
Image by Gerd Altmann from Pixabay Hi SErs! Harmony here 🙂 Today, I’d like to introduce a series of posts on how to write Point of View (POV). Below…
How to Write Point of View, Part 1, Overview

Image by Gerd Altmann from Pixabay Hi SErs! Harmony here 🙂 Today, I’d like to introduce a series of posts on how to write Point of View (POV). Below…
How to Write Point of View, Part 1, Overview
The last year and a half have been brutal. More so for me if you count the divorce stuff beforehand. Anyway, I noticed a few songs really grabbed me during the pandemic and hit me harder than others. Part of the reason was that I had been paying a lot more attention to lyrics and my own mental state. I’m sure I’ve used most of these on the blog at least once. They’re all Alternative/Pop/Rock too. So, nothing old school because I typically don’t run into those songs when driving. Sorry.
It was a week . . . Think we can all agree on that. I mean, 7 days equal a week and that’s how long it’s been since I do a goal post. Thank you for your time and I’ll see you next weekend.
Things were a bit crazy lately. A few dramas caused stress and caused activities to be moved around. My son started his first camp of the summer and was having problems in the morning. This camp only goes for 2 weeks and then another for 3, so I’m sure this is going to be a morning ritual for a while. He’s scared of the changes even though he acts brave before he has to face it. Same thing that was going on during the school year, but it’s exhausting when I’m trying to recover my own energy. My hope is that a relaxing weekend helps him get in the right mindset for next week.
A current issue is that I’m in pain . . . again. Why can’t my body develop injuries during periods I’m not trying to do things? This time it’s my lower back again, which is making it hard to sleep. Of course, my fatherly duty required that I grit my teeth and follow through my promise to take my son here:

Osprey on Nest
There’s a nature area with nesting ospreys and we had agreed to go see if they were about this weekend. Regardless of the pain in my lower back and the difficulty in walking, it was worth it to sit with my son and watch the osprey standing guard. Other animals were about, but this guy or girl was the goal. Now, I can rest up for the evening and hope my spine fixes itself. Although, there are signs that it’s actually an IBS (irritable bowel syndrome) flare up, which can also set off my lower back. The opposite is possible, so it’s always a mess. Ibuprofen, icy hot, heating pads, and ice packs aren’t making much of a dent, but the Pepto Bismal did something. Guess we’ll see what happens.
Television wasn’t that interesting. I watched the ‘Transformers: War for Cybertron’ shows upon recommendation. They didn’t grab my interesting. Felt like a big thing would start up and then fade away by the end of an episode. Definitely rushed and I was having trouble keeping track of names that weren’t Megatron, Optimus Prime, Bumblebee, and Starscream. I had to look at Wikipedia for a character list and then guess as to who was who until someone was named. Never been the biggest Transformers fan, so maybe that was an issue. Think I’m going to step away from animation for a bit and watch ‘Leverage: Redemption’ once I get more TV time.
Am I forgetting anything? Oh yeah! This is an author blog even though I don’t do a lot of author stuff. First, I keep getting messages on social media asking if I want a book review or to be promoted. It happens right after a follow someone back and with no real communication beforehand. These always turned me off because it felt pushy and I remember getting taken advantage of in the past. Either the person made off with a free book or money without leaving a review or responding to an email. Not sure if I’m just paranoid or this is what I’m looking at.
I did manage to get most of War of Nytefall: Anarchy edited. 3 chapters to go, so I’ll finish on Monday. I’m genuinely surprised because so much was going on that I never noticed getting through 15 chapters. Parts of the story still gnawed at me, but it was more because I felt like I should add more with one character. This one doesn’t have a lot of personality, so all attempts fell flat. I added stuff that explained why they weren’t as active as one would expect though. Another new character kind of stole the show because they have a big personality. Not sure when this will be published. I’m hoping for the Fall, but I need to contact my cover artist first.
I’m aiming to start writing my next series next Friday because I have work for 2 days and time with my son. This would be Slumberlord Tales: Darwin & the Fate Bracelet. As you can see, I’m trying to see how ‘Slumberlord Tales’ fits instead of ‘Tales of the Slumberlord’. This shortens the overall title a bit. If I’m feeling ambitious then I might do one section on Thursday. A lot of it depends on my energy, back, and if people try to get me to do things. Seems like a big theme of the summer is that me being on break is a signal for others to give me errands or make me socialize. Normally, I would be fine with it, but my social battery is low due to stress and drama.
Anyway, time for the goals:
Because I don’t want to leave this unfinished. We’re back to this unpublished story, which I have nothing else to do with. Gives me time to figure out a Thursday replacement for when the time comes.
(Disclaimer: A warning to those who continue. This is a sequel to a previous story. Both of these were written in the mid-1990’s. While the first one was slightly edited and vanity press published, this one has not been touched in over 20 years. I figure I should do something with it and people may get a laugh or fright from how I used to be. Every author comes from somewhere, so this is part of my origin. To that end, I am deeply sorry for whatever nightmares I will inflict on the literary world and the American English language. Enjoy?)

“She has been lightly sedated. You can put her on the bed, Draveon. What exactly happened when you returned to the shuttle?” asks Cybro while the villains stand in a fancy hotel room. Adriana is quietly drugged and laying peacefully on the bed while the others watch over her.
“I already told you everything I know. Hydrana attacked us and the sword of light temporarily blinded me. When my eyesight returned, Adriana was slipping in and out of consciousness. She was still trapped in the frozen lake. Who ate all of the food in the tiny fridge? Anyway, Adriana mumbled something about the guardian implanting some bad memories into her brain. She also said that most of the memories were destroyed by her defenses, but the mental fight took a lot out of her. She barely had enough energy to talk,” explains Tegam.
“This is not a long-term condition. It is not even a short-term condition. She should be fine in a few minutes. Your explanation does tell us why our leader’s mind was attempting to self-destruct. It would appear that it was the only way to prevent the memory exchange from doing anything to her. It was a very drastic, but necessary, action. I just wonder where Adriana learned such a technique. Mental self-destruction at that magnitude is not one of our powers. What are you staring at?”
Draveon snaps out of his trance and replies, “Adriana. She looks so peaceful that it’s very hard to believe what she really is. If I were seeing her for the first time, I would actually think that Adriana was a sweet, innocent human being. Instead, of the cunning seductress that wants to rule the universe for eternity. She’s probably the sanest of us all, yet she acts more evil than all of us.” Tegam begins chuckling in the corner as he uses his whip to turn a plotted plant into a pile of chocolate bars.
“It is no act. She was born evil and will always remain evil. If Adriana had her way, all of us would have been killed and resurrected just so she could enjoy killing us again. Adriana cares about no one,” retorts Cybro.
“What about her precious daughter? You’ve witnessed what happens when Kilanus is either hurt or missing. If given another choice between being good and being evil, I honestly believe she would turn against us. That makes her even more dangerous to us. Adriana’s compassion is what helps her lead us, Cybro. It proves that even the darkest of souls can hold some amount light,” mentions Tegam, whose voice is suddenly deeper than his usual high-pitched tone.
“Amazingly poetic, jester. Of course, you’re wrong with that thing about me changing sides. And thank you for saving me,” says Adriana as she tries to sit up in the bed. Draveon lets her lean on his muscular shoulder like an innocent child until she can stay upright on her own.
“It looks like sleeping beauty awakes without a kiss. Course I don’t think any of us would volunteer for that job. Are you feeling better?” whispers Draveon after he tries to hand her a glass of water. She quickly starts to shy away from the liquid, but her thirst makes it impossible to resist.
“Water is the last thing I want to see right now. Slight change to our plan. Tegam and I have to take a trip to Long Island. There are some more questions that I need answers to. You two can start causing havoc with the police like we had planned from the beginning. I don’t want any screw ups, guys.”
“Very well. But is there anything you know about the Neptune guardian that Tegam couldn’t tell us?” Cybro questions.
“A little. Hydrana is still out there hunting us and she is getting crazier every hour. And Fate may be joining her side at any given moment. She did the same stunt to him that failed on me. Thank god I’ve been around long enough to build some psychic defenses. So, try to avoid Fate and Hydrana unless you know for a fact that they are back to normal.”
“Calm down, Adriana. They are mere children compared to my power. Why should I be afraid of them?” asks Draveon.
“Why? Because I said so, you brainless idiot. Both of them are dangerous enough when they aren’t crazy. If I find out that one of you took on either of those guardians, and you happen to survive, I will personally put you out of my misery. The only exception to this rule is if they hit first and you have to fight to survive.”
“But, Adriana . . .”
“No buts, Draveon. Now, go before I get really nasty and do something that I’ve wanted to do ever since you were created. Leave!” orders Adriana. She slides out of bed and grabs her staff before leaving. Tegam is a few steps behind her before he turns invisible and closes the door.
“Where should we go, Draveon? She has left all options open for us. Well, all except the option of destroying Hydrana and Fate. But the chances of us meeting either of them are near impossible in a city of this size,” says the cyborg, who is on the balcony. He flies down to the ground while Draveon silently leaps from balcony to balcony with inhuman ease.
“There is one place that I have always wanted to visit. But there are many children there and I swear that none of them will be hurt. Or else I will destroy you, robot,” answers Draveon.
“Fine. They cry too much anyway. Where are we going?”
“It will a lot be better if I show you. Come on.”

Doctor What?
I’m not talking about the weapon, which is spelled CANNON. This one is missing an ‘N’ and gets thrown about a lot. What is it?
Canon– A list of works connected to an author, world, or character that are established as the ‘real’ continuity. All others are either their own universe or considered alternate versions of the main timeline.
Keep in mind that this is my own definition that I’ve taken from just how people use it in conversations. For example, a new story may come out that involves retelling a character’s origin. People will ask if the original or new version is ‘Canon’. This means that the audience wonders which version needs to be more acknowledged going forward. The other one is considered an alternate and may take a few more stories into a side dimension with it. Of course, the author gets final say here . . . usually.
There’s another type of Canon that one can run into, which is a newer concept even though it’s been around for a long time. This would be:
Head Canon– The plot elements, explanations, and interpretations that the audience has created in their own heads. There can be evidence of these being possibilities, but these pieces are not stated by the author.
As you can tell, this involves your fan theories and explanations. Leaving an ambiguous ending or letting readers come up with their own reasons for something happening will result in this. Authors do this to stir conversation and mystery, which helps draw in readers and convince people to read the books again. It also causes Head Canons to emerge and get spread throughout the Internet, but that’s definitely a part of the conversation.
Is Head Canon a bad thing? Not really. It’s fun to come up with these scenarios, but it can go dark. Some people will cling to their Head Canon so much that they refuse to believe anything else, including the author. They like what they came up with because it implants a piece of themselves into a world they love. Now, they’ve added to the creation and those pieces being disproved can hurt. It’s not that different than an author getting a bad review, which is odd since a jilted Head Canon person may leave one of those if they’re upset enough.
There are times when an author may read a Head Canon idea and turn it into Canon because they like where it’s going. It can also be that the audience guessed correctly and what they believed would happen comes true. This shows that Head Canon can be transformed, but the opposite can’t happen. You can’t take something that was explained and then turn it into an audience-built theory. Canon can only fall into alternative history or possible Alternative Canon. Not sure if there’s a term for it, but the point is that these things are surprisingly fluid.
What do you think about Canon? Have you ever come up with a Head Canon theory for a story you enjoyed?
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