Is There More to the Crazy Characters?

Maka Albaran from Soul Eater

People who have been following my blog or read my books may have noticed that there’s one type of character that I really enjoy writing.  This is the ‘crazy’ character who can be either a hero or a villain.  The list for me covers most of my series with Yola Biggs, Lloyd Tenay, Dawn Addison, Aerial, Bob, and most recently Archillious and Lost from War of Nytefall: Lost.  These characters are wild and unpredictable, which means I can get away with a lot from them.  On the other hand, they can be very difficult to work with because you can get caught up in the crazy.  I do find them to be a very intriguing archetype, so I wanted to do an overview for anyone who wants to give them a try.

Not Too Much and Not Too Little

The temptation to keep the crazy character on a tear is very high.  They act as a comic relief at many points, so an author can fall into only making them like this all of the time.  This can erode their appeal and cause the audience to mark them down as nothing more than chaotic fools.  You can’t have them be more serious than crazy too.  That way makes it more of a quirk that doesn’t quite fit.  The best method to go here is what I’m going to call the ‘Effective Maniac’.  Take the following examples:

  • Lloyd Tenay in the Bedlam Series is a violent killer who thinks he’s a character in a fictional story.  He can be weird and random, but he also has many moments of stable conversation.  He’s cunning as well, so there’s a method to his madness.
  • Bob in War of Nytefall talks a lot about horses and gets into odd debates with Luther Grathan.  Yet, he does come up with plans and insights.  He’ll go off the subject at times, but he still adds to the conversations and plots.

So, you need to find a balance and really think out the ‘crazy’ part.  Being random for the sake of randomness creates a weak character if that’s all they are.  They’ll never grow and may even become a hindrance to the overall story.  Even Yola Biggs the Chaos Goddess of Windemere evolved in Legends of Windemere: Path of the Traitors, so immortality isn’t an excuse.

More to Crazy Than Killing

This doesn’t go for every character, but I’ve noticed that at least half the time, the ‘crazy’ character is a psychopath.  You never know when they’ll snap and kill someone, which makes them unpredictable and deadly.  This makes for a one-dimensional and limited character.  You can have this as part of what they are, but you need to add a few more layers.  Maybe they’re a psychopath who loves talking about jellybeans or collects stamps or has some other kind of quirk.  Perhaps they’re normally a wacky character, but there’s a trigger to make them violent.  The problem either way is that people will remember the violent aspect more than anything else.  I get this all the time when people mention Lloyd Tenay and paint him to be utterly psychotic with no self-restraint.  That’s not really him.  He does enjoy killing, but more of his ‘craziness’ comes from his perception of the world and how he runs his mouth.  There’s a lack of fear in him that makes him rather fearless to the extreme.

You don’t have to make the crazy character a killer either.  There’s plenty of ways to do this without going down the psychopath route.  They can be narcissists, easily distracted, have an obsession, be cursed with bad timing, or anything that you can see as a deviation from the ‘norm’.  A great example is Lost from War of Nytefall: Lost.  She can get violent, but that’s not her big thing and it’s no different than the other vampires.  Her ‘craziness’ stems more from a child-like sense of wonder that overrides her common sense and being easily distracted.  She has impulse control issues too.  This leads to her doing what pops into her head first, but possibly wandering off to follow a butterfly or because she remembers that she forgot to clean her breakfast dishes.  There’s comedy without the dangerous side that you see in many ‘crazy’ characters.

Limits Needed

This one is simple to explain and discuss.  Many people think a ‘crazy’ characters needs to either go big or not do it at all.  That’s not entirely true.  Again, if the character is off-the-wall and wild the entire time then they become a hindrance to everything.  Nothing can get done with such a character around, so you need to put limits on their antics.  It could be another character who can keep them under control like Trinity does with Yola Biggs or they aren’t acting up all the time.  Even for a supporting character, you need to make sure they’re not defined entirely by their insanity.  This is where limiting things will work.  You can get this done by deciding how they operate.  Unlike the others, a ‘crazy’ character requires a little more thought to make sure you stay consistent and don’t let them destroy everything.

Consistency in the Crazy

Another easy one because reality shows that nobody is a general, all-purpose crazy.  Heck, the turn is insulting when used on a real person.  Part of why I’ve put it in quotes throughout this post.  Decide how the ‘crazy’ is going to work and never stray from that path.  Keep in mind that characters like this don’t really know they’re acting weird.  If they did then they would be faking it for attention.  An example from my own stuff would be Bob: His obsession with horses remains consistent as does his habit of messing with Luther.  There are hints that the second thing is done on purpose, but the first is him being serious about a topic that could be random.  You know he’s going to mention them or do something with them.  It takes the surprise factor out at some points, but you don’t make him too random to harm him as a character.

Hard to Explain Them

This is going to be a final note and it’s more of an observation.  It’s really hard to explain these characters to people.  I’ve noticed that when I try to do so with Lloyd, people usually only retain serial killer.  So, people talk about him likes he’s an unrestrained killing machine with not much else.  These characters are better understood in the moment because they are surprisingly multi-faceted if done correctly.  They have something beneath the ‘crazy’ and extend beyond this piece of their puzzle.  So, I guess one should try not to get frustrated when you think your ‘crazy’ heroes and villains are talked about as if they’re nothing more than sources of comedy or destruction.

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Before, During, and After Publishing: A Marketing Checklist

Great set of checklists for after you hit publish.

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If you’re like most writers, the actual writing process is fun(ish) for you. The launch, on the other hand, is probably a soul-sucking, frenetic nightmare. There’s nothing worse than feeling like the people in the graphic, standing on your soapbox announcing to everyone in earshot that you have a new book for sale.

Yeah, that’s a horrible feeling, especially when no one cares.

I’ve been releasing a lot of titles lately, one under the Staci Troilo brand and a few as Keira Beck. So when I tell you I’ve been in launch-mode for months, that’s no lie. While it’s foremost on my mind, I figured I’d share my checklist for before, during, and after the nerve-wracking publication process. Much of what I’m going to share won’t cost you anything but time. But remember, time and money (when you’re talking promo) tend to have an inverse relationship. The more…

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4th Halloween-Poem Contest

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It is a great pleasure for me to announce the
4th Halloween-Poem Contest
on ‘Writer’s Treasure Chest’.
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Every author and poet are invited to participate and deliver a “Halloween-Poem” to my email address: aurorajean.alexander@aol.com, together with their picture and a link to their blog/page.

There are a few rules to follow:

  1. Your poem needs a Halloween theme.
  2. Your poem needs a minimum of 99 words.
  3. Your poem has to be delivered to my email address between October 10 and Halloween, October 31, 2018, 9 pm Central Standard Time.
  4. Your poem has to be delivered together with your picture and a link to your blog/page.
  5. Please avoid violence, bad language, and sexual content within the poems. It would be disqualified.

Every poem that meets the rules and is delivered within the deadline will be published here on “Writer’s Treasure Chest” together with the provided picture.

End of this month…

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Want to be a Guest in October?

Going to be out for the door, so I’m going to make this short and to the point.

Even though I have Raven’s Wrath going on throughout October and the War of Nytefall interviews on the 5 Mondays, I want to open the blog to others.  So, I’d like to offer up Wednesdays and maybe a few Fridays to guests.  The post doesn’t even have to be horror or Halloween-related.  It’ll be a first come, first serve and I could run it into November if I get enough.

One thing I won’t be able to do here is an interactive interview due to time constraints, so I apologize.  Still, you can send me a promo for something or write on a topic that you wish to get a conversation going about.  The point here is:

October/November Guest Bloggers Are Welcomed!

Let me know in the comments and I’ll get back to you as soon as I can.

Email for post:  lukecallindor@gmail.com

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Amazon Advertising: The Machette Effect

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In my recent post, Amazon Releases Amazon Advertising, I mentioned an app I use called Machete. I promised to expand on that in a future post (i.e. this one).

Machete is an Amazon Advertising (formerly Amazon Marketing Services or AMS) add-on. You install it on your browser and it transparently adds some extra features to your Amazon Dashboard. When I first used it, Machete was little more than a way to track your sales through time and edit multiple keywords at once. Not a game-changer, just some nifty little extras. At $25/month, it wasn’t worth it unless you were constantly tweaking your Ads, which is why I’ve never mentioned it before.

Recently, however, Machete has made two dramatic changes which have led me to this post. The first one was to introduce a great new feature called Bid Optimizer.

1. Bid Optimizer

Amazon Advertising Machete App | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's book

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If My Head Spins Any More, I’ll Need a Priest . . . Or Sacrificial Pizzas

Bigger fan of the son than the video, but I might just need the latter to grow on me.  I just stumbled onto this on the radio.  Not sure how it will go over with the 1’s of people who check the videos.  Whatever since this is the topic of the post.

Sadly, I have no author updates to give.  I haven’t done any writing, outlining, editing, brainstorming, proofreading, tinkering, or any real promotions this week.  I was too busy with everything else and I’m still feeling a little too off-kilter to touch my ideas for very long.  Yeah, not the happiest thing to say, but I’m not going to hide the fact that I’m still coming to terms with the changes.  People keep telling me that I’ll be able to make time, but I spent 10 years being told that and it never came true.  It all depends on the job I get as well.  One that leaves me exhausted by the end of the day and takes my weekends will make it much more difficult than a job that doesn’t wear me down to the bone and suck up all of my time.  Keep in mind that I would want time with my family as well, so the writing would come in third.

Anyway, I’m working hard on getting the certification for Teaching Assistant.  I finish the workshops on Monday, take the certification test on Wednesday, and get my fingerprints done on Thursday.  I’m confident that I’ll pass the test, which means I have to figure out what the next step is.  That seems to be applying for jobs, so I’ll be working on a cover letter to go with my resume.  I’m hoping to find an ‘in’ as well and I’ve applied to be a school monitor in case the TA job takes longer to get.  A challenge is going to be that we’re already a month into the school year, so I don’t know how many openings will be around.  Needless to say, I’m getting nervous and will be doing some phone calls to see if I can submit prior to the test.  Another issue is that getting the transcripts from my time in an Educator Preparation program might be a bigger difficulty than I expected.

Not really sure what else to talk about, which makes me feel like I’m being a bad blog host here.  My life isn’t the type of excitement that would have people riveted.  It’s been practice tests, doctor appointments, and Yom Kippur.  Nobody really needs to hear about how I was really hungry on Wednesday and almost didn’t make it.  Or that I was playing ‘Castlevania: Symphony of the Night’ and my old fingers can’t do the spells any more.  I have to depend on dropped healing items and dodging instead of the Soul Steal move that used to be so easy.  My son starts chorus this week and possibly violin since it’s the first full week of school for him. No more holidays until the second week of October.  Excitement abounds . . . somewhere in the world, but not really here.

Well, that’s really it.  Maybe I’ll get my head and heart together to start editing since I can’t do much beyond submitting to job openings.  At least once I do the workshops, test, and fingerprinting.  So, what are the goals?

  1. Take and pass the Teaching Assistant certification test.
  2. Complete DASA workshop.
  3. Get fingerprinted.
  4. Write cover letter (Yikes!).
  5. Submit to job openings.
  6. Possibly start editing a book.
  7. Handle personal stuff.
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Larry the Lunatic’s Amusement Park Supply Store

Nautilus from FFXIII

Welcome one and . . . Well, there’s only one of you.  First, I need to make sure you have the proper licenses and paperwork.  We can’t be selling our stock to people who don’t have the space.  It’s just bad for business and safety, which we take very seriously.  At least, we do ever since that mother of twelve bought a roller coaster for her house to keep the kids occupied during her crime shows.  So much vomit.  Now, what kind of park are you looking to build?

A theme is not necessary because it should only be about having fun.  We’ve got everything from log flumes to anti-gravity chambers.  That second one does require that you hire a resident engineer who specializes in futuristic technology.  Don’t worry because we have a list of candidates.  That’s right.  We can help staff your park once you pick the rides.  We don’t have packages though.  There are deals depending on how many things you get, but packages lead to copycat parks and that’s no fun.  Not unless they’re from the same company.  I mean, that makes sense . . . What are you looking at?

Oh, we call that the Psycho Hamster Special and it can really be the centerpiece of your whole park.  As you can see, there are tunnels going everywhere like a play area at a fast food joint.  People climb through and it leads them to various rides of your choice.  For example, you start here and go through the Haunted House tunnels until you hit this area.  Then, you choose between the Ferris Wheel or the bumper cars.  Both will lead you to these other tunnels that can be either walking, moving floor, or another ride.  Swing rides are difficult here because of space, but you can include various pendulums, drop towers, climbing walls, ball pits, and even a laser tag section.  The whole thing acts like a maze as well, which can end with a big ride that takes you back to the beginning.  While this does come close to the copycat issue, it’s not because you make your own system and we have enough to make sure there are thousands of combinations.

Looking at the space you have, we’re sure that we’ll need at least twenty bathrooms.  Here is a list of possible eateries and food carts.  There isn’t as much variety here as one would hope since guests tend to expect certain dishes at an amusement park.  Popcorn, corndogs, pretzels, soda, churros, cotton candy, and the usual fare are all at the top.  I recommend putting in a fun restaurant as your dining centerpiece.  We recently finished designing one where you dine in a bubble underwater with non-predatory fish swimming around.  The bubbles are a dense plastic that keeps you cool and it comes up to the surface for food, so it’s relatively safe.  No, huh?  The history restaurant is fun, but you need to hire someone who can make the proper foods and costumes for each theme.  People get angry if you get something wrong there.  Serve a diet coke in a Viking theme?  They just enraged.  Perhaps you should have a smaller dining establishment over here in case things don’t work out.  The Wild West Saloon comes with a street of vendors and horse rides.  Well, we probably could do something similar with Arabian Nights.  I’ll get the boys and girls in the back on that.  You can be our tester.

Let’s see what else.  Parking is done by you, but we’ll provide signage.  Merchandise requires that you have a sit down with Margaret, who is behind the door that looks like a balloon.  Ah, there is the issue of deadliness that we have to discuss.  Safety is a priority, but it also depends on what you want.  Is there an underlying purpose to your park that involves assassinations?  It would be safe for everyone, except your targets.  A push of a button can cause an accident to befall only them.  Don’t look so shocked.  There are more murder worlds out there than you realize.  Brings in some extra money as well.  Okay, think it over and we’ll pretend this part of the conversation was about the safari you want to put over there.  It’s swampland, but that just means you can use airboats, which have the big blades that . . . Right, not discussing that.  Got it.

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The 2018 Interview Series featuring Staci Troilo

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Don Massenzio This week, I am very pleased to feature an interview with author and blogger Staci Troilo. Staci is a very supportive blogger and an excellent author. I hope you enjoy learning more about her in this week’s interview. … Continue reading →

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Leave a Question for Clyde the Dawn Fang Progenitor

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

I wonder how much I have to say about Clyde.  There weren’t a lot of changes in War of Nytefall: Lost with him aside from the new home and trying to figure out the kind of leader he wants to be.  A key component of Clyde’s personal story is that he has a monstrous rage inside him that is always on the verge of escaping.  This doesn’t make him a full-on berserker with impulse control issues, but it makes him incredibly dangerous.  If he gets too into a battle then he can lose control.  If he is pushed too far then he can lose control.  The thing that he is scared of is that he can’t pull back and have to be destroyed before he decimates the world.  So, his progression is more of a seesaw that is trying to stay level instead of tilting to one side.

For those who don’t know about his past, Clyde was turned by Gregorio Roman and is the brood brother of Nadia Sylvan.  He became a talented and infamous thief who ran a vampire gang that was composed of Mab, the Vengeance Hounds, Chastity Sullivan, and a partial membership of Kenneth Decker.  One day, Clyde decided to test his luck by trying to steal from the temple of Durag the Sun God.  He was captured and nearly executed, but the Great Cataclysm struck before the end.  He was swallowed by the ground along with all of the mortals and the entire city.  It would be 50 years before Mab would dig him out and he’d emerge as the first Dawn Fang.

Since his return, Clyde has faced multiple challenges, but two biggest ones are keeping himself entertained and being a leader.  The first is a problem because he hasn’t found many people who can put up a real fight against him.  So, he has no easy way to release the rage that he tries to keep under control.  The other is more harrowing because Clyde has to face a sense of doubt that feels unnatural to his typically confident personality.  Even when he ran his old gang, he would do heists with Mab while Titus ran the small army that took group jobs.  He was in charge, but only made sure people shared the wealth (except Mab) and nobody betrayed the group.  This makes Clyde think more like a laid back enforcer instead of the ruler of an entire species.  He is trying not to act like a brutal warlord, but also show enough strength that none of his people would consider exposing the Dawn Fangs to danger.  This means a lot of the punishments revolve around pain and death, but Clyde isn’t sure he wants to do it this way.

The post can go on since Clyde is the main character, but I hope there’s enough for people to think of a few questions.  You’ve got his relationships, thoughts about being a Dawn Fang, thief life, leadership, his rage, and just about anything.  Not much is off the table with him, so ask away and see what he says in October.

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The Scarlet Ribbon, on #LisaBurtonRadio

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Lisa Burton

Welcome, all you astral travellers and trauma survivors. You’ve landed on Lisa Burton Radio, and have I got a show for you today. I’m your host, Lisa the robot girl, and my special guest today is David Roberts, and he’s actually been to the otherworld. “Welcome to the show, David.”

“Happy to talk with you Lisa, although I am still not sure why I am here. Maggie is usually the one who does these interviews, she loves to talk about what happened to us over there.”

“Tell us how you wound up piercing the veil. How did you get to see what lies beyond?”

“I don’t remember much about that day. I was inside the supermarket, queuing up to pay for my TV dinners when this idiot drove his car through the plate glass window, mowing several people down before he reached me. I found out later that Maggie had…

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