How Do Dawn Fangs Handle Holy Relics and Magic?

Dracula vs a lower case t

Throughout vampire lore, holy symbols and energy have been one of their greatest weaknesses.  Whether it’s because Dracula got booted from the church or vampires are undead, there’s a reason given to this issue.  Most people don’t even think about it too much because it’s a given.  This can pose problems for newer versions.

In War of Nytefall: Anarchy, the Dawn Fangs are facing the greatest of holy warriors known as the paladins.  These guys smite things that piss them off, which usually involves leaving a burning pile where the target once stood.  Due to this utter destruction method, you can believe that anything hit by them will meet the same fate.  So, vampires don’t seem very unique in this threat, but their nature means there should be a little extra.  It’s the reason why the paladins are feared more than any other mortal warriors, including casters who have a penchant for hurling fireballs.  After all, these are undead creatures with no . . . heartbeat.  Uh-oh.

This has been an aspect of the Dawn Fangs that I’ve had a lot of trouble wrapping my head around.  On one hand, they feed off blood and are corpses brought back to life.  This means they’re undead and should take on the full effect of holy magic.  On the other hand, the Dawn Fangs entire story is that they have heartbeats, can eat food, and possess many other traits of mortals.  Unlike their predecessors, it could be argued that they are alive just like a person brought back by a resurrection spell.  So, holy magic shouldn’t have any affect on them beyond what would be done to a regular mortal.  Yet, this removes one of the biggest counters to such powerful creatures.

At most points, I think I’ve gone with a partial effect on the Dawn Fangs.  Holy magic hurts a lot more than it would a mortal, but it doesn’t destroy on contact like an old-world vampire.  Wounds caused by this type of attack are harder to heal even with focusing your energy on regeneration.  There can be residual magic, which can dampen or block certain Dawn Fang abilities.  None of this stops them from fighting entirely, but it makes it a hindrance one would hope to avoid.  It also means running into a group of holy warriors is a nightmare, but you can’t easily run away and every blow reduces your strength.  Retreat to a better position or just get away are their best options.

Of course, there are other questions that I’ve pondered.  For one thing, can a Dawn Fang go into a temple, which is holy ground?  I was thinking ‘no’ for a while until I realized this would cause a problem for Clyde’s dream.  Eventually, a Dawn Fang would be invited to a wedding of a mortal friend and that would reveal the truth.  So, I changed it to them being able to enter a temple, but they’d be uncomfortable.  Not enough to reveal themselves, but their powers are certainly going to be reduced a bit thanks to the residual energy.  That’s if they don’t have abilities or relics to protect them, but that’s still a risk.

Can a Dawn Fang become a priest?  That’s the question that I thought of first before writing this post.  It’s why I put this off for a week because I can’t give a thorough answer to it.  Those born of the fang or by blood probably wouldn’t work out as a priest since they’d be closer to old-world vampires.  Womb-born are something else since they’re natural vampires, but there should still be some kind of sacrifice.  They’re using the type of energy designed to eliminate their kind, which can’t have a positive effect on the body after long-term use.  If anything, I’d say they would have a limited lifespan instead of immortality or never be able to use their Dawn Fang power unless they go through a lengthy detox.  I don’t know if I’ll ever tackle this question in a book because War of Nytefall never gave me the chance for it specifically.

So, Dawn Fangs and holy magic may still be a work in progress.  That or a mystery until I can figure it out myself.  Really don’t want to pigeonhole myself and then get a great idea later.  Maybe it depends on the vampire.  That might be the better route.

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How to Write Point of View, Part 4, Third Person Limited

Image by Gerd Altmann from Pixabay Hi SErs! Harmony here 🙂 Today, I’d like to talk about how to write Point of View (POV) in the Third Person …

How to Write Point of View, Part 4, Third Person Limited
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Teaser Tuesday: New Faces #fantasy #vampires

War of Nytefall

It was difficult to pick a teaser for Luna and Joran, so I decided to go with their introduction.  What are their role in the upcoming events?  Check out War of Nytefall: Anarchy to find out.

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Smorgasbord Short Stories – Authors in the Sun – #Blackmail- The Millennial by John W. Howell

When I worked on radio in the south of Spain I presented and recorded four series of Authors in the Sun showcasing local writers and their short …

Smorgasbord Short Stories – Authors in the Sun – #Blackmail- The Millennial by John W. Howell
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The Paladins of Windemere are Marching

Paladin

I’m hard-pressed to remember if I’ve had a paladin appear before War of Nytefall: Anarchy.  Actually, I believe there was one or two in Loyalty when Clyde was freed from the underground.  Still, they’ve been a fairly absent group in a story revolving around vampires.  Why?

I’m always very cautious about using paladins.  In my mind, they’re probably one of the rarest kinds of warriors.  You need to be skilled in fighting, strong enough to use the heavy gear, and possess an incredible amount of divine power.  Frankly, it’s easier to become a battle or high priest(ess), which I assume most followers of a deity aim for.  Paladins require that level of devotion that makes them borderline or over the top zealous when it comes to their faith.  I mean, they’re smiting things they believe are evil, which doesn’t always allow for areas of gray.  It would also explain why there’s a short life expectancy on these guys.  All of this combined means I can’t keep tossing them into stories like they’re being cranked out of a factory.

Paladins end up having a bad wrap with me, which comes from Dungeons & Dragons.  I would always see them being used as pompous, to the letter characters that caused party conflict.  If you had a thief in the group then the paladin would continuously try to make them honest and spoil their fun.  Everyone who wasn’t a devotee would get constantly criticized or preached too.  This probably came from players who knew ‘religion’ was a key component and didn’t personally like the concept, so you get a zealot who is fairly intolerable.  That all carried over with me, which means paladins are a group I struggle to use effectively.

Anarchy isn’t going to improve on that since the heroes are the vampires and this paladin army is out to destroy them.  There’s definitely more to it than that, but they are the lingering threat on the horizon.  It’s different from Lou Kandrel’s army in Eradication, which was mostly priests and non-holy fighters.  This group is made up entirely of heavy hitters in a variety of temples.  Normally, a few paladins would be sent out to deal with a threat.  We’re talking around one hundred men and woman with the power to set a vampire on fire with a single blow.  At least a normal one, but Dawn Fangs are still in trouble.  If for no other reason than paladins are always confident and loud, which can make them fairly intimidating.

Now, what exactly is going on here and why are the paladins marching now?  Previously, the temples, specifically Durag, were waging battles against the vampires.  It was an official war, so all the paladins whose orders were not involved stayed out of it.  Now, someone is attacking members of every temple.  It’s a clear declaration of war against all of the gods and goddesses, which is why the most dedicated of their orders are joining forces.  This has never happened before or at least to this scale since most threats target one or a handful of temples.  You’d have to be suicidal to anger all of them, but here we are with a paladin army making history.

I did have to be careful in how I used them.  There couldn’t be too many encounters or the fights would swiftly lose their appeal.  Holy magic versus Dawn Fang abilities were fun to write, but I could tell right away that it had a limited lifespan.  The variety came from who was attacked since that would change the methods.  Running into Chastity Sullivan who uses telekinesis and charm mist will have a different feel than if the paladins were facing off with Mab and her claws.  So, I used them sparingly and treated them as a looming threat instead of a more active one.  This made their appearances feel special and have more impact.

So, there are the paladins.  Hope everyone enjoys them.

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Expansion Pack: Secondary Stressors

Hi, Gang. Craig with you today. I want to try something a little different this time. I’m a work in progress just like everyone else. I’ve spent most…

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Beep . . . Ding . . . Ring . . . Beep . . . Oh, Come on!

Boromir telling the truth

Strange for me to put a serious one like this on a Sunday, but I really needed to get this off my chest.  All year, there has been a strange habit of people messaging, calling, or flat out invading my space while I write.  Not just when I’m writing, but they always seem to get me at delicate plot points.  It can really derail me.  This happens with biking and when I try to watch TV too.  So frustrating!

The thing is that the people contacting me have no idea what I’m doing.  So, I can’t get angry and think they’re doing this on purpose.  They simply have free time to talk while I’m doing something.  It’s the price of socializing, but the timing can always run me up the wall.  I’m still mastering putting off responding, especially if it’s only one message or a request to watch a video.  Things get rough when I get bombarded from all sides.

For example:  There was one day in August where I was trying to write the final battle of Slumberlord Chronicles: Darwin & the Fate Bracelet.  I had been chatting with one friend, who understands delayed responses and never seems to hit me with anything that derails my creativity.  All of a sudden, I got a series of messages from another person about my books.  Not too hard to handle.  Then, a friend began telling me about their day from another app.  Another started asking odd questions out of boredom.  Finally, another person responded to a previous text and it started an argument.  All of this hit me at once while I was trying to have two characters fight.  Individually or with only two, I could handle it.  Like this, I began sending quick messages that may have been a little more frustrated than I intended.

Still, you get cornered with the way these events happen.  We no longer have true privacy any more because our phones create instant contact.  Many people are used to immediate responses, so delaying results in more messages and maybe a phone call.  Not everyone is texting on the toilet where they’re a captive audience.  It’s amazing how we can be so alone and so crowded at the same time because of this technology.

Now, I know somebody is going to say ‘turn your phone off’.  A good idea, but not as practical as you think.  There are people I need to interact with for a variety of reasons and I can’t miss their messages.  Some are friends who are going through rough patches and occasionally need someone to talk to.  They’re there for me and I’m there for them.  Others are people who may contact me about things regarding my son, which are messages I cannot ignore.  The benefits of being easily accessible are great, but they also become the disadvantages.  I can always mention I’m writing and they’ll understand that I need a few minutes to respond, but I still need to let these people know that I heard them and they’re not being ignored.  Phone off means I’m not aware of the situation.  To be fair, I have done that before and returned to a mess of messages with a few being very important and time sensitive.  So, don’t think I never tried.

Do these interruptions wreck me entirely?  Most times they don’t.  There are the occasional interruptions that are highly negative and require that I take a mental health break.  It’s usually just frustration and threats to the flow.  I can usually get that back within minutes, but it can be exhausting if it keeps happening.  Honestly, I think it does more damage to my biking than my writing.  Hard to stay zoned out when my music keeps getting interrupting by the text dinging.

So, what interruptions drive you up the wall?  How do you handle them?

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A Week of Vacation and Work

This entire week has made my head spin:

  • Saturday through Wednesday were days off with my son.  Rosh Hashana time.
  • Thursday and Friday were work/school days.
  • Today is 9/11, which always throws me off.  I have a temptation to watch the videos they show on TV, but even after 20 years . . . I can’t make it for very long.

Awkward segueing into something else after that.  This might be a shorter post than normal because I’m drained from everything.  Sleep patterns are a mess and the stress wore me down to a nub by Friday evening.  So much was going on that day, which resulted in me not getting food and drink until 6 PM.  At least I had a good breakfast since I expected the chaos.  Doesn’t sound very interesting.

War of Nytefall: Anarchy has been out for about a week.  I’ve sold a total of . . . 3 copies.  Bunch of scattered reviews disappeared on my other books too.  The strangest thing about the 3 sales is that I got at least 10 people telling me they picked up a copy or were going to.  So, either that didn’t happen or I’m not being shown the real numbers.  The books are 99 cents a piece, which also makes me scratch my head.  $2.99 was too expensive for people since I was an indie.  99 cents is apparently a sign that I have no faith in my creations.  I do, but I don’t have faith in people wanting to take a chance on my without it involving minimal financial risk.  Eh, what are you going to do since you can only control so much?

Speaking of promotions (at least in my head), I decided to give an Instagram one a shot for cheap and see if anything happened.  Doesn’t look like it did since I needed 3 flashy images and I only had cover, author phot, and series collage.  I don’t have the ability to make those types of things and it felt like I was being pushed to give stuff over quickly.  That wasn’t really the issue though.  Once I did this, my posts and DM’s were bombarded by promoters asking me to work with them.  Sorry, but if you’re asking me to promote with you by commenting on a series of father/son Lego pics then I’m not responding.  Look at what you’re commenting on before you do so.  It was frustrating and made me want to avoid Instagram entirely for a while.

Making progress on War of Nytefall: Eulogy hand editing.  Got 12 chapters to go and will probably work on it a bit this weekend.  Might be good to not be staring at a screen, so I won’t even put the TV on as background noise.  Maybe do a chapter or two then watch an episode of ‘Lucifer’ Season 6.  Going to miss that show, but it does feel like they can’t go any further after watching the first 2 episodes.  Beyond that, I’m just working my way through ‘Burn Notice’ Season 5.  Can’t bring myself to tackle anything new yet for obvious reasons.

Okay, not that obvious over the computer.  I’m exhausted!  I don’t know why, but my energy started waning really quickly on Friday.  Had to keep mustering up enough to function.  Part of it might have been spending nearly an hour in a warm room added with no food or drink.  I had so much to do after work that I couldn’t afford to do anything that would require a bathroom break.  It was one of those days, which was the opposite of Thursday.  My body may have gone into some kind of shock since I hydrated so well one day and then was crap the next.

Speaking of hydration, I bought a 64 ounce thermos with markings to show where I ‘should’ be if I drink throughout the day.  With my schedule making it difficult to get the bathroom during certain parts of the day, I had to fudge things.  As long as I drink it all by the end of the day, right?  Added some lemonade-flavored Mio (water flavoring), but it was stronger than expected.  I’ll have to play with the amounts next week.  Still, is it possible to mess myself up by drinking plenty of water one day and barely any the next?  I’m new to this focused on hydration thing.

Don’t really think I have anything else.  As usual, I said small post and then began rambling.  It’s a full week of work/school beyond Yom Kippur on Thursday.  That’s the day Jews don’t eat until sundown.  I have to figure out a video game to play, but it will have to include my son.  It might be a morning of gaming then we’ll watch a movie or TV while I rest.  My son is suggesting ‘Pokemon Snap’, but I sense that I’m going to lose my energy faster than usual this time around.  Still going to make it though.

Goals of the week:

  1. Fasting on Yom Kippur.
  2. Time with son.
  3. Work.
  4. Editing War of Nytefall: Eulogy
  5. Puzzle time
  6. Watch ‘Lucifer’
  7. Sleeping
  8. Hydrating
  9. Maybe biking once I get the dust off it
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Luna and Joran Draknis: New Kids on Nytefall

Dracula and Lisa Tepes

First, the picture has nothing to do with these two.  The only similarities are that they’re couples.  Finding a vampire couple picture wasn’t going well, so I just grabbed this one out of frustration.  Professional here.

Instead of giving these characters a post each, I’m putting them in one because they operate as a couple.  Luna and Joran are the newest Dawn Fangs to join Clyde’s forces of Nytefall.  They’ve been a pair I’ve been wanting to introduce for a long time, but they wouldn’t have worked in previous adventures.  With their story, they work best as a final hour introduction.  That meant I had to hit the ground running with them and demonstrate their personalities, powers, and goals faster than any of their predecessors.  The paladin army heading for the Dawn Fangs didn’t help.

As I said, Luna and Joran are a couple, which is how they start.  They are womb-born who grew up in different lifestyles and eventually met up during their wanderings. Both come with their own sets of trauma and issues, but they work together perfectly.  In this way, they can come of as a younger, less experienced version of Clyde and Mab.  They are able to operate as a team even with minimal or lack of planning because they have a deep understanding of each other.

Of course, these two have aspirations since they’re clearly plot essential.  That would be getting to Nytefall and joining the war.  The subplot of vampires wanting to bring an end to the violence gains an added dimension from this young couple.  They want to help Clyde defeat Nyte in order to help him achieve his dream.  With Dawn Fangs exposed, Luna and Joran can live in the light, which is something everyone wants.  Their existence is going to push and prod the older characters who aren’t all rushing to finish Xavier and the Nyte crew off.  Is it going to be a major clashing of ideas? Well, you’re going to have to read War of Nytefall: Anarchy to find that out.  It is certainly going to drive home the fact that Dawn Fangs are growing impatient.

So, what are these characters like?  They are polar opposites in terms of personality.  Luna is friendly, excitable, and determined to be of help to Clyde.  She is willing to do whatever it takes to earn her idol’s praise, which makes her a burst of manic energy rivaling that of Lost.  It was a lot of fun to write someone with no filter, who would speak out of line and not always notice.  I saw Luna as a child who is still learning the ins and outs of more advanced manners.  Maybe she wasn’t that bad, but I definitely had her step on a few toes because a newcomer needs to cause some friction.

Joran, a Dawn Fang chaos elf, is more standoffish due to his history, which has left him unable to trust anyone other than Luna.  He loves her more than anything, so there is a sense he is joining Nytefall for her instead of the cause.  He does possess a healthy amount of ego and aims it at others he deems weak, which I had trouble keeping in check when I wrote him.  I enjoyed the idea of a couple where one person was overly friendly and the other was heavily guarded and kind of a jerk.  They worked off each other so well even though Joran may have been overshadowed a bit.  Makes sense for a guy who only knows fighting and isn’t big on socializing with people other than his girlfriend.

Well, that’s a brief look at our newest Dawn Fangs.  Hope people pick up the book and enjoy their debut.

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War of Nytefall Factions: Nytefall

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Thought it would be fun for War of Nytefall: Anarchy to make a poem each Thursday for the factions involved in the story.  Let’s start with Clyde’s kingdom of Nytefall.

Named from spite
And to poke at nerves
Hidden from all
Unless
You know the path
*
It is where monsters work
And fight
For peaceful unity
Hoping acceptance
Lives beyond their borders
*
Nytefall
Home and haven
To the fanged dreamers
A mystery to all
Until freedom from the shadows

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