
Greetings Storytellers! We’re off to Part 5 of Crafting Rich Characters, the final installment of this series. In Part 1, we explored a character’s …
Crafting Rich Characters (Part 5)

Greetings Storytellers! We’re off to Part 5 of Crafting Rich Characters, the final installment of this series. In Part 1, we explored a character’s …
Crafting Rich Characters (Part 5)

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(Better believe this is about more than a man made of ashes. Pretty obvious too.)
Pieces floating off
With every gentle breeze
Disappearing in the dark
A gradual erosion
Of a body made from ash
Crinkling with every step
Causing more to disappear
Until the stiff wind comes
And takes his form away

That Time I Was Reincarnated as a Slime
Monster armies marching on a village or being intercepted in the wild is a fairly common set piece for fantasy and science fiction. From the outside, it seems like it’s a simply obstacle to create and use. Monsters rush forward, heroes stand their ground, slap in the action, and there you go. Is it really that easy? Only if you want it to be flat and boring, so let’s see some ways to spice this up.

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The Orc Disaster (That Time I was Reincarnated as a Slime)
Ever play a video game or read a story with monsters when a ‘special’ type of a common species turns up? If not then there really isn’t much more to explain. Heroes run into an elite version of a common monster and are suddenly challenged. This may be done for three reasons:
I find these monsters both fun and difficult to use. Fun because of the first two reasons above. I like throwing this kind of curveball at my heroes and audience because you never know if something is going to be off. This also expands the monsters I’ve chosen and I can flesh them out more in another story. Maybe there are more of these elite and there’s a reason they exist. That brings me to the difficult part.
While it’s very tempting to simply have this elite monster exist and blame magic, I think it’s important to at least hint at an origin. There are thousands or millions of the common versions around, so there has to be a reason for this stronger, different one. It could be a mutation, an ingested potion, a revived prehistoric version, or anything that can give an origin. The characters don’t even have to know, but can simply guess. Otherwise, this type of creature comes out as random and feels like it isn’t an organic part of the world. You can break a setting by simply dropping a variation of a common beast in there and hoping people don’t question it.
Another challenge is deciding on how different they’re going to be. Some authors go totally off-the-wall crazy with upgrades. A goblin with wings, extendable horns, lightning breath, fireball farts, a beautiful singing voice, an extra 3 inches, and hyper-regeneration is a terrifying challenge. It’s also so over-the-top for that species that it might as well be named Tryin’ Toohard. You can get further with a few or even one power as long as it’s a good one. Being more intelligent or stronger always work as a foundation. Then, you give it something that makes it really stand out and be a threat. For example, take that goblin from earlier with heightened intelligence and hyper-regeneration. Now, you have a smart and hard to kill creature that isn’t too extreme.
There are other things you can do with these. Names are optional, but can give them more weight. Prophesies about them help make them special and can act as an origin. Some can even be used as recurring enemies if they are able to survive. Making an elite monster really does open the door for expanding both their species and their own role in the overall world. It really depends on how far you want to go and if they were planned or spontaneous. Though, you can still love it so much in the moment that you want to run with it or have another show up later for revenge.
I really do need to use elite monsters more often. I’m so busy trying to show that some of the monster races aren’t as monstrous as people think that I forget about this. The goblins and giltris (lizardmen) of Windemere are practically sub-species now. So, adding an elite wouldn’t be the same as if I did it with a peryton or troll. Something for me to consider down the road.
While in DC, I saw giant pandas. Of course, I took pictures and a video. Enjoy and check out the WWF page for information on pandas. You can also adopt one. (Doing this by phone again. Hope it works.)











I’m finally back from a spring break trip. I’m also trying to write and schedule this post using my phone. I’m exhausted this Friday night, so I’m living dangerously. God, I hate these blocks. No idea how to put a video on here either. Why do I hear cheering?
Guess ever paragraph gets its own block. Goodie. Well, I’ve been in DC since Tuesday and nothing exciting happened Sunday and Monday. I didn’t get any writing done either. I tried to work on an outline only to realize it wasn’t going to happen until next weekend. So, let’s do a day-by-day.
Tuesday
Why is the video down there? Anyway, this was the drive up. We woke at 4 am and left around 6 am. It wasn’t supposed to be crazy, but there were detours. Also traffic both normal DC traffic and a jam caused by a flaming car. We got to a reserved parking space with enough time to explore for a few hours. This involved seeing the Washington Monument, Lincoln Memorial, WWII, a drained reflecting pool, Vietnam, and the White House. I should have sensed this was a preview of the walking in our future. We eventually drove to the hotel, which was . . . an experience.
Wednesday
Fixed the video! I think. So, this was the first big outing. It was also the start of using the metro system instead of driving. We went to the International Spy Museum. It was a lot of fun because you get a badge with a cover identity. You do challenges specific to your character and get to keep the badge if you want. Had a tough time doing mine while explaining things to my son. It still worked out and then a late lunch. After that was walking around. We got into the botanic garden before it closed and then rested on the steps of the Capitol Building. Then came the long walk back to the station and back to the hotel. We stopped at the Iwo Jima statue too.
Thursday
Zoo day! This was the big one because we got to see giant pandas. They’re getting their own post tomorrow. My son was very excited. He also got to see a few other new animals. Orangutans, beavers, sloth bears, alligator snapping turtles, and emperor tamarins. We were there for 6 hours and then went back to the National Mall with a mission. We were staying late to see the landmarks lit up. A lot more walking ensued to see Jefferson, MLK, FDR, and Korean War before darkness fell. We got to see Lincoln and Washington lit up. It was cool to see Lincoln in the building from far away. Then trudging back home in pain and exhausted.
Friday
This day didn’t go as smoothly as planned. I got either my son’s cold or my dad’s sinus issues, so I barely slept. Thee we plan was to check up the American and Natural History museums. Made it to the latter, but my son and I lost our energy before we could finish. There were so many tours going on that it was too loud and crowded. So, we went outside and took a seat under a tree on the National Mall. Naps were had by some since it was good weather. Then back to the hotel to rest before dinner. Lazy day was really needed.
Saturday
No idea. We drive home and saw family along the way. Nothing exciting or worth mentioning here.
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One Piece
I’m not sure how common this type of hero is outside of anime and manga. Not these days anyway since I think Inspector Clouseau may fall into this category. Still, I tend to see friendly, foolish characters leading anime/manga. You have Monkey D. Luffy, Goku, Naruto, and many others. So, what is this type?
The ‘Friendly Fool’ is exactly what it sounds. A hero who is friendly and not the sharpest knife in the spoon drawer. They don’t always understand what is being explained and tend to make a mess out of plans. Instinct drives them more than intelligence. Even with their penchant for obliviousness and ignorance, they have a presence that attracts others to their side. They’re too friendly and helpful to really hate, especially since they tend to be true friends. Since these characters aren’t bogged down by details, they can be fairly simple and that can mean a solid partnership.
On the surface, you would think these are easy characters to write. Yet, there are a few pitfalls:
This character isn’t for everyone though. You can clearly see how anyone who wants serious fiction will hate a friendly fool. They can be perceived as idiotic, immature, useless, and destructive. So, you need to think of ways to have them be balanced or maybe grow. I don’t mean evolve entirely out of the friendly fool status, but enough that readers can feel that they are changing. Otherwise, this hero can be seen as stale and held back solely for comedic purposes. This evolution can help keep readers who are more likely to turn on such characters because they’ll see that this is a story about growth. Many can handle an ‘immature’ character if that is a temporary state.
Another option is to give the character an understandable reason for being this way. It can be how they were raised or the way their minds work. These explanations can be enough for readers to accept the friendly fool. For example, I do see Darwin Slepsnor as this type of character, which does border on insulting. The reason I say it is because he is very friendly, but is rather naïve and has a different way of seeing the world. It’s a way that makes him come off as foolish and lacking common sense or logic. It is established at the start that Darwin was born this way and it’s how he’s always been. Will he grow? Yes, but it will take time and never be an evolution that takes him entirely away from the friendly fool role.
So, what do you think of the friendly fool?