Writing for Books vs Writing for a Blog Story

Now, I’ve written novels, short stories, and been running a few serial stories through my blog.  The most recent one is Derailing Bedlam, but there was also the Raven Series that I did for the last 4 Octobers.  Will these ever be published like my novels?  Maybe, but I can’t say for sure.  The first one is connected to published works, but I couldn’t afford to put money into more when nobody was buying them.  The second one never had my full confidence to garner a cover and promotions, so I gave it for free.  Anyway, they always made me think about the differences between book and serial writing.  Figure I’d put some of my thoughts down.

  1. You lose audience members faster with a blog serial.  It’s sad, but true.  With a book series, you always lose a few people between volumes.  That isn’t a very fast rate though, so it can be countered by new readers giving you a chance.  Serials are different because it’s all one volume cut into pieces.  A person may drop out after a while and there’s no guarantee that someone will jump in.  This brings us to another challenge with serials.
  2. It’s more common for people to step into a serial midway.  For a book, a person could enter a series midway, but it’s still clearer than entering a story at an odd point.  This can prevent people from getting into it, especially if you’re really far in.  So, there’s a bigger risk of intimidating new readers who don’t have a lot of time.
  3. Blog serials are exposed, so people can check out spoilers fairly easily.  There’s no thumbing through pages to get the juicy parts.  They’re there.  You can counter this by not making it clear, but then you can cause confusion.  It’s a fact of blogging that you can’t hide things very easily.
  4. Every piece of a blog serial needs to have a hook at the beginning and a cliffhanger at the end.  A blog can have sections that are interesting, but milder than the other parts because people will read right through.  There isn’t a long break between story sections like with series volumes and serials.  Action and witty dialogue can help here because ending with suspense or a laugh will stick with a reader more than a low key finale.  It helps to think of every entry as a chapter, which is probably an obvious piece of information.
  5. Blog serials require a link or reminder at the beginning about the previous section. Not so much a recap, but a message that this is a continuation.  It might not be as obvious as turning a page, especially for new followers.  This covers your butt in case people mistake it as the start of a story and gives a spot to direct them to older pieces.  A book comparison here would be a series volume list at the beginning of a later story.
  6. You can spread things out with a book and have it go out in one piece.  This eliminates the threat of having to end the story early or giving up.  A serial can hit a point where nobody cares anymore.  This forces you to choose between ending it before you’re ready or continuing in spite of low reactions.  Personally, I would go with the second option since the first can cost you the few readers you have and anyone who finds you in the future.

Those are what come to mind.  The truth is that my blog serials were first written as long stories.  It makes things easier to keep it going, but it has a high risk of not hitting with a good cliffhanger.  This is why I tried to write with this in mind, but it didn’t always work because my habits are that of someone who publish it at once.  I can’t think of any serials that will happen after Derailing Bedlam, so I guess I won’t have to worry about this much longer.

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The Defeated of the Summer

As some may remember, I worked at a summer camp this year.  My job was to run the indoor areas like the game room and the arcade.  Throughout the summer, I had some time to play a few video games myself.  This was usually in the morning when I was running the controllers and tablets through the chargers.  I beat a few including two that I hadn’t beaten before.  All of these were on the Nintendo Mini and Super Nintendo Mini, so they’re classic games.  I missed out on some because the campers liked them too and took over my games.  That’s fair since it’s all for them.  Anyway, here are the endings of the games I beat.  I did videos because I love the finale music of many of them, especially the Super NES games.

The next one is a game my best friend since 1st grade and I tried hard to beat.  Never figured it out and I recently learned that we had no idea what we were doing.  Either his game never came with the manual or he never read it, but I learned there was a leveling system and a healing spell in the game.  We really could have used that healing spell way back when.  The ending starts around 30 seconds.

This was the surprise victory.  I’ll admit that I didn’t do the second play through because I ran out of time and I didn’t want to do it all again.  I made it close to the end of the second run though, but I hated the special weapon you get.  Now, Super Ghouls & Ghosts is an infamously hard game.  Only reason I succeeded was because the Super NES Mini has a function where you can save exactly where you are.  I would restart whenever I got hit and lost all of my power ups.  I’m not ashamed to admit this considering when I was younger, my friend and I would never make it beyond the first stage.  Now, here we are:

(Wow.  They really did put the Princess’s measurements in there.  That’s pretty messed up.)

 

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Start of Summer Break

I’m writing this on Wednesday since I’m going to be on a trip for a few days.  That means limited laptop time even though I’ll have it with me.  Next week, I’m going to try to rebuild a few things like doing a weekly pinned post on Twitter instead of leaving one up for months.  Anyway, I’m going to get into the big stuff since I’m already rambling due to exhaustion.

Camp ended on Wednesday (which is today as I write) and it was a big push to the end.  I had to pack up the games on Monday, so everything became art rooms.  This was a little messy, but it kept most of the kids occupied.  I was running around on the last day getting things clean or combating a headache.  Furniture had to be moved, so add soreness to the list.  Doesn’t help that last Friday I got a sunburn on the top of my head, which drives home the fact that my hair is thin and dying.  It did the gross stuff today and I’ll leave it at that.  Overall, it was a busy and memorable summer that didn’t let me get much else done after I got home.  Too tired and I was still struggling with the divorce.  Something about coming home to a lonely room after a hard day of work just drove home the situation.  I just don’t like being lonely at this point, but that should pass.  The camp job didn’t allow me to get much therapy time, but I’m going to get back to that.

Will I do this again next summer?  Probably not because I need to work on getting my initial teaching certification.  That means tests and a Masters program, which will take time.  I want to do something with Beginning of a Hero and The Life & Times of Ichabod Brooks too.  Not to mention that fantasy tip book.  I need to get my life in order and make time for writing.  This year, I put everything else first as it should be.  The summer job was a big part of that. It was a good experience and I enjoyed it, except for the pneumonia and sunburn.  Nothing ever goes smoothly for me, so I knew something was going to go wrong.  My son will still be going, so I might get to see the people I met this summer.  That’s in the air because of the ex-wife and finances.

Going back to the writing, I’m hoping to edit War of Nytefall: Eradication before I get back to school.  I can possibly do it, but I’ve already been snagged for a house project that might kill it.  Maybe I can get to within a chapter or two of finishing, which I can live with and use a few nights to do.  One issue I’ve got is that the series stopped selling while Legends of Windemere has taken off again.  Since Clyde’s series is one of the cornerstones of the whole tapestry of Windemere, I want to see it through to the end.  I also don’t have any more stories to tell in the previous series.  If I stick myself with the same characters doing sequels and prequels then it means everything else I’ve got planned will be cast aside.  I want to keep writing Clyde and get to Darwin Slepsnor and Sin.  I have my superheroes, god origins, and the rise of Elysium.  I can’t figure out what to do here, which is frustrating.  There’s no marketing to explain why my first series explodes every two weeks.  Really wish it could carry over to my other stuff since I write in the same style, especially Ichabod Brooks and Kira Grasdon’s solo adventure.  I do appreciate the sales, so don’t get me wrong.  Just curious about what it is about this one that gave it staying power.

I need to rewrite the outline for War of Nytefall: Ravenous at some point and get back to outlining fantasy tip entries.  The latter might be done a bit on the trip when my son is either asleep or watching TV between outings.  I can do the November blog posts too and clear that off the deck.  Might be best to do that and save the other stuff for when my son is with his mother.   She gets him for the end of his break since I have to get ready for another school year.  That’s 7 days to edit with one going to a school orientation day, so I might be able to make it.  I’m sitting here staring at my large pile of notebooks and realizing I can’t remember a lot of the stories.  Do I chalk them up to death since my creativity has been crippled for just over a year?  Feels like I’ve lost so much and now I’m getting mopey again.  Maybe I’ll post about it next Sunday.  Still can’t decide on if I want my superheroes and alien bounty hunter to show up in Windemere.  I bring them up from time to time, so it might happen again.

That’s pretty much it.  I need to finish laundry and packing.  What are the goals for next week?

  1. 2 days of father/son time.
  2. School supply and lunch shopping.
  3. School orientation day.
  4. Editing when I can.
  5. Painting son’s room while he’s away.
  6. Resting and getting back on the exercise bike.
  7. Enjoy the trip even though I’ll be heading home right after this posts.
  8. November blog posts.
  9. Go through story ideas to see what gets revived in my head.
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Questions 3: Transform Yourself

To be honest, I tried to make this a ‘Ye Olde Shoppe’ post about transformations, but it really didn’t work.  So, I’m going to do a simple one that lets people have fun in the comments.  After all, I covered a lot of ground this week, so ending on an interactive note feels like the right move.

Questions!

  1. Which animal would you transform into and why?
  2. Which magical creature would you transform into and why?
  3. What do you think is a major downside to shape-shifting?
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How to Develop Your Brand as a Book Author

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Stewart Dunlop | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's bookThis is a guest post by Stewart Dunlop. Stewart is a full-time content marketer at Foundr and part-time reader, gamer & footballer. You can follow or tweet him @stewydunlop.

How to Develop Your Brand as a Book Author

Build an author brand | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's bookImage by TeroVesalainen from Pixabay

From a literary point of view, we live in blessed times! Thanks to the development of modern communication devices and platforms, almost anyone can put their thoughts on paper (or the word editor of their choice) and release them to the world.

We now have access to printed books, e-books, audiobooks, and more. This allows the information to flow unhindered and creates a wonderful environment for those who love to read and learn.

But this level of progress has also led to a change in your role as the author. Back in the day, your job would’ve been over once you applied the last of the…

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Derailing Bedlam: A Taste of Tenay Part 2 #fiction #adventure

As usual, here is your warning that this story has cursing, sex (not graphic), innuendo, and violence.  It’s my Rated-R action adventure called Derailing Bedlam.  This is the fourth outing (third official) for Cassidy and Lloyd, so feel free to click on one of the two covers to see how it started.  Each one is 99 cents!

Cover by Jon Hunsinger

Cover Art by Jon Hunsinger

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Transforming Objects With or Without Permission

Fullmetal Alchemist

Changing a living thing comes with a lot of ethical questions even if it’s being done to oneself.  At least, there should be since I do remember one movie had kids turning rodents into cups without any hesitation.  There’s not that much of an issue when your transforming inanimate objects unless you’re shooting for ‘lead into gold’.  It can be a clear ethical problem if the change is being done to harm others, but mostly this is done to achieve a goal.

Now, I was going to categorize this topic like on Monday, but it all comes into the same vein.  Instead, I’m going to give a few tips if you plan on using this power, spell, or whatever in fiction.

  1. Try to keep the materials in the same school or give a reason why it will become something entirely different.  You might see I’m pulling a lot from ‘Fullmetal Alchemist’ in these tips, but the show does it really well.  You can’t change a wooden log into a metal sculpture.  There needs to be a connection in order to place limits on the power.  Otherwise, the character can turn whatever is around into anything, which means they’re never lacking a solution for a problem.  Don’t have a key?  Turn a rock into it.  Lacking a weapon?  Turn your shoe into a high-powered laser with two beverage holders.  It really takes the suspense out of situations.
  2. Amount of material should be equal or at least close to what you end up with.  If you take a regular piece of paper and turn it into a full-sized blimp then you will need to have some explanation.  Maybe the spell combines with a growth enhancement and there’s no reversing it.  It could have a weaker molecular structure, so it will break apart at some point.  Again, you’re trying to create some limitations here and avoiding having a power that unbalances the story.
  3. The character does need to have an understanding when it comes to transforming an object into something complicated.  If they don’t know how a radio works then the chance of them turning a box of parts into one is nearly impossible.  You can have it be that the magic simply knows how to do it, but then you have to explain why that is the case.  It could be a spell specifically to build a radio, which is oddly niche and restricts the system.  You can’t have a variety of items changed and created by one spell, but then there is this one for radios.  It isn’t too difficult to avoid this because you only have to make the character a reader.
  4. Think twice before having a character turn useless stuff into money.  Gold and possibly gemstones will work, but cash is a big problem.  The reason is because they have serial numbers.  This means the character would have to make each bill one at a time to avoid duplicate numbers.  Other issues is picking a serial number that is already in circulation, one that is too big, or one that is too small.  Will a cashier notice this?  No, but this is something a reader might point out.  You also have various anti-counterfeit additions that the character might not know about.  Just avoid this issue and have them make things to sell on eBay.

Those cover a lot of ground here.  It really comes down to being careful, especially if you make transformations a big staple of a series.  Doing it once or twice might not bring in any attention, but having it be a consistent activity requires a system of some kind.  It can be abused by characters and authors alike since you could feasibly solve any problem with it.  We’re talking almost god-like powers of creation here with the only difference being the mortal needing something to change.  Removing that last limit would make the story horribly broken too.  So, proceed with caution.

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We are the #Uniqueauthors

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I got chatting via a blog post to a lovely author (who will be featured soon) about the extra challenges disabled authors and artists have. Publishing and producing work is a steep learning curve – it’s not just the actual story-telling – and many writers have physical or social difficulties which make the world, and the craft of creation even more tricky. To an extent, writing is a great equaliser. If I read a story I know little about that particular author – except what I can find out from the internet or publicity. I would probably not be aware that an author was, for example, blind, or suffered from disabling social anxiety. Writing is freedom. Writing is a veil and a fort. Reading and writing give one the chance to experience – at least in the imagination – the most amazing experiences.

There are some of us – the…

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Teaser Tuesday: It Started With a Cat #fantasy #shortstories

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Here’s another one from The Life & Times of Ichabod Brooks.  I’m finding it difficult to locate the older teasers, so they might all be new.  This is a part from Ichabod Brooks & the Phantom Archer.  The adventure is him judging an archery tournament, which couldn’t possibly go askew.  I mean, it isn’t like he’s recognized a pattern of odd events in his life.  Enjoy!

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Schools of Body Transformations: From Cyborgs to Werewolves

Disney’s Aladdin

One of the most commonly used powers/augmentations in fiction is the physical transformation.  It can range from a cybernetic finger to changing into a towering monster that eats planets.  Some are natural while others are magical and still more are created by science.  The thing they all have in common is that an organism’s physical structure is changed to some extent.  With that being said, there is a wide variety of categories, which I’m going to try to cover as best as I can.

Cybernetics

I’m going to get this one out of the way because it’s fairly straightforward.  This is the merging of living flesh with machines.  It’s entirely different than a robot (all machine with no flesh) and an android (robot designed to look and act human).  You can have only part augmented or give the character a full body that holds their brain like in Ghost in the Shell.  Power source is always an issue, but you can invent a fake system for your world that will work as long as it’s sensible.  For example, they can be powered by the human brain since it produces a lot of energy.

There is a spiritual side to this category too.  How much technology can be added to a person before they are no longer human?  Do the machines begin to undermine the soul or humanity of the person?  If they’re only a brain in a robotic body then can they be sure they truly existed to begin with?

Magical on Purpose

Another broad category, which might be what I stick to here.  This is different than the curses that I’ll touch on below.  Here is where you would find wizards and magical creatures that cast spells of transformation.  They could have an artifact that bestows such power or went through years of training.  Many times this takes on an animal or elemental theme.  One of the advantages to this category is that it isn’t as restrictive as cybernetics and curses.  It can be the most versatile one since the characters can change themselves into anything.  There could be a spell for humanoid transformations and another for animal while a third turns them into plants.  You can have them be specialists and create a long list of spells that have varying degrees of niche.

Magical by Accident

Mostly curses here, but you also have magical explosions that leave a victim with transformation powers.  It doesn’t always have to be bad like werewolves that can’t control themselves.  One example here is from ‘One Piece’ where characters who eat the Devil Fruit are cursed with a power, but can never swim again.  They find very unique ways to utilize even the strangest of powers and many of them possess a transformation component.  This deals much more with the origin and if it was intentional, which you can see it was not.

With this category, you can run the story towards a few different directions.  There’s the classic push for a cure or gaining control if they can’t change at will.  Other characters might see it as a way to make money.  Another path is bitterness and rage, which leads to a villain who seeks to spread his or her own misery.  A key component here is to determine how the character handles such an accident.

Natural Shape-Shifter

There is no technology or magic behind these characters.  They have been born with the ability to transform like Mystique.  Beast Boy might fall into this category too, but he got his powers when he was given a serum to cure a rare diseases and the side-effect was animal transformation.  Maybe it’s better to say that the characters here gained their abilities either through birth or a natural, non-magical method.  Still, they tend to have the easiest time.  There is no casting of spells, relics that they can lose, a curse that they can’t control, or metal parts that require a power source.  Instead, they can concentrate on a form and become it within seconds.  Unless they are given a specific category restriction, they can change to anything.

A tough part with this character is that they are only as strong as the author’s creativity.  I can put limitations on my shape-shifters to help me focus such as humanoid only or perhaps they can only change their arms.  Yet, I can also skip that and let them become whatever they need to be.  One has to be careful here because you can create such a powerful character that the audience loses their interest.  So, you have to use this category (and the others) with caution.

Any other categories that you can think of?  Have you ever tried to write a shape-shifter or have a favorite one?

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