Goal Post: A Week of Chewing the Air

Sadly, I only managed to get 1.33 chapters of Darwin & the Beast Collector edited.  It was a challenge too.  The full chapter took a whole weekend because it was bigger than I realized and had a lot of continuity sections that required checking.  This was hard to pull off when I had so many other things to do.  Before anyone says anything, I did an hour of Pokemon each day after I got some editing and other stuff done.  Then, it was back to the grindstone.

The obstacles boil down to two things.  The first is that I had several chores and errands that needed to get done.  The food shopping trips kept multiplying too since the big supermarket in my area is gone.  So, I would go to one place and get what I could, head home, and go out later to another in the opposite direction.  I also discovered some of the ingredients I thought were already here had gone bad or weren’t what I expected.  This is on top of the cooking and cleaning, so I was juggling everything for an entire weekend and wearing myself down by the time I reach the complicated editing.

Another problem is that the pollen count is high, which was a respiratory disaster for me this week.  It’s hard to focus when I have a constant burning in my throat and lungs if I’m outside or just came back in.  Been like this since I moved back to New York from Florida and it’s even led to upper respiratory infections if I ignore it for too long.  Of course, the rain came to knock the pollen down faster and I realized all of the allergy meds had expired 2 years ago.  Ended up medicating myself every morning to make it to work until Thursday night when it caught up to me.  Didn’t help that I went from an afterschool basketball game to my son’s chorus concert then shopping for the medication and finally getting to dinner around 9:30 PM.  I tried to get more editing down on Friday while I recovered, but my head was too dizzy for me to do more than 1/3 of the chapter.

Today is set aside for my son since this is really the only full day I get with him for a long time.  He’s with his mom tomorrow for obvious reasons and then the next two weekends, so I want to make this one count.  I’m sure I’ll find a way to finish the partially done chapter before Monday.  Though, I also have to mow the lawn before the rains come back and cook a dinner that will double as a few lunches.  I need to get better about time management when I have so much on my plate.  That or I should accept that I won’t always get a full chapter edited or written in a day.  I’m still so used to be highly productive, so doing a little feels like failure.  Yes, I know every little bit helps, but those who have followed me long enough should get it.  I went from writing multiple chapters in a week to struggling to edit even one within the same timespan.  Hurts.

Well, I can’t say I was entirely unproductive throughout the week.  Not just talking about pollen-infused grossness too.  I’m working on doing the blog posts for the summer, which will be me going back to the beginning of the blog and reviving some ancient posts.  I think that will be a lot of fun to see what young me though.  I’ll add some 2025 thoughts at the bottom as well.  This will be along with the usual random Sundays, goal post Saturdays, poetry Thursdays, and Teaser Tuesdays.

Speaking of Teaser Tuesdays, I’m going to be adding announcements at the bottom of those in regards to my price drop.  At some point this month, I’m going to drop the price of my single novels (Legends, Nytefall, Bedlam, and Ichabod) to 99 cents.  My goal is to take a day before Memorial Day Weekend and lower everything.  Probably be next weekend since I didn’t get to it on my sick day.  Using Teaser Tuesdays and making occasional solo posts are all I can do aside from mentioning it on Facebook.  My social media presence is lacking and I don’t have the time to build things up on a new medium like Bluesky . . . Is that the new one?

For anyone wondering why or preparing to give me the ‘price your worth’ speech, I have been thinking about this for a while.  Money is tight for many out there and I’m a no-name author.  $3 on someone like me is a lot, but 99 cents can be a consideration.  It makes me think of old dime novels that were cranked out, but sold cheap to help them spread.  I write escapist tales of magic and action anyway.  I’m inspired by Tolkien for trying to build a grand world with epic tales, but I’m also inspired by the action-oriented fun of Robert E. Howard’s Conan stories.  So, I want to make these more affordable in a time when people don’t have a lot of spending money.  Will people choose to give me a chance?  No idea and it’s arrogant of me to think this will be big.  Yet, I think it’s more arrogant for me to believe someone who is living paycheck to paycheck will see my eBooks worthy of $3 when they could spend more on an author they already know.

Anyway, what are my goals of the week?

  1. Time with son today.
  2. Mow the lawn.
  3. Finish more summer blog posts.
  4. Edit more Darwin & the Beast Collector.
  5. Start changing book pricing.
  6. Cooking.
  7. Pokemon Go on good days and biking on rainy days.
  8. Take Claritin in the morning.
  9. Watch more of ‘The Good Place’.  It’s fun and quirky.
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Questions 3: Cliffhangers and Transitions

Let’s just dive right into the questions.

  1. What advice would you give an author about writing a smooth scene transition?
  2. What advice would you give an author about writing a cliffhanger?
  3. What is a pet peeve about any type of story transition?
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Poetry Day: Prophet of the Rainbow Unicorns

(A fun poem involving unicorns?)

He stands upon his wooden crate
An island within a human sea
A scrawny form in mottled hair
Wearing rags of every color

 

Only few give him a sideways glance
As they trudge along their path
None stop to give him more than this
Until his voice rings clear

 

He speaks in vivid harmony
With words that stun the crowd
Enchanting in tone and timbre
With a strength to reach all ears

 

The prophet rails against the heart of man
Grown sick with greed and hate
Their happiness is fleet and false
A mask to hide their life of pain

 

He sings about the coming change
A force to heal the broken souls
On the day the rainbows bathe the land
A sign of the beasts’ return

 

They will ride upon the blinding arcs
Steeds with a single horn of gold
The unicorns of legend will return
To a land that needs them most

 

On piercing horns evil is slayed
Freeing man from darkest chains
The world will fall to peace
Beneath the hooves of unicorns

 

He senses anger from the crowd
As if the prophet hit a nerve
With a final yell he bursts to smoke
Leaving rainbow dust behind

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It’s a book, and a confession.

I did it again. I believe this one is the eighth one in The Hat Series. I want to say this at the top, but this whole series is designed to be ready …

It’s a book, and a confession.
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Blast from the Past: Types of Closures and Cliffhangers

(Back on October 1, 2014, I made the following post.  Nearly forgot about it, but I realized it can work better than another 7 tips post.  Enjoy.)

Even if you’re nervous about writing the ending of your story, it has to get done.  You can’t simply walk away and hope people forgive you.  There has to be closure to some extent or even a mysterious ending that keeps people talking.  After all, you brought the readers along for an adventure and they stuck with you to the end.  There should be some kind of payoff even if you believe the author owes the readers nothing.  I believe the author does owe a solid ending if for no other reason than it is an act of seriousness.  For some reason leaving a story unfinished feels wrong to me and I’m talking solely about stories that seem to end abruptly.

So here are some pieces of an ending:

Happy Ending/Sad Ending

This is a big debate, which I never realized could get heated.  There are people who feel that happy endings are unrealistic, so they make sure to end with tragedy.  Other people think the world is harsh enough, so they prefer to end on a high note and not add to the jading of humanity.  Either way, you should make sure the ending fits the overall tone of the book.  It might be jarring and fun to have an upbeat story end with utter destruction, but you should make that a possibility at least.  What I mean is that the possibility of failure should be there instead of pushing the idea that success is the only ending.  Same goes for writing a dark, depressing book where nothing goes write and there’s an abrupt rise to happiness in the last chapter.  People remember bad endings more than good beginnings, good middles, and good endings.  So you have to make sure the conclusion is solid, fits, and isn’t just you going ‘FOOLED YOU, READER!’.  (Yeah, I’ll probably have arguments about this one.)

Closure Needed

 Even if you leave an opening for a future adventure, you need to bring some closure to the end of a story.  This includes the latest volume of a series.  There has to be a sense that something has ended by the time the reader closes the book.  It can be the completion of a quest, finding the item to carry on to the next stage, conclusion of a subplot, or the promotion of a supporting character.  My point is that you need the reader to believe that they have an ending.  It doesn’t matter if another book will come out with events taking place a few months later or if this is the end of the overall adventure.  Readers love closure because it helps them feel like they invested their time, energy, and emotions wisely.  This is where beta readers can come in really hand too.

The Dreaded Cliffhanger

For example, ‘Cowboy Bebop’ ends with some ambiguity in regards to the true fate of Spike Spiegel.  The picture at the top is his final scene before he collapses after the big fight.  Some people think he died and others think he was saved.  Now, creating a cliffhanger seems to go against the idea of closure and that is why so many people hate them.  Yet, you can end a story on this if you do it correctly.  The biggest way to make a cliffhanger work as a story ender is to have it be in regards to a character’s fate, but not the main adventure.  With that central plot over, the story comes to a close and the heroes can be left in a state of ‘what now?’.  This can create a lot of speculation from fans, which can keep a story’s popularity going for a while.  You’re going to have some people that are angry that not every thread is closed up, but that’s the risk with a cliffhanger.

Benefit of Multiple Character Story Arcs

If you’re working with an ensemble cast then you have what some authors can consider a ‘luxury’.  Not every character needs a happy, sad, or completely closed ending.  You can end some characters with marriage, some with death, and leave one or two ambiguous fates.  This can include villains too if your story can end with them simply being defeated instead of killed.  The downside here is that you might get caught in an extended ending sequence in order to cover everyone’s storyline.  It’s easier if all of the characters stay connected like in the epilogue of Harry Potter, but sometimes you might have one or two characters that disappear from the lives of the others.  Feel free to play with the idea of giving a variety of closures if you’re writing such a story because there really are no true rules to this.

So, anybody else have any thoughts on endings?

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Too Many Ideas

Hi, gang. Craig here again. Last time I posted about how to kick the Muse off the couch and make her stop eating all your snacks. I had this awful …

Too Many Ideas
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Teaser Tuesday: Gods in Chaos

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Another fun teaser from Legends of Windemere: Warlord of the Forgotten Age.  Just a look at how the gods are taking the looming return of the one being that strikes fear in their hearts and souls.  I mean, they’re gods and goddesses, so I’m sure they’re taking this like mature adults.  (Hint: They are not.)

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Cliffhangers and Transitions

Now, I know cliffhangers might be seen as a type of transition.  I simply didn’t remember if there was a special name for a smoother flow into a scene.  So, I’m going to use the terms as separate entities.

Both of these things have their place in stories.  We don’t really notice the smoother transitions though because that’s their purpose.  They exist to end one scene and start another without a jolt to the system.  A reader not noticing them means they will effortlessly go into the next scene and might not take a break.  One could say that it increases the chance of immersion without creating tension.  Perhaps an analogy would be drifting down a lazy river going from one section to another.

On the other side, are your cliffhangers, which are designed to create tension and get a person to come back for more.  I think they tend to work best as pauses similar to when an episode ends.  The story will continue, but the reader will have to wait either for the next release or to have more time.  While this doesn’t create the smoother immersion, it does give a person a reason to come back.  It also grants them a point where they can comfortably stop since most don’t have the time to read an entire novel in one sitting.  So, they won’t feel like they have to keep going and possibly quit.

You really do need transitions for longer works since they require more than one scene.  If you have a 300 page novel, you can’t really have it be one long scene.  That could be exhausting to the reader with no clear sense of where they can take a break, which can lead to clunky flow.  I would think the passage of time would be an issue as well since a single scene couldn’t easily cover a long period.  Yet, the person reading it might have to take a few days since life gets in the way.  This means that you need to create some types of breaks if you are going for a longer story.

Each one has their own use too, but we already touched on that.  Smooth transitions can work with you need to skip ahead in time or switch to another part of the story in a different location.  They can even happen in the middle of a scene such as when you are describing a journey using exposition.  Cliffhangers, on the other hand, are clear stops such as at the end of a chapter, chapter section, or any book that isn’t a finale.  There is a definite place to put these because you need to make sure that the reader either stops or doesn’t feel bad if they have to take a break.  Something else is that a cliffhanger lingers in the mind and helps to draw the reader back after they are done with whatever pulled them away.

Personally, I never notice when I create smooth transitions.  Not sure if that’s how it should be or just me.  I find cliffhangers to be difficult, but necessary.  They help to bring at least some temporary closure for a chapter or volume.  I just have trouble making sure I end it dramatically without being cheesy.  My ‘go-to’ tends to be ending with a sarcastic comment, a joke, or an action that the POV character doesn’t notice.  Mixing in foreshadowing with either tool can be helpful, but not necessary.

So, what are your thoughts on this topic?

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Is Fictional Truth Reliable?

Fictional truth is never quite as clear as it seems on the surface. Deceptiveness boils down to manipulation, disguise, and misdirection. The writer …

Is Fictional Truth Reliable?
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Twofer: Mental Health Awareness and Better Sleep Month

So, I stumbled onto this month being ‘Mental Health Awareness Month’ and ‘Better Sleep Month’.  An interesting combination, but one that makes sense.  For today, I just want to see what people think of this pairing.  Why do you think mental health and sleep are intertwined?  (I’m going to give each month their own Sunday that will be more open forums and end with a post about the connection.)

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