Poetry Day: Society of Absent Parents

(This one hits home since I work in a school.  I know there are parents who simply don’t try to be there for their kids.  Yet, I feel like the majority are those who wish they could be there, but can’t for a variety of reasons.  I know older generations will say ‘make time’ or ‘you need to try harder’.  It’s a different world than even when I was raised.  Both parents may need to work more to make ends meet, so the age of the stay-at-home is no longer upon us.  There are so many errands and chores that need to get done because everyone is busy during the day.  Kids have homework, so they might be too busy.  That’s if there isn’t a divorce with custody schedule involved, which can, at best, halve a parent’s time.  My point is that there are times where I feel like we built a society where we want people to have kids, but not to spend time raising them.  Then, we shame parents when their kids act out and they have no idea what’s going on when the reality is that they are fighting to provide food and shelter for that child.)

How do we raise a child

When we are never there

Slaves to a society of unending need

Forced to toil and exhaust

Sacrificing time as family

Away from our progeny

Who spend most days with strangers

Unaware of the reasons

Only aware of the absence

Growing up without true guidance

From those that love them most

We wonder how so many stray

To the darkness of our world

How would they know any different

When their guides are forced away

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Revisit: What Do You Look For in a Sequel?

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(Originally posted July 30, 2013.  I really wasn’t giving any breaks between posts back then, which is a shame.  I should have spread these out.  It looks like I did these posts to promote Prodigy of Rainbow Tower.  So, they’re geared primarily towards that.)

So this is the big question that actually started my idea for these types of posts.  Since Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower is a sequel, I’m really curious to see what people say.

Personally, I like consistency and growth.  The characters from the earlier books have to act like they did before, but change as the story progresses.  A sudden change of personality between books is jarring to me and makes the early book feel unconnected.  It’s essential to make sure your books feel connected if they hold the same characters and places.

I also look for continuity and it’s something I worry about a lot in my own books.  For example, I switched Luke Callindor’s eye color in the second book and it took me 3 editing runs to realize it.  He has green eyes and I made him blue.  Though, I’m looking into a way to change that since I realized two other champions have green.  Can’t do it until the sixth when something happens to him.  That’s a story for next year if things keep going smoothly.

The third thing I like in a sequel are new characters and locations.  Staying in the same place gets boring and you need fresh voices.  Without these things, you’re probably going to rehash the first story.  For locations, it can make sense to stay in the same place if the plot is about defending a central location.  Still, show different areas of that place or have a small excursion to the surrounding region.  Otherwise, it feels like the author has no depth to the world.

So, what do you look for in a sequel?  What’s the best and worst sequel you’ve ever seen or read?

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Teaser Tuesday: Irritating Pest

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

(A small part of the final battle, which shows the Baron in some type of action.  I really didn’t use a lot of teasers with him fighting.  Read the rest of Warlord of the Forgotten Age for 99 cents!)

A shadow passes over the Baron as he jumps over a street and gently lands on the side of a building. The immortal watches the griffin and Dariana swing back around, the pair picking up speed to ram him. Drawing an icy cutlass from behind his back, he prepares to meet the reckless charge. When he senses something is wrong, the Baron leaps up to the roof and watches the beast crash through a window. He whirls around to slash at Dariana, the telepath having been waiting above the whole time. The goading smile fades from the warlord’s face when he sees that his daughter is blocking his arm with her own regenerated limb. She throws a punch that he moves to slash with a second cutlass, but the limb circles around the blade and strikes him in the face. Pushing his daughter back, the Baron gets away from the edge and receives several more blows to the face before he gets out of range. He hears a faint thud behind him and turns enough to parry Luke’s sabers, the weapons dripping with pink energy.

“Both of you must be proud to have me cornered like this,” the Baron says while kicking the half-elf away. He yanks his leg back to avoid losing it, but the movement leaves him open for a punch that knocks him onto another rooftop. “I am curious to learn how you recovered your arms so quickly. Your brother had his time magic and I was once a god, but you have never had the ability to heal such injuries without help. Did that mercenary live long enough to use his power on you?”

“He’s still alive and will face you again soon enough,” Dariana replies as she rushes forward. Ducking under the cutlasses, she elbows her father in the stomach and sends him skidding back. “All of us know that this is our final battle. We’re not happy about dying, but we’re prepared for it. As long as you die with us.”

“I’d much rather kill him and live a lot longer,” Luke chimes in with a smirk. The cutlasses and his sabers rapidly clang together, neither swordsman giving ground. “You’re not that tough without your favorite sword and armor. Honestly, I’m starting to wonder what all of the fuss was about. The only reason you’re lasting so long is because we keep getting separated, which is bound to change at some point. At least your son made us afraid when we fought him. Then again, he was active in Windemere instead of playing with demons and twiddling his thumbs for centuries.”

“Again, trying to anger me will-” the Baron starts to say before he receives another shot to the mouth. Spitting out a tooth, he knocks Luke’s sabers aside and kicks with enough force to knock the champion across the street. “All you have are distractions and tricks. I look one way and get attacked from another. This is why I toy with you. I want this battle to last until you stop coming at me with childish games.”

Dariana strikes her father from behind, the flying tackle sending both immortals off the rooftop. She flips in midair and drives the Baron into the pavement with her feet before leaping away from his quick slashes. Rising out of the rubble and wiping stone chips off his shirt, the warlord watches his daughter come at him again. Her punch passes through his cutlasses to strike his chin and knock him through a store window. Instead of returning to the fight, the Baron blasts the rear wall with a fireball and retreats down the other street. He waves over his shoulder as Dariana and Luke give chase, the two champions sticking to the rooftops. Throwing daggers and crossbow bolts repeatedly fly from his hands, the conjured projectiles keeping his pursuers at bay. It is only when he comes to a large intersection that the warlord stops and calmly uses an enchanted comb get some dirt out of his beard.

The instant the champions land on the ground, the Baron appears behind them and slams the pair together. With a flick of his wrist, he hurls Luke into a building that collapses on top of the forest tracker. Focusing on his daughter, the warlord uses a staff to jab at her stomach and block her attacks with wild spins. Thrusting the weapon at her face, he fights to ignore her incoming fists and turns his attack into a sweep. Breaking her telepathic control, the Baron watches her arms vanish and swings his staff to knock her kick away. Without her illusionary limbs, Dariana is easier to handle, but she is still able to land a few echoing blows that leaving her father’s torso heavily bruised. Transforming his weapon into a halberd, he charges and comes dangerously close to gutting his daughter. Her incredible reflexes and centuries of training help her rapidly kick the long blade away while backing up, but she is eventually cornered against an overturned cart.

“That was an excellent strategy,” the Baron declares before stabbing backwards. He frowns at how Luke blocks the heavy weapon, but the half-elf is unable to defend against the street turning to mud beneath his feet. “You have become a true nuisance. What will it take to make you stay down?”

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An Oft Overlooked Research Technique

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An Oft Overlooked Research Technique
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Revisit: What Do You Look For in Demons?

Demon Slayer

(Originally posted on July 26, 2013.  Pretty much self-explanatory since I played with demons all the time in my stories.)

Traditionally, demons are the bad guys.  The monsters and eaters of human.  There has been a slight change with characters like Inuyasha and Etrigan where circumstances have made the demon a hero.  Typically, this is done with half-breeds and those that are bound to a heroic human.  I’m talking fictional literary demon and not the religious type of demon.

Demons turn up a few times in Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower.  Not just the Hellfire Elf, but several different types.  You get a sense of demon society through one of them.  That’s something came out randomly that I kept.  Demons are always these monstrous, evil beings with nothing really behind them.  You get the occasional world-domination or birth my child demons, but most of them are mindless creatures of destruction. Here the demons have a society that I plan on exploring as my various series progress.  Will I make a demonic hero?  I have a few planned including one or two that are full-blooded demons that make the conscious decision to fight for good.  Demons can have honor too.

This has led to me getting easily bored with demons in stories.  I don’t like the pure evil creature path that they’re given.  It lacks depth and means they’re only useful for sudden fights or possession scenes.  Only so much you can do with an exorcism scene.  I hate to say that I don’t like demons in stories.  Probably closer to say that I want them to get more depth and versatility.  After all, I’ve read and seen stories where angels are the bad guys and fall from grace.  Why can’t a demon rise to heroism?

So, what do you look for in your fictional demons?  If you don’t typically read such books, what would you want to see when such creatures are used?

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The Cute, Adorable Tasmanian Devil

Been meaning to do a post about the Tasmanian Devil for a long time.  Kept slipping my mind when I went to choose an animal . . . until now.

Of course, my original introduction to this animal was the Looney Tune character, so I expected a large, spinning beast.  Then, I watched a show on Australian animals (at least once a week) and saw what they really were.  Yes, I know they are found on Tasmania and not Australia, but they used to be there and the show did say their current homeland.  I was still in elementary school at the time, so I didn’t care because ‘cool animal’.

Now, Tasmanian Devils are listed as endangered.  They were originally threatened by humans hunting them for food, fur, and protect livestock.  They were protected in 1941, but occasionally permits for hunting and poisoning came about with a lot of pushback from scientists.  Populations would increase then decrease due to food scarcity and overpopulation.  At one point, it was stated that they carried a parasite that could transfer to humans, but it turned out it couldn’t.  People killed them anyway.  You had them getting hit by cars too, but the biggest threat right now is: DFT.

DFT stands for Devil Facial Tumor Disease and it is exactly what you think it is.  The tumors form in and around the mouth, which makes it hard to hunt and eat.  I couldn’t find exact estimates, but they ranged from 20-80% of the current population decline being caused by this.  I think the difference depended on the area though.  There is work being done to find a cure.

Here are some Tasmanian Devil facts:

  • It is the largest carnivorous marsupial since the thylacine went extinct.
  • Males are larger at about 36 inches long (includes tail) while females are around 31.6 inches.
  • Front feet have 5 toes with one to the side to help with grabbing while the hind feet have 4 toes.
  • They eat carrion more than live prey.
  • Being opportunistic eaters, they will go after just about anything including small kangaroos.
  • Tasmanian Devils reach maturity at 2 years.
  • Gestation is 21 days and gives birth to 20-30 joeys.  Female only has 4 nipples, so only the 4 who make it there survive.
  • They scream and growl, which supposedly earned them the ‘devil’ moniker.
  • They have the strongest bite strength of any mammal.  They can crush bone and even bite through metal to escape traps.
  • Tasmanian Devils can open their jaws 80 degrees.
  • They will sleep inside carrion in order to eat as soon as they wake up.  Nobody said they were sanitary.
  • Their sense of smell is strong enough for them to find a buried corpse.
  • They are nocturnal.

Time for pictures and videos:

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Goal Post: One Chapter Down . . . That’s It

The title says it all.  I did manager to write chapter 2 of Darwin & the Joy Path.  A secret didn’t last long because I realized how honest some characters are.  Still, I got the action going and kind of got back into the swing of things.  Being able to write two sections a day while still doing Pokemon, shopping, and resting was an accomplishment.  Don’t know how often I can repeat that, but it was nice for a bit.  Next chance to do so will be next weekend where there isn’t a lot of Pokemon Go happening.  Anyway, I’ll take this small victory.

I did hope to write more during the week, but I would have only had Wednesday evening to get anything done.  Monday and Thursday had evening school meetings for my son while he was with me on Tuesday.  Been doing the cooking as well, which is taxing because I keep picking time-consuming dishes.  Sloppy Joe, Chicken Lo Mein, and Asian burgers are on the list.  Pizza muffins tomorrow are the easiest, but I have to prep for other dishes as well.  I’ll learn to balance things one day.

This was a full week of work too, which meant a full week of school for our kids.  Each day had rough patches, which we made it through.  It’s still exhausting and having to go from that to interacting with my ex-wife wasn’t doing me any favors.  My anxiety was running high and my sleep was suffering.  I bought some ashwagandha chews, but I think they messed up my stomach.  To be fair, it was already having trouble due to a diet change with more yogurt and fiber.  I’m surprised I made it to the end with my innards intact considering I kept have gut spasms. Muscled through them until I could lie down and rest enough for things to settle.

My son told me what he wants to be for Halloween too.  So, we’re going to see if we can gather the pieces.  This won’t be a sewing challenge like last year.  Instead, I’m going to have to figure out how to use this cosplay foam stuff to craft a special pirate hat.  The other props should be easy compared to that.  Might have to use a hot glue gun this time, which makes me nervous.  Mostly because I worry about it looking like a mess.  My son suggested I paint the original pirate hat, but I know that will look terrible.  Trying not to say who it is, but it’s what one call a gender-bend.  The real character is female and he wants me to make him a male version.  Kid can’t give me an easy project.

I’m still mentally tinkering with the thief guild rivalry story when I’m driving.  At least when I’m not stressing over my life.  I’m still liking the overall quest being that the groups want to find a long-lost vault.  The teams are still on the same scale as the ‘Ocean Eleven’ movies, which I’m not sure is a good or bad thing.  I considered having the rival team really be one person whose teammates are all summons.  Maybe have the leader be a soul thief?  That sounds too evil since I’m not sure if I want them or another entity to be the main villain.  I’m torn here because I do the ‘surprise villain’ in a series at least twice from what I remember.   I could make it clear that the main villain is this other person or have it be various bad guys.  If only I had the time to sit down and really give this some thought or find a person I could talk to about this.  Another option is having it be a new guild made from those the bigger one screwed over instead of them be two groups under the same roof.  Put them in Gaia, which is difficult for any guild to survive in, and I could have a decent plan.  Maybe a political leader lets this new guild be made because they have issues with the other one?  That could be fun.

This week isn’t going to give me much quiet time to figure any of this out.  There’s an event at my school on Wednesday that I have to go to.  Thursdays are going to be exhausting, so I’ll be getting home with the energy of a snail.  I can probably get another chapter done over the weekend though.  There’s a small chance that I can get to work early and tinker with other ideas.  Lately, I’ve been taking my time going on and reading between conversations.  Funny thing is that all of my son’s days off from school are on my days or are Jewish holidays.  Think the first time we have days off and he’s not with me is around Thanksgiving.  Not going to complain at all.  Maybe I’ll do some notebook work during the times he’s reading, drawing, or hanging with friends.

Guess this was a mild week as far as what I could share on the blog.  I did come up with topics for December, which I’ll start preparing.  Let’s dive into the goals:

  1. Spend time with son.
  2. Cook dinners.
  3. Prepare blog posts when possible.
  4. Get extra sleep.
  5. Notebook work if possible.
  6. Darwin & the Joy Path chapter 3 work next weekend.
  7. School event.
  8. Start work on son’s Halloween costume.
  9. Lego building when I need a screen break.
  10. Drink water to stave off the IBS attacks.
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Revisit: What Do You Look For in a Villain?

Joker from DC and Loki from Marvel (Yahoo Image Search)

(Originally posted on July 29, 2013.  I still stand by this, but I definitely wrote the post before I every put Stephen Kernaghan on paper.  He kind of stands out as the true monster of my villain gallery.  Pretty sure I revisit this from time to time with most people saying they want ‘misunderstood’ villains or those with some humanity.)

Say what you want about Disney, but they always have great villains.  Scar, Jafar, Hades, and Maleficent are only a few and most people can quickly rattle off most of them.  The heroes are remembered easily because their names are in the title.  The villains have to be memorable for being evil and that’s always a challenge.

As a writer, I try to put a bit of humanity into my villains.  That spark that shows they aren’t 100% evil and monstrous.  Even my demons and vampires have some type of human flaw.  This isn’t to say the full monster villain is worthless because it depends on the story.  If you need a rampaging destroyer then giving him a sense of doubt might not be a good idea.  A love of kittens would make him seem like a joke.  Still, your main villains typically require intelligence and cruelty with something that can hook the reader into their story.

A way that I once looked at it is that the hero and the villain are competing for my attention when reading.  Am I more interested in the hero’s tale or the villain’s tale?  I always want to have moments where I’m fascinated by the villain and part of me believes he or she will succeed.  This is why I think it’s more of a challenge to write a villain, but it’s a lot more fun because they can do whatever they want at times.  Burn that village to the ground?  No problem.  Punt baby elves into a dragon’s mouth?  You got it.  Cheat on the final test?  Sure if that’s the story you’re going for.

I can’t actually pinpoint a specific villain type that I like, but I know my one requirement.  I need my villains to be entertaining.  I don’t even need depth because the rampager can be entertaining if done correctly. Definitely all in the writing and it’s more important for villains than heroes because villains are the reason the story is happening.  Without them, the hero has nothing to go up against.

So, what do you look for in your villains?

 

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Poetry Day: Slamming Doors

Anger from Inside Out

(I was iffy on posting this considering it’s 9/11, but maybe this can have some connection.  To be fair, this day doesn’t get as much special attention as it once did.  I guess it’s fallen into history like Pearl Harbor.  People know about it, but 9/11 feels like a distant memory.  Think it’s rough out there then imagine what it’s like to be in a school where none of the students were alive during the event, so they only know it from history classes.  Anyway, the poem.  I also went out of alphabetical order because there were 3 poems in a row that fit October much better.)

Why do they slam the door
When rage is not at hand
A boom that shakes the house
And reveals where they have gone

 

I have examined these doors
They work with ease and grace
No fight to keep them closed
Or a failure of the latch

 

I see dents from their abuse
On door’s edge and on the frame
These portals take a beating
With no reason for the pain

 

I ask why they slam the doors
Which they deny they ever do
Maybe it is the only way they know
A gentle closing beyond their grasp

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Revisit: What Do You Look For in Magic?

Vivi from FF9

(Originally posted on July 24, 2013.  My thoughts did change a bit on this one.  Mostly, I’m better about spells being broken or misfired by a sneeze or distraction.  Still not a fan of it happening a lot.  It really needs a good plot reason or at least a major consequence.  Otherwise, it’s just silly.)

Magic is a big a part of many fantasy books.  From Gandalf the Grey of Tolkien to Spellfire of Forgotten Realms, magic is a staple.  Sometimes the magic is nothing more than a few mystical creatures and other times it comes in the form of mental manipulation.  For example, there is no magic in the Ranger’s Apprentice series.  There is mention of mind manipulation, which is the closest they come to it.  So it is entirely possible to have a very low magic world to the point where the reader doesn’t even realize magic is there.

Personally, I like reading about magic with wizard duels and combat spells.  So much can  be done with magic as long as you stick to the rules that you make.  That’s one of my pet peeves when it comes to magic.  You have to stay within your own rules or given an explanation of why a rule is being broken.  For example, I have it that magic in Windemere is the manipulation of auras.  To do so, you use gestures, words, and/or ingredients for your spells. Nyx and Trinity don’t need any of that, so a reason is going to be needed.  I can’t say that here because it’s a spoiler.

That’s another thing that I look for in a magic system.  Details are fine, but I prefer when a magic system isn’t one where a spell can get broken by a sneeze.  I’ve read books where a spell is undone because somebody yelled at the wizard.  I wonder why anybody would want to learn magic if their concentration is so terrible.  Even the big, powerful wizards were undone by a stumble of words.  If magic is so dangerous then the people using it really need to have incredible focus and care.  The ‘spell went wrong’ isn’t a terrible idea, but seeing it more than once in the same book is ugh worthy.

So, what do people look for in fantasy book magic?

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