Monster Hunters and Treasure Hunters: A Tale of Two Stories

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So, I’ve run into an issue with two series that I wanted to write way down the line.  One of them is an older idea that I keep tinkering with.  The other is a newer one that is very similar, which is part of the issue.  Both ideas are part of a theme of series/collections that involve the various groups in Windemere that operate either openly or secretly.  For example, I have the Phi Beta series that focuses on the mercenary school setting and the overall mercenary social structure.  Think I have Wraith Slayers as another one.  Let me get back to the real challenge with:

Monster ‘X’

Not the main title since I don’t like it yet.  This was a trilogy or short story collection that followed a band of monster hunters.  It reveals the inner workings of the monster hunting organization, which will be introduced a bit in War of Nytefall: Savagery.  By this point, they’re a more cohesive group with rankings, meeting buildings, and divisions across the globe.  They are the backdrop for the characters who have all been cursed by this mysterious beast that nobody believes is real.  The team leader wants to find it again and kill it in the hopes of being free.  Only problem is that the best way to do that is rise up to a rank that gives them access to the monster hunter archive, which may have information on the beast.  So, the first book would be about them doing jobs that will help them get what they need.  Second book would be the hunt and third would be something that happens after that.  Not sure if it’s going to be a bigger thing behind the beast, so that’s still in the air.

Of course, the real reason I’m unsure is because I don’t really have the characters.  My original plan was that it was being led by a woman or man who changes genders if something specific happens.  Kind of like Ranma getting hit by cold water turns him into a girl and warm water turns him back.  I no longer think this is a good idea.  Maybe.  I also toyed with the idea of it being a married couple who got merged together, so it’s not a single person changing gender.  It’s now two people trapped in the same body, but that still isn’t sitting right given today’s social atmosphere.  Lacking any other characters, I can’t figure out any other curses.  Think my major issue is that I can’t lock down the leader who I could just have weird things happen to them if they lose their temper.  At one point, I thought of it being an older Morgan from the Ichabod Brooks stories since this would be about 30-40 years after those tales.  She could be the middle-aged adventurer with bad knees now.  I even thought about the person she’s sharing a body with be Ichabod’s son who was her apprentice or something.  Maybe I’m overthinking this.

It doesn’t help that the following has been making better progress.

Treasure Hunters

I have no idea for a title and I’m still mucking about with this either being a treasure hunting organization or a specialized thief guild.  Not sure about the goal either, which is currently them wanting to find a legendary treasure horde.  Again, I wanted to do a trilogy or at least three short story collections.  The reason why is because I really like how the characters are flowing so far.  It’s going to be a team of 7, which sounds like a mistake because that’s tough to keep track of in a conversation.  Then again, look at the team that we have.

First, there are female coleaders with one being a female orc who is fairly blunt and straightforward.  The other is a halfling thief who used to be an assassin, so she has a habit of offering rather violent solutions.  She’s still getting used to the new gig.  They will have a female Dawn Fang who isn’t the most powerful of her kind, but she is very good at reading ancient texts and examining treasure.  A character I played once will be in there too.  He’s the adorable gnome named Berumbo who is also a cannibal with metal teeth.  Since he doesn’t talk beyond grunts, an ogre translates for him.  They’re the muscle.  I have two more male characters that I haven’t figured out yet.  One might be a mapper and the other a specialized caster since none of the others know magic.  I even have a few adversaries and rivals thought up.  Backgrounds are evolving for a bunch of them too.

It’s frustrating between these two.  I have a story thought up for Monster ‘X’ and characters thought up for Treasure Hunters.  Part of me wants to merge them to have these characters be the cursed ones, but then I’d lose something with the crew.  It means I no longer have a guild series too, which will be an itch that I want to scratch.  My other fear is repetitiveness since they’re fairly similar in that they are groups on a quest, but I have other stories like this too.  Maybe this is just doubt kicking in too.  Hopefully, I can take some time this year to sit down and think it all through in between outlining my next big series.

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Let’s Get This Winter Break Started. Seriously, I Really Need a Break

This was a fairly short week as far as work went.  That didn’t make it any less busy since I work with the testing center.  It makes sense that people are scrambling to run or make up tests before a break.  Thankfully, we made it through and now the break begins.  Though it does feel like last weekend was a century ago.  Days go so fast, but then it feels like the week is moving slow.  Time really is a mental construct designed by humans to make sense of the world.  That or to control the masses with a schedule.

I did have to take a day off for something with my son because it was time for a reevaluation.  This is an event that all special needs children go through, but I don’t know if it’s always every 3 years like here.  It can be harrowing because you see test scores and evaluations, but can’t tell if there’s more.  So, you go in expecting to have to fight for accommodations and defend your child.  Doesn’t help with a divorced couple since that can lead to not being on the same page.  Thankfully, my son is making amazing progress and proving that he’s in the right placement.  Took a lot of stress off my shoulders, which might be another reason why I practically collapsed around 10 PM Thursday.  Just felt like a bunch of weights were lifted from my body and I could let myself lie down.  His evaluation was certainly up there and I’m proud of all the progress he’s made.

Writing has made some progress and I might even finish Do I Need to Use a Dragon? by the end of the weekend.  I have 6 sections left and the Outro isn’t going to be that big.  If I can manage 3 today and 3 tomorrow then I’m done.  I have Monday morning before my son comes back for the week, so I can afford to be a little lax today.  Once this is done, I have to dive into outlining the next series.  I keep wanting to go back to War of Nytefall: Savagery for editing and I have tried it a few times.  Usually get 2 chapters in and then realize I’m making changes for the sake of changes.  That’s when I know I should stop.  Maybe this is what happens when I do plot synopsis, detailed outlines, edit the outlines, a slow first draft, occasional read backs, and then a meticulous editing run.  I’ve become so careful during the creation stage that I can’t bring myself to go back into editing after 1-2 times.  Feels like I should be scolded since authors keep saying to edit until you can’t look at it any more.  Guess I’m just odd.

I have plenty of small projects to work on too.  The treasure hunting thieves are becoming more interesting as the characters evolve in my head.  It was going to be a single short-story collection, but I’m seeing more opportunities here.  I’m questioning if I can call the group whose story takes place in a mercenary school ‘Phi Beta’.  That’s the fake frat my friends and I made up in college to be silly and stupid.  Since that’s the inspiration, I keep feeling like I should hold onto the name.  It’s just that it’s Greek letters in a fantasy world, which might work since I’ll have introduced an island with samurai influence on it.  This leads me to wondering if I should stick with the story that takes place within the Ice Crown where beings from other worlds exist thanks to the surviving angel of Windemere.  She was lonely and realized she could pull beings from dimensions, so she grabbed anyone who was interesting.  Then she disappeared, so the story follows a band of pirates trying to revive her because everyone is cursed by her vanishing.  I should really make a post on that one.

As you can tell, I’ve got a lot bouncing around in my head.  Makes me really wish I made enough money to survive and provide, so I could bring all of them to reality.  This is always going to be a permanent source of disappointment in myself.  I’m sure I’ll get some comments about why I shouldn’t be or something.  Be aware that I’m getting the 2nd Covid vaccine shot today, so I might be a little snarly in the afternoon.  This is also why I’m not 100% certain I’ll get writing done tomorrow.  I’ve heard that the 2nd shot can knock you out for a day or two.  Hopefully, I’m not one of the people who gets nailed, but I don’t trust my luck.  That’s why I have some movies reserved for Sunday.  They’re the live action Rurouni Kenshin films.  Only the second and third though since I already watched the first one.

Speaking of television, I haven’t watched much this week outside of the news.  I finished ‘Demon Slayer’ and then spent the ensuing nights writing and resting.  I started ‘Gungrave’ on Thursday, but only made it through 2 episodes.  Friday was the first day of break, so I went to hang out with a friend before I went into isolated author mode.  Not really sure what I want to really watch.  I’m holding back a bit since I saw ‘That Time I Was Reincarnated as a Slime’ and ‘Dr. Stone’ are getting new episodes soon.  In fact, ‘Dr. Stone’ has them popping up now.  I can’t touch that without my son though.  He really enjoyed it, so I won’t watch it without him.  Maybe I’m just tired, so nothing is striking my fancy.  I need a nap already.

Goals of the week?

  1. Time with son.
  2. Finish Do I Need to Use a Dragon?
  3. Consider beta readers and search for an artist.
  4. Start outlining Tales of the Slumberlord
  5. Organize ideas to see what goes into the next idea book
  6. Maybe finish the outlines for Ruins of the Zodiac Gods.  That will complete an idea book.
  7. Video games
  8. Reading
  9. Shoveling snow
  10. Snoozing
  11. Pizza at some point
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Dudley’s Desk Depot: Free Pen with Every Purchase (Wet Ink Not Guaranteed)

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Welcome and what do you want?  A desk?  Sure, we have those as you can tell by the name up there.  I’m not Dudley.  My name is Dale, but I didn’t want people making dancer or chipmunk jokes.  So, do you want me to make you a desk or not?  Yeah, I’m the craftsman too.  I don’t wear this sawdust for my health . . . Sorry about the coughing.  Might want to step around that pulpy blob.

Lets get into the overall style.  Catch this book and thumb through while I tell you about our best sellers.  We have flat tops, which are simple and easy.  Roll tops are popular, but a paint to work with when I’m not in the mood.  Drawers all over the place if you need to stash a lot of supplies.  Oh, I can add hidden compartments to anything, but you need to tell me before I start the creative process.  Where was I?  School desks if you’re into the utterly simple or nostalgia.  Moving desks that uses wheels or can be folded up to be carried off.  I could do a lap desk, but those are boring and I hate making cushions for the bottom.  Really big desks are a favorite, but I add a fee for any back pain that I endure from moving it around.  Why would I get an assistant?  That’s a person and I don’t have the patience for such things unless they’re paying me.  Roll top?  Sure, but it’ll take a month or two.

Tapered legs . . . eh . . . Drawers . . . obviously . . . Wood type?  Guess we should go over that part.  Can’t make a desk without materials.  If you came to me then you don’t want plastic or metal or that fake stuff you find in stores.  You want a solid wood desk because you know quality.  My personal favorite is cherry wood because I like the color and refuse to do the staining.  Want to ruin perfection then you have to do it yourself.  Oak, maple, and ash are classics, which you can’t go wrong with.  We have a list of stains you can choose from there.  The best is cherry, of course.  I can also make a desk out of pine, but that comes with a smell.  What smell?  Rotten eggs and low tide.  What do you think it smells like?  Pine . . . Yeah, I can leave the bark along the edging like in the picture.  I did that long ago because I wanted to take a nap.  Good choice.

Now, the roll top is basic.  You need it to be foldable and go into the top section.  There isn’t much variety that I’m willing to put on that.  Smooth arches, squared, or reverse tapered are the fanciest.  The lock will go down here and only the front drawers will be open.  Sure, I can put a hole in that area for a laptop wire.  Why don’t I chop the legs off too?  If you have a desktop computer then you don’t want a roll top.  A laptop will be carried around anyway.  You can put it on the desk and plug it in once you sit down to do whatever you have to do.  Of course, I’m telling you how to do your job since you seem intent on telling me how to do mine.  Just trust me on this or we’re going to be here all day.

Now we have handles for the drawers . . . Diamond studs?  These are the things you grab and pull.  Diamonds will cut your skin or have to be constantly cleaned because you leave oil on them.  Just go with either wood or metal.  Sure, make them shaped like skulls or swords or whatever.  I’m not the one using it.  Now, anything else that you need on this desk?  No?  Good . . . Sign the contract and get out of my way until I’m done.  Thank you for your patronage.

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Immortal Wars: Light, Blood, & Tears Part 5

(Disclaimer: A warning to those who continue.  This is a sequel to a previous story.  Both of these were written in the mid-1990’s.  While the first one was slightly edited and vanity press published, this one has not been touched in over 20 years.  I figure I should do something with it and people may get a laugh or fright from how I used to be.  Every author comes from somewhere, so this is part of my origin.  To that end, I am deeply sorry for whatever nightmares I will inflict on the literary world and the American English language.  Enjoy?)

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“It’s about time you showed up!” shouts Hydrana from the arena.  As Fate walks into the game room, he places his medallion on the bar.

“How about a practice bout?  You and me against the new drone warriors.  No powers and you can only use weapons if the robots drop them,” suggests Fate as he programs the arena’s computer system.  The door locks as soon as they take six steps into the training area.

“Okay.  After that, I talk and you listen.”

“Deal.”

A loud buzzer goes off and several robots jump through holes in the ceiling, in the floor, and in the walls.  They all have heavy gattling guns on their shoulders and swords instead of hands.  Occasionally, one of them spits out deadly razor blades with incredible accuracy.  As soon as the machines hit the ground, the guardians attack the training drones at full force.

“You have to give Infinity credit.  The new models look a lot more dangerous than the originals.  But they still break very easily.  They also seem to be a lot slower than the old ones,” announces Fate as he cleanly chops off a robot’s head with a karate chop.  Before that one hits the ground, the blond-haired boy flipkicks another of his attackers.  It clumsily topples backwards and gets itself impaled on a nearby robot’s sword.  When the guardian throws a third robot into the two of them, all three blow up in a small, yet very loud, explosion.

“Not bad, Eddie.  But this move is a whole lot better,” Hydrana laughs before spinning on one foot and destroying five robots with her other outstretched leg.  Once she stops spinning, a steel longsword goes smoothly through the redhead’s left shoulder from behind.  Instead of screaming in pain, like she would have done a year ago, she pushes off the floor with her powerful legs.  Both of the fighters slam into the wall, but only the robot falls apart.

“I don’t mean to ruin your fun, but you just lost your arm.”  The Mars guardian blocks two bullets with his right leg before giving a double-fist punching to one of the metal warriors.  When one of the larger ones grabs him by the arms and turns him upside-down, Fate kicks it with his heels repeatedly before he is dropped on his head.  This bigger robot has two rocket launchers on its shoulders instead of guns.  It fires both of its rockets at the guardian, but Fate jumps over one of the missiles and catches the other like it was a baseball.  He throws it back at the towering drone and the shot takes the robot’s head off.

“Here it is,” announces the redhead when she picks up her severed arm, which isn’t bleeding.  Two robots charge at her and she just smiles at them like a very hungry cat.  Once they get close enough to her, the Neptune guardian starts smashing them into circuits with her unattached arm.

“I said no weapons unless a robot drops one.  That includes any of your severed limbs.  Besides, it’s gross.”  The last of the drones jumps between them and attempts to put a large razor deep into the Mars guardian’s back.  But its head is crushed into powder when both guardians’ spin kicks it’s steel skull as hard as they can.

“Do you know that you have a razor blade stuck in your foot?” whispers Hydrana as she watches her arm start to grow back

“It hurts a lot more coming out of my heel than it did going in.  How long until your arm grows back?”

“Not long.  My best time is four minutes for a severed limb, but that’s if I force the healing.  Of course, this is a flesh wound compared to what that Palidor did to me last week.  Now, that was painful to the extreme.”

“I actually enjoyed twenty-four hours of you being entirely silent.  It was peaceful around here.”

“Of course, I was silent!  My head was missing!”

“At least it didn’t cut off anything that you used on a daily basis.  But it seems that a lot of problems have turned up over the past month.  Your head getting cut off and me getting killed are two good examples.  I think we’re getting sloppy, but I’ll talk to everyone about that later.  We can still work very efficiently if we have to.  Now, what did you want to tell me?”

“All of us have noticed that you’ve been putting a lot of unnecessary pressure on yourself.  Everyone, including me, is worried that sooner or later you’ll burn yourself out or become suicidal,” mentions Hydrana.

Fate picks up a color changing drink and some big, green slices of fruit before saying, “Have you been talking to SEAS about me?”

“No.  Why?”

“He told me to spend some quiet, relaxing time with Kelly.  So after this little meeting, I’ll be very busy doing absolutely nothing.  It might even help me regain some of my humanity, which I’ve been told I’m starting to lose.”

“That’s good for now.  But I have a long term answer to your problems.”

“I’m afraid to ask, but I guess I have no choice.  What’s your big idea?”

“A second-in-command.  Someone who is able to do some of your work and take a majority of the pressure off of your shoulders.  It will give you a lot more time to spend with the lonely Miracle.  When she said that she had missed you, it wasn’t only when you were dead in the comet.  You’ve ignored her for a long time and that is not helping you further your relationship.”

“Usually, I would ignore that statement, but you’re right this time.  Like I said before, a lot of great events seem to be happening lately.  But Kelly is the reason I’m going to take the next week off.  SEAS will be left in charge.”

“Hold it.  You’re dumb enough to put a machine in charge of us.  Listen to me, Eddie.  Everyone is with me on the idea of you having a second-in-command.  Even SEAS agrees with me.  Why not trust me for just this week?”

“You?  I knew there had to be some kind of selfish reason behind this idea.  And I thought you had changed over the past couple of months.”

“Why does everybody think that I’m nothing more than a spoiled brat?  In fact, I made up that whole bratty illusion because that was how my entire family wanted me to act!  So don’t blame me!  Blame them!” shouts the hazel-eyed immortal in a half-angry voice.

“Calm down.  Why do you think you should become my co-leader?”

“I’m a great fighter and I’m brave.  I also tend to keep a level head in battle.  No one on this base can fix or refit the space skimmers better than me.  Are those reasons good enough for you?”

“Bravery and incredible skill in combat are important to a planet guardian.  But they do not make a leader.  Draveon has those qualities and he’s nothing more than an oversized lackey for Adriana.  As for your cool under pressure behavior and your mechanical expertise, those can be useful no matter what rank you hold.  Of course, the way you handle responsibility goes against your case.”

“What are you talking about?  I am very responsible.  Ask anybody.  Except my ninth grade theater teacher.  I kept forgetting to memorize my lines and was always hitting on all of the cute guys.”

“This is not a joking matter.  The others on this base would probably agree that you show yourself to be very responsible.  But what if I ask your parents about your behavior?” whispers Fate.  The only reaction is total silence and an emotionless face replaces Hydrana’s once confident smile.

She finally gets herself under control before growling, “You have no right to go anywhere near that area, Fate.”

“Maybe not, but it has to be said.  When the rest of us went to tell our families about us being guardians, you went to a shopping mall.  Your parents don’t even know what has happened to you.  That was really immature behavior on your part.”

Suddenly, a geyser of boiling water smashes Fate into the ceiling and lets him drop onto a metal table.  Hydrana tries to punch him, but gets hurled over the distant bar by the blond guardian.  When Fate jumps onto the glass-covered bar, he sees the other guardian cowering in a corner and crying her heart out.

“You wouldn’t understand.  My parents never allowed me to do anything besides shop, party, and lounge around the mansion.  The only time I could play games was when they went away on their yearly three-month vacation and left me alone with the maids and butlers.  Unlike the rest of you, I was given everything.  But I hated it.  My parents gave me whatever I wanted, except their love.  My relationship with my parents is nothing more than a dog and its owners.  Even worse than that.  Unlike me, the dog gets love from its owner.  That was why I couldn’t, and still can’t, face them.  Well, that and the other thing that happened with my father.  But a sweet guy like you doesn’t need to know about those kinds of things.  Don’t you see that being a planet guardian was my only way to escape them?  Now that I’m up here, my parents are unable to hurt and control me anymore,” Hydrana cries between hefty sobs.  She lets Fate help her up and he brings her quietly to her room.

Before Hydrana goes into her aquarium filled room, Fate says, “Look.  I’ll let you be second-in-command on one condition.  You have to find some way to prove to me that you can act responsible.  I’d really like to see you confront your parents or do some kind of selfless act.”

“But . . .” she starts to say.

“No excuses.  I’m sorry for you, Hydrana.  I truly am.  But you have to be able to deal with your current problems before I can give you anymore.  It’s the best for the entire group and us.  Understand?”

“Yeah.  Can I tell you something, Eddie?  You’re a good friend that I never wanted.”

“I know.  Goodnight, Delila.”

If Fate listened through Hydrana’s door for a few more seconds, he would have heard her mumble, “Delila Mandervale III.  She’s dead, Mars guardian.  But it wasn’t as if she was ever alive to begin with.”

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Side Jobs: Because Being a Hero Doesn’t Always Pay the Bills

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I was thinking about this as a friend explained an RPG he had been playing.  He brought up various skills of his character that weren’t really adventuring ones.  They helped there, but he did it mostly to get new gear and money.  We’re talking blacksmithing, potion making, gardening, fishing, and other things that I don’t really remember.  He sent a lot of info and it got a little garbled.  Still, this got me thinking about what heroes will do besides their adventure.

First, you have to keep in mind that we can’t really go into details here.  People don’t want to see your hero repairing shoes for multiple chapters in order to make enough money to continue traveling.  That’s boring.  Yet, it does get strange when they are never in need of supplies and funds.  In Legends of Windemere, I didn’t really explain this because there were hints.  Sari had a stealing thing and could entertain with dancing while the others were occasionally seen helping around a city.  Maybe I should have done more, but nobody ever questioned the money issue.  This could just be a nitpick for this adventure since a job would detract from the plot.  War of Nytefall had a better sense of it since Mab was a thief and Chastity ran a business.  Yet, nobody ever became concerned that money kept showing up when they needed it.

The truth is that this is really window dressing.  Sure, you can put a real world skill on your heroes.  This opens up a lot of doors for them to make money, but readers won’t be interested in this.  You can use this as a way to show what the characters will do once they’re done or reveal part of their previous life.  Readers do get curious about what the dreams and aspirations are for a character.  A declaration with no proof of it being possible can be weak, so experience in the desired field can help.  For example, the orc warrior knowing how to finger-sized glass sculptures is a quirk that is worth showing.  It isn’t worth spending chapters on though, so keep it as an occasional thing.  This can be a sign that he wants to leave battle behind and create things that are delicate.  Perhaps a desire to live a life of tenderness and being gentle after fighting for so long.

These side jobs can help in connecting with readers and other characters too.  Everyone can relate to the more mundane skills even if it’s not one they specifically know.  It shows that the time and effort has been put into learning something fairly common.  We all do that at some point in our life.  It’s called school.  Of course, we don’t really see the training unless that’s where they start.  If a hero is called to action from a butcher shop, we can safely assume he or she knows how to cut up some steaks.  In fact, you could have it that they use this skill after fighting a monster that they happen to know is edible.  You don’t have to show this beyond them talking about making money from it.  I’d go as far as to say that giving a skill set that allows heroes to utilize defeated creatures can be a safe explanation for a steady cash flow.  Gives more a reason for them to be in those types of battles too.

You might be wondering if there’s a point to even considering this.  There could be no point to this at all because it’s an extra.  I look at side jobs as an added dimension to a character that shouldn’t be focused on for too long.  Point it out, utilize it if possible, and then go back to the real story.  Others may want to make it more of an obsession of a hero who doesn’t want to be on the adventure.  More may think it shouldn’t be touched on at all because it doesn’t relate to the adventure.  It’s another one of those author choices that can never be right or wrong as long as the choice works.

So, what do you think of side jobs for heroes?

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Expansion Pack: The Return of Comedy

Hi gang. Craig here again with more comedy items you can plot out ahead of time. The last post was pretty popular, so why not a sequel. The previous …

Expansion Pack: The Return of Comedy

Some good examples of effective gags in fiction.

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Music of Legends of Windemere: The Spirit Well

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Running out of ways to introduce these posts.  Today we have Legends of Windemere: The Spirit Well.  This ended a big section of the overall story because it’s the last power center/temple that the heroes had to visit.  It revealed a lot about Dariana, who stayed in the background for the most part.  I spent a long time wondering what the surprise about her past would be.  Originally, it was going to be that she was the main villain’s daughter, but I sprung that immediately for tension.  So, I went another way and showed how tortured she is.  These songs connect to what she wants and how she is.

This sound is very eerie and somber at times, which fit with the ‘what Dariana wants’ part of the scenario.  She’s an immortal character who has been trapped in a cycle due to the prophecy, so a part of her wants peace and an end to it.  Serenity is a goal that she can’t always believe is a possibility.  The spookiness definitely helps here because of the final act’s location.

This song always made me think of death.  Also, protecting people from the afterlife.  I could be wrong on my interpretation though.  Both of these aspects fit what Dariana is going through.  There’s a lot about death, ghosts, afterlife, and protecting others in this story.  I’d say this song shows the side of Dariana that has hope that she can be more than a pawn of prophecy too.

And we’re back to sad and depressed.  It took me a while to think of this song in regards to Dariana.  I can see her playing this song all the time and making it her anthem.  Unlike Yola, the madness here is more lowkey and internal than the kind that everybody can see.  It isn’t until this book that the other heroes learn about the level of pain and sadness that Dariana is carrying.

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Back to the Future of Gaming

This is a guest post by Anastasios Papadopoulos, a full-stack developer with a passion for writing. Back to the Future of Gaming “Video games are …

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A Fictional World History: Do You Need It?

It’s not always clear if you need to create a world history, especially when you’re doing fantasy.  Sure, you may think it’s necessary because that’s what all of the big names have done.  We know so much about Middle Earth, Oz, Narnia, etc. in regards to what happened prior to the adventures.  Some events get their own books while others are simply told.  It really makes it appear as if a thorough world history is needed to even attempt the genre.  Though, is it really?

The truth is that it depends on your story.  I’d love to say that it couldn’t hurt, but there’s the chance that it can.  If your story focuses entirely on a current event that has no attachment to the world’s history then you shouldn’t be dredging up the past.  You need enough to establish that this world has existed for longer than the story is going on, but diving into the details can distract from the main attraction.  Imagine riding a roller coaster and it stops every few feet to show you a video of how the thing was built or the history behind such rides.  You wouldn’t have fun, especially when it freezes as it attempts to make a loop and your stuck upside down.  That’s simply not safe.

In terms of adding history to story, I would say you have 3 choices:

  1. Low–  As stated, your story deals with the now and history isn’t a focus.  You sprinkle a little in for regions or anything that may need more of an explanation.  This could include monsters, magic, famous names, and anything else that doesn’t exist in our reality.  It can be done through conversation or exposition, but it will be quick enough to not slow things down.  Readers can pay attention to the past events being mentioned or not without losing anything.
  2. Medium–  Your story does have a connection to history at some level.  Characters will talk about past events and the exposition will reveal such things.  Perhaps a few info dumps when you have no other choice, but you manage to spread everything out as the action progresses.  It’s more about general information instead of the details of the past, which aren’t needed.  Readers are clearly aware of the past of this world and how it connects to the present.
  3. High–  The current adventure is basically a continuation of the past, which will be thoroughly explored and uncovered by the heroes.  You need to create a lot here because the details are necessary to form the full picture.  There is a risk of overburdening the book with information since you can get too focused on the history than the current events.  This can cause the book to bloat to a size you didn’t foresee, but that isn’t always a bad thing.  As long as the history is shown to be essential, readers will listen.

Of course, that’s just a simple overview because things change depending on the story and author.  There is another tactic where an author creates a vast history for their world, but doesn’t use all of it.  Many times, the history of a fantasy world is there to guide the author more than the reader.  You get a sense of where you are coming from and add depth in your own mind.  Monster races act a specific way because of their history even though you don’t have to mention it.  The landscape looks strange due to an ancient war, but the heroes are only passing through.  These examples show how a history helps with world-building even if it’s never revealed to the readers.  Maybe down the road, you can create a book that explains all of this if you wish, but it isn’t necessary.  It does hurt though since it means you’re crafting things that you can’t really share.

For myself, I have a lot of notes on Windemere history.  Some will be turned into books while others will be left alone for my own knowledge.  I used to add everything I could think of into my books, which made them clunky.  That’s why I’ve become more aware of using what is important.  I can slip in a fun story from time to time, which gives Windemere more charm.  That depends on the scene and character.  I couldn’t do it much with the Dawn Fangs in War of Nytefall since they’re immortal, but I used the storytelling tactic a bunch with Fritz Warrenberg in Legends of Windemere.  It can help to have a character who loves to talk and teach because this gives you a way to reveal history in a more natural form.  Yet, it doesn’t become necessary since that comes off a bit like a tour guide, which doesn’t work in every situation.

So, what do you think of adding history to your world?  I know I talked about fantasy, but it can be done in other genres as well.  What do you do in your genre?

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