Sneak Peek w/ Possible Spoilers: Caster Brothers (Allure of the Gypsies)

Isaiah can barely hear the warning bell and the screams of Haven’s citizens as he dodges a black lightning bolt. He swiftly responds with a barrage of silver stakes that sail wide of their target. The old caster isn’t aware of anyone else on the battlefield until a wave of intense heat from Nyx’s fire blast warms the soles of his feet. The red-scaled caster takes a risky second to see who has come to help protect the city. He quickly disperses a barrage of acid claws with a wall of sound before a blurred form on his right distracts him. For a brief instance, Isaiah can see Talos carving through the undead army. He looks the other way to see a pile of bodies starting to form on Kalam’s side of the battlefield. He can only assume that Luke is responsible. The undead army has already begun to turn into a chaotic mob as more and more of the monsters fall.

“It would appear that my allies have arrived, brother. Now, I can concentrate on you,” Isaiah states with a sad smile.

“Their actions are of little interest to me,” Kalam claims.

“You could never admit when you were worried,” Isaiah sighs disappointingly.

“They can destroy as many of my minions as they want,” the vampire says with a sneer. “I can always make more.”

A spiral of ice erupts from Isaiah’s palm and violently collides with a shield of fire that appears around Kalam. The necrocaster is pushed back a few feet by the impact before he swerves to the side. Two trees are covered in ice as Kalam fires back with a bubbling ball of black energy. Isaiah stands his ground while he casts a solid ball of light at Kalam’s spell. Again the opposing energies explode in the air above the undead swarm and the brothers are left gasping for air. A drop of blood falls from Kalam’s brow while Isaiah pats his cheeks with the sleeve of his robe.

“I thought you had gone soft after all these years,” Isaiah coughs.

“Don’t mistake my isolation for hiding. I was practicing and perfecting my skills for this day,” Kalam announces hungrily.

“I wish you would simply forget about me,” Isaiah admits.

“How could I forget the one who betrayed me?” Kalam screeches in rage. He opens his mouth and spits a glistening beam of violet energy at his brother.

“Give it up, brother,” Isaiah snaps. He deflects the spell into the air with a shield of wind. The sky above the battlefield turns a putrid purple and the clouds begin to melt away.

Kalam stares at his brother, his eyes widening from rage. “You were the one who sent me to that vampire!”

“What are you talking about?” Isaiah asks, refusing to let Kalam’s fury intimidate him.

“One hundred and thirty nine years ago,” Kalam growls, his fangs growing with hunger. “I followed the map, which you left for me to find. It led me into the waiting fangs of a vampire and forced me to live in the shadows for eternity. It took me years to master my new powers and learn how to use my magic again. You can never imagine the pain and frustration that you caused me.”

“You’re a fool. That map was left on my desk for me to use,” Isaiah argues, trying not to laugh. “I was going to hunt down and destroy the vampire. You invaded my private study out of jealousy and greed. The only person who you can blame for your downfall is yourself.”

“The only thing I am guilty of is staying in your shadow for too long!” exclaims the white-scaled necrocaster.

“An angry caster is a careless one,” Isaiah mockingly whispers.

Kalam chuckles with an evil sneer. “That was the first and only lesson that our father ever taught us. Is this why you refuse to show me any emotions?”

“I release the proper amount of emotion depending on the situation. It is an easier life than one of rage masked by false civility,” Isaiah states with a toothy grin. “By the way, I think you’re water ghasts are done.”

Kalam looks at the battle below him to see that over half of his undead army has been torn to shreds, burned beyond use, or pierced in the head with an arrow. The only dead water ghast that he can see is the one that is fastened to a tree by an arrow. He is confused about Isaiah’s taunt until he notices Nyx with her hand in the river. A thick steam is rising from the bubbling surface of the water, which has lowered several inches below the initial riverbank. There are a few dark forms in the water and it takes the necrocaster a few seconds to recognize the bloated, disfigured water ghasts. All of them have been instantly boiled before they could escape the river.

“I’m impressed,” Kalam admits in shock. He raises a rigid claw toward Nyx, but quickly lets his arm drop to his side.

“Are you scared of her?” Isaiah curiously inquires.

A sickening grin crosses the vampire’s face. “I’m simply not in the mood to face two casters at once.”

“For an angry, murderous brother, you sure are talkative,” Isaiah mentions, a worm of worry slipping into his heart.

“We are still brothers,” Kalam admits with a shrug. “My hate for you is rivaled only by my love at seeing your face again.”

Isaiah snorts and releases a puff of smoke from his nostrils. “You never did make any sense, brother.”

An extra pair of arms burst out of Kalam’s chest and all four limbs begin a bombardment of fireballs. The incoming spells curve slightly through the air as they whistle towards Isaiah. The first of the fireballs singes the side of Isaiah’s head before he can freeze the remaining spells with a wave of icy wind. The freezing spell has barely dissipated into the air before the extra limbs of Kalam erupt from below. Isaiah is hit in the jaw by the disembodied right arm, which sends the caster reeling back in the air. He is about to cast a spell at the flying arm when the left arm strikes him in the back. Isaiah struggles to track the arms, but they move so fast that they continuously vanish into the mass of bodies littering the battlefield below him. A moment after Isaiah loses track of the arms, he feels a tight grip on his tail. Before he can get free, he is slammed against the ground.

“Having some trouble?” Kalam cackles gleefully.

“I’m simply rusty,” Isaiah groans, struggling to his feet. He can feel a push of air hit his face before he ducks away from the flying arms.

Kalam yawns and pats his mouth. “Excuses are not your style, brother.”

Isaiah shakes the entire clearing when he roars and digs his feet into the corpse-covered ground. The flying arms streak toward the old caster and collide with a loud slam that sounds like a charging bull hitting an iron wall. Kalam stops grinning when he sees Isaiah has caught the arms by the wrists. Isaiah leaves deep gouges in the ground while the arms push him back. With another roar, Isaiah shatters their wrists and tosses the useless limbs to the ground.

“Is that your best?” Isaiah snarls, turning back to Kalam.

“No,” the vampire replies, “but I believe my distractions have worked.”

A cold hand of terror grips Isaiah’s heart when he realizes that he has been tricked. “Distractions?”

“Did you really think that I wanted to talk so much with you?” Kalam asks, his voice dripping with hatred. “I needed the time to finish casting my spell. I made it special for you.”

“You were always the dramatic one,” Isaiah mutters under his breath.

The forest behind Kalam explodes into a shower of splinters when an orb of magical energy rises from the ground. A few distorted images of Isaiah can be seen in the putrid surface of the black orb. With an evil grin, Kalam stretches his arms behind him until they are inches away from the immense spell. He moves the throbbing orb above his head and puts more of his energy into it. Everyone in the clearing and in the nearby town can feel their blood freeze as they watch the orb abruptly grow to the size of a two-story house.

Isaiah gathers his energy while he analyzes the amazing spell before him. He hates to admit that he is impressed with his brother’s spell. He marvels at the highly charged spell that he could not sense by an enemy until it was completed. Isaiah guesses that all of Kalam’s previous spells were distractions while his tail made the subtle motions for the big spell. The strain of preparing such a large spell, while hurling minor spells, must have been so intense that a vampire could survive the casting. The more Isaiah thinks about the spell, the more he realizes that he only knows one spell that can stop it. A spell so powerful that he is not even sure he can survive casting it with such little preparation.

Kalam announces, “Now, to destroy that which has threatened me.”

Isaiah launches himself into the air and immediately summons an orb of blinding, white magic that barely matches the size of Kalam’s orb of darkness. Both of the casters are in the midst of hurling their spells when a metallic object hits Kalam in the shoulder. The vampire stares at the thin hilt of a stiletto sticking out of his shoulder while his spell speeds from his palms. At the same time, Isaiah hurls his counter spell toward the dark orb. Both casters watch in shock when the images in the black orb change from those of Isaiah casting his spells to Luke hurling his stiletto at Kalam. The seconds feel like hours as the opposing spells swerve away from Isaiah and toward the battlefield below.

Isaiah collapses to the ground where he gets a clear view of the confused and worried Luke. The forest tracker is petrified as the spells race toward him. The fireskin’s heart sinks even more when he sees Nyx rush toward Luke in an attempt to tackle him to safety. Instead, Luke catches Nyx by the shoulders and hurls her away from him where Isaiah is unable to see if she is safe or still in the range of the black orb. The last thing that Isaiah sees before passing out is Luke being enveloped in a towering pillar of swirling light and shadow.

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Painting the Sky

A single bloom
The first stroke to set the stage
Calling out
To make sure we know it’s there
An audience for the art
Of colors, lights, and soundsRapid crackles of red
Echoing roars of blue
Hissing showers of green
Yellows and purples dance
While orange pops to life
A splattered rainbow upon the night
Gone before too long
Leaving smoke upon the sky

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FREE Alert!

Part 1 of Danielle Taylor’s newest Adult novella, Finding Me.

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It Knows

I have a new laptop on the way and I’m sure my current laptop knows this.  So far it has blue-screened, blocked Google Chrome, crashed Word, and refused to let Pandora work.  I’m kind of glad I won’t be on the computer much tomorrow because I don’t want to deal with this machine.  It isn’t ending our relationship on a good note.

Seriously, I want my music back.  I never noticed how my mind shuts down and stumbles without music.  I’ve been using it as background noise since Middle School, so I need it to focus.  Unless the issue is the internet.

Is there anything like Pandora that might work better?

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Bash and Smash: A Book of Battles?

Warhammer, I think.

So, I’m noticing something about The Compass Key.  There are a ton of fight scenes compared to the previous 4 books.  Each battle is important and it feels like a lot of the tension has simply hit the climax.  It’s a little worrisome because the last few books had more subterfuge or defensive fighting.  Luke and his friends are certainly done reacting and are taking things into their own hands.

I have the following:

  1. Multiple monsters in a swamp attack heroes.
  2. Scattered fights between angry heroes.
  3. Aerial battle
  4. 5 battles inside a characters mind.  (scattered throughout)
  5. Demonic wolf pack
  6. Large-scale battle opener
  7. Moat monster fight
  8. Lizardman ruler fight
  9. Rival fight on a bridge
  10. Golem trap
  11. Big confrontation in castle
  12. Attack on invaders fleet
  13. Assault on a wizard’s tower with multiple fights
  14. Griffin rider versus Construct
  15. Griffin riders versus ships
  16. Luke versus Dragon
  17. Luke versus Shark
  18. Setting traps on ships to help with fight
  19. Ogre battle
  20. Vampires on a ship battle
  21. Sword Dragon versus Drite
  22. Guardian versus Vampires
  23. Corrupted creature fight
  24. More vampire issues as they invade temple
  25. Drite versus major villain
  26. Monsters guarding damsel in distress
  27. Mystery fighter in dream world.

I might be missing some, but that feels like a lot for a 20 chapter book.

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Dangers of Writing with Children

This is part 2 of possibly 2.  Last week I talked about the benefits of writing with children.  Today, I discuss the flip-side and make all of the non-parent writers breathe a sigh of relief that they don’t have to deal with this.  To make this authentic, I’m writing this while my son screams and cries a few feet away.  He refuses dinner and demands a cupcake?  Then he goes to bed hungry.  Seriously, he only wants to eat cupcakes these days.

  1. Ink Reloads–  The new ink cartridges for children are very expensive.  When you’re done writing with a child and they’re out of ink, it’s better to throw them out and buy a new one.
  2. Squirming–  The little guys and gals do not stay still when you’re writing.  Everything comes out like drunken cursive.
  3. Can’t Fit in Pocket–  They aren’t the most portable things when you need to write on the go.  The notepad models run away and the pen models leak all over the place.

What?  Wrong type of writing with children?  Fine.

  1. Theft–  Children want what you have.  This ranges from your notebook to your laptop to that Chinese hot pepper on your plate (raises hand in guilt).  If you leave your notebook and pen in reach, you’re coming back to doodles.  My son once got his hands on the manuscript for Family of the Tri-Rune.  I found drawings on the reverse side of ten pages.  I’m lucky that he knows not to draw on something with words on it, but you are probably not that lucky.
  2. Caterwauling–  Children scream, cry, yell, and make noise.  Try writing a romance scene with a tantrum erupting a few feet away.  Try writing this blog post with an epic screaming fit in the next room that includes a bathtub full of water.  Glad that bathroom can only fit one adult and he told me to get out.  Anyway, your focus is going to be shattering and splintered on a routine basis.  Accept this as part of the payoff for having sex.
  3. Editing!–  Leave your laptop unattended when you need a drink, some food, or the bathroom.  Remember to save before leaving because you’re about to return to aeaihfdoiafeaubvaejneateahufoaeyfaui.  Little fingers will find your laptop and add their own twist to your manuscript.
  4. Imitation Distraction–  Occasionally, your child might want to set up something that looks like a computer.  They’ll take the seat next to you or across from you.  Then they start typing away or playing the keyboard if that’s what they think you’re doing.  It’s an adorable event that will suck away an hour before you realize it.  They use their cuteness to full effectiveness.
  5. Stealing Snacks– A writer needs a drink and a snack on hand in case they start running out of energy.  Children love drinks and snacks.  They will get your drinks and snacks.  If you hide it, they will simply wait for you to reveal the location.  They’re natural scavengers that cannot be tamed.
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Ereader News Today

I signed up for Ereader News Today.  This site was suggested by King Midget, who has seen a lot of success with it.  He is the expert, so visit his site and learn a lot about self-publishing.  You won’t be disappointed.

I only signed up today, so I have no feedback on how well it works.  Here is what I do know about Eredear News Today:

  1. They post 7 bargain books a day on Monday through Friday.  These are books that are .99 cents or less.  They also post free books, which seem to be listing all of them.  I don’t have a free book to test it with.
  2. They cannot guarantee that your book will be posted during a .99 cent sale period, so there’s a risk if you’re doing the price change for a limited time.  It’s free to sign-up, so no risk.
  3. Your book needs at least 10 reviews and at least an overall 4.0 star rating on Amazon.  They go for quality here.
  4. You pay a 25% cut of royalties on anything that sells through their site.  It’s ONLY on books sold through them, so books that are sold by any other means will not factor into their cut.

I’m sure you guys are looking at this and thinking ‘no’.  I did too, but it’s free to sign-up.  That 25% cut had me nervous.  Then, I thought it through and realized that it would imply I made some money.  With all of the free sites that I have myself connected to, I don’t think adding this into the mix would be a bad idea.  It’s also advertising, so tax deduction.  Again, King Midget is the expert on this and he made a very good case.

I’m also looking at this in terms of the series.  The first book on this can help draw people into the sequel (once it debuts) and this site can increase its reach.  Beginning of a Hero is a guinea pig to some extent.  It’s my first book and the foundation of everything that comes later.  So, this type of site should help me out.  I’ll keep an eye out for my book to show up in their newsletter and then check the sales.

Watch me forget to check for the newsletter, but I’ll know something is up if I get a sudden influx of sales.

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Ask a Character: Luke Callindor Part 2

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Luke:  I have to do this again?  I got the first one months ago.

Me:  Yeah.  Remember how badly that went?  You got maybe 5 questions.

Luke:  Do you really think it will go differently this time?

Me:  More people have read the book and there are more followers.  Can’t see any harm in trying again.

Luke:  This would work better if you let me mature on your blog.  I’m stuck as my original self instead of the mature warrior I’ve become by the 5th book.

Me:  Mature?  Your love life is a wreck and you recently thought it would be a good idea to go one-on-one with a Crossbow Dragon . . . in the air!

Luke:  Maybe I wouldn’t have done that if you weren’t playing Shadow of the Colossus.  At least I’m not whining as much as I used to.

Me: That is a plus.  So, ready for a few questions, hero?

Luke:  You’re asking them?

Me:  No.  I have trouble asking questions that I already know the answers to.  I’ll let your fans do the asking.

Luke:  What fans?  Everyone loves Fizzle and Nimby.

Me:  You’re whining again.

Luke:  Not whining.  Declaring a fact.  Anyway, ask your questions and I’ll answer.  We’ll see how this goes.

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Spotlight: Briana Vedsted

Raise your hand if you’ve been fortunate to meet this phenomenal blogger.  I see a lot of hands and that’s as it should be.  Briana is one of the kindest bloggers I have ever met and definitely a bright spot on WordPress.  Her blog is filled with character interviews, her ranching tales, her publishing journey, poetry (a recent addition), and a vast array of posts that are always informative and entertaining.  Her stories range from Western to Werewolf fantasy, so one can be sure that she’s an author to keep an eye on.  She does so much for those around her that I think it’s high time she gets a spotlight.

Everyone go visit Briana’s blog by clicking on her picture.  Also, go and buy her Western short stories in preparation for her first traditionally published book, Me & Billy the Kid.  Click on the cover to get to the Amazon site:

Let’s give some WordPress love to Briana.  😀

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