Revisited: Pointy End Goes Into The Other

Posted on July 17, 2013 . . . I have no idea why I didn’t note that this was part of the ‘weapons in fiction’ series.  Took me 5 minutes to figure out where everything was after gun post.  I would say these tips still stand now though.  They’re very basic and to the point and work for just about anything.

FF9 Sword Fight

Many people believe it is that easy when it comes to swordsmanship.  You can see it in writing where characters are stabbing others with amazing precision and no resistance.  As if blocking and dodging are illegal.  There are many moves with all weapons and you should know the basics when you use them.  I’m not talking about being able to physically do them, but visualize them.  A fight scene needs to be thought out if you want it deep, extended, and interesting.  If you don’t want that then here is what you do:

“Hero stabs villain and goes to bang the damsel out of her dress.”

So, what should you do to improve your medieval weapon knowledge?  Research.  These are weapons that have been around for centuries and the most complicated weapon you might find are crossbows and siege weapons.  Even those have enough information out there for a 7th grade boy to make a basic crossbow for his Technology Education class.  I don’t recommend fiddling with it in math class and accidentally having it pointed at the teacher.

Your research tools are:

  1. Pictures to study the shape and form of the weapon.  For example, some swords are better at slashing than stabbing.  Lances can stab, but have no edges.  The length of a chain on a mourning star.  These are important facts that you should know before arming your hero.
  2. Books to tell you about the weapon’s limitations and strengths.  What is the range of a recurve bow?  How do you reload a crossbow?  How do swordsmen draw their weapons from their sheathes?  Is a rapier able to parry a saber?  Just read up on your weapons of choice, especially for main characters.
  3. Videos of weapon practice and sparring while give you an idea of how the weapon is used by the warrior.  You will see the range of the swing and how the weight of the weapon effects a person’s movement.  Don’t watch one video.  Try to find people of various skills and body types using the same weapon.
  4. If you have the opportunity to learn then take it.  Free fencing lessons at a local community building or cheap archery lessons could be used.  Hands on use will teach you so much more than only studying.  This isn’t an option for everyone, which is why #5 makes a decent substitute.
  5. Goofing off by pretending to act out your own fight scenes.  Laugh if you want, but slowly moving your arms through the moves will help you see the exchange.  I do this all the time.  Luke Callindor uses two sabers, so I have to see how a block spinning into a slash works with every enemy.  Most times, I figure it out easily while other times, Luke crashes into a shield.  You will look silly doing this, but it’s worth it to make a detailed fight scene.

All of those tools are important and you must also remember that combat is not just offense.  There is defense to be considered.  Parrying (blocking) and dodging are very important because it is the only way a character stays alive.  Otherwise, your fights scenes always boil down to first strike kills or a embarrassing series of misses until somebody connects.  Use the combination of offense and defense to make the fight more interesting.  Have a parry followed by a strike that is dodged and then another attack that is parried before a kick to the chin send the combatant to the ground.

Let’s talk a bit about character type and weapon.  Unless you’re going for physical enhancement, the body type of a character decides the weapon and fighting style.  If I gave Nimby the halfling thief a battle-axe, he wouldn’t be able to use his agility and stealth.  This goes for armors too.  Stealthy characters should not have heavy, loud armor.  A good rule is to think of the fighting style first.  If your character is a speed fighter then you need light, quick weapons.  If they’re strength then you can go heavy and bashing.  A defensive character would need a shield and could use heavier armor.  A fully offensive character would need lighter armor and lightweight weapons.

A final note on combat scenes: Even if you’re not putting the move into the writing, think of it.  Part of the combat might remain in your head, but you need it to pull the other parts together.  These are the areas where you see ‘a series of parries and strikes’ or ‘he dodged every move’.  Try to think of the actions and movements of the characters during this times.  It allows you to get the location of them in the setting, their level of fatigue, and their mentality after being on the losing side for a bit.

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Happy National Waffle Day

I don’t know.  This was the holiday that caught my eye.  I’d say everyone loves waffles, but I’ve met some who don’t.  Not sure what childhood trauma caused that, but they’re out there.  If you’re into waffles, enjoy the holiday.

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Goal Post: Summer Is Almost Over

I go back to work on Wednesday.  Yesterday was the last day with my son until Labor Day weekend.  So . . . I’m going to be restless.

The trip to the Finger Lakes was a lot of fun.  I’ll have a slideshow at the bottom with some choice photos.  The drive up was smooth and we started our trip with a walk around the lakeshore.  Playing Pokemon Go as expected.  There was a welcome center nearby, which we tried to get food at during our previous visit.  Got there too late, so we made sure to try the food this time around.  Really good for a simple place and we got to eat at a table near the lake.  Plenty of ducks and geese to watch as well as tourists.

Sunday was Rochester’s ‘Strong Museum of Play’ where they have the Toy and Video Game Halls of Fame.  This is where they have a 20 foot Donkey Kong arcade machine, which my son got to level two on.  We spent the first 3 hours in an area called ‘Level Up’ where you get a bracelet that you scan to do various game challenges.  You can scan screens to learn about the history of video games as well.  This time around, I tried harder at the challenges and did pretty good.  I screwed up a stealth challenge where you sneak through an area and have to type in a code when you get to the panel . . . I forgot my code and my son kept yelling the one for the next turn.  Oops.  An added piece of fun was they had a temporary miniature golf area, which we did and I won by a few points.  This was definitely the main event for us.

Monday wasn’t as exciting since my only real goal was to get to a Meadery and buy a few bottles.  After that, we got pizza from a local place to eat at the lake again.  Our goal for Monday was to rest in the hotel room and take a few walks.  My son got a Kindle for his birthday, which has made him enjoy reading for the first time since elementary school.  So, he took every chance to use it as well as drawing.  I used that time to read some manga I brought along and take a nap.  My ex-wife decided that my vacation with our son was the perfect time to message me about scheduling.  She set my son off as well, so there was a frustrating taint to the overall experience.  It still irks me that she couldn’t just leave us alone when she knew we were away.  You can tell since I’m not saying ‘the situation’ and am flat out stating what happened.

After the trip, we did our best to relax with movies and Pokemon Go.  My son finished his summer reading book while I did some November blog work.  Read over the Darwin & the Joy Path outline a few times.  Supposed to start writing that today, but it might be the afternoon since there’s a big Pokemon event this weekend.  Figure I’ll use the morning to participate until I run out of in-game energy to continue then come home for lunch and writing.  Maybe I’ll go back out for the last hour if I finish the section and repeat the process tomorrow.  Monday is going to be iffy as well since my son has a big appointment that I’m going to meet with him and his mom for.  So, my goal to finish the prologue and chapter 1 is going to be tough.

Okay, I may have lied a bit in the last paragraph because I write the first line of Darwin & the Joy Path.  I’d like to say it stoked the flames of creativity and got me excited to get back to writing again.  It actually triggered a minor panic attack and the idea that I’ve lost any skill I had.  The line is “A gentle chill ripples through the temple’s main chamber as the young followers of Gabriel file into the pews.”  I see no problem with the line and it fits my usual style.  Just can’t figure out why my mind spazzed out even though I wasn’t going to write another sentence.  This was just to lock in the formatting and make sure I can go to the right spot when I open the file today.  Will this anxiety continue when I get further into the story?  I hope so, especially since this is only the prologue and I won’t get to writing Darwin until Monday afternoon.

This coming week isn’t going to be filled with excitement.  School for teachers starts on Wednesday where we have meetings then and on Thursday.  I get my son for Labor Day weekend and family is coming over for an event, which means I won’t be writing again after Friday until the following weekend.  Seriously doubt I’m going to get any pages written on weekdays.  At least not until the school year progresses enough for various appointments and meetings to pass.  Just going to have to muscle through and hope I can get my mojo back.  Unless I was an untalented hack from the start, which I know a few reviews hinted at.

What are the goals of the week?

  1. Start writing Darwin & the Joy Path.
  2. 3 hours of Pokemon Go on weekend and 1 hour on weekdays for exercise.
  3. Tinker with ‘Phi Beta Files’.
  4. Return to work on Wednesday.
  5. Retain sanity while dealing with certain individuals.
  6. Puzzle time when I need a screen break.
  7. Water the lawn.
  8. Schedule some November blog posts if possible.
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Revisited: Unlimited Ammo and One-Handed Greatswords?

Originally posted on July 10th, 2013 . . . It seems this was my first big theme that carried for a while.  I’ve become a lot more lax about this topic, but not with my own writing.  Keep needing to explain why certain things happen like archers never running out of arrows or a small character wielding a giant weapon.  Probably a good thing in the long run.

Tooth Sword

We’ve all seen or read about it.  An 8-shot revolver having 10 bullets?  An enormous sword being wielded by a slender warrior?  Standing a few feet away from an explosion and not getting touched?  These can be great scenes and effects to use, but you trade believability for this.  The only way to pull it off is to make it a standard for the world and that only works with melee weapons.  Take Cloud for example.  He’s an enhanced human and in a world where other people are wielding gigantic butter knives, so he can get away with it.  If your guy is the only one who can do such an act without any explanation then you’re probably being lazy.

Next week, I’m going to post about this topic and hit the three major combat categories.  Range, melee, and bare-handed each have their own rules and research requirements.  I’m still thinking about one on explosions/lasers/magic, so we’ll see how that one goes.  For today, I’m going to do an overall.  I’ll end this entire series on a ‘How to Write Action Scenes’ list.

This might be me nit-picking or being paranoid about my own writing, but you how to know your weapons if you plan on using them.  Not down to the final part unless you’re having a character take a gun apart and explain it.  You need to know how they work, their strengths, their weaknesses, and their maintenance.  For example, The Lion, The Witch, & The Wardrobe had it right.  You have to clean off your sword.  I can’t tell you how many times I’ve read a book or seen a movie where somebody sheathes a bloody blade.  It’s horrible maintenance, at least that’s how I see it.  The blood would dry in the sheathe and the blade can rust.  As for magic blades, show some respect for them.

The key to solving this issue is research.  I’m not talking about reading fiction books and watching movies to see what has been done.  You’ll get an idea of what you can get away with like the jumping through air while firing two guns cliche.  Another favorite is the precision hurling of full-sized swords, which weren’t designed to be thrown.  A hilt is not aerodynamic.  I’m rambling, but my point here is that you should know what you’re doing with weapons and combat to make it clear and somewhat believable.  A reader/viewer might be willing to give you some leeway on a few issues, but don’t push it.

Here is what I do for my weapon research.  Remember that I work in fantasy, so this is mostly for melee weapons and bows:

  1. Research the specific blade or bow that I want to use.  By research, I mean read about their use and analyze pictures of the weapon.  Get it in your mind.  For example, I looked for sabers to get a better idea of Luke’s fighting style.
  2. See if you can find videos that show the weapon being used.  It’s not easy for melee weapons when you get to the obscure, but it really helps you get an idea of the limitations of a weapon.  For guns, it can help you see how it is held and the power of the kickback.  Is that the term?
  3. When writing an action scene and putting in the moves, feel free to stop.  Then stand up and slowly try to imitate the actions.  Go for a few moves to see where they will lead because many times you will write into a trap.  For example, your hero swings and misses, leaving his side open with no hope of recovery.  Oops.
  4. Learn it yourself.  If you have the opportunity to get some hands-on practice then you should take it.  Try archery for your bowmen and fencing for your swordsmen.  Visit a firing range if you wish.  One thing that I’ve done at times is friendly sparring with fake weapons.  There are groups for this kind of stuff and I’m sure they would let you in if you asked them to help.

Those are the big rules of mine when it comes to combat research.  As with most things, research is key.  Hopefully this series of informative posts helps people with their action scene writing.

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Poetry Day: Lust Rondelet

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(A rondelet is a 7-line poem where the first line is repeated on line 3 and 7.  The refrain lines are usually 4 syllables and the other 4 lines are 8.  These were tough, so I hope I got them right.)

Is Lust your sin?

Do you crave the touch of bare flesh?

Is Lust your sin?

You stare at others with hot thoughts.

Judging everyone by body

And how you dream they are in bed.

Is Lust your sin?

 

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Revisit: Dangers of Writing with Children

Originally posted on July 3rd, 2013, this is the companion to Monday’s post.  Clearly, I hadn’t settled completely on sticking to 7 items per list.

 

This is part 2 of possibly 2.  Last week I talked about the benefits of writing with children.  Today, I discuss the flip-side and make all of the non-parent writers breathe a sigh of relief that they don’t have to deal with this.  To make this authentic, I’m writing this while my son screams and cries a few feet away.  He refuses dinner and demands a cupcake?  Then he goes to bed hungry.  Seriously, he only wants to eat cupcakes these days.

  1. Ink Reloads–  The new ink cartridges for children are very expensive.  When you’re done writing with a child and they’re out of ink, it’s better to throw them out and buy a new one.
  2. Squirming–  The little guys and gals do not stay still when you’re writing.  Everything comes out like drunken cursive.
  3. Can’t Fit in Pocket–  They aren’t the most portable things when you need to write on the go.  The notepad models run away and the pen models leak all over the place.

What?  Wrong type of writing with children?  Fine.

  1. Theft–  Children want what you have.  This ranges from your notebook to your laptop to that Chinese hot pepper on your plate (raises hand in guilt).  If you leave your notebook and pen in reach, you’re coming back to doodles.  My son once got his hands on the manuscript for Family of the Tri-Rune.  I found drawings on the reverse side of ten pages.  I’m lucky that he knows not to draw on something with words on it, but you are probably not that lucky.
  2. Caterwauling–  Children scream, cry, yell, and make noise.  Try writing a romance scene with a tantrum erupting a few feet away.  Try writing this blog post with an epic screaming fit in the next room that includes a bathtub full of water.  Glad that bathroom can only fit one adult and he told me to get out.  Anyway, your focus is going to be shattering and splintered on a routine basis.  Accept this as part of the payoff for having sex.
  3. Editing!–  Leave your laptop unattended when you need a drink, some food, or the bathroom.  Remember to save before leaving because you’re about to return to aeaihfdoiafeaubvaejneateahufoaeyfaui.  Little fingers will find your laptop and add their own twist to your manuscript.
  4. Imitation Distraction–  Occasionally, your child might want to set up something that looks like a computer.  They’ll take the seat next to you or across from you.  Then they start typing away or playing the keyboard if that’s what they think you’re doing.  It’s an adorable event that will suck away an hour before you realize it.  They use their cuteness to full effectiveness.
  5. Stealing Snacks– A writer needs a drink and a snack on hand in case they start running out of energy.  Children love drinks and snacks.  They will get your drinks and snacks.  If you hide it, they will simply wait for you to reveal the location.  They’re natural scavengers that cannot be tamed.
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An Invitation to a Creative Call

Author and blogger Michele Lee has been hosting a monthly Zoom meeting that has been unofficially called Creative Call. The time spent is unscripted …

An Invitation to a Creative Call
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Teaser Tuesday: Monster vs Monster

War of Nytefall (CLICK ON IMAGE FOR AMAZON SITE)

This is a minor scene from War of Nytefall: Eradication, but it’s an exciting one.  I don’t use the Weapon Dragons as often as I used to, which is a shame.  Part of it being what their role was in Legends of Windemere, but you need to read that series to know what I mean.  Enjoy the battle.

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How To Clean Dirty Book Links

All our links need to work. Especially buy links. What if the link to your new release prevents your ARC readers from leaving reviews on Amazon? What…

How To Clean Dirty Book Links
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Revisited: Benefits of Writing with Children

Posted on June 26, 2013, this was apparently part of a set that I did for a few weeks.  I haven’t written about writing and parenting combined for a while.  So, it seems like a good time to repost it.  This might be where my ‘list of 7 habit’ started as well.

Today, I’m going to explain some of the benefits to writing with a toddler in the house:

  1. No Need for the Radio– Sure, the DJ is stuck on the same song for a few hours, but you save electricity by not having the radio on.  Just think of it as a type of hypnosis that allows you to zone out on your work.  Also, you can interact with the toddler from your work station by singing along.
  2. Cardio!– Being sedentary is a bad idea because your body starts getting sluggish and lock up at times.  That energetic toddler could be the key to your salvation from atrophy.  When you hit a block or a point you can pause, get up and find that toddler.  Check under tables and chairs.  Once found, tickle that child and chase him/her around for 15 minutes.  Play wrestling, horsey rides, and dancing can work too.
  3. Easy Snacks–  Kids always have food on them by the afternoon.  It can be a pain to stop writing and cook something or rummage through the cupboards.  Locate that toddler and teach him/her about sharing whatever snack they have.  If they snack is gone, but there are remnants then subtly get those.  For example, kiss that pudding splotch on their cheek for a quick taste.  Important note: DO NOT eat your child if they’re covered in ice cream.
  4. Thrilling Conversations–  If you find yourself in an author’s bind then try talking it out with the child.  You would be surprised how good a listener a toddler can be.  They might even have some amazing insight.  Not sure how to kill off your character’s girlfriend?  Ask a toddler.  It will be one of the most unique death scenes in the history of literature.
  5. Set an Example–  Having a child can be very motivating in terms of reaching for your dreams.  When you say ‘shoot for your dream’ or ‘you can do anything you put your mind to’, there will be some weight behind those words.  Your child won’t look at you like an over-priced Hallmark card when they’re older and struggling to figure out what to do with their own life.
  6. Maintain an Acute Sense of Hearing–  You work in one area while they’re on the go.  It isn’t like you can follow them while typing on a computer or writing.  Some of us get motion sickness.  So, your hearing becomes your most important sense.  This can help you write scenes where the hero has to work by sound or they’re on edge.  The distant clanging of a pot or the subtle sound of the bathroom door closing can make you nearly superhuman in the auditory department.  Also, the lack of noise helps build tension and atmosphere in both parenthood and writing.
  7. Hugs!–  You’re in an emotional scene.  It’s taking its toll on you and you’re tearing up whether you like it or not.  Maybe it’s a scene of rage and you’re feeling your temperature rise.  All of a sudden, you feel tiny arms wrap around your side and here ‘I have daddy!’ (Mommy if that’s your role.)  Everything washes away and you smile at the little mini-you that simply wanted a hug.  Better than energy drinks and coffee.  Also, short-lived as the toddler climbs into your lap and proceeds to use your laptop like a piano that owes him/her money.
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