2017 Top 5: #4- Why Not Write About the Writing Craft?

This post originally went live on August 21.

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Now, I’ve been asked a few times why I don’t write much about the writing craft.  I probably have done more than I realize over the years.  Mostly, I write about character and world-building things since those are my favorite topics.  Haven’t gone into much with the marketing and Amazon side.  One reason for the later is because I’ve seen tons of authors tackle the challenge of explaining Amazon and most of them disappeared.  There’s a real obsession with figuring out the tricks and hidden workings, but those things probably change every month.  Besides, hard to write a new book or promote a published one if you’re spending most of your time analyzing Amazon.

There are a few reasons that I don’t really do a lot of craft-based posts:

  1. I still have trouble calling myself an expert, which is why most of my advice has a warning of ‘this is just me’.  There have been many times that another author and I have used a marketing platform or the same writing trick.  Yet, one fails and the other succeeds.  So, I only know what works for me and I’d hate to jump on a soapbox to declare my knowledge then have people fail.  I’ll write about a topic if somebody asks or I’ve figured something out, but I don’t have a lot of confidence here.
  2. I don’t think I write in a common enough style to give advice to other authors.  Present tense third person is what I’m most comfortable with, but it means various tools don’t work for me.  For example, you can’t reveal the past of a city or person in narration without it coming off very awkward.  Conversations are better for information here, which I’ve been told to stop and move to narration because a few past tense authors and readers don’t acknowledge this.  Anyway, I can explain my style and that’s pretty much where I stop because the rest is fairly basic like commas and foreshadowing.
  3. Not even sure what to talk about.  This should probably be #1, but I can never tell what’s writing craft and what isn’t.  Doesn’t say much about me as an author, I guess.  The thing is that all of the writing classes and groups that I got involved in were about reading and reviewing.  I haven’t been involved in the meat and structure of writing since high school.  There were discussions about character development and story structure in college, but I remember the debates more.  Well, the thing I remember most is when an author had to sit there quietly while people ripped apart your work in the name of constructive criticism.  I always thought this was more to teach people how to handle negative reviews than improve, but that’s just me.  The point is that I spent more time fine-tuning my own style than going over the craft basics.
  4. The times I ask for topic ideas, I get requests to write about world-building, specific characters, present tense writing, or fantasy.  So, I believe that most people who follow this blog only want to hear about my genre and writings.  I’ve been doing that for so long that I can’t even remember what I have and haven’t touched on.

Maybe I’ll figure out a few craft posts in the future, but that could be by accident.  So, I’ll open the floor to authors and readers.  What is the one piece of writing craft that you would like to read about?  Perhaps you’ll see a comment asking about something that you know about, so interact.  Let’s just have fun.

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Characters of Windemere Art by Kayla Matt

Here’s another set of characters from Legends of Windemere drawn by Kayla Matt.  I put them in a slideshow for space and hope everyone enjoys.

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2017 Top 5: #5- Short Stories vs Novels: A Taste of Both Worlds

(This whole thing was a lot more difficult than I realized it would be.  A lot of the top 5 ended up being promos that didn’t work any more.  So, I stuck with things that were topics for conversation and posted originally in 2017.  This was off views.)

This post originally went live on July 24th.

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With The Life & Times of Ichabod Brooks, I’ve stepped more into short stories than I did before.  Normally, I’m more of a novelist with a love of series as you can tell from Legends of Windemere.  I dabbled a bit because you can’t get away with full-length novels in English classes.  You have to keep things short and tight since there are multiple students to grade.  Now, would I say one is better than the other?  No because they each have their own strengths and weakness.  Here are some from my own experience, which I’ll admit is limited.

Short Stories

Pro–  Takes less time to outline, write, and edit.  This makes it a great project when I have limited time and want to flex the imagination.

Con– Too many plot twists can ruin it because of the short length.  I love throwing curve balls and surprises, but I can only do 1-2 in a short story.  Otherwise, the plot collapses and the effect of the twists disappears.

Pro–  Helps focus on one character that might be overshadowed in a longer work.  The limited time and page amount means I can’t wander off to investigate another character or a fleeting idea.  The protagonists need to remain the focus.

Con–  A single short story is hard to rationalize for buying cover art and publishing.  This is more about the return since a single short story shouldn’t really be priced higher than 99 cents.  You won’t make your money back here.  Doing a collection can help, but then you’re pricing higher.

Pro–  You can experiment with short stories more than in a novel.  I can test out monsters, traps, style changes, and other things that I’m not sure about for a novel.  Some of these require that the short story be in the same world as the novels though.

Con– Limited page amount means my imagination can work against me.  My typical desire to follow every rabbit hole and see how the network connects could turn a short story into a messy novel.  So, I have to rein myself in at times.

Pro– Readers need less time to read the book.  Self-explanatory.

Novels

Pro–  More space for developing characters and world-building.  This is the big one for me because I love this part of writing.  Short stories can do this if you only have one protagonist to work with, but a group can flourish better in a bigger work.

Con– Takes longer to outline, write, and edit.  You can’t just do a novel on a whim even if you’re a pantser.  It takes more time that you have to carve out and I’m talking more than a 15-30 minute period.  Novels require longer stretches of time and a more winding continuity that you have to keep in mind.  The more breaks, the higher the chance of derailing.

Pro–  You can let your imagination run wild at times because you aren’t trying to keep the story in a small page amount.  Adding 15 pages because you found a spot where the hero can deal with a side problem that connects to the plot is okay.  You don’t have to feel like you’re casting good ideas aside and hoping something else will come along to absorb them.

Con–  The longer length means you have a higher chance of making a mistake.  The wide and expansive nature of a novel requires that the author remembering everything that happened previously.  Even a stand-alone needs you to connect the events of Chapter 12 to Chapter 1 without leaving any gaps.  It’s easy to get lost in your own ideas as you travel along the path.

Pro– You can pull more excerpts, quotes, and topics for promotions.  There is less of a worry about spoilers since you have more to work with.  Even if something slips out, there’s a higher chance of missing context turning it into a mystery.  You can stretch out a novel’s promotion for a lot longer than a short story.

Con–  Just as the author needs time to write it, the readers need to invest more time in a novel than a short story.  Attention spans are shorter these days and it seems like everybody is wishing they had more time to read.  So they gravitate toward short stories and graphic novels.

Pro–  You can have a more winding character and plot development since you have more time.  A short story can only have so many rises and dips, but a novel is able to have as many as are needed.  For example, a hero in a short story getting betrayed halfway through probably won’t have much time to escape, train, and/or get revenge as well as finish the original quest.  It can feel rushed while a novel can show it all at a slower pace.

Final Thoughts

I’ve found that I do prefer novels for some ideas and that’s my more comfortable wheelhouse.  Yet, I also like the use of short stories in a compilation format.  I’m looking at a few series that were giving me problems and putting them in a short story compilation style.  I think it helps a lot with series that aren’t as endgame-focused as Legends of Windemere.  Characters who are going about their business being heroes can be put in a book where every short story is a new enemy to fight.  Hopefully, this is the key to solving my superhero problem and giving Ichabod Brooks a few more outings.

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Dreams of Hope and Fret

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From days of cribs
And bottled dining
We are told about our dreams
Hold them tight
Pursue them fast
Let them fly among the clouds
They greet you in bed
And linger in the morn
Pleasant ghosts throughout the day
Some take you far
Others soothe your soul
Until your world begins to change
Dreams go dark
Or never come
Your mind is burdened by the task
Stress of life
With pressure of survival
The dragons and elves have gone away
Youth allows joy
Age whittles at your soul
Until dreams are painful shards of glass

(Going to be out of it today and maybe for a few days.  Early wake up by a crying child that resulted in an ER visit because no doctors or clinics were open.  So, I’ll apologize for long delays in responses or incoherent responses.)

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Shadows of Birds – Guest Post by Felicity Sidnell Reid…

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Lullaby for a boy buried 7,500 years ago

at L’Anse Amour, Labrador

“Lay his fragile flute, my dears,

Safely wrapped in woven scraps,

Near his fingers, stilled at last.

Fever’s gone and peace returns,

Innocence replaces pain,

Once again my eyes can see

The buoyant youth, he left behind.”

Grief has frozen mother’s arms

About his body, cold as stone

Pushed and pulled by tidal waves.

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Years of sea cold lullabies

Whispered in his salty ears,

Once his life had slipped away.

He’d been young, a traveler,

Loved companion at the hearth,

Where, one day, he took a bone,

The hollow shaft of some great gull

And whittled it into a flute.

Then wild music rocked the waves

And blew among the flocks of birds.

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Great auks nested there, and terns

Spun in winds above the beach.

Out at sea the supple seals

Tossed their heads above…

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For the Love of Everything, I Need Whiskey

Here is kind of how my week went:

This week was a procession of bad events.  I wish I could say otherwise, but it was really one of those weeks where I wondered if 2017 told 2018 to finish the job.  Barely slept because of the stress and didn’t get very far with Quest of the Broken-Hearted.  I’m going to do this on a day-by-day to give people an overview.

Sunday

We made a last minute decision to see ‘Paddington 2’.  I checked the theater and it had a lot of empty seats.  15 minutes later, we’re there and seeing that it’s sold out.  Had to rush to another theater for a showing and we made it by the skin of our teeth.  Our necks weren’t really thrilled with the seats, but we avoided a tantrum.  The rest of the day was a blur and I was wrangled into playing ‘Lego Batman’ with the munchkin.  I was exhausted, but figured that was the only wrinkle of the week.

Monday

Martin Luther King Jr. Day, which saw my son in a martial arts camp in the morning.  He got to break his first board and was very proud.  That afternoon he began coughing and showing signs of a cold.  I let him rest and it was going smoothly until we tried ‘Lego Batman’ again.  The game froze and he didn’t take it well, especially since this was so late in the day that we couldn’t try again.  Then something happened at night that soured the day.  Unfortunately, this is the event that I can’t go into.  Just trust me when I say it should have been seen as an omen.

Tuesday

First day without the morning bus and I took the kid to school.  He had a bad cough, but I figured he’d be okay.  There wasn’t a fever . . . until noon and I had to get him.  One doctor’s visit later, I learned he had the common cold and he couldn’t go in the next day because he needs to fever free for 24 hours.  Not like I had just started writing a new book or anything.  At least nothing else . . . Wife in a car accident?  She’s okay and the car can be driven.  I still have a bad feeling here.

Wednesday

The kid is home!  My sanity is gone!  Questions, Legos, more questions, fighting food, refusing to wear layers in the cold house, demanding I play certain songs, and all while I was trying to write at the table.  For the last time, the band is ‘Portugal. The Man’ and not ‘Portugal of Man’.  No, I don’t know where the woman who sings ‘Best Friend’ is at this very moment.  Yes, ‘Red Hot Chili Peppers’ is an old band.  Stop singing the ‘Kars for Kids’ jingle!

Thursday

Kid is going to school while my wife brings her car into the body shop.  Things are looking up.  Why did my passenger side door handle snap off in my hand?  No, daddy’s car doesn’t have to go to the garage.  Stop laughing.  Take the part to grandma and let her know I’ll talk to grandpa when I get home.  Fine, keep laughing, but get in the car.  Getting some writing done and . . . problems with the car repair payment.  Can’t go into the details on my blog, but I can try to talk about it?  Sure, I’ll spend my weekend looking stuff up.  Do we have it settled?  Great.  Nope, not settled.  Maybe settled.  Another call tomorrow morning to see what’s going on.

Friday

Well, that call didn’t settle things.  Oh, it did.  The next one didn’t.  Time to get the wife to work and then the kid to school.  Okay, I’ll meet with his teacher, but I’d like to know what I’m walking into.  No reply, but here I am.  He’s doing great in math and we want to try him in the next class size?  I’m all for it and he seems happy about the chance.  Dunkin Donuts and home to get some writing done.  The car thing is fixed?  Not fixed.  Why does this keep changing!?  Oh dear god, why is there no whiskey in the house?  I think I’m done with writing.  2 chapters done instead of 4, which is disappointing.  Just let me rest on the weekend and I’m eating ‘Lego Batman’ if I’m asked about it again.  Don’t care of PS2 games are toxic or sharp.  Is the car thing really settled now?

Sum Up

Yeah, that might have gotten away from me as I let the chaos take over.  It’s just been a roller coaster this week and I’m annoyed that I didn’t get much done.  The War of Nytefall profiles are done and I got some posts for March scheduled, but my main goal was really Quest of the Broken-Hearted.  I don’t think I succeeded on that one because I got half of what I aimed for.  My hope is to getting further next week and nothing disastrous happens.  That’s really it.  I’m tired and sore.  Enjoy your weekend.

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