Tortured Soul Available for Preorder

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Tortured Soul coverBittersweet. That’s the only way I can describe it. I’m proud to have completed the final installment of the Medici Protectorate series, but I love this world so much, I’m sorry to see it end.

Tortured Soul is the fourth novel in the series. It follows the final member of the Brotherhood (Roberto “Coz” Cozza) and the youngest Medici descendant (Antonia “Toni” Notaro) as they prepare to fight the ultimate battle between good and evil.

The Notaros want nothing to do with their legacy or the power at their disposal. The Brotherhood wants only to keep them safe. And the evil mastermind and the nefarious organization he represents want to use the Medici lineage in their quest for world domination—or kill the girls and their protectors for standing in the way. This fast-paced, emotional journey wraps up in a dramatic way. If you like passion, intrigue, and international mystery…

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Uniqueness vs. Productivity in Writing

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Paula Hicks | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's bookThis is a guest post by Paula Hicks. Paula is an experienced journalist from Romania. She currently lives in the US and works as a freelance editor for a number of educational resources. Her big dream is to open a publishing house in Europe. Connect with her on Twitter.

Does Every Writer Have a Specific Trait that Differs Them from the Rest?

Whenever you’re trying to find tips on how to be a better writer, you hear this one: be unique!

It sounds logical. If, for example, you’re trying to reduce the bounce rate on your blog, producing unique content may be a solution. You have to be different from all other bloggers, so the audience will recognize your style and will want more of it.

The Problem with Uniqueness

Writing with time constraints | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's book“Stay unique” is an important advice for a novelist or a blogger. When you’re a freelance writer or a…

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When Your Characters are Monsters

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In most stories, monsters are nothing more than deadly obstacles that have to be overcome to continue on.  They typically don’t have lines, much in the way of personality, or a very long lifespan.  Monsters earn attention by how deadly and scary they are as well as how uniquely powered they are.  They can range from standards like goblins to amazingly strange like the Paura Riders, but they are still nothing more than obstacles for the heroes to defeat.

The exception is usually when a monster is the main villain, but these tend to fall into humanoid categories.  You have your vampires, demons, liches, and other beings that still look rather human.  Even if the final battle is against a true monster, there’s a humanoid somewhere around to be the one who drives more of the action.  For example, in the original ‘Clash of the Titans’, the Kraken was the major threat that had to be defeated to save the princess.  Yet, the action is driven more by Calibos the son of Thetis.  It’s because we connect more with the humanoid villains and the true monsters tend to be written as primal.

Quest of the Brokenhearted posed a problem for me because I couldn’t have too many humanoids.  Kira Grasdon, Roland Gauntlier, and Rayne felt like it should be the limit.  The Shadow Earl is humanoid in appearance even though he’s a demon, so I have to admit that I couldn’t get myself away from the main villain issue.  It was within the supporting cast that I tried to take monsters and flush things out.  Honestly, I don’t think I was nearly as successful as I would have liked.  Princess Cyrena is a harpy and Hyde is a gremlin, which are monster types.  Yet, they act fairly human, which is more than many of the champions can say.  Although, there is one ‘primal’ champion that came out surprisingly human in my opinion.

I found that the best I could do is find a balance between human and monster.  This went beyond the physical and to how they functioned.  These monsters had cultures and habits that worked for their people while demonstrating a sense of civility because they were in a city.  Early on, it felt like they had been tamed, which wasn’t where I wanted to go.  It was more that they had found a way to live that didn’t involve the wilderness and dealing with adventurers.  Lacarsis acted like a haven for the monsters who wished to be more than the savage creatures of Windemere.  The best way I was able to portray this was by having Kira be confused about what she found.  Her social stumbles helped to give me a sense of how these monster characters could function like those who are humanoid.

Of course, I had to limit the types of monsters because some were too difficult to turn into full supporting characters.  Lack of communication ability was an issue, but I think I got through with one who used body language.  It also had to make sense that the monster was more civilized.  Harpies, demons, and gremlins were possible, but anything that was very animalistic in nature was a hard sell.  I wanted Lacarsis to run like a regular city, which meant I needed various roles that requires certain abilities.  Can’t really have a merchant that eats all the customers and make it a come off as a city that maintains any level of law and order.

I do hate that this idea had so many limits, but that is probably my fault.  After all, the main character is still a human, which means I maintained a human perspective.  A story that has all monsters would probably make this shift a greater possibility.  Maybe I’ll try that down the road and this is the first step.

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Root Canal

Despicable Me

It starts with pain
That gets worse
Before it gets better
*
You go for help
After praying to the insurance gods
That pay a little of the fee
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The hope of simplicity
Is ruined by two words
Root canal
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Brace yourself
For drills and files
That you are too numb to fully feel
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By the time it is done
Your mind has run for miles
And your jaw now aches
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A crown is in the future
But first a desperate race
To get the meds before the numbness fades

(Not my best, but I’m writing this after getting prepared for a crown.  So, I’m not at my best.  It doesn’t help that I can’t remember the original plan and just learned that my weekend is going to be busier than expected.)

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That Was Definitely a Week

I was going to do this later in the day after all of the appointments were down, but I’m already battling the invisible anaconda.  The week built up a lot of stress and something this morning decided to be the last straw.  No idea what it was, but I’m currently trying to write this by kneeling next to the bed and laying my head down.  So, spelling might not be that great this time around.  Promise to look up from time to time.

I’d like to explain what happened, but I think it was just that a lot happened.  There were three medical appointments on three different days.  One of these was the prep for a permanent crown, which I’ll get in 2 weeks.  This started with chaos because I couldn’t find a form I thought I needed.  Had to run my son to camp and hurry back home to continue hunting, which resulted in me having to hurry to the appointment.  For anyone wondering, a mild anxiety attack does not mixing with getting dental work.  Pushed through it, but I really messed my head up that day.  The other two appointments came with their own wrinkles too, so I didn’t have an easy time at all.  On the plus side, I’m meeting with a therapist for one-on-one sessions starting this week.  We’ll see how that goes and I should really leave this topic alone for the rest of the post.

Keeping my son entertained has been both difficult and easy.  He’s fine playing with Legos or using his new backpack water gun.  We taken that out a few times and I hope to join in next time.  Found out the hard way that a blast of water to the side of my head where the root canal was done is not fun.  At least he apologized and we continued on for a bit.  I need to get my own water weapon for these battles.  This all around the house since founding cheap (or free) outings is difficult.  We went to the Children’s Museum for an activity on worms that allowed him to make his own compost box.  It hasn’t gone very smoothly since mold grew in there by the next day, but we’re hoping to turn it around somehow.  The crystal growing kit we got for his birthday is having the same amount of success.  Don’t even get me started on that today.  The other outing of the week was to an aquarium that finally completed a bulk of the repairs after Sandy.  It was never that big, so it was a fun morning. The new addition is a place where you can walk through a tunnel and watch sharks swim over the glass.  Have to go again on a day where there isn’t 7-9 camp groups in attendance.

Writing-wise, things are moving slow.  I worry that I’m letting War of Nytefall: Loyalty fall by the wayside since I’m focused on Quest of the Brokenhearted right now.  I’m thinking of altering my Twitter style in August with me rotating between those two and Warlord of the Forgotten Age.  It’s really hard to juggle all these books because it doesn’t feel like people are finding them.  I actually wrote Beginning of a Hero into the Amazon search bar and found a bunch of superhero stuff before getting to my book.  Many of the others didn’t even have the phrase.  This combined with losing so many reviews over the last 2 weeks has made me feel like I’m fighting a losing battle.  It’s like you can only succeed as an indie if you’re rich or cheat.  Keep in mind that I made this a full-time career and people are using my rankings as a reason to push me for quitting.  I can’t figure out a way to solve this and gain exposure, especially since the summer is slow and I have to put a lot more time into taking care of my son.  Makes me wish I knew someone who could do animations to put some of my fights into a more visual form and use those.  Seems people care more about tv, YouTube, and movies more than books these days.  Imagine if Amazon took the money they spent on ‘Lord of the Rings’ for a series and used it to give a bunch of indies Prime shows.  Now, I’m just being silly.

I made a little progress on Raven’s Wrath, which will be ready for October.  It’s the grand finale for Dawn Addison and it’s not feeling like a horror as much as the others.  I’m going out with a bang here, so there’s more gore and action.  I tried the other way, but I think there’s too much revealed about Dawn’s past, abilities, and persona.  So, there’s no mystery about her when she pulls her tricks.  Trying to think of a way to describe this, but I’m coming up blank. Maybe the later ‘Resident Evil’ movies, but with more heart and character development?  Either way, I do hope it’s fun and gives some closure to anyone who has followed the Raven Series.

So, what are the goals for the week?

  1. Write more of Raven’s Wrath.
  2. Therapy session
  3. See ‘Hotel Transylvania 3’ tomorrow.
  4. Rest during the hot days.
  5. Cook Penne with Vodka Sauce.
  6. Maybe go to the zoo on one of the cooler days.
  7. Summer things
  8. Make another goal post post next Saturday.
  9. Shrug because you’ve run out of ideas (done!)
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#Bookreview – The Yak Guy Project by C. S. Boyack

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Imagine waking up in the desert with no idea what happened to you. You have clear memories of situations and places, but a complete loss in personal matters… like your own name. This situation is bad, and you have no idea how to get home.

When you’re rescued by a talking yak, the situation gets exponentially worse. You’ve obviously lost your mind. The immediate needs of a ride off the salt pan and searing heat, along with a drink of water, outweigh the concerns about your mental state.

This is exactly what happened to the Yak Guy. In fact he’s been placed in an alternate world and given a chance to start over in life.

Can this selfish, almost parasitic, young man learn to start over in a world where charity is hard to find? Life is brutal and short here, but he’s going to have to…

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What Is This Thing Called Writer’s Block? – Guest Post by, Jaq D Hawkins…

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What makes me a writer is the need to write. It’s an incessant driving force characterised by a series of scenes from stories constantly animating through my mind. Not just one, I always have several stories playing out in my head. So when articles come out talking about what to do when you get writer’s block, I wonder how that can work with a host of characters continually clamouring for attention in a creative mind.

We’ve all faced the blank page. There are times when words flow quickly and other times when they take a little more plumbing, but once an idea has manifested, the words to express it fully exist somewhere in the aether, we just have to access them. Sometimes they can be elusive and the person who panics will hit a block.

Take an article like this for example. What could a person who doesn’t suffer from…

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The Kusari-Gama of Kira Grasdon

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Long ago, Kira Grasdon was a one-scene character who complained about an injured hand and then had a run-in with Kellia.  That was it for her until an editing run placed her in a sparring match with Luke Callindor, Kellia, and Roland Gauntlier.  I kept adding her into scenes until she rose up the ranks to a supporting character.  Of course, this came with a slight problem . . . she needed a weapon.

Back in those days, I’d slap a sword on a character and leave it that.  Yet, I knew I had to do something else as Kira popped up more often in outlines.  I stalled a lot on this because nothing felt right for her.  She was an heiress who wasn’t a good student at the warrior academy, but showed blips of promise.  In truth, she held herself back and showed a discomfort towards being seen as capable until she met Luke.  This really stood out to me and I felt she needed a unique weapon, which is also what led to Kira coming from a different region.  I designed Bor’daruk as a desert city and gave her . . . a scimitar that lasted for an hour.  Yeah, I was hitting a lot of dead ends here until I relaxed and saw this:

Rurouni Kenshin

One of the less obvious highlights in Quest of the Brokenhearted might by the trusty weapon of our heroine.

I was already into anime and suddenly got the idea to start implementing Asian weaponry into Windemere.  Since it wasn’t Earth, I had no reason to avoid putting these things alongside the typical European weaponry.  Thankfully, I didn’t try any other weapons for Kira besides the kusari-gama because that one worked out perfectly.  It allowed her to do a few tricks that I needed from her during the assault on Hamilton Academy and it helped her stand out.  The rationale for her people designing the chain/sickle/club combo was to handle the giant scorpions that were common in the desert.  Ranged weapons are best, but getting jumped meant needing to handle that tail.  The kusari-gama had a decent distance and some level of binding, especially the enchanted models.  It really helped Kira stand out like I wanted her to.

Unlike swords, I was never really sure how a kusari-gama works and looked up a bunch of videos.  It’s not an easy weapon, so I decided to be a little more fictional with its use than other weapons.  The style had a lot of flicking out with the club and precision slashing with the sickle, which required a lot of agility on Kira’s part.  Defensive moves were more complicated since it’s hard to block with a chain and the two ends aren’t at the best at parrying.  I came up with one version where the user wraps the chain around their arm and holds one of the ends to create a semi-armor sleeve.  This requires time though, which again went back to putting Kira into a style that is built around speed, agility, and reflexes.  This wasn’t really her forte at the start, so I mentioned a few times that she really buckled down and trained.  Making her a quick study and fairly cunning definitely helped out in this area.

In regards to Quest of the Brokenhearted, the kusari-gama influenced a lot of Kira’s ‘upgrades’ that she gains, which is obvious.  It also is a big reason why I continued on with this idea and put Kira specifically into it.  Now, it does get a little difficult since the timeline on how I created this story is all over the place.  I knew I wanted to do a story that gave her closure.  I also wanted to do a story that was inspired by Castlevania.  It took a little while for me to get a mental connection, which ended up being that Kira and Simon Belmont use similar weapons.  He has a whip and she has the kusari-gama, which might sound like a silly thing to work off of.  Yet, I really enjoyed having characters enter the fights with more common fantasy weapons and then there’s Kira leaping and swinging around in an entirely different style.

I think it’s important in fantasy to give your main characters something that can identify them.  Weapons are obviously one way to go.  I tend to gravitate towards this because I focus on action.  Luke Callindor had his sabers, Timoran Wrath had his axe, and Kira Grasdon had her kusari-gama.  There’s no way for me to picture her without that weapon either in her hand, on her belt, or hidden in her dress.  This is also the weapon that opened up a lot of possibilities for me in Windemere.  No reason to stick solely with European weapons once someone is running around with a chain-and-sickle.

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Free Story: Royal Duties

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In April, I posted my thousandth post on this blog. To celebrate, I will share here all my short stories. Every couple of weeks, I’ll be posting one story from my celebrated Exciting Destinies series for you to enjoy. With over 30 stories so far, I hope you’ll have lots of fun in the coming months!

This week, it’s Royal Duties from You’re In For A Ride.

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Royal Duties

Closed door | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's book Photo: Pixabay

I know the place is trouble as soon as we pass the twin marble columns and enter the austere palace. Pained cries assault my ears, coming from behind a closed door at the end of an endless corridor. Our footsteps echo on the shiny marble floor until we reach it.

A fresh scream comes from behind the polished mahogany. All my hairs stand on end. I glance at my trusted…

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The 2018 Author Interview Series Featuring Cynthia Kirkwood

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Don Massenzio It’s time for the next subject for my 2018 author interview series. Author interviews are posted every Friday throughout the year. I am honored to continue this series with author Cynthia Kirkwood You can catch up with all … Continue reading

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