Free Short Story: Everyone Deserves A Second Chance

Nicholas C. Rossis's avatarNicholas C. Rossis

I took advantage of the holidays to finish a new short story. It is inspired by Andy Weir’s short story, The Egg, and combines elements from my sci-fi fantasy series, Pearseus, such as The Waters of Oblivion (also referenced in Pearseus), with some more recent thoughts. I hope you enjoy it!

Dark sea - Waters of Oblivion | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's book

Everyone Deserves A Second Chance

Waters of Oblivion

While I wait for you, I take in the beach. This is my home. The deep, calm sea—too dark to make out anything but the soothing waves that lap my feet. Dark silhouettes surround me. They would crowd the beach, were it not for its immensity. Old and young, men and women, take slow, dazed steps into the abysmal waters. Guides like me help them in. Not that you need us for this. Ancient, forgotten instincts would drive you forward even if we weren’t there. But we pride ourselves…

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Matilda’s Music Box MegaMart: Free Earplugs with Each Purchase

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Welcome to where your music box needs are met.  I’m sure you traveled a long path to reach our store.  That’s because Google Maps has you go through three states to reach us, which is an improvement over Mapquest plunging our potential customers into the Atlantic Ocean.  Now, what are you looking for?

First, we are not a magical store. You can get your purchase enchanted at an establishment of your choosing, but we have no power beyond the emotions forged by song.  Now, what is the purpose of this music box?  Is it for a child or a loved one?  Perhaps you have an anniversary or another life event that this would be perfect for.  We have a wide selection of holiday styles and songs as well.  Our biggest seller there is . . . No, surprisingly it isn’t Christmas.  It’s Purim.  I was confused by that too, but I’m not one to say no to a trend that helps pay the rent.

Oh, a music box for a new baby is a genius decision.  Let me guide you to our nursery section.  Please ignore anything that goes off when you pass by.  Again, they aren’t magical, but have motion sensors.  Here we are!  The music boxes are divided into boys, girls, neutral, and twins and above.  That’s only for organization since you can change the color and give one of our music boxes to anyone.  As you can see, most of them are made out of metal, but we also have wood, plastic, and ceramic.  They are all wind up with a battery backup that you can activate by a hidden button.  Children will eventually reach an age where they want to set off the music themselves, but they lack the fine motor skills to turn a crank or key.  May I recommend this castle-shaped music box, which has many additions to choose from?

As you can see, you have various pegs that you can attach a variety of characters to.  They will move as the music plays to act out a scenario.  We will create a unique set of internal parts to get it right and do have the option for it to have up to three sequences.  Our characters include knights, princesses, princes, kings, queens, dragons, trolls, archers, lepers, executioners, peasants, plague rats, friars, paladins, and many others.  My personal favorite is the flock of chickens, but people do say the red eyes we paint on them make them oddly demonic.  Here is a book that will give you the full list.  Keep in mind that we have a five year warranty, but it can be extended.  That’s important because nobody can . . . Yes, I believe we should talk about the music.

Seeing that you are going with the castle, I would recommend something light and magical.  It can be harder if you pick the right characters, but most people choose a fairy tail type of theme.  We have classical composers and many modern artists have given us permission to use instrumental versions of their songs.  If you want anything with words then that will be extra because we would have to install a more electrical system than the gear-based one.  It takes more turns to charge up and you will have to depend a bit on the battery backup.  Of course, we have selections from that movie.  It would be silly to have a castle music box and not have that adventure.  We have a special set where you get the soundtrack and characters that can be installed.

We can go over the details later.  Enjoy looking around to make sure you have made the correct choice.  Here are some earpieces to listen to our music catalog.  Again, we have nothing magical in the store.  I cannot stress that enough because our lawyers are getting tired of handling those misunderstandings.  Good day.

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Eventide, from the Hode’s Hill Series

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Mae Clair is one of my favorite people. She’s a partner over at Story Empire and one hell of an author. She’s here today to tell us about Eventide, which wraps up her Hode’s Hill Series.

I would appreciate it, and I know Mae would, if you would use those sharing buttons at the end of her guest post.

Hi, Craig. Thanks for hosting me today with my new supernatural suspense/mystery release. Eventide is the last book in my Hode’s Hill mystery series. As in the first two novels, Cusp of Night and End of Day, I’ve chosen to use dual timelines with dual mysteries that converge at the end. 

It’s challenging writing a book with more than one timeline. In essence, the author has to plot two separate stories, balancing two separate sets of characters, then…

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Teaser Tuesday: Power of the Mercenary Queen #fantasy #adventure

Welcome back to Teaser Tuesday.  Let’s start off the new year with some action from Beginning of a Hero.  In fact, I’m going to stick to action scenes and pick one from each of my novels.  This will include Legends of Windemere, Quest of the Brokenhearted, War of Nytefall, Bedlam, and Ichabod Brooks.  Enjoy!

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

Putting her hands on the wall, the former Mercenary Queen watches a swarm of dark crimson flow through the forest. The red figures resemble hairless, muscular humans from the waist up, each one wielding rusty weapons. All of the students gasp and shy away from the wall when they see the creatures have the horrid bodies of scorpions. Many warriors whisper prayers to the gods at the sight of the curved barbs along the monsters’ skin and a sea of seven-foot, stinger-tipped tails. Two arms with giant pincers jut out from their enemies’ waists, snapping at anything that comes within reach. Occasionally, one of the smaller creatures gets too close to one of its bigger brethren and is viciously snapped in two by a pincer.

“Those spadix get uglier every time I see them,” Duggan mutters.

Selenia forces a smile, which turns into a frown when she notices larger figures pushing their way through the trees. Standing over twenty-five feet tall, the ten cyclopses make a slow, booming advance. A few of them are carrying a large tree as a makeshift club. She curses when she sees a cyclops standing in the back, looming much bigger than the others.

“Damn Kevin and his vision sword. That’s more than one cyclops and that big guy looks to be almost forty feet tall. I’ve met giants smaller than him,” she says as the monster army swarms into the killing field. “Well, I’m not one to wait for our guests to knock on the door, old dwarf. Let’s be the ones to draw first blood. Everyone prepare for battle! Archers and catapults! Prepare to fire on the eastern side! Wait for my signal!”

The headmistress raises her longsword above her head, the weapon crackling with electricity. Duggan has his crab-shell shield aimed at one the cyclopses and nods to his trusted boss after mumbling a quick prayer. He concentrates on the shield, causing a jet of water to erupt from the front of the magical device. Selenia lowers her sword to release a screeching lightning bolt along the water blast. It strikes the cyclops in the face and the towering giant collapses in a twitching heap on top of several of the spadix.

Once the dead monster hits the ground, the archers and catapults fire into the oncoming swarm. At first, the barrage keeps the shrieking creatures at bay and three more cyclopses are killed. The tide turns when many of the spadix pull out longbows and fire barbed arrows over the wall. A cyclops hurls a tree into the academy, crushing two of the catapults along with five students. Selenia glances at the bodies and steps onto the edge of the wall before dropping into the killing field to meet the approaching enemy. She is a whirlwind of polished steel, sending spadix parts everywhere as she cuts a path through their forces.

“Now this is my kind of strategy!” Duggan shouts.

The dwarf leaps from the wall, his heavily armored body landing with a crash on top of a spadix. He can feel the monster’s body crumple and gush underneath his feet. With an echoing battle cry, Duggan gleefully knocks monsters away with his war hammer. Urging them on, he waves at the squads led by Thomas and Kevin as they rush around the corners, intercepting the monsters within a few feet of the wall. The two forces meet with a terrifying clash of battle and screams.

The enormous cyclops reaches the battlefield and charges Selenia, the monster waving a massive club. She gets her sword up to block the attack, but is still knocked into the academy by the blow. The half-elven warrior grabs the edge of the wall and does a mid-air flip to land on the walkway. From above the action, she sees students getting skewered by tail stingers and shredded by snapping pincers. Another cyclops is killed by a boulder getting embedded in its chest, the dying behemoth pitching forward. A group of archers leap out of the way as the body crashes into the wall, creating a gaping hole for the spadix to swarm through.

“Everybody retreat into the academy! Use your knowledge of the grounds to your advantage!” Selenia shouts, dropping from the walkway.

She darts past a group of axe fighters and dives into the sea of monsters. The creatures try to stab her with their stingers, but they hit each other if they manage to hit anything at all. Selenia gracefully moves among them as she slashes through bodies, enjoying the feel of their crude weapons harmlessly bouncing off her body. Every crude weapon is deflected by an invisible coating of magic, allowing her to build a frightening amount of speed and momentum. Focused on the approaching cyclops, Selenia growls when a stinger pierces her leg.

“Son of a bitch!” she screams, yanking the stinger out and jamming it into the face of another spadix.

Selenia stumbles back, immediately feeling warm and faint. It is not long before she can feel her blood boiling . . .

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Does Fantasy Have to Be Medieval?

Joan of Arc

Various questions come up when someone wants to write high fantasy and many of them are completely understandable.  They may deal with magic, various races, and creating a world that isn’t Earth.  Yet, there are other questions that you can see why they are asked, but they come off as shocking.  It makes one wonder about the entire genre and how it might not have evolved as much as many believe.  I’m going to touch on one of those questions here:

Does a fantasy story have to take place in a medieval Europe/Dark Ages setting?

The obvious answer is ‘No’.

As long as the genre doesn’t require a specific setting type like Westerns and WWII dramas, you can do whatever you want.  Even those ‘restrictive’ areas have some wiggle room, so nothing is set in stone.  The rules are incredibly flexible with fantasy, which really only requires that there be a magical, mystical element that can’t be chalked up to science.  This means you can do the traditional medieval setting or take inspiration from any time period.  You can also ignore that and try to make something entirely from scratch.  It is much more important to make the world work than to follow what you believe is a genre trend.

It isn’t hard to see why people think it should be medieval worlds or expect them to run the way our history did.  Tolkien and Lewis set that standard, which tends to go along without many changes when you look at the big ones.  ‘Game of Thrones’, ‘Dungeons & Dragons’, and even series that take place on a future Earth that has magic seem to go for the European aesthetic.  Castles with kings and knights traveling in search of adventure or a dragon to rescue from a fire-breathing princess.  You’re going to find more series that follow this tradition than blatantly go against it.  So, new authors get the feeling that this is a requirement instead of a suggestion that most people take.  Although, can you really blame them?

I’ve seen many readers go after a fantasy book because it isn’t historically accurate.  A suit of platemail isn’t correct or rules of etiquette don’t meant with medieval standards.  You can have a reader complain that the heroes are bathing regularly or that there are indoor bathrooms.  Had those tossed my way a few times.  As soon as you have the set pieces of medieval Europe, you’re bound to have people assuming that it will be Earth history accurate.  This doesn’t make much sense to me when it’s a place like Windemere, which isn’t Earth.  Yes, they have settings similar to the traditional, but they also have more modern things like the emergence of indoor plumbing.  This means you can’t suddenly say that something isn’t supposed to be that way because it could very well be right since it isn’t Earth.

Well, that’s my opinion and statement on this.  I’m going to be playing more with the idea when I finally get to the fantasy tip book.  What do you think about the belief that fantasy stories need to be in medieval Europe?

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Expansion Pack: Character Archetypes + a trick

Excellent post on common archetypes.

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Hi gang. Craig here with you again. Last year sometime, I wrote a series here about The Hero’s Journey. This is a link to PART ONE.

Then I went on to write several Expansion Packs. Those are easy enough to find by using the search function at the very bottom of our page. I’m not giving you a link, because they cover a broad spectrum of topics related to story structure. Just enter “Expansion Pack” and go.

Back when Joseph Campbell came up with all this, he included a repeating cast of characters from the most popular stories. These are a level above the stock characters I posted about this Fall. These character archetypes  are what we’re delving into today. I’m going to stay brief on them, because I promised you a trick. away we go…

The Hero: This is your main character. Choose well, because this person is…

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Fantasy Tip Book List of Topics

The Godfather

This is the last day of break for many, so I didn’t want to do anything complicated.  Still, I’ve been meaning to make this post for a while.  I haven’t come up with titles for most of these topics and the ones I have are iffy.  Don’t even have one for the book, which is looking more and more like a 2021 release since I have my hands full with War of Nytefall.  Anyway, here are the topics for that fantasy tip book that I mentioned a few times:

The Intro

The Author:

  1. Prologues and Epilogues
  2. Choosing Tense
  3. Plan or Pants
  4. Cliches
  5. Be You (Using your own author voice)
  6. Admit Your Inspiration
  7. Can’t Please Everyone
  8. Revel in Your Quirks

The World

  1. Setting as a Character
  2. Does it Have to Be Medieval Europe?
  3. Magic Systems
  4. Using the Classics
  5. Interspecies Relations
  6. Religion and Politics
  7. Painting the World
  8. Importance of Notes
  9. Monsters
  10. Passage of Time
  11. History
  12. The Wilderness
  13. Relics
  14. Necromancy (Necrocasting in Windemere)
  15. Accepted Levels of Violence
  16. Multiple Series in One World
  17. Riding Beasts!
  18. Dragons!
  19. Great Cataclysms
  20. Short Story Worlds

The Characters

  1. Starting Weak or Strong
  2. Evolution
  3. Importance of Supporting Cast
  4. Comic Relief
  5. Gods!
  6. Flawed is Perfect
  7. Damsels and Princess Generals
  8. Names
  9. Signatures of Characters
  10. Monsters as Heroes
  11. Types of Casters
  12. Villains
  13. Minions
  14. Fan Favorites and the Despised
  15. Holy Characters
  16. Ensemble Casts
  17. Biographies
  18. Rivals
  19. Archetypes
  20. Short Story Evolutions

The Quest

  1. Always a Goal
  2. Synergy of Heroes and Quests
  3. Rollercoaster Plot (This is where I’m at with outlining as of the writing of this post.)
  4. Good or Bad Endings
  5. Fight Scenes
  6. Final Battles
  7. Times to Shine
  8. Power of the Caster
  9. Adventure vs Politics
  10. How Dark Do You Go?
  11. Big Battles
  12. Destiny vs Free Will
  13. Romance
  14. Food and Eating Scenes
  15. Traveling Sections
  16. Distractions, Deviations, and Side Quests
  17. Killing Characters
  18. Training Without Losing Flow
  19. Next Generation
  20. Short Story Quests

The Outro

There you have it at 70 ‘chapters’ that will all be written in a casual, blog-style way.  I’m not going to use jargon or talk like it’s my way or the highway.  This is going to be something fun and informative, so I’m keeping it light.  Tried to get a good variety of topics and hit on things that people have asked me about.  Hope it works and I’m aiming to get the planning stage done before the summer.  Might make this my summer project then and push for beta readers in the Fall.  Anyway, that’s really far down the road.  Best to take it easier here.  Need a title too . . . ‘So, You Want to be a Fantasy Author?’  Ugh, everyone I think of sounds too smug, pompous, and overly professional when I’m going for laid back and casual.

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First Goal Post of 2020: Might Be a Little Anticlimactic

Everybody sober up or catch up on sleep after staying up until midnight?  Yeah, I’m not as young as I used to be, so the late night is still wearing me down.  Alcohol wasn’t even a factor since I had one beer and a small glass of ice wine.  Pepsi and water were consumed a lot more by me.  The whole event was low key with some guests coming over and my son being there for the evening.  His mom got him for the daytime stuff.  That’s really all I have to say about the holiday of the week.

The rest of my time since I last did a goal post was spent with my son.  The week was a little crazy because his glasses snapped on Sunday.  Nothing that he did since it was metal fatigue and the arm broke right at the hinge.  Of course, we had to get this taken care of and discover it happened the day after the warranty expired.  Thankfully, everyone was understanding and he’s getting them fixed.  Had another appointment available too, so he’s going to have two pairs within 2 weeks.  Not a bad ending to a situation that seemed pretty bad at the start.

When we weren’t doing appointments and errands, we got a few fun things done.  The two big ones were a full day LEGO project and a trip to the zoo.  I’ll get the build in a bit, but the zoo was fun.  Many schools went back into session, so there wasn’t a big crowd.  It was a little chilly, but not enough that it was uncomfortable walking around.  The lions were roaring a lot and we saw a few new animals.  Didn’t see the dholes (Asian wild dog, Asiatic wild dog, Indian wild dog, whistling dog, red dog, and mountain wolf) that were recently brought to the zoo.  They were either hiding in the back or off display.  Not entirely surprised since they are brand new and might not be okay with the weather or the crowds yet.  We’ll have better luck in the spring and they might even have a plushie version for my son to excitedly request.

Now, the LEGO project was:

Yoda stands at about 16 inches here and he’s a statue instead of a toy, so he has a space on my son’s dresser.  I had a picture of my son sitting next to it, but I realized that I might not be able to post pictures of him here without getting into trouble.  I’d have to ask permission and that can come with a cost, which is silly and you can probably take a guess how well that aspect of my life is going lately.  Anyway, we had a lot of fun with these projects and trips.

TV was a big thing too, which people may think is strange.  I introduced my son to ‘Fairy Tail’ a while back and he’s loving it.  He even has a collection of Lucy Heartfilia’s celestial spirit keys, so he runs around summoning them to help him out.  Sucks that Hulu stops having dubbed episodes at Season 3, but my son doesn’t read well enough to keep up with that.  The other anime that I introduced him to this week was ‘My Hero Academia’, which is all about superheroes.  He’s trying to fit what he knows about American superheroes into this Japanese one where 80% of the population has a power/quirk.  He’s having trouble with the names and how some of the heroes are kind of mean too.  Still, he’s really getting into it and now I’m left wondering what else I can try him on.  I’ve begun eyeing ‘One Piece’, but that’s massive.

For myself, I watched ‘The Witcher’ on Netflix.  I really want to read the books now because I enjoyed the series.  It had a different flow than other shows, which is why I liked it.  Felt like it was taking its time and building to something instead of having to hit me with constant sex, shock deaths, cliffhangers, and horror.  There was a good level of dry wit to it as well.  Looking forward to Season 2.  (Before anyone asks, I have not seen ‘The Mandalorian’ because I don’t have nor will I be getting Disney+.  Just going to stop that conversation right now.)

As you can tell, I got no amount of writing done this week . . . Well, I got a section or two done on Tuesday while my son was with his mom.  I think.  I’m not really sure if I did anything more than prepare March posts.  Began coming up with April post ideas too and had a list . . . That was destroyed by a humidifier leak.  Why did I have it in my hand while working on the damn thing?  Want to say one topic was tips on writing characters with depression or anxiety.  Maybe I should make a week of 7 Tip lists with one for depression, one for anxiety, and another for . . . I don’t know of a third one that I have enough knowledge of.  Any tips?

Next week is back to work and . . . OH YEAH!  I got my Teaching Assistant Level III certification yesterday!  Now, I have to take courses and attend meetings to reach a certain level of career enrichment.  Been told it isn’t that bad and I can do things over the summer instead of running myself ragged during the school year.  Curious to see what the courses and options are though.  I’m going back with this under my belt and I’m going to get a handle on it before I submit for full teaching certification.  That’s going to be a big step and I’m a little nervous about it.

Goals for the week?

  1. Get used to waking up at 5:30 AM again.
  2. Biking once more since it didn’t happen this week.
  3. Finish the March blog post scheduling.
  4. Finish another 1-2 chapters of War of Nytefall: Ravenous this weekend.
  5. Make Penne with Vodka Sauce, which didn’t happen this week.
  6. Find something that I can use as backings for the 32 puzzles that I’ve finished.
  7. Figure out something else to watch on Netflix or Hulu.
  8. Shtuff
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Top 5 of 2019: 7 Tips to Creating Fictional Location Names (#5)

I’m an idiot.  Now I know why I didn’t see a post scheduled for today or any for the Fridays in January.  It’s because there are 5 of them and I was going to do a Top 5.  I couldn’t set it up until after New Years Eve to make sure the numbers were right and I got so busy doing stuff with my son that I totally forgot.  Well, here’s #5 with a late arrival.

First, I want to point out that I stuck entirely with posts made in 2019 that got the most views.  Anything that I posted in previous years that came out on top didn’t get in here because I’ve done them already.  Seriously, the immortal tips and dinosaurs in fantasy posts aren’t going away.

Coming in from April 24, 2019!

Fictional World Map (Created by Dan Meth)

Continuing the topic of naming locations, I’m going to do my best to come up with some useful and humorous tips.  I only had to create one new place in War of Nytefall: Rivalry, so these are going to have to go outside of the new release.  Apelios doesn’t really give me a lot to work with either.  Here we go:

  1. Make the location pronounceable.  It may be funny to write one with only vowels or consonants, but you could lose a few readers if they can’t figure out how to say things.  It can help to have a pronunciation guide or mark it during the first appearance, so this is more of a guideline.
  2. Consider the terrain before you come up with the name.  You can only get away with naming a desert city after water once or twice before the joke gets stale.  The founders would have to be aware of these things too.  A person who has lived in the clouds for eternity won’t have a good chance of knowing what a worm is, so they probably wouldn’t use it to name a town.
  3. Use real world examples for your fictional ones to help get the creativity flowing.  This can really help with natural territories.  Rocky Mountains, Great Barrier Reef, Grand Canyon, and other locations in our world are fairly simplistic.  You would be surprised how many places can be named by how they look.  It can easily be chalked up to an ancient traveler being awed and not that creative.
  4. If you name a place after a person then you need to come up with some history.  It doesn’t have to be much.  Could be how the person found the area or some great feat that they accomplished to earn the right.  To relate this to the reader, you can have a local explain it briefly or have the characters read a sign about it.  To avoid an info dump, you want to be brief or spread out the story.
  5. As with monsters and characters, you can always use another language to come up with names.  Consider something about them and then go to Google Translate.  It can be related to the terrain, a historic event, their biggest export, or whatever makes this place stand out enough to be included in the story.  Do keep in mind that people who actually speak the language will understand it, so try to keep it clean.  Unless the joke is that the town is really a swear word.
  6. Accept that people will mispronounce the fictional locations if they are made by letters being tossed together.  Seriously, I’ve gotten Windemere, Windmere, WindEmere, Winemere, Winmere, Windermere, Windermore, and a few others.  (For those who wonder, it’s Win-deh-mere.  This probably doesn’t help.)
  7. Don’t rely too much on common endings for locations such as -burg, -town, City, Village, etc.  Only way to get away with using the same ending is if you build it into your world creation.  In that case, you can NEVER stray from the pattern or the whole world will implode.  The deaths of millions of fictional characters will be on your head, you monster.
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End of Break

I thought I had a scheduled post. Seems I didn’t or it vanished on me. Wish I knew what I imagined it was. Pretty busy today, so I’m just going haiku it.

An end to the break

Sixteen days of son and fun

The alarm is set

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