When an Author Makes Changes

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Not sure why I took that quote, but it might ring true.  Honestly, ‘change of pace’ ended up being pics of a band and porn.  ‘Change of style’ was all fashion and porn.  Let’s face it, people.  Every topic gets porn if you have Safe Search off, but that’s a topic for another day like Wednesday.

Crossing Bedlam is a deviation from the stuff I normally write.  Magic and monsters have been replaced by cars, guns, explosives, gangs, and real world locations.  Google Earth was my friend on this one, which isn’t a tool I’ve had to pull out for a Legends of Windemere book.  It’s a change of landscape and familiarity for all involved, which brings up the question of it will work.  How often do authors successfully change to another genre and avoid angering their fan base?

First, I will admit that I retained as much of my style as I could.  Humor and action remain along with my present tense third person ways.  These things couldn’t be shaken off, but it wasn’t like I tried.  I wasn’t trying to be a different author here.  Just the same author in a new story and setting.  Will this be enough to keep those who follow me entertained while attracting more?  Maybe my two series will help each other even though there are fundamental differences.

The biggest difference between ‘Bedlam’ and ‘Windemere’ is that the former is definitely Rated-R.  I’ll get more into this on Wednesday and Friday, but ‘Bedlam’ would be Rated-R while ‘Windemere’ would fall into PG or PG-13.  There’s a lot more cursing, the violence is more cold-blooded, and sex is much more clear here.  Yet, I still haven’t reached a point where I can write a sex scene or mention the actual naughty bits.  The closest I come is if someone uses the words for an insult.  Either way, I had to take on a different mentality with this story and become less self-conscious about my word usage.  Something about allowing a character to swear like a New Yorker stuck in traffic on a hot day is oddly freeing.  Hopefully I don’t go too far.

The differences really require that we touch on them in their own posts.  Yet I feel like I should acknowledge that I’m going to publish a book that runs on a different track than what I normally do.  I attempted it before in a genre I had no connection to and that failed miserably.  This is action, wild characters, and humor.  Anybody who has read my previous books know those are part of my wheelhouse.  So maybe having a comfort zone as the core of this new adventure will work to my advantage.  Still, one has to wonder about that previous question.  Many authors have switched genres and been crucified for it.  Then again, they were famous and had a locked in reputation.  I’m an indie author and I think most people are happy I can string a comprehensible sentence together.  Other people swear that I can’t.

So, let’s open the floor.  What do you think about authors who try another genre?  Any examples of success that you can think of?

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A Week of Aches, Pains, & Progress

I started the week with a brutalized lower back because my snow shoveling technique is self-destructive.  Limped through the Tribe of the Snow Tiger edits while using a heating pad and stretching.  Now I’m finishing up another round of edits on Crossing Bedlam before moving on to Charms of the Feykin and The Spirit Well.  Of course, I managed to get a stiff neck last night and feel like a turtle who can’t get his head out of his shell.  Seriously, it feels so good to grab my jaw/head/cheeks and pull to extend my neck and ease the tension.  Guessing today will be slow progress, so my goal of editing the 4 mentioned books before February 13th is in jeopardy.  Not to mention that Super Bowl thing coming.

I showed a preview/early drawing of Lloyd, so today I have another cover piece.  This is of a character who hasn’t gotten much attention in the posts:

Sketch by Jon Hunsinger

Sketch by Jon Hunsinger

This is one of its later incarnations since it gets upgrades and ‘downgrades’ throughout the book.  Cassidy’s jeep has become a big part of the story, which is why it might be playing a bigger role in the sequel.  I’m already working on that idea after talking to Jon about the cover and what he thinks of the story.  This is going to be a southern adventure that encircles Texas, Arkansas, Louisiana, Mississippi, Alabama, Georgia, and Florida.  I considered Tennessee, but that took them too far out of the way.  Still working on ideas for Alabama and Georgia too.  The weirdness of the world brings up too many suggestions and I don’t want to repeat myself.  This is probably going to be a small project I focus on while my son is on his Winter Break.  At least at night when he’s asleep.

Staying on this topic since I have nothing else to talk about without falling into a rant, I find myself really nervous about Crossing Bedlam.  I had a lot of fun writing this story and crafting a new world.  Like Beginning of a Hero levels of fun and that comes with the anxiety too.  Will people enjoy this book to warrant a series?  How do I price and market it?  What can I do about reviews since those seem to be harder and harder to come by without incurring Amazon’s wrath?  Almost like I’m publishing for the first time.  I’d celebrate everything with pizza on the 12th to take the edge off, but that might not happen.  Unless I do it the 11th.  Pizza makes everything better and it’s been a few weeks since I indulged on my terms.

In non-book news, wife still job hunting and kid had his gymnastics show yesterday.  He did good, but I understand why he can’t progress to the next level.  He needs to work on things and learn to focus on what he’s doing.  It’s really anything that involves putting his legs in the air like cartwheels and handstands.  Rolling and bridges are okay and he loves the parallel bars (with help).

So, what’s the plan for the week?

  1. Finish edits on Crossing Bedlam and Charms of the Feykin.
  2. Start edits on The Spirit Well.
  3. Figure out Alabama and Georgia for Bedlam sequel.  Thinking ‘Chasing Bedlam’ as a title.  The premise is that somebody steals the jeep and Cassidy takes that about as well as someone insulting her mom.
  4. Help clean house for Super Bowl party.
  5. Biking.
  6. Cook dinner, I guess.
  7. Maybe get a hair cut now that the sidewalks are clear and spring has apparently arrived.
  8. Contact person at library to get Beginning of a Hero into the eBook rental system.
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Smorgasbord Open House – Meet Non-Fiction Author D.G. Kaye

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Author’s Monkey Mind

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A long exhausting day
Where the mind wanders
Distractions yanking it  away
So progress takes a hit
Just like the friggin’ phone

Mourning lost time
The author crawls into the cot
Pillow stealing muscles’ strength
Blanket tickling at his nose
While eyes begin to close

A spark of an idea
Fixing a tricky passage
Solving that nasty outline
Or something altogether new
That refuses to go away

No pen or paper near
Body refusing to get up
The author is trapped in horror
Blissful naivete battles pattern recognition
Will these thoughts see the dawn?

Hours pass in struggle
Tomorrow will start off sour
Yet the brain continues to play
Too ignorant to know the time?
Or a sadistic organ of self-destruction?

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Brothers in Arms

New book available! Just in time for the weekend.

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23 Short Story Competitions in 2016…

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Origin of Lloyd Tenay

(SPECIAL PICTURE AT THE BOTTOM!  I’m sure I just made everyone skip the post.)

Deadpool & Carnage from Marvel Comics

Deadpool & Carnage from Marvel Comics

Lloyd Tenay is the serial killer that Cassidy frees and has as a partner during Crossing Bedlam.  He has a strange origin for both his name and his characterization.  We’ll probably have to go piece by piece here.

The name is the easiest since I’ve had this one on paper for a long time.  Lloyd Tenay first appeared as a hologram computer system in a superhero story.  Then I made him a time traveler in the revamp of that story.  After that he became a government liaison, a time altering madman, an alien, and then I dropped him from the superhero stuff entirely because I felt he was a weak point.  So I grabbed the name for this new guy and it worked surprisingly well.

Unlike Cassidy, Lloyd was more flushed out before I began writing.  He stemmed from the two characters above who are some of my favorites from when I read comics.  I loved Deadpool’s humor and almost joyous glee when fighting alongside an almost suicidal level of confidence.  Carnage is a villain who had the level of brutality and intimidation that I wanted Lloyd to have.  Lloyd’s body type is similar to Cletus Cassidy in that they’re both tall and kind of lanky.  Sometimes I hit the mark and other times I didn’t, but it all seemed to work for the character.  I wanted him to be a whimsical being of chaos who has now stepped into a world that is as crazy as he is.  Almost like he’s come home and wants to make sure people know that a new monster is in town.

One aspect of Lloyd that I attempted was making him a 4th wall breaker.  This didn’t work out as planned and turned more into a spouting of real world pop culture references.  It did should a part of his psychosis where he openly claims to be a character in a fictional story.  This isn’t true 4th wall breaking because he has an explanation for it and he doesn’t talk directly to the audience.  He has a ‘logical’ reason for why he thinks he’s a main character in a story.  Honestly, this is probably for the best because I learned quickly that the 4th wall is a dangerous thing to play with.  Some people want you to go to ‘Family Guy’ level of insanity that destroys the actual story while others don’t want you to tap at the barrier at all.  I think Lloyd being a character who believes he’s a character without knowing for a fact that he’s fictional works better.

People might be wondering why a murderer is tagging along with Cassidy instead of killing her.  There are a few reasons that came about for this, but only one gets admitted to in the book.  Lloyd has no idea what’s going on since he was in jail before the blockade and collapse happened.  He sees Cassidy as his guide, which he is sure is a safer term than sidekick.  She knows the world and it’s made clear that he’s in the dark, so self-preservation tells him to be nice.  Lloyd also isn’t really anti-social and he enjoys having a friend.  The fact that she’s as efficient a killer and can be as ruthless as him is an added bonus.  A final reason that I came up with on the fly is that Lloyd would be a recognizable name since he was an infamous serial killer.  It would be like if Charles Manson was walking around.  Cassidy acts as backup and almost a calming factor when people realize who they’re facing.  After all, Lloyd might have mellowed if he’s traveling with this young woman and that consideration is enough of a pause for her to get an opening shot off.

Finally, weapons were a big consideration for Lloyd.  Cassidy had the guns and explosives, which made me want to have Lloyd go for blades and spontaneous weapons.  Being a murderer, I felt it would make sense for him to enjoy a close kill.  Unlike Cassidy who kills solely to survive, Lloyd takes joy and excitement from it, which means he wants it to be very hands on.  I gave him a lot of knives and an eventual machete, but this posed the problem of how he would work against people with guns.  The answer was a paintball gun with specialty ammo like curry powder, black pepper, bleach, and ipecac.  Lloyd is remarkably patient, so hiding until he gets that one shot to the face is something he would do.  He does leave the gunfights to Cassidy and takes small shots when he can, so he’s fully aware of this limitation.  Curious to see how that evolves.  It’s all about how he handles the situation, I guess, which means it’s a good thing that Lloyd is incredibly smart.  Almost feel sorry for anyone who messes with these two.

Now for the cover art teaser.  Keep in mind he has not been put in the cover scene yet:

Lloyd Tenay by Jon Hunsinger

Lloyd Tenay by Jon Hunsinger

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Thursday – A Little Personal – Call for Beta Readers

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UNCLE JOHN NEEDS YOU FOR A BETA READ

I am currently at a point with the third book in the John Cannon thriller trilogy where I would appreciate some input from beta readers. As you may know My GRL, His Revenge and now Our Justice will make up the complete story of John Cannon and his ongoing challenge with the billionaire Matt Jacobs.

Here is the blurb

Matt Jacobs is the money and power behind a splinter terrorist group out for justice to repay atrocities he believes committed by the West on his Palestine homeland and people. Matt despises John for continually thwarting his plans and would like nothing better than to kill him. He comes to realize it is better to use John to help carry out his vendetta. His latest scheme is to use John’s hero status as a conduit to eliminate the President of the United States. John is prepared to…

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Questions 3: Changing for the Sake of Changing

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Dr. Evil

These questions stem from two things.  One is that I’m editing and that requires making changes.  The other is that I accidentally clicked on the link that led me to the ‘new’ WordPress post maker.  This thing is terrible.  I see no borders to the area I’m writing in and it seems you have to type in the schedule time.  So this post might not even go off.  I have no idea if I can add YouTube videos to this since the option is no longer listed under media.  We all know these problems, so the questions:

  1. Have you ever caught yourself making changes for the sake of making changes?  Did you keep them?
  2. Do you feel it is harder for you to accept changes or fight against them?
  3. Is there a risk of changing something so much that you lose interest in the project and how would you avoid this pitfall if it exists?

Oh my god!  I can’t use this any more.  It’s terrible.  So sterile and bizarre.  Like my laptop forgot to load chunks of the screen.

 

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New Book Fanfare – Poetry – Lost in the labyrinth of my mind by Kevin Morris

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