A Week That Didn’t Go As Planned

The week before I got 5 chapters of War of Nytefall: Rivalry done.  This week, I got 3 done, which has me worried.  The last full day of school is a few weeks away and then some half-days with an hour day at the end.  I only have 9 chapters to go, but that still feels like I’ll be cutting things close.  Memorial Day was a planned day off, but the weekend before didn’t go very well.  I got one section done overall, which didn’t counter losing a whole day and then I had some schedule cannonballs strike home.  This stirred a few nasty anxiety attacks that slowed me down.  My hope is to get one chapter done before Monday, but I’m already hearing grumbling about me being anti-social.

Being a full-time author makes people think I have all the time in the world to get my books done.  Yet, I have other things like getting someone ready for school, grocery shopping, and various appointments.  This week had the wrinkle of something falling off my wife’s car.  Don’t worry because it was only a protective cover for part of the muffler or something.  The real problem was finding out that the brake system was on the verge of putting in for retirement.  That was money and required driving her to work then my son to school, so I was sprinting through my mornings.  Thankfully, this was solved before Friday, which had a school drive rainstorm.

I can’t even say a morning one because it hit about 30 minutes before we had to leave with enough force to flood some of the roads and was over by the time I was nearly home.  By the way, I mean flooded to the point where I was praying for my car not to stall and wishing I had two of every animal to get a little divine protection.  The fun part was my son and I getting out of the car to find ourselves in ankle-high water.  I was smart though and packed extra shoes and socks for him . . . I had squishing feet during the drive home that involved a lot of detours caused by cars that were doubling as buoys.  Have to admit, it made for an amusing story.  Don’t worry though because Friday was a day where nothing went write including the homemade pizza I made that was sickeningly sweet.  You know it’s bad when pizza turns on you.

On the plus side of things, the cover for Quest of the Brokenhearted will be revealed tomorrow.  It was done by Sean Harrington who was recommended by C.S. Boyack and Lisa Burton.  Going to say right now that I love the cover because it really captures the story and the influence.  Anyone who has played a certain video game series might recognize it.  I wanted to do an homage since it was a big inspiration to the structure of the story and it hits the target perfectly.  This book is going to be released July 2nd barring anything going wrong with a trip I’m taking that weekend.  My plan is to set it all up for publishing and then hit publish before I head home.  As usual, volunteers are always welcomed.  Not sure if a standard blog post or specialized ones will work.  The latter would be ones that are sent out a day or two after the debut.  I’ll let people decided because summers are always a tough one.

Still not sure what to do about Bedlam . . . That’s all there.

Tomorrow is also a day where I won’t really be around.  The 13th anniversary is Monday and we’re doing a matinee/lunch date.  It’s going to be ‘Deadpool 2’ and the Cheesecake Factory.  Nothing too complicated this year, especially since things have been rather stressful.  I probably won’t be around until the evening to tackle comments and anything on social media.

Speaking of social media, is it just me or is there very little traffic on most sites?  I don’t see much happening, which might be because I filtered out all of the political stuff.  A few slip in at times, but I really don’t see much happening.  Makes me wonder if there’s any promo movements these days.

Could have sworn there was something else I was going to add, but my mind has gone pretty blank. So, let’s get to the goals:

  1. Write more War of Nytefall: Rivalry
  2. Read more of the Kindle book.  Almost done, so I might get up a review next Sunday.
  3. Anniversary
  4. Consider buying another pair of shoes.  Think the rain really did a number on my current pair.
  5. Set up a haircut appointment . . . Look, not all of the goals can be interesting.
  6. Eventually have another Chocolate Peanut Butter Porter.
  7. Seriously, what did I forget?
  8. If time constrained then look over outline for War of Nytefall 4.
  9. I really wish I had ice cream in the house.
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First, Second, and Third Person: Which Point of View is Right for Your Book? – from Reedsy…

Chris The Story Reading Ape's avatarChris The Story Reading Ape's Blog

The point of view that a novelist chooses for their story from has an enormous impact on how they write it, and the way that their readers will receive the book. A thriller narrated by a serial killer will be miles away from one that follows the perspective of the detective on his trail, even if they both have the same plot.

POV is also one of the few things that authors should nail down before their first draft. Other story elements like plot and characterization can change at the editing stage without too much trouble. But if you want to change your point of view, it will likely mean a rewrite from page one.

Not fun.

In this post, we’ll take a quick tour of the most common points of view, and help you figure out which one will be best for your book.

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Paul’s Pizza Platter Plateau: The Soda Machine Is Working Now

Futurama

Welcome to the Pizza Platter Plateau.  Hope the climb wasn’t too rough since we’ve had a few bandit issues lately.  They only take enough for a large pie and that’s if they can’t dumpster dive.  We had a security guard, but I think he’s joined them after several promised him their crusts.  Yes, our pizza is that good because of how we cook them and what we put into the dough.  Anyway, let’s get you seated in this booth, set up our infamous Tower of Minor Toppings, and get you your platter.

Why a platter?  Well, we know people don’t always agree on toppings, so all of our pizzas can be divided down to the slice.  For example, you could want three slices of pepperoni while your wife wants one regular cheese and one with spinach.  Don’t look at me like that because we’re not pizza snobs here.  Every topping imaginable is here because every person has their own tastes.  We can even make part of the pie thin crust and the rest stuffed crust.  It’s all thanks to our patented cooking divider, which we aren’t legally allowed to bring out of the kitchen.  By the way, we have unlimited refills since we got the soda machine working again.  Had a problem with hedgehogs eating the supply lines that run down the mountain and into the soda springs.  Sure, I guess we can give you water from the tap.

Now, you’re a group of four, so I assume you want one large pie and maybe an appetizer or two.  We have garlic knots that range from popcorn-sized to championship boxer fist.  The latter is sold individually while the former is by the pound.  Kissing later, so no garlic on food.  I’ll mark off our more pungent cheeses too.  We have plenty of vegetable options for the first course too.  Salads, caramelized sprouts, cucumber throwing stars, carrot straws over potatoes, and others that you’ll find on the back of the menu. If I may, I’d recommend the mozzarella sticks with the dipping station.  You each get three modest sticks and can take them up to that bar where you put your tongue on the self-cleaning scanner.  It designs the taste that you will enjoy the most and you can even bring a jar of it home if you like.  If the system is wrong, we don’t charge you for the appetizer, but know that lying is met by working here for a month.

Let’s get to the main course, which is the pizza.  Everyone wants four slices, so that’s two large pies.  Cheese only regular crust for this young man who I’m guessing voted for a different restaurant.  Yes, we can make two all meat topping slices and two vegetarian delight slices.  I assume you’re trying to balance out the guilt, but it wouldn’t be the first or last time someone has done that.  Olive stuffed crust is an option, but it will take a few extra minutes to make it fresh. We have a penne with vodka sauce slice and a rum-soaked pulled pork slice for the other young lady.  All with twisted crust and . . . It’s okay to have the other two as regular cheese.  What will you have, sir?  Razor thin crust with the works,  pretzel crust with nacho cheese and tortilla strips, burned crust with pineapple, poi, and wild boar, and finally an egg roll crust with extra shrimp lo mien.  Trying to trip us up, but it won’t work.

Now, I’ll put this in and your food should be ready in about twenty minutes.  What is that about fairies?  No, we don’t grind magical creatures into our dough in order to create an addictive taste.  That would be almost as unethical as running a restaurant without a soda machine.  I assure you that you didn’t see a dragon in the kitchen.  Our ovens are simply shaped that way and your mind made you think it was breathing.  It’s a fairly common mistake since it’s a long climb and the air is kind of thin up here.  Enjoy your drinks and the music and . . . No, I didn’t hear any roaring.

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The 2018 Interview Series Featuring C.S. Boyack

Unknown's avatarDon Massenzio

It’s time for the next subject for my 2018 author interview series. Author interviews are posted every Friday throughout the year.

I am honored to continue this series with author and blogger C.S. Boyack. I enjoy C.S. Boyack’s books and I think you will too. If you love a well-told story with twists and turns, you should check them out.

To coincide with this interview, C.S. is hosting a one-day giveaway of his book, The HatI have read this book and found it most entertaining. You can find out more about it at the end of this interview.

You can catch up with all of my past author interviews (nearly 200) on my Author Directory page.

If you’re an author interested in being interviewed in this series, I still have limited spots available for 2018. You can email me at don@donmassenzio.com

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The benefits of reading fantasy for children – Guest Post by, Robbie Cheadle…

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Fantasy is a genre of writing in which the setting and characters are not based on reality but are based on something magical or impossible. The use of fairies, witches, trolls and other mythical figures are all examples of fantasy characters. Sometimes fantasy fiction is very involved and includes the construction of an entire world and a language.

J.R.R. Tolkien is one of the most famous of the fantasy writers with his novels that are set in Middle Earth and populated, inter alia, by Elves, Dwarfs, Hobbits, Trolls and Goblins. C.S. Lewis is another famous fantasy author with his Chronicles of Narnia series of books that feature a fantasy world, various mythical creatures and a witch.

The Sir Chocolate series of book are fantasy books about a land where you can eat everything, even the trees, flowers and houses. Each book sets out a situation, together with a resolution…

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Compliments and Criticism: Lessons Learned and Applied from My First Book

Great post on learning from feedback.

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This is a guest post by Margaret Wellwood, a children’s book writer, editor, and grandmother. Margaret shares here some precious lessons she learned listening to feedback from her readers.

Compliments and Criticism: Lessons Learned and Applied from My First Book

When I was in grade six, our teacher read us a true story about the stalwart son of an Indian chief, a boy who took praise and blame with equal indifference. I don’t know any writers who are quite so unflappable! So, I will offer you some of the kind comments on my first book, Scissortown, as well as kindly worded, constructive criticism. My goal is to share how I’ve applied the lessons learned to my subsequent books in the hopes that they will also help you in your author journey.

Scissortown | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's book Read on Amazon

First, the storyline

YAY!

  • The story was very engaging. The Slicers and Dicers reminded me…

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The Gemini Connection, on #LisaBurtonRadio

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Coming at you with one point twenty-one jigawatts of power, this is Lisa Burton Radio. The only show that brings you the characters from the books you love. I’m your host, Lisa the robot girl, and my very special guest today is trying to find his missing twin brother. “Welcome to the show, Evan Resnik.”

“Thanks for having me, Lisa. This is kind of weird. They don’t have radio shows on my planet.”

“So what’s it like being a twin?”

“Some twins feel like they’re always lumped together and want a little distance between themselves, but not Simon and me. We wouldn’t have it any other way. Our bond goes beyond looking identical – we feel each other’s emotions and always know where the other is. Yeah, it can be a little intrusive sometimes, but it’s all we’ve ever known. We’ve always been there for each other. Besides, if you…

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Romance Vs Action: A Tale of Two Vampires

Moka Akashira from Rosario Vampire

Romance-  Was this supposed to be a conversation post?

Action-  No, but this guy doesn’t have a strong opinion on why one of us, me, is better than the other.

R- But he hasn’t read any vampire romances, so he’ll go to you by default.

A- That’s exactly the problem.  He doesn’t want to come off as biased.

R-  Well, it’s obvious that he is if you look at War of Nytefall.  It’s about as romantic as that movie with the all the killing.

A- ‘Shakespeare in Love’?

R- Picking a random ‘love’ movie off the channel guide doesn’t help this joke.  So, what are the advantages we have over each other?

A- Nothing.  One could say I’m more for guys and you’re for girls, but society doesn’t work that way any more.  Besides, the guy’s wife is definitely more into me than you.

R- I think I’ve had a lot of success over the last decade, which means I’ve been overshadowing you for a while.  When was the last time an action movie with vampires came out and was worth watching?

A- One without romance?  I can’t think of the last one, but I’m betting it was a low budget affair that nobody saw.  Romance always sell better than action though.  You really need to be in the mood for me while you can put people in the mood even if they aren’t in that zone when they start.

R- That is my strength.  Still, you are the one who has the vampires that are taken much more seriously by society.  Mine get mocked all the time while you get to see yours considered threats.  Nobody is scared of a vampire that is more interested in the high school definition of necking.

A- Good one.  Maybe there is space for the two of us, but it feels like we’re in a big tug-o-war over the genre.  Vampires are already considered a sub-category of horror, so the audience is slim to begin with.

R- I will point out that nearly every vampire story falls into some type of action.  People can only handle romance for so long before they want the monsters to act like monsters.  It doesn’t seem right when a story can easily be rewritten with two humans, so the vampire part is considered superfluous.

A- Some level of balance is definitely necessary.  That’s probably why War of Nytefall has Xavier and Nadia being all smoochy smoochy.  You have Chastity too, but the jury is still out on if lust counts for romance.

R- It’s a raw and primal emotion, but it’s mine.

A- Glad to see you’re accepting that.  So, what do we do now?

R- Open the floor?

A- Sure.  What do people think of action and romance vampires?

R- Please be gentle.

A- That can be taken in so the wrong way.

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A Few Questions To Answer: Quick and to the Point

Man who knows nothing about Imperial Stormtroopers

L.Marie asked: RPGs inspired you in the past. What inspires you now?

I’ve always been inspired by a lot of things, but tabletop RPG’s allowed me to test out my characters.  When I started, I was influenced by comic books, video games, cartoons, movies, books, and mythology.  This has remained constant with a few additions over the years like anime, live-action tv shows, and philosophical discussions.  Side-note: Quest of the Broken-Hearted, which is coming out in early July, is heavily inspired by the Castlevania series.  I loved the idea of writing a story where you have a hero battling through a monster-infested city, but I wanted to do it in a way where you still had development of character.

Colin Noel-Johnson asked:

How about these questions?
What would you change about Windemere if you could start all over again?
Did you ever think about writing an epic sci-fi series?
How did Griffins allow themselves to be ridden?

  1. Okay, but I’m taking the second one last.
  2. I used to dabble in both science-fiction and fantasy, but I began to move away from sci-fi when it felt like people were becoming too critical of the science part.  I’m not comfortable enough with my space and physics knowledge to do anything that pokes at the theories.  Give me magic and I can explain it, but this isn’t to say I’m avoiding the genre entirely.  I still have an alien bounty hunter that might get a few short story collections at one point and my superhero series has a few tech-based.  If I keep the latter on Earth then I’ll have to be more careful.
  3. Griffins are very intelligent and became tamed in a similar fashion to other domesticated animals.  They found a benefit to working with civilized people, which is a more constant food and shelter source.  Funny thing about the ‘allowing’ part of griffin-riding is that they’re very much in control.  The rider can direct them only so much and that’s typically with a signal that warns them of danger or brings their attention to something.  So, there’s no breaking of them like with a wild horse.  It’s much more of a partnership built on trust, respect, and meals.
  4. The thought of starting over with Legends of Windemere makes me cringe because I could never imagine going back to the beginning once more.  This series acts as the foundation for all of my other Windemere series, which means changing one thing can have a ripple effect.  For example, if I had to do it again, I’d probably alter the Kira/Luke/Sari love triangle a little to make it run smoother.  Not get rid of it like people have requested.  Yet, that would change the future appearances of any of those who survived the final battle.  This subplot played a major role in Ritual of the Lost Lamb too, so that dynamic would change as well as several of the other stories.  I think the series came out the way it was supposed to come out.
    The more I think about this, the more I wonder about reboots and how that would even look.  I imagine it being done without me, which makes me think that some characters could be cut and others moved up or down in popularity.  Personally, I could see someone delete Delvin or Timoran because they are the two stable heroes.  Queen Trinity would end up being a champion, Nyx might take more of the spotlight, and the love triangle could be thrown out entirely.  The reason I say a lot of this is because they are ‘safe’ decisions that I’ve seen in other stories.  Again, I personally wouldn’t change anything, but I know people do love altering stuff.

So, what change would you make to your story or one you read?

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Check This Out: Yoga Frog

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With me on the blog today is one of my wonderful classmates from Vermont College of Fine Arts—the awe-inspiring Nora Carpenter. Nora is here to talk about her picture book for young readers, Yoga Frog, which debuts today, people!

 

Nora is represented by Victoria Wells Arms. Yoga Frog was published by Running Press Kids and was illustrated by Mark Chambers. Nora also is the author of Yoga Frog: Reflections from the LilyPond, which was written for adults and published in April (also illustrated by Mark Chambers). Check it out here. One of you will be given a copy of the Yoga Frog picture book for for young readers. Stay tuned after the interview to find out how. (Or skip ahead if you so choose. But you won’t be given any cake.)

Let’s talk to Nora!

El Space: Four quick facts about yourself?
Nora: 1. I grew…

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