Winks to Legends of Windemere

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Since Legends of Windemere and War of Nytefall take place in the same world, I felt that I had to give a few nods to the previous series in the new one.  This isn’t very easy though because Clyde and the Dawn Fangs were operating a few centuries before Luke Callindor and the champions were even born.  Having Mab show up in The Mercenary Prince is one thing because she’s immortal, but how do you really do nods to a series that takes place in the future?

The most obvious thing is to use earlier version of the cities and common monsters.  This locks in that both stories take place in Windemere.  I mentioned the same gods and goddesses too even though they don’t physically show up.  This helps to make it clear that Clyde and his adventure happen almost beyond the control of the gods.  He is beyond the reach of Gabriel the Destiny God due to the Great Cataclysm, which is a trait he’ll share with another future protagonist.  The difference will be that Clyde is staying under the radar of the gods, which means I can’t have them show up to give nods to what they’re going to do in Legends of Windemere.

Another challenge is that having any heroic bloodlines turn up is just asking for them to get killed.  It would feel off to have Clyde run into a Callindor and not have a fight, which the mortal can’t possibly win.  I will admit that I think I found a way to slip one in anyway, but there’s going to be a lot of stretching.  It’s actually a little easier to bring in a few verbal nods like mentioning the Snow Tiger Tribe (Timoran Wrath) or having a character drink Masterson Whiskey (Kevin Masterson).  Bringing up drites and gypsies can cover a little too, but you can’t really go specifically to Fizzle and Sari.  So, it really made me think that the heroes can’t be the big hint targets.

That didn’t mean I had nothing though because I stumbled onto a few juicy nods.  There are a few immortals involved in Legends of Windemere, so I can have them make an appearance or at least get mentioned.  For example, I could feasibly have Stephen show up and try to recruit Clyde to the Baron’s cause.  Obviously, that didn’t happen since that would change War of Nytefall.  I also can’t see a meeting between Clyde and Baron Kernaghan going smoothly.  This means I still have a problem with making direct connections, which might be for the best.

With a prequel, you don’t want future heroes to be too involved in the story.  Having it be reversed with prequel characters showing up in another series possesses less risk of messing with continuity.  You can’t alter the past if they’re in the future.  The same doesn’t go for cameos in prequels.  That can make a mess, which is what I’m always keeping in mind every time I write one of these books.  One time, I nearly made a mistake by having Clyde talk about running into Dariana, which made no sense.  She would have just become a champion and the location I picked didn’t fit with what I set up.  A lot of these things have to be cleaned up in edits, which has left me with this system:

  1. Put in a nod/cameo because it’s fun.
  2. Sit down after writing first draft to decide if it makes sense.
  3. Realize that ‘because I think it’s cool’ is not good enough.
  4. Fix if I can’t rationalize it.

Maybe less is more here.  Either way, I’ve had to add a few nods to maintain some type of connections.  I have to decide if I should hint to future series too like Sin or Darwin who take place after Legends of Windemere.  This really makes it feel like a juggling act too, which is both fun and harrowing.

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Check This Out: The Way the Light Bends

Check out a fun and interesting interview.

L. Marie's avatarEl Space--The Blog of L. Marie

Before I continue with today’s post, let me first say that thoughts and prayers are with those who live in the areas affected by Hurricane Florence. Florence, you have outstayed your welcome. Go away!

Now, please join me in welcoming back to the blog the awesome Cordelia Jensen. She was here not long ago with Laurie Morrison to talk about their middle grade novel, Every Shiny Thing. (Click here for that interview.) Today, she’s here to talk about her young adult verse novel, The Way the Light Bends, which was published by Philomel Books earlier this year.

      

Cordelia is represented by Sara Crowe. Okay, let’s strap on our gab bag and talk to Cordelia!

El Space: Four quick facts about yourself?
Cordelia: (1) I grew up in Manhattan where Skyscraping and The Way the Light Bends take place.
(2) Currently, I live in a neighborhood in Northwest…

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Easy Tips For Building The Best Home Library For Your Kids

Great advice and tips.

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This is a guest post by Stepheny is a content writer at FeedFond. She’s a loving mother to her two children and is passionate towards child psychology. To read more of her articles, visit FeedFond.com.

Easy Tips For Building The Best Home Library For Your Kids

Kids' library | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's booksBooks definitely were an enjoyable and joyful part of our childhood and many of us still hold onto our childhood collections. However, technology has advanced today from books to online reading platforms. It’s a more convenient option to search for reading materials online.

So, is it possible for our children experience the ecstasy of getting lost at Book-land? Read on for simple ways to build a home library for your kids for this to actually happen!

What Books will you Choose?

It’s important to choose the correct books for your inbuilt library. You obviously want your children to make the best of it. Here…

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Ode to My Bunny

Monty Python

I love my bunny
Enough to write a poem
To honor him
As he stares at me write
Wiggly nose
Matted hair
His tummy full
Of tomatoes
Odds
And ends
He keeps me safe
Flying faster than the wind
Tougher than stone
Ripping flesh
And taking lives
Of our lurking foes
Where would I be without my bunny?
Maybe with a cat
But I wouldn’t be as happy

-Lost

Spend more time with Lost and her Bunny in
War of Nytefall: Lost!

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Oops. Forgot to Put a Title Here when I Hit Publish.

So, here we are.  I haven’t seen a lot of movement on War of Nytefall: Lost, which has me worried that my semi-retirement/long pause has done more damage than I initially thought.  Could be paranoia too, but it feels like I get a lot less blog and book traffic because I’m not going to be as productive as I was.  Dropping from 4 books a year to 2 at most is crushing.  Not to mention people might not want to invest time and money into my stories if they think I’m going to pull a ‘Game of Thrones’.  Authors having long delays or not finishing series is a common complaint and fear in fantasy.  Just hoping there’s another answer because I’m already hurting enough due to feeling like I have to give up what I worked so hard to create.  (By the way, there are things going on that I can’t talk about in public, so there are aspects people don’t know.)

Since I didn’t touch any writing this week and probably won’t next week, I can really only talk about other things.  The job interview I had didn’t go well, but I’m looking at it as getting the rust off.  Haven’t done one in 5-6 years, so it wasn’t like I would be at my best here.  Thankfully, I found another path last Friday that I’m working on.  This is actually more appealing to me because I was interested in the field long ago and it makes me feel good after a hard day.  It could put me on a schedule that matches my son’s too.  Not sure I should jinx things and call it an ideal, but I’m definitely feeling better about stepping even partially away from writing with this as my alternative.

The job is Teaching Assistant, which requires that I take 3 workshops and a certification test.  I finished the 2 online workshops this week and have the 3rd divided between the next 2 Mondays.  I take the test at the end of the month, which makes me hope that I can find a position by early or mid-October.  At the very least, I might be able to sign up as a school monitor, which I’ll look into more on Monday or Tuesday.  That’s a foot in the door and I can do that while looking for a TA position.  I’ve already been told about a few, but I can’t go for them until I have the certification and workshops.  Maybe this will lead to me taking night classes for a Masters in Education, but we’ll take this by steps.

With my son having last Monday and Tuesday off from school, I didn’t really do anything to speak of.  The workshops and errands took up most of my time, so I feel like my life is getting too boring for these posts.  Next week is going to be chaotic with me having to get my son from school twice for appointments and Yom Kippur smack in the middle of the week.  This is the day where Jews fast for the day, so I won’t be online that much.  I think because last year I kept jumping onto my blog and Twitter while in a hunger-induced stupor.  My parents are going to be around this year to watch my son, which means I won’t get worn down that quickly.  Beyond all of that, I’ve got two books full of practice tests that I’ll be diving into.  Probably should have given myself more time to study, but I forgot how messy next week is.  That and all I can find are practice tests that are supposedly much harder than the actual test.  Nerves are still twitching though and I’m promising myself pizza for when I’m done with the test.

Kind of going back to the first topic, I feel really bad that I can’t touch my books for the foreseeable future.  Maybe once I finish the test, but the other things going on make me too anxious to touch them.  I can’t even edit War of Nytefall: Rivalry, which kind of drives me nuts.  Mucking around with some ideas that never get off the ground can take the edge off, but it really does feel like I’m losing a part of myself.  The TA path gives me strength and positiveness because I’d been considering teaching ever since I was in college.  I just wasn’t able to double major or get into the Masters program.  So, maybe the positive energy from TA life will bring me back to writing with enough strength that I can do more than blog.  The abysmal sales aren’t helping though.  As usual, I’ve had a lot of people tell me that they have bought the book, but the Amazon numbers don’t match up and now I’m getting off topic.  Guess I’ll always be left wondering what went wrong until I either get an answer or I find a way to achieve the ultimate dream.

So, what’s the plan for next week?

  1. Practice tests!
  2. Take breaks with ‘Seven Deadly Sins’ anime.
  3. Practice tests!
  4. Yom Kippur on Wednesday, which means ‘Castlevania: Symphony of the Night’ all day.
  5. Start scheduling Derailing Bedlam sections for Thursdays.  These will start in November after Raven’s Wrath is done.  Tempted to change the ending of ‘Bedlam’ since I don’t know if I’ll ever get back to Cassidy and Lloyd.  Yet, it might be best to leave it open just in case.  Does making the whole book blog only mean I’m giving up or is it giving them a chance to get exposure?
  6. Other stuff that comes up.
  7. Come up with December post topics.  FEEL FREE TO SUGGEST THINGS!
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The Second Person Point Of View Can Captivate Your Readers – by Derek Haines…

Definitely worth a read.

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How, when and why you can use the second person point of view

But first, what is point of view, or POV?

There are three basic points of view that define the type of narration used in literature and writing.

They are the first person, second person and third person.

In the first person POV, the narrator uses the pronoun, I or sometimes, We.

The second person POV uses the pronoun, You.

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Lost’s 7 Tips to Using Psychic Bunnies . . . Powers

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Bunny and I get to write a post about having psychic powers.  There was a silver-haired lady that wanted to help me, but I didn’t want to share.  I think she had to take a nap anyway.  So, here is what I, Lost the General Princess, suggest you do if you have any type of mental powers.

  1. Listen to the voices, but always have the final say.  Sometimes, they have good ideas and other times they don’t.  Since you’re the one with the body, you have to decide on if you’re going to put in the effort.  It might help to figure out whose mind you’re accidentally listening in on too.  One time, I ended up cooking a bunt cake, but I didn’t have any bunt.  So, I used some bacon.
  2. Stay away from socks.  They are evil and nasty and . . . Oh, I guess this doesn’t have anything to do with psychic powers.  Still, I stand by this.
  3. When taking over someone’s mind, don’t forget where you parked your own body.  I can control my own and somebody else’s because I don’t go too deep, but you could accidentally do an astral jump.  Best to be prepared for the worst.  This is very important for anyone who does possessions.
  4. Always be ready for adults to have naughty thoughts.  These can make you either laugh or feel icky depending on your own naughtiness.  I enjoy stopping these thoughts because it’s rude to think such things when you have company.  Most times, they don’t even notice.  Unless you read their minds during sex and don’t realize it, so then you kill the mood and cause a fight.
  5. Memory wipes are a great way to get out of trouble.  Steal some food?  Memory wipe.  Put a public fountain in the tavern?  Memory wipe.  Accidentally anger an entire temple full of Duragians?  Very big memory wipe.  Just make sure you don’t go back too far or you make a city full of babies.  That’s hard to explain . . . Unless you use more memory wipes.
  6. Telepathy isn’t as one way as you think.  There’s always the chance that your target will catch your thoughts.  It could be caused by a strong will, their own powers, or you got sloppy with the connection.  You don’t have to worry about them taking over your mind unless they’re a powerful psychic, but you might reveal a few embarrassing secrets before you’re done.
  7. I don’t like this number.  Looks like an upside down sock.
  8. Telekinesis is fun!  You can be so lazy with this power.  Grab stuff from across the room or casually throw bad guys around without much effort.  You also can use it on yourself like with making you stronger and tougher.  If you focus enough, you can even fly.  As long as you can move it, your power will work on it.  By the way, be very careful with the flying part because if you don’t lift your entire body, you’ll tear yourself apart.
  9. So, I’ve been told that #2 doesn’t count . . . It’s easier to use your powers on somebody who is sleeping.  They won’t see you coming and they have dreams that you can sneak into.  Just watch out for naughty dreams.  Those are worse than the thoughts.
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Sally’s Cafe and Bookstore – Author Update #Reviews – Judith Barrow, Sue Coletta and Audrey Driscoll.

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The 2018 Interview Series Featuring Thom Reese

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Don Massenzio This week’s author interview features author Thom Reese. On a side note, though the initial response was gratifying, I find myself running out of interview subjects by  the end of September. If you haven’t been interviewed, or even … Continue reading →

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