Immortal Wars: Light, Blood, & Tears Part 32

(Disclaimer: A warning to those who continue.  This is a sequel to a previous story.  Both of these were written in the mid-1990’s.  While the first one was slightly edited and vanity press published, this one has not been touched in over 20 years.  I figure I should do something with it and people may get a laugh or fright from how I used to be.  Every author comes from somewhere, so this is part of my origin.  To that end, I am deeply sorry for whatever nightmares I will inflict on the literary world and the American English language.  Enjoy?)

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Outside the Museum of Natural History, Cybro sizes up his hideous troops.  All twenty of these aliens are permanently brainwashed members of the Clan of Fire.  The Palidors are leather-winged humans with either red or yellow eyes.  They talk in an unintelligible, high-pitched screech while waving serrated swords.  Maviks are the enormous, black lizards, whose horns and spiked backs make them visually intimidating.  Beast men, or Grunts, make up the last of the villains’ powerful backup.  They are short, cat-like brutes who have razor-like fangs and claws for ripping through flesh.

“This is one idiotic group,” mutters Cybro as the aliens do a sloppy attempt to form ranks.  Several of them trip over their friends and some of the Maviks have decided to eat some bushes.

“Perfect for you.  Now, remember the plan.  You take out all of the planet guardians, except for Fate.  I want to deal with him personally along with Adriana.  I don’t want any screw ups,” whispers Draveon.

“I will try to keep Fate alive.  No promises.  But, like before, I do not think we should try to kill Adriana.  We will have the others to deal with if they decide that they wanted Adriana alive and in charge, which has been the case for years.  And Kilanus will not be happy with us.  No one has ever seen her lose control and go berserk.  I would not like to be the first to witness that event.  Another problem is the trap our leader has laid for you.”

“Is the poor robot getting scared?  Forget about what Tegam told me.  It’s probably another twisted prank of that idiot.  I wouldn’t be surprised if the slut put him up to it.  Besides, it wouldn’t matter if she knew about my plan or not.  Adriana does not have neither the physical abilities or birthright powers necessary to defeat me.”

“Are you finished with your ego trip?  We have another plan to use before yours is started.  So go hide with Adriana in that building across the street and let me do my part.  Be quiet and stay out of sight.  And try to stay downwind because Hydrana has the ring.  If she notices you, neither of our plans will be of any use to us,” orders Cybro as he rewires the metal clamp on his arm.

“I know the warnings.  Have fun, metalhead.  But remember our real plan.  I want the Mars guardian kept alive.”  Draveon walks away from the small army while Cybro begins to yell at a Grunt that’s sleeping and drooling.

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Things Old and Forgotten – New Book by Mae Clair

“Hi to everyone. I know we normally have a post today.”“Why aren’t we today, Lucy?”“We have a special guest author Mae Clair, and the Boss is using …

Things Old and Forgotten – New Book by Mae Clair
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Monsters of Windemere: Roc

Roc

Way back in August, I made a poll for people to pick the 4 monsters of Windemere to highlight this month.  3 were tied for the top spot, so I picked one of them to start things off.  I give you:

Rocs

These are incredibly common fantasy creatures because they’re simplistic.  I’ve read two different origins of these beasts.  One is Sinbad the Sailor and the 1001 Arabian Nights where he runs into a giant eagle, which people assume is a roc.  This gets thrown around, but I think the more common vision comes from India.  This is a myth about an eagle so large that it can carry an elephant.  Sometimes, it’s said they can carry one elephant in each claw.  So, the real description of a roc is that it’s a gigantic eagle.  Nothing really flashy about it.

It’s that lack of flashiness that makes it fall behind phoenixes and thunderbirds when people imagine bird-like monsters.  Still, the roc gets a lot of love fantasy because they are connected to Tolkien’s eagles.  Only real rocs don’t talk and I genuinely think the Middle Earth eagles are smaller than rocs.  Splitting hairs there, but that’s just me.  It also explains why I went the way I did with rocs.

Initially, I created the Windemere rocs with the intention of them being the natural rivals of griffins.  I wanted something in the sky that didn’t have range attacks like dragons and were simply huge.  Going through old notes from high school, I found that I used the roc a lot whenever I needed an aerial monster.  So, I flushed it out without change the appearance of it being a giant eagle.  The key strengths I was focusing on was silent flight and enormous power, which would counter the speed of a griffin.  Sure a roc has to catch a griffin, but even a glancing blow is enough to shatter bones.  This was done in the span of a few minutes, but the simplicity is why I go back to them at times.

Rocs show up a few times in Legends of Windemere, but they make an impact.  I don’t believe I ever had them actually fight a griffin even though I wanted that to happen.  (Added note: I actually think I did have it happen. Hard to remember every event in a 15 book series.)  This resulted in the rocs becoming large beasts encountered for various reasons.  The two big ones were showing how the Dark Wind curse was hurting even the most powerful of air creatures.  Another was introducing a flock of rocs that protected a mountain and actually lived inside it.  This explained why a certain plot point was possible.  There were other types of large birds, but I’m not sure I can count them as rocs unless they’re eagles.  Still on the fence about that.

Both times involved Luke Callindor too.  His affinity for animals helped me show how these aren’t savage beasts.  I was able to demonstrate that they cared for their young and territory.  They could also be territorial without being intrusively aggressive.  Many stories will have a territorial animal that gets in the way of the plot because it’s impossible to neatly get around it.  This typically ends with the animal being killed, but I’m not always a fan of that.

With the rocs, I wanted them to be protective without making it necessary for Luke to wipe them out.  It forced me to develop habits for the rocs such as patrolling and how big a creature has to be for them to consider it a threat.  This meant, they were fairly intelligent, which changed my use of them a bit more.  If they’re smart enough to differentiate between threats and harmless animals then I couldn’t make them the rampaging, temperamental beast I originally considered.  This is probably why I don’t use them as often as I used to.  Now, I need to come up with a reason for a roc to be there.  At least, I still have the berserker perytons and territorial harpies.

That’s really it on the rocs.  I do try to change up the look of some flocks, so I might be branching the out to be regional species.  We’ll see what the future holds.

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Teaser Tuesday: Listen to the Princess General

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Kind of strange to do a teaser with Lost this week and not use her debut book.  That’s usually my go-to idea, so I wanted to search the others for her scenes.  To be honest, finding character specific teasers from War of Nytefall is difficult.  There are so many characters that they share scenes and it’s a lot to keep track in my head.  Still, I promised to do this long ago and here we are.  Enjoy.

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October Questions 3: Become a Dawn Fang Vampire

War of Nytefall

So, I was scratching my head for a while trying to figure out a theme for the October Money posts.  I also wanted to try and do some kind of promos for War of Nytefall, which limited my choices.  The character interviews were always duds and I do teasers every Tuesday.  What else could I do?

Well, the Questions 3 stuff worked out pretty well last October.  Though, I’m noticing some people just ignore the questions and give their opinion on the overall topic.  So, I’m going to try to explain the intention of these posts again.

This is all about fun and thinking about an answer to each question.  They are typically made to have you think, especially outside of your usual lane.  Not the most comfortable thing, but this is an activity that was usually done to help authors branch out.  We get stuck in our creative ruts and comfort zones without realizing it.  A simple question or 3 can revive energy, reduce writer’s block, and maybe even lead to something good that we never saw coming.

This is going to be an easy one to get people into the groove.  This is all about the powers of a Dawn Fang vampire.  These are the vampires of Windemere, who are the focal point of War of Nytefall.  They are immune to the sun, incredibly powerful, can feed without killing, eat human food, have heartbeats, can breed through sex, and are able to live among mortals without going berserk.  All of that is their baseline, so you get an idea that they are not your destructive, hunger driven monsters.

Dawn Fangs also have 3 unique powers.  They have one from each category of body, mind, and aura/magic.  Body is a power that is physical in nature.  Mind is one that is psychic or sensory.  Aura/magic is a really unique ability that might not fall into the other two categories so easily.  For example, Mab Winthrop has retractable claws (body), speaking to the dead (mind), and shadow traveling (aura/magic).  Another example would be Luther Grathan who has Raven form (body), tasting emotions (mind), and phantom clones (aura/magic).  Hope that all helps.

Questions:

  1. What would your body power be?
  2. What would your mind power be?
  3. What would your aura/magic power be?
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How to Write Point of View, Part 5, Third Person Distant

Hi SErs! Harmony here 🙂 Today, I’d like to talk about how to write Point of View (POV) in the Third Person Distant perspective–otherwise known as …

How to Write Point of View, Part 5, Third Person Distant
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Who to Interview in December? (War of Nytefall: Eulogy is Coming)

War of Nytefall Covers by Alison Hunt

I mentioned last weekend that it looks like I’m on track to release War of Nytefall: Eulogy in December.  I’m working hard on the editing and I’m trying to figure out some blog post topics.  Not easy with a book that holds so many spoilers.  The posts for the month is why I’m here with a second post.

‘Immortal Wars’ will be done by December 9th, which means I have open Thursdays to do more Nytefall posts.  I’ve been toying with various ideas, but I think I’m going to attempt character interviews.  They typically get very little interaction and a lot of likes (what post doesn’t these days?), but it’s the last time these characters can have their voice on the blog since they’re going to be retired.  Figure there’s no reason not to here.  It was either this or a weekly post about how you can get the entire War of Nytefall series for $8.  Please feel free to mention that this would be smarter.  I could always do the interviews on a Sunday if that’s the case.

Now that I’ve lost people, I’m just going to put up another dreaded poll.  This time, I’m only allowing one answer per person.  This way I don’t have half the cast tied for first and I have to decide.  Defeats the purpose of the poll if I make the final say anyway.  Here we go:

(The heck is a poll block?  I can’t do polls using the classic one now?  Give me a few minutes.  Ignore the cursing.)  Hope this works because it’s a pain to use.

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Some October Funnies

(All pictures found by Yahoo Image Search.)

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Goal Post: 3 Months Left?

Just realized that we only have 3 months left of 2021.  This year seems to be going by incredibly fast.  It’s rather worrisome.  Not sure why I feel that way, but the sense of time rushing by while I get very little done sets off some twitches.

So, what did I do this week?

Suffered.

Best way to explain it.  Things kept going wrong or getting taken over by drama.  One day of stress bled into the next.  Most incidents were beyond my control and I tried to hang onto my sanity, but the pressure grew a lot.  Broke down crying a few times when I had a moment to myself.  So . . . That’s really it.

Wait . . . No . . . I can’t muster anything else to post about this week.  Just tired.  I’ll try again next weekend.

Goals of the week:

  1. Finish editing War of Nytefall: Eulogy
  2. Time with son
  3. Start the December promo posts
  4. Finish watching ‘Megalobox’
  5. Work
  6. Hopefully see a friend next weekend
  7. Puzzle
  8. Get a haircut
  9. Inevitable cry
  10. Sleep
  11. Maybe bike
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Daughter of Monster Maker Fun: Creatures Donated by Victoria Zigler #October #Monsters

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Welcome to the 2021 Monster Maker Fun!  Every Friday in October, I’m positing a collection of creatures.  These were from the gibberish suggestions of people from back in August.  Basically, they give me a fake word/name and I turn it into a monster using this handy machine I call a brain.  At least, that’s what the battered warranty card says is in my head. Today, we have 3 beasties with the help of Victoria Zigler.  Thanks and enjoy all the fun that’s coming.

Gooplaxmetun

Found in the rainy hills of Rasca, these birds thrive around bodies of water.  The reason for this is because they feed entirely off alagea.  Because of the rain, the rivers and streams in this region can become covered with thick layers of alagea.  The Gooplaxmetun helps to reduce the level and allow light to reach the creatures beneath.  This is especially important for the freshwater oysters that turn sunlight into heating crystals, which the locals gather for winter.  Gooplaxmetuns are about the size of a crow with dark green feathers. Their diet gives them their color along with a slick layer of slime, which is too heavy for them to really fly.  In fact, it is said that if you see Gooplaxmetuns in flight, it is a sign that the rivers are sick.  They have a short, wide bill connected to a throat pouch, which is what they use for feeding.  While unable to fly, they can jump and do so from hilltops.  Then, they glide down and try to pull up to skim the alagea-covered surface.  A Gooplaxmetun hates water, so they panic if they fall in, which does result in them swimming faster than you would imagine.

Raiwetmouad

This invertebrae lives in the open ocean and prefers tropical regions, but they are always at the mercy of the currents.  It amazes scientists that these bulbous animals are never beached since they lack appendages to change direction.  At first glance, they appear to be a patch of sea foam, kelp, and a brownish green carcass.  The smell does not help since they reek of rotting fish. The part seen from above is their backside, so you cannot tell it is alive unless you go underwater. A Raiwetmouad’s face is a bug-eyed protrusion with a narrow slit for a mouth.  The slit can open wide enough to swallow a full grown sea otter using a powerful vacuum. It is able to stun predators and prey with an electric shock, which goes off with the slightest contact.  All water that is inhaled is stored until the Raiwetmouad emits a weekly geyser from the sealed holes in its backside.

Lopwnearog

Also known as the Leaping Piglets of Scorton, this animal is a favored pet of small children in the region.  They range from ruddy brown to a soft pink, but all of these animals have a purple patch on their forehead.  These marks are unique and children use them as a source of their pet’s name, which they will recognize.  Lopwnearogs have springy legs that allow them to leap very high and large ears to help them ride air currents.  As they grow older, they gain the strength to carry their owners even when in the air.  Being voracious omnivores, people have to be careful and not let them go hungry.  Lopwnearogs have been known to devour entire gardens when left unchecked. This can be solved by giving them their own garden, so many towns have big areas specifically for this reason.  A strange and unexplained habit of these animals involves marriages of their owners.  This is only with those who are given to children and continue on with them into adulthood.  Upon marriage, the Lopwnearog will ignite and cook to become the feast.  They always leave a single baby behind during the event, which is seen as a good luck charm.  Those who are owned by people that remain single never go through this and have been known to live up to 70 years.

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