Music of Legends of Windemere: The Compass Key

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Another head-scratcher, which makes me wonder why I took on this crazy challenge.  I listened to music all through writing these books, but my mind struggles when it comes to thinking of specific songs.  Legends of Windemere: The Compass Key is a big turning point in the story.  It’s where the prophecy truly kicks off and the action is turned up a lot because of everything going on.  Well, here we go.

Finally found a point where giving a shout out to my villains made sense.  The Lich was a vile creature since the beginning and Queen Trinity had been causing some trouble.  Yet, this is when the most horrific of the villains really debuted.  Stephen Kernaghan always made me feel like I needed a shower after I wrote a scene.  Took all I had not to wipe him out immediately because I despised everything he stood for.

This is ‘Eye of the Storm’ by Watt White, which I first found when I was looking for One Piece AMVs.  I play it a lot when I have a battle where it feels like one character is standing in the midst of chaos.  That was a big set piece for this book with the opening army clashes, facing the Lich, the chaos elf invasion of Gaia, and then the big push into the Island of Pallice.

Maybe I’m missing the mark on a few of these.  That or the point.  So much happens in these books and I was listening to so much music, so things meld together at this point.  I kept coming back to this video game theme because it’s a very Sari-like song and she has a big evolution here.  There’s a sense of a new adventure beginning in this song as well, but that might just be me.  Almost like they’re about to set out for their destiny, which is what happened.

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Crossing Genres: #Fantasy & #Mystery

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Welcome back to the newest entry of crossing over genres.  Again, this is to show how advice for one can be used for another.  Of course, I’m always using Fantasy since that’s my wheelhouse.  I’ve done Romance and Horror/Thriller, but now is time for one that I’m not the best at.  So, I had to do extra research on this one, which is funny since I have used aspects of this genre in my own stories.  Which one is it?

FANTASY & MYSTERY

Solving a Problem

Most, if not all, stories focus on solving some kind of problem.  In Fantasy, this can be finishing a quest, saving a kingdom, slaying a monster, or any number of challenges that make sense for the world.  You can have smaller problems appear as well such as traps or smaller villains that want to get in the way.  The method of solving the problem can be very different. You may need to drop clues to both the reader and characters such as hints about how a specific creature can be defeated.  Sometimes, a character might just charge in and let luck or brute force sort it out.  No matter what, actions are taken to get through, over, around, or under the problem.  The characters don’t just waltz through either since you need to make them work for their solution.

Few character types work harder for a solution than the protagonists of Mystery stories.  It doesn’t matter if they’re a cop, private investigator, or an average guy dragged into a terrifying situation.  The goal of the story is to solve a problem, which requires some level of thinking and intuition.  In this arena, Mystery is superior to Fantasy because that’s the main point of the stories.  Unlike quests and slaying dragons, you have a lot more of the ‘unknown’ when solving a murder.  Mostly because you don’t know who killed the butler in chapter 1 while you can see the dragon sitting on the mountain.  Even so, both genres require that characters and authors think outside of the box to reach a solution.  You want to keep the readers guessing, so you have to throw in false leads, extra challenges, and devise a surprise near the end to bring everything home.  Maybe the detective starts finding evidence that they’re the murderer or the dragon decides to stay in the air, so the heroes have to find a way to fly.  A shocking twist that makes the solving of a problem more difficult is shared by the genres.

Foreshadowing

This one is fairly simple and straight to the point.  Leaving clues to hint at future events is a great tool in writing.  Mystery uses it to help readers get ahead of the detective in finding the murderer.  If not for that then they are to get the reader to go through the story a second time to make all of the connections.  This also helps give more depth to the overall world because it’s not a simple ‘follow the obvious clues’ journey.  Fantasy is more blunt in its use of foreshadowing, but you can still miss it.  Maybe it’s a spell or item that the heroes receive, but seems utterly useless until near the end.  Great example is in ‘Willow’ when he uses his disappearing pig trick in the final battle.  Much like in Mystery, you can throw some false leads in there, so nobody knows what’s foreshadowing and what’s an idea that won’t really go anywhere.  The result is the same, which is to keep the reader guessing, thinking, and following to see if their predictions are correct.

False Leads & Distractions

I mentioned this before, but I’ll bring it up again for a little more detail.  Fantasy stories can be drawn out by off-shoots of an adventure that hit a dead end or other problems that arise. Even if heroes know what they are fighting for, it doesn’t always mean that they have the exact path mapped out.  They can think that one idea will work, but then it results in utter failure, which is rather realistic.  Maybe they’re jumped by bandits and have to get out of that problem to return to the original issue.  You can’t throw too many deviations at heroes, but there should be enough to give off the sense that they are working for their victory and not everything goes in their favor.  A hero who coasts through to the end tends to be booed.

This is the same for Mystery, but possibly with more intentions to get the protagonist off the right track.  Clues aren’t always easy to decipher, so one might send people in the wrong direction.  It takes up time and they are forced to go back to see if they missed something.  An author might fear that this will frustrate the reader, which is highly likely just as too many bandit attacks will cause this in Fantasy.  So, you can’t have the hero go down the wrong path for long or you can have them gain something from this journey even if they have to go back.  Maybe a piece of knowledge that changes the way they look at the clue.  Distractions are possible as well since the target tends to be aware that they are being tracked.  Surprise attacks, femme fatales, shoot outs, and accidents are only some of the options for delaying the detective’s progress by a chapter or two.  As I’ve already said, you can’t do these too often or it’ll annoy your readers.

So, that’s the basics when it comes to Fantasy & Mystery similarities. I’m sure there’s a lot more, so mention them in the comments if you can think of any.  Thanks.

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Ghostly Interference

Today, welcome Jan Sikes to the blog. She’s a dear friend and is here to tell us about her newest publication. Make sure you make her feel welcome, …

Ghostly Interference
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A Collection of Autistic Parenting Memes

Simple post this time. I found some funny and supportive memes about autism, especially the parenting side of the equation.  Figure this year has been tough on people who are on the spectrum and those who help them.  God knows it’s put me and my son through our paces.  (All images found by a Yahoo Image Search.)

I hate hearing this one

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A Week with Snow and Shovels

Okay, this week didn’t go exactly as planned.  I can’t even be sure of how I fell a little behind on the writing side of things.  Not enough that it destroys me, but I’m simply confused.  Time may have gotten away from me here.  Yet, it also had long moments of going slow.  Did I sit on my butt more often than I should have?  Not like I can do anything about it.   Still, it was a week . . . Seriously, what in the world was I up to?

I think stress is partially to blame.  Work was busy, but in a way that didn’t make me want to scream.  It just didn’t give me much thinking time.  The quiet moments were met with almost a serene meditation in preparation of the next move.  Also, getting stuff ready for the future since we’re heading into holiday break next week.  Work stress was just enough to have me slightly unfocused when I got home, so I ended most nights falling asleep before I was ready.  That’s been the norm since the weather got cold though.

I didn’t have my son this week, but we spent last Saturday together for Hanukah and Monday evening for our usual father/son night.  Had a lot of fun both times with cartoons, making latkes, homework, studying, watching ‘The Grinch’ from 2018, and playing some Super Smash Bros.  We’re both waiting for them to put Sephiroth in the store because I’ve been hoping for him to be a playable character for years.  Now, they only need to do the same with Alucard from Castlevania and I’ll be 100% happy.  Beyond all of that, my son and I had a fun time.

Although, there was the issue of him having two big tests this week.  On the same day too and he has a third next week.  With him being with his mom, I couldn’t do anything to help him study once Monday was over.  This was a first for me, so I was getting really antsy about things.  It’s really hard to know your child is going through a really big challenge and you’re not even on the sideline.  This gets doubled when you’ve been with him for every other obstacle in his education.  From what I can tell, he did good, but the worry definitely took its toll on me.  I’m planning on us taking it easy tomorrow with maybe some movie time even though we have to study too.  It’s always a quiet first day back.  Although, I promised him a scavenger hunt for all of his Hanukkah toys since he was with his mom for the holiday.  That should be fun.

My big goal was finishing the first big section of Do I Need to Use a Dragon? since I was 13 entries away.  Figured it was possibly since I had 7 days.  The plan was to write 2 each weekday and 3 last Sunday and today.  Well . . . things didn’t work out.  I got 3 written on that Sunday, but the next 3 days only had time for 1 entry.  Of course, we got a snow day in the Northeastern U.S.  That should have put me back on track, but there were two issues.  It was really cold and shoveling wore me down.  I only got 2 entries done before I ran out of energy.  Yesterday was another 1 and I doubt I’m going to get the last 4 done today before my son gets home.  Next writing period for me will be Christmas day, so I’ll work on getting blog stuff done to clear my plate of those things.

Another thing that got in the way is that certain people keep dropping things in my lap or calling me away from my laptop.  I should be used to this, but it’s a lot more disruptive when it comes to Do I Need to Use a Dragon?   With a fiction book, I can slide back into the mentality by looking over my outline or glancing at the screen.  Here, I’m speaking with my own voice and fighting against doubt in my own knowledge.  It takes a lot of time to craft the sentences to get my point across.  If I’m shaken out of my thoughts mid-paragraph then I have to read through the entire entry again because I need to get back on track.  It’s been really bad this week.  So, a section of this book takes longer than one of my fantasy books even without distractions.  At this rate, I’m guessing end of February or middle of March is when I’ll be done with this.  Got 45 sections to go.  Be nice to get it down to 41 by Monday, but I’m doubting it.

That’s been my week really.  Enjoyed some wine and learned red doesn’t really sit well with my senses.  Definitely more of a white or rose person.  I finished watching ‘Yu Yu Hakusho’ and got HBO Max set up on my Roku.  Been making my way through the rest of ‘Schitt’s Creek’ and I think I’ll finish that up this week.  I want to watch the ‘Harley Quinn’ cartoon, but I might save that for the first week in January.  My son can hear the names Harley Quinn and Poison Ivy from across the house.  If he starts to wake up across the hall and hears that then he might come to check it out, but it’s not for his age.  Safer to pick a short anime or something.  I really do have too many shows that I want to watch.

With next week being half work and half the start of break, I’m hoping to get some stuff done and relax.  I have my son for most of it though, so writing isn’t going to be very high on the list.  Still:

  1. Time with son.
  2. Time at work/school.
  3. Write more Do I Need to Use a Dragon?
  4. Finish watching Schitt’s Creek.
  5. Maybe some outline work.
  6. Watch ‘Wonder Woman 1984’ next weekend.
  7. Puzzle work.
  8. Get pizza at some point.
  9. Stay warm.
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7 Tips to Outlining in Some Fashion

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I’m really surprised that I never did a post like this in all the years that I’ve been blogging about writing.  If I did then WordPress isn’t letting me find it.  Now, not everyone takes the route of planning their story.  So, there will be people who don’t get much out of this.  For those who do, I hope this helps because outlining can be one of the more frustrating stages of writing.

  1. There is no perfect way to do an outline.  It’s whatever way makes you comfortable and helps you remember things.  It could be single facts in a hierarchy, chapter breakdowns, or one big paragraph to give a general idea of the story.  You can even use multiple methods or change it up as you progress.  It’s all up to you.  Maybe your characters too depending on how rowdy they are in this stage.
  2. Look at the outline as if it’s a skeleton.  This is the framework of your story, but that’s really it.  Might not even be in the right order, so you can rearrange the bones until they fit correctly.  Looking at an outline this way can take the pressure off making it perfect because things will look different once you start adding the guts.  Oh, and the editing is the skin.
  3. Design your own shorthand if you want to be detailed, but have limited space or time.  If you’re going to write long sentences then you might as well get the writing part of thing.  There are no real rules to this idea because it’s something that you design for your own information.  The trick is remembering it because it may be a while before you get to the actual writing.
  4. Grammar and spelling don’t count when outlining.  Seriously, the key is to just get the ideas on the page before they fade into the mental vapor.
  5. While not an outline, it doesn’t hurt to do character biographies.  You can get a general idea of physical description, history, personality, and goals by doing this.  By focusing on the one character, you can really flush them out to a point where they may be easier to handle when writing.  Many subplots and character building paths will appear, which can be added to your outline in simpler notes. Will you use everything that you write here?  No, but it doesn’t hurt to have them and you can do a bio during a time when you can’t get to writing.  Just mark up a napkin when eating lunch at work.
  6. Do not believe that you have to perfectly stick to your outline.  Things always change once you start writing.  An idea that worked in your head might be terrible once you get it on paper.  Other things might turn out to be in the wrong spot, so you have to move them around.  More possibilities include: removing sections, adding sections, changing entire subplots, merging sections, and total rewrites of the outline because it’s a later book in a series where the characters tend to go off the rails.
  7. Know when to stop outlining and get to writing.  There is an odd sense of safety when working on this because it isn’t the part you’re going to show to others.  You can fix mistakes and nobody will know.  Grammar and spelling aren’t important.  Titles, characters, and everything connected to an outline is fluid.  It’s only when you start writing that things become much more real.  Many authors find comfort in the outlining/planning stage, especially when they do it alongside reading ‘how to write’ books.  It feels like you’re making progress and learning your trade, but you don’t take that final step where knowledge and outlines are merged to become a real story.  It doesn’t matter if you’ll tear it apart with editing too.  Just as long as you realize that it’s time to move on.
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Three Literary Elements: Symbolism

Ciao, SEers.  Today is a two-fer. I’m writing the last of my posts on literary elements, and I’m also writing my last post of the year. And what a …

Three Literary Elements: Symbolism
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Check This Out: The Unicorns Who Saved Christmas

With me on the blog today is the marvelous Mary Winn Heider, another Secret Gardener classmate, who is here today to talk about her picture book, The…

Check This Out: The Unicorns Who Saved Christmas
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Questions 3: Your Favorite Pieces of Fiction

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We all have preferences and favorites.  Sometimes, we can be a little pushy in sharing these while other times our declarations are perfectly accepted.  In a way, these interactions can be considered a piece of promoting.  It’s usually for popular and well-known stories, but this can be a bump an indie creator.  I think.  Honestly, I’m not really sure how much it helps right now.  Anyway, let’s share our favorites here in a nice relaxing post:

  1. What is your favorite book if you had to pick one?
  2. What is your favorite movie if you had to pick one?
  3. What is your favorite TV show if you had to pick one?

My answers:

  1. Ender’s Game by Orson Scott Card.  Love the psychological aspect of it.
  2. This is a tough one.  I would have to be with ‘The Matrix’ because I always stop when I see that one on TV.
  3. I think I get why it’s so hard.  People’s tastes change over time.  Still, I can think of one show that is currently my favorite.  ‘M.A.S.H.’ became a show that I binged right after the divorce because it made me smile.  I have trouble finding episodes when I’m free now and I don’t want to stream it.  Really enjoyed stumbling onto it.
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The Culmination – now on sale!

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Let’s all welcome Gwen Plano to Entertaining Stories. She’s an author friend and one of my partners over at Story Empire. She’s here to tell us about an incredible sale. Don’t forget to use those sharing buttons so your friends can get in on this, too. Take it away, Gwen.

Thank you for inviting me to your blog, Craig, and for helping me launch The Culmination, a new beginning. It’s exciting to finally see it published on Amazon and Barnes & Noble. To celebrate, the Kindle edition is on sale at 99¢ through December.

So, what’s the book about? The Culmination can best be described as a military thriller. It tackles difficult topics such as denuclearization, the power struggles over oil in the Middle East, as well as the ever-present danger of war. Readers will find themselves sitting with the Joint Chiefs of Staff, walking in the historic Red…

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