Introducing Astral Conspiracy Book 4: THE TWINS

Staci Troilo's avatarStaci Troilo

Ciao, amici! I promised quick releases, and I’m keeping that promise. Today, I’m delighted to share with you book 4 of the Astral Conspiracy Series: THE TWINS.

They took the world’s best hope. Took the father of her children. Now she’ll take revenge.

Landon Thorne was abducted by the Astrals. If there were still newspapers, that definitely would have been a front-page headline. But Reverie Sterling doesn’t have time to dwell on his absence. She has twins to raise in this dystopian world.

Twins with psychic powers.

She was trained to rise to any challenge, so that’s what she does. Vowing revenge against the Astrals, she partners with an unlikely ally — the Nine, the mysterious organization that’s been thwarting the Resistance since Astral Day.

The tenuous alliance converges on Wright-Patterson Air Force Base. Or rather, what’s left of it. There they wage a war against local zealots and…

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Hope and Love Sputter Eternal

The bubble was popped
Hope lost
Love soured
The heart beats
With an undertone of pain
Numbness at the edges
Anything
To make the agony pass
Will the horror end?
*
Hope can be revived
Love found once more
If life goes on
Crawling out of darkness
To stitch the heart anew
And rebuild
A broken soul
Time will be the witness
To hope and love’s endurance

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So Long Summer Break. I Hardly Noticed You.

(Really liking this song.  Though, parts of it seem to hurt when I listen too closely.)

Sad, but true.  This was my last full week of summer break, which really didn’t have an impact because of Covid-19.  Aside from one day of subbing last month, I haven’t stepped foot in my school since March.  That’s about 5-6 months and life has really been strange since then.  Weekends mean nothing.  Days all meld together.  I’ve counted the time more by custody split than anything else.  Don’t even get me started on how that’s going to go once school starts.  It’s going to be rough because there are 3 different schedules that have to be considered.  Needless to say, I’m dreading the coming months unless things change quickly.

My son was with his mom this week, so I spent my time preparing for going back to school next week.  Well, that and writing War of Nytefall: Eulogy.  This is the finale for the series, which means it’s going to be big.  At least, that’s what I thought.  It’s coming out more like a mystery.  There’s a big death at the beginning and that sets the scene for things to go south.  I can’t explain much because of spoilers for the preceding books.  All I can say is that Clyde is going to be put through an emotional wringer, which is difficult for a character who’s main feelings are rage and calm.  I’ve made it that Dawn Fangs have stronger emotional reactions than mortals, but Clyde hasn’t really shown this like the others.  From how the book is going, this is the time and it might be due to things happening that should affect him.  Facing a villain like Jewelz, Leo Kandrel, or Desirae Duvall is one thing.  They aim primarily for the body and he can regenerate that.  This time . . . the villains are aiming for his heart and soul.  Huh, maybe this is going to come out better than I thought.  Compared to Legends of Windemere, this series is turning out a lot heavier and gut-wrenching.  Really wish I could promote it better.

Speaking of promotions, we have a little less than a week before the debut of War of Nytefall: Ravenous.  I’m hitting publish on Thursday night before I go to bed and then announce it the following morning once I wake up.  Thank you to everyone who has offered to help me promote this book.  Due to time and money, I can’t do more than a simple blog tour.  That doesn’t net me any reviews, which is something I really need to figure out.  Anyway, if anybody wants to lend a hand with spreading the word then let me know and I’ll add your email address to the list.

Well . . . Not really sure what else to talk about today.  I’m just numb.  Nervous about going back to school because I don’t know how it will go.  The unknown and things being beyond my control have always been sources of anxiety.  Doesn’t help that I’m someone who feels like he has absolutely no control over his own fate.  I should have the first 6 chapters of Eulogy done before my son is home and I can add another 2-3 chapters to done pile before school officially starts.  I might be writing evenings on the days that I don’t have my son, which is becoming a more painful phrase to write.  If I finish this book/series by mid-October then that clears the rest of the year for other projects since I’ll be 3 books ahead of the publishing side of things.  Gives me plenty of time to outline Tales of the Slumberlord and write Do I Need to Use a Dragon? (Fantasy Writing Tips).  You can see I’m just ranting now.  Wait.  I know what I can talk about.

I’ve watched a bunch of shows recently because new seasons were showing up:

  • I really enjoyed season 2 of ‘New Adventures of Monkey’, which is a retelling of ‘Journey to the West’.  It had a real 90’s TV fantasy show (Hercules, Xena, Sinbad, Beastmaster) type of feel that I’m a sucker for.  Nice mix of comedy and action with a good story.
  • Season 4 of ‘The Seven Deadly Sins’, which is an anime, didn’t grab me as much as I’d hoped.  I loved first few seasons because of the fun characters and story.  This season didn’t feel as solid and made me think it’s only purpose was to be a bridge from Season 3 to Season 5.  Empty might be the best way to explain it.
  • Tried ‘Letter to the King’ and just gave up after episode 3.  I don’t know why, but I couldn’t get myself to care about the characters or the world.  There were moments of fun, but not enough to make me stay.
  • Stumbled onto ‘That Time I Was Reincarnated as a Slime’, which is a fantasy anime.  I thought it would be silly and it kind of was, but I enjoyed it.  Basically, a person in our world is killed and is reincarnated in a fantasy video game world as a slime.  He has the ability to eat and absorb anything, so he becomes very strong.  I feared that this would be like ‘Overlord’ where the overpowered main character shrugged everything off and won with no effort.  Yet, this slime had to really think his way through problems and work for victory.  The funny inner monologue helped because he was really anxious and awkward at times.
  • ‘Lucifer’ Season 5 Part 1 . . . Goddamn, I want Part 2 to show up.  Enjoyed it so much, especially when *spoiler removed*.
  • ‘Black Blood Brothers’ is an older anime that I watched while waiting for another show to hit Netflix.  It was okay.  It was only 12 episodes and about vampires.  Pretty straightforward story with thorough world-building.  I got a good sense of the history and structure of the setting.  Nice binge for 2 evenings.
  • ‘Cobra Kai’ is the one I just started.  Not being heavy into ‘The Karate Kid’, it isn’t having the franchise nostalgia effect.  It does feel very 1980’s even though it’s modern day, which draws me in.  I’m only in season 1, but I’m enjoying how flawed the characters are.  You can’t say anyone is really a hero or villain here.  Well, a few secondaries are clearly assholes.  I think I’m going to enjoying ending my summer on this series.

Well, that’s all we have for updates.  Goals for next week?

  1. Spend time with son.
  2. Back to work.
  3. Write more War of Nytefall: Eulogy.
  4. Publish War of Nytefall: Ravenous on Labor Day Weekend.
  5. December blog posts if I can.
  6. Get pizza at some point.
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Lost a Piece of Heart and Soul

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They had a place
Settled in your chest
Adjusting your beats
And nurturing the soul
Existences entwined
Allies in life
And now you are alone
*
A mix of pain
And numbness
Denial may rear its head
Along with anger
And despair
Left to limp through life
Like a wounded beast
*
Time is said to heal
It never says how long
A week for some
Years for others
Never is an option
Life has been shaken
From your insides
*
A beating heart
That does not feel whole
An invisible soul
Marked with a scar
Signs of loss and pain
Earned throughout life
Which all will wear

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The Nutshell Catch and the Point of No Return

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Comedy Tragedy

Ciao, SEers. We’ve been talking about Jill Chamberlain’s Nutshell method of plotting as it relates to Aristotelian comedies and tragedies. Last time, we discussed the protagonist with respect to flaws and strengths. (You can find the introductory post here, and the protagonist post here.)

Today, we’re going to talk about the catch. But just as the protagonist can’t be discussed without defining the strength and the flaw, the catch can’t be discussed without defining the point of no return.

The Point of No Return

The point of no return occurs at or around the 25% mark of the story. It’s when the protagonist’s life changes. If you’re a student of other plotting methods, you might think this coincides with the inciting incident.

It is related, but it is NOT an interchangeable term.

The inciting incident takes place around the 10% part of the story. It is…

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August Book Reviews

D. Wallace Peach's avatarMyths of the Mirror

Only four this month! I’ve been slacking.

Actually, I’ve been super busy preparing for my launch and then dropping into bed at night, too tired to read.

This month, my offering of  4 and 5 star reviews includes fantasy, sci-fi, and a children’s book that my 7-year-old grandson reviewed. I hope you enjoy the browse.

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*****

Coyote Summer by Laura Koerber

I really, really enjoyed this book. The story starts with a “boys will be boys” rape of a very drunk teenager at a party. The main character, Ben, doesn’t participate, but he also doesn’t take strong action. This story is about his loss of innocence as he grapples with his guilt and the disheartening cultural biases, including within his own family, that force the victim into silence and give the perpetrators a break.

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Immortal Wars: The Summoning Part 33 #fiction #throwback

(Previously on Immortal Wars.)

(Again, we shall revel in my teenage originality.  Everyone groan in unison.)

Disclaimer: Immortal Wars was the book I came up with and wrote in high school.  I hadn’t even hit college by the time I wrote the first two books.  That means I hadn’t developed my style yet, wasn’t good at self-editing, and the story was fairly basic. So, you’ve been warned that this is the ultimate author throwback segment for my blog and will show my author origins.  FYI-  I put the first book (The Summoning) through a Print-on-Demand publisher and the second one (Light, Blood, & Tears) never saw the light of day.  Enjoy!

Later that day, Startrix and Tegam walk into Adriana’s room in order to discuss one her current ideas.  When they walk in, they find Adriana wearing a red, very low-cut leotard while practicing some martial arts styles.  Tegam is stunned because he never had a chance to see Adriana with her hair messed up and sweat all over her body.  She still looked absolutely gorgeous, but it was definitely a rare sight to see.

“Did we come at a bad time?” asks Startrix.  Adriana freezes in the middle of a crescent kick and turns around to see who is talking.  She lets out a deep breath before grabbing a towel and wiping most of the sweat off her body.

“I say we didn’t.  Nice style.  I especially like it when you jump up and down in that particular outfit.  Good form,” mentions Tegam.

“Shut up, prankster.  I hope you didn’t come here to make useless passes at me.  So, why are you here?  Make it quick because I want to take a shower before tonight’s celebration.  And there will be one.”

“Not if it does not work out as you planned.  I honestly think you should reconsider doing the physical ability test until we dispose of the guardians.  We all went through with it, but that was when we did not have an upcoming battle,” warns Startrix.

“Basically, the two of us don’t want to go through with this if you plan to continue.  We just think it’s a good idea.  And we aren’t the only ones,” Tegam says.  Startrix just waves him off and nods to him.  His smile fades away and he just walks out of the room.

“You two don’t have to get involved if you don’t want to.  But we need to do this before we fight the guardians in order to make sure that she is ready.  The last thing I want is for Kilanus to suddenly freeze up in the middle of battle.  This should give her a taste of combat and prepare her.  Now, where is the problem with that?”  Adriana starts practicing more high kicks and punches in the air while Startrix sits down on the bed.  One of her punches goes so quickly that a wave of air shakes a nearby bouquet of tulips.

“You plan on sending her up against all of us, except for you, without the help of the death scythe.  That just seems too much.  What if she gets killed?  You know how Psylon gets in a battle.  Totally bestial and bloodthirsty.  Why would you put your daughter in that dangerous a situation?  What could possess you to do such a thing?”

Adriana stops and sits down next to her friend as she explains, “Because I have complete faith and trust in my daughter’s abilities.  She is new and improved.  Mindtrigger and I brought her mental state up to par with her physical state.  And as for the visions that drove her insane, I took care of that with the healing staff.  There is nothing to worry about anymore.  Kilanus is now fully healed and ready to defeat anything that is thrown at her.  She is our secret weapon and this is a test run.  I hate to be so technical and uncaring in that explanation, but that is the easiest way to explain it.  We need to see if she will work out for us.”

“Fine.  But I refuse to go through with this.  As does Tegam.  Both of us do not want to be involved in something that could go wrong.”

“I respect both of your decisions.  And I won’t push you two into it.  So, what do you two plan to do while this is going on?  I want you to at least be there.”

“We will.  We are going to be acting as . . . referees so to speak.  If anything looks like it is going wrong, them we will eliminate the problem.  Mostly it will be to make sure that nothing kills Kilanus, but also to keep an eye on the less controllable members of our party.”

“Good idea.”  Startrix gets up to leave while Adriana walks into the connected shower compartment.  The shower immediately gets covered in warm steam.

Adriana suddenly sticks her head out of the fogged up door and yells, “Hold on, Startrix!  I have to ask you something!”

“Yes?” says the black-armored woman from the open doorway.

“Have you had any new visions?”

“A few.  The guardians will be arriving some time tomorrow morning.  They will be in two groups.  I do not know which ones will be in which group.  But I suggest you position Psylon on the ridge above the warship.  Two of them will be going that way.  Leave two people in the warship also just in case Psylon is defeated.  Which she will be because she will not be ready for their powers.”

“Good.  Anything else?”  Adriana’s head pops back out with her hair covered in pink shampoo.

“Just that it is not Solix who will be our greatest enemy.  I saw a vision of a young man with blond hair and blue eyes.  He held the Sword of Light and the Solstar medallion.  Next to him was this shadowy figure.  There were no features that I could see on this shadow.  Something was blocking my power from seeing the true form of the other enemy.  But they will be your greatest enemies.”

“Hmmm.  The young man is most likely this new Mars guardian.  Mindtrigger did say that he would be a problem.  I won’t worry about this shadow figure until I find out more about it.  I’d much rather take care of the problems that we have right now.”  Startrix hears the water get turned off and the door is about to open when she hears Adriana mutter a quick curse.  A wet, slender arm curves around the door and starts flailing at a towel rack.

“Startrix.  I’m in a little need of some help.  Just like when I was a kid and needed your help.  Can you hand me that towel?”

“Sure.  Here.”  Startrix tosses Adriana the towel and walks out of the room.  Meanwhile, Adriana dries off and put on her usual low-cut bodysuit that fits like a second layer of skin.  She does a quick check in the mirror and heads out to the surface of Pluto.

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Thursday – A little Personal – Book Launch Day

Eternal Road – The final stop is Now Available in Paper and Kindle Formats. For the Introduction, the Kindle edition is on sale at 99¢. The Price …

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7 Tips to Handling Grief and Mourning in Fiction

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As I said, grief and mourning is a subplot in War of Nytefall: Ravenous.  It was very difficult to touch on this while the majority of the book dealt with action, humor, and Desirae’s seductiveness.  I kept having to remind myself that some characters were still getting over the losses of the previous adventure.  It made things fairly somber at times and I had to take a moment if the scenes were mixed in with the less emotionally raw ones.  So, here are some things I learned about writing about grief and mourning.

  1. Regardless of what anyone says, there is no single way to mourn.  A person’s personality and culture are be factors in this, which means it will vary even slightly between characters.  If everyone handled it the same way then it is rather unrealistic and flat.  You will have those who recover quietly and quickly by using a number of methods of acceptance.  Others will forever carry the wound that they can never fully heal.  Then, you have the hundreds of methods in the middle.  Think carrying about how each character will react to the death.
  2. Never skip or rush this part of the story.  If you say that everyone got over it between adventures then it will make the loss feel empty.  If they talk about it for one chapter and that’s it then you get the same effect.  Now, you can explain in the opening how the characters handled it if a lot of time has passed.  For example, Ravenous takes place months after Eradication.  So, there are characters who have developed their coping habits to deal with it.
  3. It can be messy.  In fact, it really should if it’s fresh.  Tears, screams, isolation, risky behavior, guilt, anger, and the whole gamut of responses that one could imagine having to such an emotional blow.  This is something that will last for longer than the funeral and the day or two after.  At least, it should.  As I said, mourning is done differently, so you could have some who do get over the shock quickly.
  4. Anger and confusion are very easy to misdirect.  Characters can be more likely to lash out for small reasons during these times.  The slightest comment from another can be taken the wrong way, so they attack and break down.  Maybe they aren’t handling things as well as others, which makes them feel like they’re the only ones who truly cared.  Loss can really fracture a group for a bit, so don’t always assume it’s going to unite your characters right away.
  5. What about the mission?  You do run into a problem if your story involves a time-sensitive adventure.  Legends of Windemere had this problem when characters died in later books.  Because of the speed of events and how things need to be completed by a specific time, heroes might not be able to mourn effectively.  They can use other defense mechanisms like deciding to survive and succeed to honor the one they lost.  It can be smaller conversations spread out as well, so they use lulls in the action to let their emotions out with those they trust.  You can also have them become more reckless or even more protective of those around them.
  6. From a ways back, I mentioned that you have to factor in the personality of a character for mourning.  Some are easier than others.  Those that are quicker to show emotions will flow onto the page in these scenes.  You may have more trouble with those who typically hide their emotions.  In fact, you may find it very confusing to have them deal with grief.  Well . . . There you go.  A character who keeps things under wraps might be unsure of how to express what they are feeling.  They can fumble an explanation, lash out, or try to imitate another.  People suffering from grief aren’t always clear and focused, so things can be awkward and uncomfortable.
  7. If you really aren’t sure how people mourn then ask friends and family.  Be clear about why you’re asking and don’t do it to someone who is currently grief-stricken.  You may be surprised how many answers you get.  Just remember to be kind and polite when broaching this sensitive topic.
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Teaser Tuesday: Gregorio’s Favorite Hobby #fantasy #vampires

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

One of my guilty pleasures in War of Nytefall is creating new trapped entrances for Gregorio Roman’s lair.  Ravenous doesn’t disappoint here either.  Every time a character has to go inside, they end up on some crazy ride or having to figure out the secret to getting through.  It’s a lot of fun and I probably spend more time on that than anything that comes afterwards.  Enjoy.

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