tower Part 8

“Welcome to Rainbow Tower!” Fritz announces as he stands with Luke on the other side of the tall, granite wall. “This is the home of the world-renowned casters who helped make Gaia one of the most influential cities in Windemere. Cyril and Willow named it Rainbow Tower because they used magic to transform millions of gemstones into bricks for the tower. Hence the bricks changing color depending on sunlight and viewing angle. Surrounding the tower is a beautiful garden with a waterfowl pond on the southern side. Willow is a skilled gardener and has created several plant hybrids without the use of magic. At least, that is what she tells people. The final leg of the Fritz Warrenberg Tour is the basic outer wall with a single doorway that is flanked by ivory gargoyles. As you will see, the gated entrance is the only door in the entire complex since there are no windows or doors on the actual tower. This is a common practice of casters because it makes it very difficult for people to break in without knowing how to break the illusion. Even with that knowledge, it’s not recommended that you ever try to break into a caster’s tower. To conclude the tour, I have one question.”

Luke finishes chewing on a piece of chicken and turns to the gnome. “What’s that?”

“Why aren’t we going toward the entrance?” Fritz asks. He looks around the shaded area with a look of deep concern in his big, red eyes.

Luke swiftly picks Fritz up and starts climbing the wall. “Simple. This place is huge and it’s a long walk to the entrance, which is on the other side of the complex from us. I don’t want to waste time walking around this wall when I can just climb over and knock on the tower. We’re expected guests after all.”

“I would like to point out that this is suicide!” Fritz exclaims, watching the ground get further and further away. “There are basic rules of etiquette that one should uphold when dealing with any type of caster. Breaking into their home on the assumption that we’re already invited is not one of the rules. Rethink this action, put me down, and take the walk around the tower. You’re a forest-tracker! You should be used to walking around things! You ever go around a mountain! This is the same situation!”

Luke hoists himself onto the top of the wall and lets Fritz down next to him. The half-elf takes in the sight of the lush garden spread out below him before dangling his legs on the tower side of the wall. He closes his eyes and absorbs the sweet aroma of flowers that permeate the air without overpowering his sense of smell. A splashing flurry of wings catches his attention as a flock of gray swans lift into the air and soar in the direction of the farmlands. A caressing breeze passes over the wall and into the courtyard where it playfully shakes the slender branches of several willow trees. Luke can taste the sea in the wind as it passes over him and he crinkles his nose at the sudden taste of salt.

“You just wanted to sit on the wall, didn’t you?” Fritz asks.

“Basically,” Luke sighs.

Fritz chuckles before patting his friend on the shoulder. “Let’s get down and head to the entrance. Nimby and Aedyn will be trying to contact us soon.”

Luke is about to respond when a large shadow passes over them and continues toward the sea. He recognizes the silhouette of a griffin within seconds and gets to his feet as he watches it disappear near the distant mountain. He gently reaches into his shirt to clasp the griffin talon he wears around his neck. The forest tracker is even more awestruck when several more griffins fly overhead toward the farmlands and completely block the red moon and the green moon from view. The majestic beasts silently glide in a diamond formation. Forgetting where he is standing, Luke takes a step forward and promptly crashes into the garden.

Fritz looks down at Luke in amazement. Even after all their time together, there are moments that cause the gnome to wonder how the accident prone warrior defeated a Hellfire Elf and a Lich in the same day. The grace of a stumbling ogre comes to mind while Fritz carefully climbs down. He finds Luke clambering out of a bristle patch with his eyes still locked on the flock of griffins.

“Guess we might as well head to the tower and apologize for the intrusion,” Luke casually says. He winces as he pulls a few barbs out of his arm.

“I say we go back over the wall and use the entrance,” Fritz whispers, following Luke toward the silent tower.

“No time. At least, we’re apologizing,” Luke says in as low a voice as he can muster. He has to stop from time to time in order to remove more barbs that he didn’t notice while standing still.

“I’m just saying . . . who is that?” Fritz asks, his pupils dilating.

Luke follows Fritz’s lecherous stare to a figure walking toward the tower. The moonlight is bright enough for him to notice that it is a female half-elf. She is slender and petite, but her footsteps are surprisingly heavy and loud. Luke can hear Fritz make a small wolf whistle as they get a better look at her. Her midnight black hair contrasts sharply with her bright red peasant shirt and matching cloak. Unlike her immaculate shirt and cloak, the girl’s brown sandals and flowing, black skirt show signs of being dirtied by smoke and ash. Even the leather satchel slung over her shoulder has a large burn mark on it. Luke barely hears the murmur of her voice before a door emerges from the colored bricks of the tower. The door disappears as soon as the girl steps through.

“She must have been one of the tower servants,” whispers Fritz, whose heart is racing from nerve-wracking fear. “The skirt had a crude slit up both sides, which an apprentice of Cyril and Willow would never wear. The masters hate the new trend of torn clothing and refuse entry to any apprentice who dresses like that. Though, the shirt was rather unique for a servant. Might be Willow trying out some new colors for the hired help. She does that from time to time. Thankfully, the girl wasn’t an apprentice or we would have been noticed. Apprentices of this tower are trained to have a high awareness of their surroundings. Now, let’s go back over the wall and go through the entrance.”

Luke ignores the gnome as he cautiously approaches the tower. He starts feeling around the wall where the half-elven girl passed through. Fritz shakes his head as he runs to grab Luke by the wrist and tries to lead him away.

“We’re already here. I’m just going to knock,” Luke says, easily freeing his arm.

“You don’t knock on a caster tower,” Fritz hisses in a hushed voice. “That’s like shooting spitballs at a werewolf. The results tend to be fatal.”

“Calm down. It’s a simple knock,” Luke whispers with a friendly smile.

Fritz cringes as Luke lifts his fist to deliver the ominous knock. It never connects as Luke suddenly grabs Fritz by the shirt and leaps away from the tower. The gnome can feel a surge of intense heat narrowly miss them. Luke lands in a crouch putting himself between Fritz and the tower. A patch of fire is still smoldering where they were standing and a small trail of flickering flame continues for a few yards.

“What kind of idiot tries to break into a caster tower while the masters are home?” asks a loud female voice from the direction of the tower. They turn to see the half-elven girl has returned and spurts of flame are dancing along her fingers. Being closer to the girl, Luke notices that her skin appears to have been marked by constant exposure to fire. It is a fire-licked tan that looks out of place on the half-elf.

“You said she wasn’t an apprentice,” Luke says through the side of his mouth.

“She must not be traditional,” Fritz replies, putting a little distance between himself and Luke. “I’ve never seen an apprentice of Rainbow Tower dressed like that in public”

A sword of fire grows around the girl’s left hand. “Stop your banter! It’s my job to protect my home and my masters. Do either of you have anything to say before I kill you?”

“I think you’re being overly dramatic. We’re invited guests. If will you let me explain, we-” starts Luke. A slash of fire passes between him and Fritz before it explodes against a sapling. The young tree crumbles to ash in seconds.

“Bullshit!” the girl screams.

“I sense her etiquette lessons never stuck,” Fritz whispers, watching the smoke float off the tree ashes. He turns toward the girl and flashes a charming smile. “You got detention a lot for violent and hot-tempered behavior, right?”

“Shut up!” the girl angrily yells. “Do either of you have anything to say that won’t make me hurt you? I can stand here with a prepared spell all night.”

Fritz clears his throat to say, “Uh . . . nice legs?”

The caster roars in anger as she sends a wave of fire along the ground. It fades away as Luke scoops Fritz up and sprints out of the spell’s range. The girl chases them across the garden, but she is quickly left behind by the faster warrior. Luke wastes no time in hurling Fritz over the wall where the gnome is safe and no longer a concern. The girl catches up to them in time to hear a crash followed by some muttered gnomish that she assumes to be curses.

“It was my idea to jump the wall and approach the tower. Your problem is with me alone,” Luke states, turning to bravely face the angry caster. “Now, are you going to listen or are we going to fight until I beat you?”

“I choose fight,” she growls. She launches a flurry of fire lances out of her hands, the heated projectiles leaving a trail of haze behind them.

Luke leaps into the air and kicks off the wall to sail over the spells. He barely has the momentum to get over her head and lands without a sound. Before she can turn around, he makes a dash toward the waterfowl pond. The glistening water makes him grin because it reminds him that this caster has only used fire magic. The spells are dangerous and powerful, but even magic fire can be weakened by water. Luke is starting to form a plan when he slams into an invisible wall.

“I know more than fire magic if that was what you were thinking,” she says as she approaches him.

Luke waits for her to get close before he fluidly spins around and kicks her legs out from under her. The caster falls on her back with an angry snarl. He pounces on her to pin her arms above her head and prevent her from casting any spells. It almost works until she releases a blinding flash from her vivid, violet eyes. Luke yelps in surprise before stumbling away and frantically rubbing his eyes. She wastes no time rushing at him and delivering a surprisingly solid punch to his stomach. Luke quickly grabs her arm before falling to his knees.

“Begging?” she taunts the warrior.

“I’ve been punched a lot harder than that,” he grunts. He flips the girl over his shoulder and slams her against a nearby tree. An echoing crack is heard as the small tree falls over and crushes a row of silver flowers.

“You son of a troll!” she shrieks, getting to her feet. Luke blinks the last of the dots from his eyes in time to see an aura of magic erupt from his opponent. He dodges fireballs, lightning blasts, and acid sprays as she chases him around the garden. Trees and flowers explode, filling the air with leaves and petals.

Luke uses all of his skills to dodge the barrage of spells that turn the garden into a burning war zone. He flips around to make a head-on charge at the caster, sliding under a spray of acid as he unsheathes one of his sabers. Spinning up to his feet, Luke hits her firmly below the ribs with the basket hilt of his weapon. She doubles over gasping for air, but she still has enough strength to coat her hand in colorful flames. Both half-elves stop while Luke keeps his sword against her throat and she keeps her fire-covered hand an inch from his face.

“Guess it’s a tie,” Luke mutters under his breath.

“I can fry your face off before you can even twitch your weapon,” the girl threateningly declares. “This battle is mine, jackass.”

“I’m getting tired of this. I apologize for intruding. Now, can we stop this?” he asks.

“Screw you.”

“What is your problem?”

“I don’t take kindly to intruders.”

“You could have asked me to surrender instead of attacking.”

“There isn’t any fun in that.”

“Listen, psycho,” Luke says, leaning toward her ear to make sure she can clearly hear him. “My name is Luke. I was told by the heir of Duke Solomon to come to Rainbow Tower. My friends and I made it to Gaia earlier than expected. I’m very tired and slightly hungry. This little skirmish has used up the last of my energy.”

“So, you admit that you’re weak,” the girl interrupts in a voice of joyous victory.

“No, I admit that I’m tired and hungry. I’ve been on the road, in this heat, for the past few days. You’re probably fine in this weather since you seem to love fire magic,” he begins to explain. He stops and shakes his head in frustration before continuing. “This isn’t getting us anywhere. At least, can I have your name?”

The girl is about to say what Luke suspects is to be another insult when a bolt of red lightning hits the ground next to them. A deafening blast erupts after the impact, leaving their ears ringing. The sheer force of the blast knocks both of them against the side of the tower where Luke drops his sword and the girl’s fire turns to smoke. They get to their feet just as a rumble of thunder rolls through the cloudless night. It’s not long before the thunder takes the form of a male voice that can be heard throughout all of Gaia.

“Nyx!” it bellows.

“In trouble again,” the girl sighs as the wall of the tower opens up and both half-elves are magically yanked inside.

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Promoting 28 Shades of Black…Again…

Call for people to review an erotica novel. Twist? This one is written by a guy with a male protagonist.

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Council of Mystical Creatures

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Dragon:  I call this meeting of the Brotherhood of Monsters to order.

Elf: Can we have a different name?  Some of us aren’t monsters any more.

Orc:  Yeah!

Dragon: Put in a petition later.  What do we have to discuss?

Griffin: Many of us are still being used and altered to the whims of humans.  Am I supposed to be a monster, a mount, or a pet?

Hippogriff:  At least you get remembered while I get confused for you.  One fandom seems to remember me, but that’s it.  It sucks being your cousin.

Orc:  Yeah!

Manticore: Nobody thinks of me.  Do any of you know the last time I was used?

Centaur: Probably a God of War game like many of us.  The harpies are still in traction from that series.

Dragon:  This bickering and whining does nothing.  You should be happy with what you get or do you want to vanish like some of our brethren.

Dwarf:  Of course, you’re happy.  Nobody forgets dragons.  Even in worlds with minimal magic, they seem to have dragons.

Orc:  Yeah!

Dragon:  I can think of a few worlds without dragons. It isn’t my fault that my kind are so popular.

Elf: The dwarf has a point though.  You exist everywhere, which is why you rule the council.  You are wise, but you do not understand our plight.

Orc:  Yeah!

Minotaur:  Shut up, pointy ears!  You don’t understand either.  Ever since you were made beautiful and elegant, you get into everything.  Nobody fantasizes about my kind unless you count nightmares.

Orc:  Yeah!

Siren:  Am I beautiful or ugly?  I don’t know any more.  Can somebody tell me?

Mermaid:  I think it depends on the author and if they think you’re me.  Damn red-haired tart and her voice ruined it for the rest of us.

Lamia: Nobody knows how I am!

Vampire:  I don’t even know if I’m a monster anymore.

Werewolf:  Why can’t I get the girl?

Zombie:  I want a vacation!

Orc:  Yeah!

Dragon:  EVERYONE SHUT UP!!!!!  Every meeting ends with this problem.  You get what cards you’re dealt and enjoy existing.  Hold out and an author might use you for more than a monster to be slain.  Where’s the dignity of being a monster?

Gathered Monsters:  Sorry.

Dragon:  Very well. Do we have anything else to discuss?

Griffin:  Nope.  We don’t really have anything to talk about as a group.  These meetings are for the free food, drinks, and venting.

Demon:  I told you we should have brought back the virgin sacrificial dinners.

Angel:  Nobody listens to you.

Dragon:  Do I have to eat you two again?

Angel & Demon:  Sorry, sir.

Dragon:  I guess this meeting is over as quickly as the others. Does-  *Orc raises hand* I’m going to regret this.  What is it?

Orc:  Me think we should make t-shirts for extra money.  Also, bake sale.

Dragon:  I do love brownies.  Very well.  We’ll each make some plans for a bake sale to discuss at next week’s meeting.  Don’t forget to let our absent friends know about this new endeavor.  Until next week.

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Character Poem: Trinity

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Queen of the chaos elves
Mistress of mischief
Born under a starless sky
Her power knows few equals
A gem of power in her brow
Another in each palm
Seeking freedom
And a worthy rival
To make her life more fun
A change of tone
From the darkness of her master

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Goodreads Giveaway

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What Do You Look For in Magic?

Magic is a big a part of many fantasy books.  From Gandalf the Grey of Tolkien to Spellfire of Forgotten Realms, magic is a staple.  Sometimes the magic is nothing more than a few mystical creatures and other times it comes in the form of mental manipulation.  For example, there is no magic in the Ranger’s Apprentice series.  There is mention of mind manipulation, which is the closest they come to it.  So it is entirely possible to have a very low magic world to the point where the reader doesn’t even realize magic is there.

Personally, I like reading about magic with wizard duels and combat spells.  So much can  be done with magic as long as you stick to the rules that you make.  That’s one of my pet peeves when it comes to magic.  You have to stay within your own rules or given an explanation of why a rule is being broken.  For example, I have it that magic in Windemere is the manipulation of auras.  To do so, you use gestures, words, and/or ingredients for your spells. Nyx and Trinity don’t need any of that, so a reason is going to be needed.  I can’t say that here because it’s a spoiler.

That’s another thing that I look for in a magic system.  Details are fine, but I prefer when a magic system isn’t one where a spell can get broken by a sneeze.  I’ve read books where a spell is undone because somebody yelled at the wizard.  I wonder why anybody would want to learn magic if their concentration is so terrible.  Even the big, powerful wizards were undone by a stumble of words.  If magic is so dangerous then the people using it really need to have incredible focus and care.  The ‘spell went wrong’ isn’t a terrible idea, but seeing it more than once in the same book is ugh worthy.

So, what do people look for in fantasy book magic?

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