Immortal Wars: Light, Blood, & Tears Part 2

(Disclaimer: A warning to those who continue.  This is a sequel to a previous story.  Both of these were written in the mid-1990’s.  While the first one was slightly edited and vanity press published, this one has not been touched in over 20 years.  I figure I should do something with it and people may get a laugh or fright from how I used to be.  Every author comes from somewhere, so this is part of my origin.  To that end, I am deeply sorry for whatever nightmares I will inflict on the literary world and the American English language.  Enjoy?)

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The entire top floor of the Black Tower is a single room with minimal, but very bright, lighting.  There are windows around the walls, but they only show the vast darkness of deep space.  A large, metal table takes up a third of the room and several hover-chairs circle around it.  Seven of the chairs are occupied and their owners are slowly getting agitated and restless.

“Sorry I’m late.  I had to make these very special drinks from scratch.  Took longer than I had expected.  So, all of you had better like them.  So, did anybody miss me?” asks Adriana when she enters the room.  She immediately has a nearby robot hand out the glasses of potion while she takes a seat on her large throne.  This hovering throne is black as night and has two menacing dragon heads as the arms.

“Don’t worry.  Our aim is getting a lot better.  In a few weeks, we won’t be able to miss you if we tried,” remarks a red-haired man in a color changing jester outfit.  A young blond girl, wearing a black version of Adriana’s clothing, smacks the evil jester upside his blue-eyed head.  She has an almost primal look in her eye that reminds most people of a tigress.

“Thank you, Kilanus.  As for you, Tegam, behave yourself for this meeting.  My fuse is extremely short today,” mentions Adriana.  She watches everybody stare at and cautiously sniff at his or her drink.  Only the golden armored brute with his weird, albino eyes gulps the potion down.  Hellax attempts to push back his spiked, brown hair while he looks up at the others.

“I wouldn’t have done that just yet, Hellax.  Since Kilanus wasn’t given any of this, I suspect it is some form of immortal killing poison.  After all, Adriana isn’t sadistic enough to kill her own daughter.  Unlike me if, perish the thought, I had a child,” says a brown-eyed woman, who actually looks more like an ugly man.  She makes a flame serpent slither from her callused hands and it quickly melts Kilanus’ silver skull belt and her crimson skull and crossbones necklace.

“Ooh.  I’m sooo scared.  I don’t think you should do anything that you would regret, Psylon.  Without me, this group loses its unique advantage of extra lives.  Besides I can beat you up with my arms torn off,” states Kilanus in a calm, casual voice.  The fire animal simply disappears and Psylon starts mumbling to herself.

“I sense a good deal of cyanide in this concoction.  But something in it has weakened the deadly potential,” explains a frail, black-haired man in leather armor.  His blue eyes look toward a large man, who is nodding in agreement, and a sinister robot that appears to be analyzing the liquid.  The cyborg notices the sudden silence and looks up with dark, yellow eyes.  Immediately, his sensor probes slip back into his stomach and are replaced by a unique green gel-cell.  Still in absolute silence, the cyborg puts a few drops of his drink into the green gel-cell.

“What do you think, Cybro?  Mindtrigger and I have already noticed some diluted cyanide in it.  Is there anything else that your instruments have picked up?” whispers the large, muscular man.  His long, black hair is like the tresses of Mindtrigger, but instead of blue, this perfect killer has deep, red eyes.

“Well, Draveon.  It tastes fine to my borrowed human senses, but the ingredients are rather odd.  It would appear that Adriana’s remarkable skills in both chemistry and the long lost art of magic has not diminished over the years.  I found three different types of alcohol, sulfur dust, raw sodium, a weird form of liquid nitrogen, and some unknown energy.  I think the energy came from one of the isotopes that we found during our voyage home.  My conclusion is that this beverage is not poisonous, but it is not a common drink,” Cybro explains while his left arm, which ends in a triple laser, grows a straw and drains his cup.

Adriana gracefully chugs her drink before saying, “Are all of you finished talking?  All any one of you had to do was ask and I would have told you losers everything.  You see, that drink is our newest edge against the planet guardians.  I had Startrix use her powers to discover when each of us would die.  Since there seemed to be multiple times, we picked the ones with the least amount of casualties on our side.  When the time of your death does occur, this potion will cause your body to be teleported back to the top of the Black Tower.  Understand?”

“Most of it.  But, why did you leave Kilanus out?  Or is it because she’s underage and you decided to act like a responsible mother for once in your life?” asks Draveon after he finishes his drink and crushes the silver cup into powder.

“Give me a break.  I don’t need a lecture on parenting skills from an oversized testosterone factory.  Just because you like kids does not mean that you can tell me how to treat and what to do with my daughter.  Get your own child first and then we can argue about this, Draveon.”

“Don’t give my husband any ideas, Adriana.  I hate kids unless they’re deep fried and covered in chocolate syrup,” replies Psylon.  She gets sick glances from everyone in the room, including the emotionless slave robot in the corner that has no face.  She hits it out the door with a small fire wave.

“I really didn’t need to hear that.  I mean, I really did not need to hear that.  But, to answer the question, the magical power in my potion is useless if Kilanus dies.  The reason for this is quite simple.  Only my daughter has the power to resurrect us.  If she dies, we cannot bring any of our casualties back to life.  Now, what else do we have to discuss?”

“You said that you have a perfect plan that will put a major hurt on the planet guardians.  Mindtrigger also needs to give us the new information on the guardians that he has collected over the past six months,” says Tegam.

“Duh, what guardians?” mentions Hellax in his usual idiotic voice.

“Go back to sleep, numbskull.  Well, Mindtrigger.  Age before beauty, so the spotlight is on you.  Tell us what you have discovered about our enemies.  And this time say it in normal terms.  You don’t want to lose Psylon like last time,” orders the blond leader.  The fire controlling immortal glares at Adriana after she finishes off her drink.

Cybro pulls out a small, metal box and hits a blue button on its backside, which makes a large hologram appear above the table.  It is a hologram of a beautiful, redhead with sweet, hazel eyes.  She is wearing an emerald colored skirt attached to a matching, sleeveless shirt.  On the chest of the shirt is an intricate picture of a churning whirlpool.  She also wears white boots with retractable blades on the outer sides.

“Thank you for your assistance, Cybro.  As you all know, this is Hydrana, the Neptune guardian.  She is a hydrokinetic, which means she can control and create water, ice, and vapor.  Recently, this immortal has acquired a natural automatic cold field that resembles Psylon’s heat field.  Any weapon or attack that is based on heat will dissipate before reaching her.  Fire attacks are only slightly weakened by this field.  I have recently discovered that her real name is Delila Mandervale II.  Will that data be useful?” reports Mindtrigger.

“Of course, it is.  We can kill their families right before the planet guardians’ eyes!” exclaims Psylon as the hologram changes into a young man.  His uniform is a brilliant orange and dark blue streaked bodysuit with an ebony cloak.  This guardian’s eyes are a unique pale blue, which clash with his dark, brown hair.

“Hold on for a second, Mindtrigger.  We will absolutely not threaten or kill their families unless it is totally necessary!  The one thing we do not need at this time are four powerful immortals going on a rampage through us.  If you hurt their families, I will personally hunt you down and kill you.  That is a move that will be done only in desperation.  Continue, scientist,” Adriana says.

“Thank you.  The telekinetic Earth guardian, Infinity, is really named Steve Vascotti.  After days of research, I have discovered that his bird form comes from an ancient Native American necklace that has been absorbed into his chest.  It was made by one of the original guardians and reacts to immortal signatures by giving them this extra ability.  He has only become physically stronger since our most recent encounter.  His limited abilities can’t grow anymore without causing him severe harm.”

“He’s a lot cuter too,” Kilanus mentions.

“I thought you had gotten over him,” laughs Tegam.  Infinity’s hologram is changed to that of a gorgeous, raven-haired female wearing crimson clothes.  The revealing outfit has a bare midriff and white lines along the sides that contrast with her long, black gloves and boots.

“Can I please have no more interruptions?  The emerald-eyed Venus guardian, Miracle, has become a somewhat bigger problem than she used to be.  I should know since she has occasionally made me her favorite target.  Her real illusions are capable of sustaining much more damage before disappearing.  She was previously called Kelly Tavinowsky and she is currently in a very serious relationship with this one.  So, if we can find a way to catch her, we can get him without any painful trouble,” explains Mindtrigger as Cybro changes the picture.

A handsome, blue-eyed boy with shimmering black clothing takes Miracle’s place.  His uniform has a dull, white belt and a pair of sleek, blood red boots.  In his right hand is a slender sword that has two glowing jewels embedded in its hilt.  Around his neck is a medallion, which is a big stone surrounded by nine smaller ones.

“That’s the one who stole my sword of light.  When I get my hands on that Mars guardian, I will suck his flesh right off his bones,” roars Draveon.  An orange spear suddenly strikes the chair between Draveon’s legs and Mindtrigger walks over to retrieve his weapon.  As usual it turns into a mist and goes into the immortal’s ears and nose.

“Another gruesome picture I would like to forget.  You’ll get your chance in due time, killer.  My plan revolves around that hatred you have and you will eventually get it back.  I swear on your life.  Finish your report, Mindtrigger, before we have any other interruptions,” orders Adriana.

“Sure.  Fate is really Edward Slane, but unlike the other guardians, his biological parents are dead.  As usual, more research is needed on the lucky guardian.  I have no idea where to discover his past and neither does SEAS.  If that computer can’t find it from a distance then I certainly can’t.  The only useful piece of information that I have is on the anomaly I found in his genetic code.  It makes him immune to most of the guardians’ magic weapons.  Just like Kilanus.”

“At least that’s something.  But I will personally look into and burn down Fate’s family tree later.  I want to see Draveon, Tegam, Cybro, and Startrix in my quarters within five hours.  Then, I will explain my perfect plan.  Any questions?” asks Adriana as she gets off her hover-throne.

“Why can’t you tell all of us?  We have a right to know some of things that you are planning.  Whatever one of us does will effect the others,” says Psylon.

“Very well.  Let me just say this.  For the past year and a half all of us have unconsciously avoided fighting on a specific area in this universe.  This area has remained blissfully unaware of what is going on around it.  It is about damn time that it became the ultimate battlefield.  If I’m being too cryptic about my plan then listen up because I’m only saying this once.  We are going to attack the planet Earth.  To be more specific, New York City.”

“Earth?  Finally.  But, why New York?” questions Kilanus.

“Why?  Doesn’t every supervillain attack New York,” replies Adriana with a wicked smirk before leaving the confused band of villains behind.

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Thursday A Little Personal – Twiggy and Lucy Learn about Teagan’s New Book

“Hey, guys, come here.” “Yes, boss. You might have to call Twiggy twice.” “What’s up? “You both know the writer Teagan R. Geneviene.” “We have heard …

Thursday A Little Personal – Twiggy and Lucy Learn about Teagan’s New Book
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Sheila’s Shield Shop: We Put the ‘S’ in Defense!

Rise of the Shield Hero

Judging by your sword and armor, I can tell that you’re an adventurer.  Obviously, you need a shield to go with everything else. First, I need to explain how this works.  You would be surprised how often people buy a shield and expect it to defend them with no effort on their part. Now, you physically move it into the path of whatever you don’t want to hit you.  Got it?  So, let’s see what you’re interested in.

First, let’s talk about material.  Not all shields are metal.  You have wood, hardened leather, bone, animal skins, cloth, rawhide, and wicker.  Of course, you can have combinations.  You need to factor in your strength and speed because you don’t want a shield that weighs your arm down to the point of uselessness.  For example, you have a sword and armor set for speed, so a heavy shield would work against that.  Metal would certainly be a mistake as the main part.  You can pick a lighter material with studs or spikes.  Ah, you notice that one.  It’s gorgon bone, which is why it looks and feels like solid rock.  Surprisingly light, but rather expensive.  If price is no option then we can make one of those with iron studs around the rim.  Too much?  Wood wrapped in leather with metal studs and a gorgon bone symbol of a grinning face.  Got it.

Next, we come to style, which we can already tell will be light and easy to maneuver.  That rules out tower, kite, coffin, and other big ones.  The material you picked isn’t very heavy, so we don’t have to go small like a buckler.  I’d recommend a heater shield.  These are the ones shaped a pointed, upside-down dome.  We have some attachments for this type as well, which are rather unconventional.  For mechanical, you can have a hidden blade kept in this area and a press of this spot with your pointer knuckle can make it come out of the point.  Not recommended for honorable duels, but it can save your life if you’re adventuring and need to deliver a surprise stab. A magical trick is to have it return to your forearm if you lose it, which we call The Mercenary Prince special.  While it costs us repeat customers, it saves you money and means you’ll think of us for upgrades and recommending to friends.  I’ll put both down for you then.

Finally, we come to the enchantment section.  Our shields are imbued with magic by the use of crystals that we put in the best place for activation.  Being a defensive object, it’s difficult to add an offensive spell such as fireballs and lightning bolts.  You could accidentally cast them at the wrong time.  We can put those on there, but you have to sign a waiver.  Our suggestion is reactive magic such as reflections, vibration bursts, energy drain, and anything else that awakens upon violent contact.  This purple amethyst is popular with a vampire curse spell, which is really the fun name for energy drain.  The more you block, the weaker your opponent gets.  We also have sensory and physical enhancements that are always active as long as you are wearing the shield.  Summoning magic?  We have sigils that can be attached, which allows you to call forth a specified creature to fight on your behalf.  Minor beasts that are created every time your shield is struck?  I will have to ask the casters in the back.  It might depend on what type of creature . . . Scorpions . . . Okay . . . I think we can accommodate you.

That’s about everything.  A few minor points are strap material and the warranty.  You don’t have to get one, but it couldn’t hurt.  Thank you for thinking of us. It should take a week to complete the . . . Three days isn’t much . . . For that amount of money, we’ll get for you in two.  Have a great evening.

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Music of Legends of Windemere: The Mercenary Prince

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

The second of the two last minute additions to the series.  Well, not really last minute, but they were added after I began writing and publishing.  Legends of Windemere: The Mercenary Prince was designed for a few reasons.  The biggest one was to give Delvin Cunningham a focus book, which he didn’t have yet.  His milder personality kept allowing the stronger ones to steal the spotlight.  I also got to set up more with the Nyx/Trinity rivalry and deal with Stephen Kernaghan properly.  Tied up a lot of potential loose ends in here, so the songs had to hit several marks.

This was a really weird one that I ran into from time to time.  The music itself had this sense of mysticism to me, but the words make me think of the Nyx/Trinity/Stephen events in this book.  There is a lot of jockeying and reversal of power between the three as their storyline reaches its finale.  With Stephen, he’s all about power and control, so him losing it was a big part of his downfall.

The song is ‘Bloody Tears’ and it’s from the Castlevania video game series.  I wanted to find the battle in the Netflix series where they used it, but they only have pieces of it.  I was torn between this one and ‘Vampire Killer’.  Why?  Because this book is where the Dawn Fangs make their true debut.  A group of evil ones showed up in earlier volumes, but this time Mab Winthrop the Dark Mistress got involved.  You get a taste of what War of Nytefall will entail, so this was kind of like an introduction to my next series.

Had to give Delvin Cunningham a song at some point since it’s really his book.  That mild personality keeps making him come in second or third.  It also made it hard to pick something.  It took me a few days to remember this song.  The lyrics work for his overall story arc and the tone fits his demeanor.  He does really want to be a hero and thinks along these lines, so it works.  (Also, Spider-Man, so an added bonus.)

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#3 Post of 2020: 7 Tips to Writing a Physical Description that Works

(Post originally made on July 8, 2020.)

Jessica Rabbit (She’s Not Wrong)

Don’t go jumping to the comments just yet.  Jessica makes a good point.  Our characters are what we make them, so we shouldn’t blame them for it.  We do have to be careful on how we go about doing a physical description.  Know what you’re aiming for and make sure it’s what you want.  Of course, none of these tips will matter if you want to keep it as vague as possible.  Now, let’s get to it.

  1. If you’re describing a woman as sexy, don’t fixate the chest, hips, legs, and butt.  Yes, those are factors that should be taken into account if you’re goal is to make a highly attractive character.  Yet, it can also be done with a simple word and then moving on to paint the rest of the picture.  A lot of people will get angry at overly sexual descriptions, so only use them if they are required for the character.  For example, in War of Nytefall I never described Mab in such terms beyond slender because that isn’t a key point of the character.  I use ‘voluptuous’ and ‘curvy’ for Chastity Sullivan because she uses her physical appearance to her advantage and is a sexual character.
  2. Let’s keep things even here.  While men have fewer sexy parts to describe without going NC-17 or making readers think you’re obsessed with tubular meats, you should consider how far to go depending on their personality.  If they’re eye-candy or sexual characters then go for the muscles, butt, (I’m sorry) bulge, and whatever else you think would work to get the point across.  Now, this can also be done simply by saying they’re attractive much like the female characters that aren’t using sexuality.  Nothing wrong with taking that route with either sex then going for the same physical descriptors (hair, eyes, skin, etc.) you use for everyone else.
  3. Now that we got two elephants out of the room, we can move on.  Do not be afraid to add flaws to your character’s physical appearance.  Moles, scars, pimples, freckles, near-sighted, and the list keeps going.  We tend to only mention these things with ‘ugly’ or ‘plain’ characters.  This creates a world where you have the physically perfect and the physically flawed with a clear sign to who readers should enjoy more.  That’s not realistic and can cause readers to have trouble connecting to your cast.
  4. Tattoos should be carefully considered instead of slapped on a character.  They don’t always mean edgy in real life.  Many have a story behind them.  Think about that if you’re going to give them a tattoo and make it a highlight.  Other characters might be interested too.  (This might turn into a bigger post in a few months now that I think about it.)
  5. In fantasy, you don’t have to stick to standard eye and hair colors.  In general, you should try to have a favorite of colors and, in regards to hair, styles.  Imagine being in public and watching others walk around.  You see a big variety, which is how your world should be.  This goes for your supporting cast too.  It’s weird if every woman is sporting long black hair and every man has short brown hair, but the male lead is a spiky blonde and the female is a curly redhead.  Again, you need some variety to make your world believable.
  6. Try to keep track of how you describe your characters.  I’ve run into a few pure pantsers who make the following mistake and even miss it with edits.  A character begins the story with green eyes, they’re brown in the middle, and blue in the last scene.  You need to keep the physical details consistent because readers will notice.  Not to point solely at pantsers either because plotters can do it as well.  I remember Luke Callindor began with green eyes and I ended up making them brown by accident a book later because I had so many other green-eyed characters.  It kept jumping, so I eventually had an even happen to make the change permanent.  Not a solution that works for everyone and I made sure to always catch the mistake in edits before I made the permanent fix.
  7. Trying to think of a good way to put this, but I can’t.  DO NOT be afraid to describe characters in unflattering terms.  Chubby, balding, beer belly, unshaven, short, and other words that typically have a negative connotation can be used if that is what the character is.  With this, it comes down to the character’s personality as well.  I’ve read far too many books where the ‘unattractive’ character is made worse by being depressed about their appearance.  Some short people are proud of it.  Some chubby people are proud of it.  Some balding people are proud of it.  Typically, the thing that makes a person hate such things is how others and society respond to such physical traits.  Hard to take pride in yourself when you’re constantly being told that you’re flawed and ugly . . . Geez, I’m hurting myself here.  My point on this one is that you need to have the character consider their own appearance and take either pride in their flaws or hate it.  Personally, I think we’ve seen more than often characters who feel they’re ugly and not enough reveling in the fact that they’re not supermodels.
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How To Animate your Book Cover

Image courtesy of Pixabay Hi SErs! Harmony here. Animated book covers have become all the rage for social media promotion. So, today, I’d like to …

How To Animate your Book Cover
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Not Sure What to Do? Funny Animal Memes

Yeah.  I didn’t have much of a plan after a busy week.  Wanted to do a test of the War of Nytefall: Savagery blurb, but I didn’t get around to writing it.  There was a poem idea and some stories that I wanted to do as well, but I really didn’t have the time.  So . . . I’m posting a bunch of funnies in the hopes of making people smile.  All of these came from a Yahoo Image Search.

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Goal . . . Eh, I’m Not Feeling It Today

To be honest, I don’t wanna do this.  I would normally talk about how my week went and then a bit about what’s coming up.  But . . . This week sucked . . . hard . . . like a vacuum with something to prove.  Right down to the very end too.  If there was any good then it got overshadowed, so I don’t know what to do here.

I can’t even get into it because it’s either work or personal stuff that shouldn’t be aired in public.  Things just kept going wrong.  Were there pluses?  Well, my son aced a science test.  More importantly, he majorly aced a math test that he had to take on his own in school and did it without needing his extra time.  He came close to failing this subject in the first quarter, but he’s done amazing now.  So, it goes to show how far he can go when he gets comfortable and we figure out his nuances.  His reward, thought it wasn’t intended to be that, is a father/son trip to the zoo tomorrow.  I’ll try to get some good pics for a Sunday post because I’m running out of ideas for those.

Let’s see . . . I didn’t get any writing done.  I do get the first covid vaccine shot today.  I think the order differs from state or county though.  Teachers got on the list here and I managed to snag a spot.  I’ll be resting after that if the little guy lets me.  Monday is the promise of video games since it’s a 3-day weekend.  Maybe watch a movie or cartoons depending on what else we do.  I should convince him to do some drawing too since it’s been a while.  It’s very cold, so our activities are limited.

Next week might see some writing getting done around Thursday.  Prior to that I have meetings and my son who I want to have time with.  I have 25 sections left of Do I Need to Use a Dragon? and that might take me to the end of February.  I thought I’d get one or two done this weekend while my son slept, but I’m not feeling it.  I can feasibly get 15 done during the next period that he’s with his mom even with a party one that I’m going to one night.  That leaves me 10 and then the hard part.  What to do after that?  I guess finally get back to outlining fiction while I figure out if I should send the tip book out for some people to look at.  I’m still nervous about that because it’s about opinions, so I don’t know how beta readers take to that.

Only other stuff I did was watch some shows.  I finished up ‘Slayers’ Seasons 4 and 5, so that entire anime series is under my belt.  Can’t find the movies though.  I started a smaller one called ‘Angel Links’ since ‘Disenchanted’ got new episodes yesterday.  ‘Angel Links’ is 13 episodes and it’s connected to one of my favorite series called ‘Outlaw Star’.  I put the intro up top.  I don’t know if it’s a popular or obscure anime, but it was on when I was in college.  I actually did a Halloween costume as the main character, who has bright red hair.  The spray didn’t come out for a while and washing it the first night made it look like somebody exploded in the shower stall.  Wish they did more.  Anyway, that’s what I’m doing TV-wise.

Well, I’m not able to drag myself along any more.  Next weekend should have more since I get father/son time and a few more stories.  I hope.  Honestly, I thought this week was going to be better than the last.  I said it out loud and everything short of severe injury happened.  I say severe because I ended up stabbing my thumb with a broken staple that a kid left in a stapler.  Is anybody really surprised at my luck lately?

Goals of the week:

  1. Zoo trip tomorrow.
  2. Time with sun.
  3. Covid shot in a few hours.
  4. Survive everything else.
  5. Writing.
  6. Puzzle.
  7. Try to get some extra sleep.  Been hard since I’ve had some strange sleep things happen this week.  With the stress, is anyone surprised?  I used that already.  Sorry.
  8. Put on socks or slippers soon.
  9. Crud!  I forgot the laundry while I write this Friday night.
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Questions 3: I’M EVIL!!!!

Dr. Evil

I was going to do a big post about this topic, but I realized that this could be one that differs from person to person.  So, it’s best for me to start with myself and then open up the floor.  To opinions and not letting people fall into a vat of acid that also has robotic piranhas.

You see, it’s really hard to write a villain if you’re going for one who should be hated.  I think it’s gotten more difficult over the years because people are more into sympathetic villains.  We want to know why they do what they do and can reach the point where we kind of feel for them in a way.  You get a group of the fandom that roots for the bad guys too.  That seems to be the easiest thing these days because you pull back on how evil they are and give room for forgiveness.  Once you cross that line, you can’t have them be sympathetic at all . . . Unless it’s Anakin Skywalker killing a bunch of children, which doesn’t seem to have reduced Darth Vader’s popularity at all.

Now, this topic isn’t about that, but I bring it up for a good reason.  Every time I make a post about villains, people comment primarily with those that they feel sorry for or have some sympathetic side.  It’s never a true villain that people bring up now even if the topic leans more towards that side of the coin.  Why is that?  Is it because people don’t want to think about the truly monstrous characters?  I think it’s that way for some because there’s no connection there.  That’s because they do the horrible things that we would never dream of doing.  People who do tend to be the types that other humans would really want to avoid.  In fact, we tend to call such people ‘monsters’ when they give in to that darkness and are caught.  The villains of our world rarely have the sympathetic side that those in fiction have.

I’ve wondered for a while if there’s a way to go too far with the evil.  Every time I try to talk about the subject, I run into that ‘beloved baddie’ issue.  So, I never get very far.  That might be because everyone has a different limit as to what they will accept from a character before they turn away.  The gradients are small, but they’re definitely at a point where you get debates over if a character is redeemable or not.  For myself, rape is a big ‘you are dead to me’ thing with villains while another person might put the line at ‘shoplifting’.  Seriously, I talked with a person years ago who had this pet peeve about shoplifting in fiction.  On the other side of me, I know people who will still root for the rapist villain because they’re ‘cool’ or ‘entertainingly evil’.  So, there are those with incredibly high tolerances for evil acts in fiction to the point where they won’t turn on a horrific monster.  That isn’t to say they would do it themselves, but they enjoy seeing the darkest depths of depravity.

Now for the questions:

  1. What is your evil limit?
  2. Does a story lose you if the villain goes too evil?
  3. Have you found that the lines of what is too much have changed as you get older?
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Co-Authorship Part II: Shared Vision

Hello SE readers, Gwen with you today, and it’s my pleasure to offer Part II of the four-part series on co-authorship. Last week, John Howell …

Co-Authorship Part II: Shared Vision
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